TOEFL TPO 44 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the letter writer's proposal. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的发音和语速基本上是清晰和流畅的，但偶尔会有些停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但在解释男生观点的原因时，可以更具体地给出一些例子或者详细说明。建议在练习时尝试提供更多支持性的论据或例子，以增强论点的说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal is that the university should create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations because students can be in charge of such things and some students may gain leadership experience. The proposal suggests that the university create a student committee to allocate funding for student organizations, as students can manage these decisions and potentially gain leadership experience. (建议使用更自然的表达方式，如“allocate funding”代替“decide funding”，以及使用“potentially”来表示可能性。)

However, the man in the listening doesn't agree with it because, for one, he thinks that students can't be too close to such organizations because they may not be so objective as the administrators do, which can lead to unfairness. However, the man disagrees because he believes that students' close involvement with these organizations may compromise their objectivity compared to administrators, leading to potential unfairness. (使用更准确的词汇和语法结构，如“compromise their objectivity”和“potential unfairness”。)

What's more, he thinks that it will be hard to find students interested in such committees because they are too busy with their studies, so it will consume too much time for the administration. Furthermore, he argues that finding interested students might be difficult due to their busy schedules, resulting in a significant time commitment for the administration. (使用更自然的连接词“Furthermore”，并简化句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal suggests that the university create a student committee to allocate funding for student organizations, as students can manage these decisions and potentially gain leadership experience. However, the man disagrees because he believes that students' close involvement with these organizations may compromise their objectivity compared to administrators, leading to potential unfairness. Furthermore, he argues that finding interested students might be difficult due to their busy schedules, resulting in a significant time commitment for the administration.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Student committee
  - Allocate funding
  - Leadership experience

- Man's disagreement
  - Compromise objectivity
    - Close involvement
    - Potential unfairness
  - Difficulty finding interested students
    - Busy schedules
    - Time commitment for administration

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

原回答：Bye-bye. You This The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators. Additionally, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled and students being too busy. (原回答内容不完整，已根据听力材料进行修改和补充。)

修订后的回答（140字）：

The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators, potentially favoring their friends' groups or their own groups. Furthermore, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled, such as the Student Council lacking a vice president, and students being too busy with other commitments.

6.思维导图

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Students not objective or fair
    • Too close to the situation
    • Favoritism
  • Lack of interest in serving on the committee
    • Unfilled leadership positions
    • Busy students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方可能需要稍微减慢语速，以便更好地表达观点。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。建议多练习发音和语调，以便在考试中更自信地表达自己的观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容组织得很好，观点之间的联系清晰，提供了充足的支持和例子。在主题发展方面，你已经做得很好。继续保持这种水平，并在实际考试中尽量保持冷静和专注。

5.语言使用

原文：Essentially, a student proposes that the university should set up a student committee to decide funding for students' organizations, because students know better about their organizations and it can provide them with leadership experience. Essentially, a student proposes that the university should establish a student committee to determine funding for student organizations, as students have better knowledge of their organizations and it can offer them valuable leadership experience. (建议使用“establish”代替“set up”，以使句子更自然。此外，将“decide”改为“determine”，使句子更准确。将“know better about”改为“have better knowledge of”，使句子更流畅。最后，将“provide them with”改为“offer them”，使句子更自然。)

原文：However, the man in the conversation disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. However, the man in the conversation opposes the proposal for two reasons. (将“disagrees with”改为“opposes”，使句子更自然。)

原文：The first reason is that students are not in the right place to make the decision, as they involve themselves in the student groups. The first reason is that students are not in an appropriate position to make decisions since they are directly involved in student groups. (将“not in the right place”改为“not in an appropriate position”，使句子更准确。此外，将“as they involve themselves in”改为“since they are directly involved in”，使句子更自然。)

原文：They cannot make objective and fair decisions. They are unable to make objective and impartial decisions. (将“cannot”改为“are unable to”，使句子更自然。此外，将“fair”改为“impartial”，使句子更准确。)

原文：The second reason is that the student committee may have a hard time to find people interested in the leadership position. The second reason is that the student committee might struggle to find individuals interested in leadership positions. (将“may have a hard time to find”改为“might struggle to find”，使句子更自然。此外，将“people”改为“individuals”，使句子更准确。)

原文：Since students are too busy, they would not devote their volunteer time to the committee. As students are preoccupied, they would not dedicate their voluntary time to the committee. (将“too busy”改为“preoccupied”，使句子更自然。此外，将“devote”改为“dedicate”，使句子更准确。)

根据修改建议，回答的修订版本如下：

Essentially, a student proposes that the university should establish a student committee to determine funding for student organizations, as students have better knowledge of their organizations and it can offer them valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation opposes the proposal for two reasons. The first reason is that students are not in an appropriate position to make decisions since they are directly involved in student groups. They are unable to make objective and impartial decisions. The second reason is that the student committee might struggle to find individuals interested in leadership positions. As students are preoccupied, they would not dedicate their voluntary time to the committee. For instance, even the student council doesn't have a vice president. Therefore, these are two reasons why the man disagrees with the proposal.

Answer statistics: {"words": 140, "unique_words": 89}

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student proposal
    - Establish student committee
    - Determine funding for student organizations
    - Better knowledge of organizations
    - Valuable leadership experience

- Man's opposition
  - Reason 1: Inappropriate position for decision-making
    - Direct involvement in student groups
    - Unable to make objective and impartial decisions
  - Reason 2: Difficulty finding interested individuals for leadership positions
    - Students preoccupied with other commitments
    - Unwilling to dedicate voluntary time to the committee

- Example: Student council lacking vice president

- Conclusion: Two reasons for man's disagreement with the proposal

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议在练习口语时注意保持流利且连贯的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括听力中男生的观点及理由。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如可以先总结男生的观点，然后分点阐述他给出的理由。同时，在给出例子时可以更详细地描述，以增强论据的说服力。在练习时，注意提高回答的条理性和连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the reading, the student wants to create a student committee to decide funding for the student organization. According to the reading, the author suggests creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations.（将"the student wants"改为"the author suggests"，使句子更加准确。将"the student organization"改为"student organizations"，保持一致性。）

However, according to the listening, the man disagrees with that by saying that, first, he thinks the students are too close to the situation and so they cannot be objective, maybe they will give money to their friend group. However, according to the listening, the man disagrees for two reasons. First, he believes students are too close to the situation and may lack objectivity, potentially favoring their friends' groups.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更加清晰。）

Moreover, the second reason is that although the women think it's a very good experience for the students about their leadership, but the man said that they already have so many leadership in the college and many students are not interested in that. Furthermore, although the woman thinks it would provide valuable leadership experience for students, the man argues that there are already numerous leadership opportunities on campus and many students show no interest in them.（调整句子结构，使表达更加清晰。）

For example, the council does not have an president now. For instance, there is currently no vice president in the Student Council.（将"an president"改为"vice president"，使句子更加准确。）

The students are all very busy and it will be a very big project for them if they create a student committee. Most students are too busy, and forming a student committee would require a significant time commitment.（调整句子结构，使表达更加清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the reading, the author suggests creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations. However, according to the listening, the man disagrees for two reasons. First, he believes students are too close to the situation and may lack objectivity, potentially favoring their friends' groups. Furthermore, although the woman thinks it would provide valuable leadership experience for students, the man argues that there are already numerous leadership opportunities on campus and many students show no interest in them. For instance, there is currently no vice president in the Student Council. Most students are too busy, and forming a student committee would require a significant time commitment.

6.思维导图

• Reading

  • Author's suggestion
    • Student committee
    • Funding decisions

• Listening

  • Man's disagreement
    • Lack of objectivity
    • Leadership opportunities
  • Woman's opinion
    • Valuable experience

• Example

  • Student Council

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要改进。例如，可以尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持连贯性。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以尝试更详细地解释原因和例子，以便更充分地支持观点。例如，在谈论学生可能偏袒朋友团体时，可以提供具体的例子来说明这一问题。同时，在谈论学生对领导职位缺乏兴趣时，也可以给出更多证据来支持这一观点。总之，多提供一些具体的例子和证据将有助于进一步加强话题发展。

5.语言使用

Original: A student suggests that school need allocate its funding to student organizations. The man in the conversation didn't agree with it. Firstly, the students are too close to make decisions. The students will be subjective as they may allocate the money to their friends' group. It's not fair. Second, he argues that many students are not interested in being in student leadership because students are always so busy in their study. They have not enough time to do these student organization jobs. So it's not suitable for students to be the leadership to make decisions.

Corrected: A student suggests that school need the school needs (需要改为需要，以匹配主语) to allocate its funding to student organizations. The man in the conversation didn't does not (使用一般现在时，而不是过去时) agree with it. Firstly, the students are too close to make decisions. The students will be subjective as they may allocate the money to their friends' groups (复数形式，因为可能有多个团体). It's not fair. Second, he argues that many students are not interested in being in student leadership because students are always so busy in their study with their studies (用复数形式表示学习的多个方面). They have not insufficient (使用更高级的词汇) time to do these student organization jobs. So it's not suitable for students to be the leadership in leadership positions (更自然的表达方式) to make decisions.

Revised (140 words): The student suggests that the school needs to allocate its funding to student organizations. However, the man in the conversation does not agree with this proposal. He believes that students are too close to the situation, which may lead them to make subjective decisions, such as allocating funds to their friends' groups, resulting in unfairness. Furthermore, he argues that many students are not interested in taking on leadership roles due to their busy schedules and involvement in their studies. As a result, they have insufficient time to dedicate themselves to managing student organizations effectively. Therefore, it is not suitable for students to hold leadership positions when making decisions about funding allocation for student organizations. Instead, having university administrators make these decisions would ensure a more objective and fair distribution of funds.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student's proposal
  - Man's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Students too close to the situation
  - Subjective decisions
  - Unfairness

- Reason 2
  - Lack of interest in leadership roles
  - Busy schedules
  - Insufficient time for managing organizations

- Conclusion
  - Not suitable for students to hold leadership positions
  - University administrators ensure objectivity and fairness in funding allocation

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in terms of pronunciation and reducing unnecessary pauses. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more confidently and focus on proper pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to support their points. Additionally, the speaker should work on making smoother transitions between ideas to create a more cohesive response.

5.Language Use

Original: According to a recent article, a student suggests the university should create a student committee for them to design how to allocate the funding for student organizations instead of by the university administration. This is because students know the situation better so they could make the best allocation for the funding. Furthermore, through the process, students could learn and gain valuable leadership experience. However, the men in the conversation disagreed with this proposal. First, he claims that students are too close to the situation so they cannot be as objective as the administrators. Furthermore, he claims that they are going to have a hard time to find students to serve on the committee because it is such a big commitment and takes up a lot of time.

Corrected: According to a recent article, a student suggests that the university should create a student committee for them to determine how to allocate funding for student organizations, rather than having it done by university administration(changed "instead of by" to "rather than having it done by" for better clarity). This is because students have better knowledge of the situation(changed "know" to "have better knowledge" for advanced vocabulary), allowing them to make optimal allocations for funding. Moreover, through this process, students can acquire valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, he argues that students are too close to the situation and cannot be as objective as administrators(changed "claims" to "argues" for variety). Additionally, he asserts that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to its significant time commitment(rephrased sentence for better flow).

Revised (140 words): According to a recent article, a student suggests that the university should create a student committee to determine how to allocate funding for student organizations, rather than having it done by university administration. This is because students have better knowledge of the situation, allowing them to make optimal allocations for funding. Moreover, through this process, students can acquire valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, he argues that students are too close to the situation and cannot be as objective as administrators. Additionally, he asserts that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to its significant time commitment. To achieve a score of 30, the speaker should focus on using advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and strong conclusions in their response.

6.Mind Map

- Introduction
  - Recent article
  - Student proposal

- Advantages
  - Better knowledge of situation
  - Optimal allocations
  - Leadership experience

- Disagreement (man's opinion)
  - Lack of objectivity
  - Difficulty finding students to serve

- Conclusion
  - Focus on advanced vocabulary, grammar, flow, transitions, conclusions

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够表达出男生对提议的反对意见及其原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如在开头部分简要陈述男生的观点后，可以逐一详细阐述每个原因，并在结尾部分进行总结。此外，在举例和论证方面可以更具体一些，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading passage, it is proposed that the students recommend the university should let students in charge of how much money the organization received, In the reading passage, the author proposes that a student committee should be in charge of deciding how much funding each student organization receives from the university, (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰) because students know better than the administrator and the students will gain valuable leadership experience. as they believe students have a better understanding of which organizations are most deserving and that serving on the committee would provide valuable leadership experience. (调整了句子结构，使表达更自然)

The man in the conversation disagrees with those ideas. The man in the conversation, however, disagrees with this proposal. (改进了连接词，使句子更连贯) Firstly, he thinks that the students is too close to the situation and they will not be objective as administrator and the administrator will make decision more fair. Firstly, he believes that students are too close to the situation and would not be as objective as administrators, who would make fairer decisions. (修改了语法和词汇，使表达更准确)

Secondly, he thinks that it is a hard time to find students because most of students are busy and it is really the big time of commitment and the students won't like to join the group because it will occupy a lot of their free time. Secondly, he argues that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee, as most are busy and unwilling to commit a significant amount of their free time. (调整了句子结构，使表达更清晰)

In conclusion, that is the reason why the man disagrees with those ideas. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the man disagrees with the proposal. (改进了连接词和表达，使句子更连贯)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, the author proposes that a student committee should be in charge of deciding how much funding each student organization receives from the university, as they believe students have a better understanding of which organizations are most deserving and that serving on the committee would provide valuable leadership experience. The man in the conversation, however, disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, he believes that students are too close to the situation and would not be as objective as administrators, who would make fairer decisions. Secondly, he argues that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee, as most are busy and unwilling to commit a significant amount of their free time. In conclusion, these are the reasons why the man disagrees with the proposal.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
    - Proposal
        - Student committee
        - Funding decisions
        - Better understanding
        - Leadership experience

- Man's Opinion
    - Disagreement
        - Reason 1: Objectivity
            - Students vs. administrators
            - Fairness in decisions
        - Reason 2: Difficulty finding students
            - Busy schedules
            - Time commitment

- Conclusion
    - Man's disagreement with the proposal

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

22. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，偶尔出现停顿。但在发音方面有一些不准确之处，导致了拼写错误。建议发言者多加练习发音，提高口语表达的准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰，并且提供了一定的支持或例子。但是，在论述过程中仍然可以更加深入和详细。建议发言者在回答问题时尝试更加深入地探讨原因和影响，以便更好地展示自己对话题的理解。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The main conversation holds a different point against the idea that student committees should be established and to decide funding for organizations such as concerts or jazz that student played in. The first reason is that students may too close to the organization and it make a situation that is unfair for the whole crew. So for example, student may just give the funds to their close friend and administrator may avoid this kind of situation. And second reason is that it can be hard to fund student to in charge for the committee as it may be a job that can use a lot of time.

Corrected Answer: The main conversation holds The man in the conversation expresses (主要对话持有 -> 对话中的男人表达) a different point against the idea that student committees should be established and to (和 -> 到) decide funding for organizations such as concerts or jazz that student played in students participate in(学生参加的 -> 学生参与的). The first reason is that students may too close be too close (太近 -> 距离太近) to the organization and it make creates (使 -> 创造) a situation that is unfair for the whole crew. So for example, student a student (学生 -> 一个学生) may just give the funds to their close friend and administrator an administrator (管理员 -> 一位管理员) may avoid this kind of situation. And second reason the second reason (第二个原因 -> 第二个原因) is that it can be hard to fund student to in charge for the committee as it may be a job that can use a lot of time.

Revised Answer (140 words): The man in the conversation expresses his disagreement with the idea of establishing student committees to decide funding for organizations, such as concerts or jazz bands, that students participate in. He provides two reasons for his opinion. First, he believes that students might be too close to the organizations, which could create an unfair situation for everyone involved. For instance, a student might allocate funds to their close friends' groups, while an administrator could prevent such favoritism. Second, he argues that finding students willing to take on the responsibility of managing the committee could be challenging due to the significant time commitment required. Overall, the man suggests that university administrators are better suited for making these decisions than students.

6.思维导图

• Disagreement

  • Establishing student committees
  • Funding decisions

• Reason 1

  • Students too close to organizations
  • Unfair situations
  • Example: favoritism

• Reason 2

  • Difficulty finding students
  • Time commitment

• Conclusion

  • Administrators better suited

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发音的准确性，建议多加练习，尤其是在发音和语调上。同时注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，同学对于男生的观点进行了总结，但在解释原因时有些表述不清。例如，“it's unfair for the students because they know more situation”这句话并没有明确表达出男生认为学生不能客观公正地分配资金的观点。建议在回答问题时更加关注文章中提到的关键信息，并尝试用更清晰、准确的语言来表达这些信息。同时，在组织回答时保持逻辑性和连贯性，以便让听众更容易理解你的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the letter tells us that one student proposed to let more students to get involved in a committee to decide which organization can get the fund. Well, the letter states that a student proposed allowing more students to participate in a committee responsible for deciding which organizations should receive funding.（建议用更自然的表达方式来描述学生提议让更多学生参与决策委员会的内容，同时注意使用正确的语法。）

Mainly for two reasons. There are mainly two reasons for this proposal.（这里需要更清晰地表达出提议的两个主要原因。）

First is that students know more situations better than administrators and besides, this way can cultivate their leadership. First, students have a better understanding of the situations than administrators, and secondly, this approach can help develop their leadership skills.（注意使用恰当的连接词和语法结构来表达两个原因。）

However, the male students don't agree with this idea because it's unfair for the students because they know more situation and what's more, students are not interested about it because they are very busy. However, the male student disagrees with this idea, arguing that it's unfair for students as they have more knowledge of the situation. Furthermore, he believes that most students are not interested in participating due to their busy schedules.（在解释男生的观点时，需要使用更清晰、准确的语言，并注意保持句子结构的连贯性。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

Well, the letter states that a student proposed allowing more students to participate in a committee responsible for deciding which organizations should receive funding. There are mainly two reasons for this proposal. First, students have a better understanding of the situations than administrators, and secondly, this approach can help develop their leadership skills. However, the male student disagrees with this idea, arguing that it's unfair for students as they have more knowledge of the situation. Furthermore, he believes that most students are not interested in participating due to their busy schedules.

6.思维导图

• Letter Proposal

  • More students in committee
  • Decide funding for organizations

• Two Reasons

  • Better understanding of situations
  • Develop leadership skills

• Male Student's Disagreement

  • Unfair for students
    • More knowledge of the situation
  • Lack of interest
    • Busy schedules

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高交付能力，建议练习更流畅地表达观点，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步加强。为了提高话题发展能力，请确保在回答中明确表达男生的观点，并详细解释他给出的理由。此外，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：But the man in the listening part doesn't like this idea, because firstly he says that the decisions made by the student committee are probably not fair and subjective, because students are too close to the situation. The man in the listening part disagrees with this idea, stating that the decisions made by a student committee might be biased and subjective since students are too close to the situation.（因为学生与情况太过接近，所以男生认为学生委员会的决策可能会有偏见和主观。）

Secondly, he thinks that it's really hard to find students as volunteers to serve on the student committee, because most students are not interested in the student committee. Furthermore, he believes it would be challenging to find student volunteers for the committee, as most students show little interest in such roles.（他还认为，由于大多数学生对这样的角色兴趣不大，因此很难找到愿意担任学生委员会志愿者的学生。）

And students are too busy to do this, because they have to attend classes, prepare for exams, and... Additionally, students' busy schedules with classes and exams make it difficult for them to commit to such responsibilities.（此外，学生们忙于上课和考试，很难承担这样的责任。）

修订版（140字）：

The man in the listening part disagrees with this idea, stating that the decisions made by a student committee might be biased and subjective since students are too close to the situation. He argues that students' personal involvement in the groups could lead to favoritism and unfair distribution of funds. Furthermore, he believes it would be challenging to find student volunteers for the committee, as most students show little interest in such roles. Additionally, students' busy schedules with classes and exams make it difficult for them to commit to such responsibilities. Overall, the man thinks that university administrators are better suited for making these decisions due to their objectivity and ability to manage funds fairly.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Biased and subjective decisions
    - Students too close to the situation
  - Difficulty finding volunteers
    - Little interest in roles
    - Busy schedules (classes, exams)
  - University administrators
    - Objectivity
    - Fair fund management

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大致清晰，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议练习更流畅、自然的发音和语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。为了提高话题发展得分，建议在回答中明确表达男生的观点，并用更清晰的逻辑关系连接各个论点。同时，可以尝试使用更多具体的例子来支持观点，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：A student suggests that students in the university should be in charge of deciding which student organizations receive money from the university and how much money each organization receives. The reading passage suggests that a committee of students should be responsible for deciding which student organizations receive funding from the university and the amount allocated to each organization. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰)

However, the men in the conversation don't agree with the decision. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. (修正了错误的单词和语法)

She thinks, he thinks, students are too close at the university, He believes that students are too closely involved with the university, (删除了重复的表述，改进了句子结构)

they take part in the organization, so they are not the right person and they are unfair in deciding the money. participate in these organizations, and therefore may not be objective or fair when making funding decisions. (优化了句子结构和词汇)

On the contrary, the university administrator may be more fair. In contrast, university administrators might make more impartial decisions. (使用了更高级的词汇和表达)

And the second reason is that additionally students are not interested in leadership. Another reason is that students generally show little interest in taking on leadership roles. (改进了句子结构和词汇)

They are too busy and they are not willing to spend lots of time to decide a schedule to save money. They are often too busy and unwilling to commit the time required for such responsibilities. (优化了句子结构和词汇)

It's a too big time commitment. It's too significant a time commitment. (修正了语法错误)

So for the two reasons, the men disagree with the suggestion. Thus, due to these reasons, the man opposes the proposal. (改进了句子结构和表达)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage suggests that a committee of students should be responsible for deciding which student organizations receive funding from the university and the amount allocated to each organization. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. He believes that students are too closely involved with the university, participate in these organizations, and therefore may not be objective or fair when making funding decisions. In contrast, university administrators might make more impartial decisions. Another reason is that students generally show little interest in taking on leadership roles. They are often too busy and unwilling to commit the time required for such responsibilities. It's too significant a time commitment. Thus, due to these reasons, the man opposes the proposal.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Student committee
  • Funding decisions

• Man's Opinion

  • Disagreement
  • Reasons
    • Objectivity and fairness
    • Lack of interest in leadership roles
    • Time commitment

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要改进。例如，可以尝试提高语速和连贯性，以及减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。但是，在解释男子给出的理由时可以更详细一些。例如，在谈到学生可能会偏袒朋友或自己所在团体时，可以进一步说明这种情况为什么不公平。同时，在提到学生对领导职位缺乏兴趣时，可以给出更多具体的例子。总之，为了提高话题发展水平，可以尝试在解释观点时提供更多详细信息和例子。

5.语言使用

原文：The school proposed a policy that the students should take the place of administrators to decide which organizations can receive funds and how much funds can these organizations receive. The school proposed a policy that students should replace administrators in deciding which organizations can receive funds and how much funding these organizations should receive.（将“take the place of”改为“replace”，使句子更自然；将“how much funds can these organizations receive”改为“how much funding these organizations should receive”，使句子结构更合适。）

So the students must be interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies. Thus, students would find this opportunity interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies.（将“must be interesting”改为“would find this opportunity interesting”，使句子更自然；在“gain leadership experience”前加上“and”，使句子结构更完整。）

However, the man has a negative attitude towards these policies. However, the man expresses a negative opinion about these policies.（将“has a negative attitude towards”改为“expresses a negative opinion about”，使句子更自然。）

First, he states that the students are not the right person because they are not as subject or as fire as the administrators. First, he states that students are not suitable decision-makers because they are not as objective or fair as administrators.（将“the right person”改为“suitable decision-makers”，使句子更准确；将“subject or as fire”改为“objective or fair”，纠正拼写错误。）

They can just donate the money to their friends or themselves. They might simply allocate the funds to their friends' groups or their own.（将“donate the money”改为“allocate the funds”，使句子更准确；将“to their friends or themselves”改为“to their friends' groups or their own”，使句子更清晰。）

Secondly, he states that the school cannot find someone interesting in the leadership club and cannot find someone volunteer to commit their time into this stuff. Secondly, he states that the school would struggle to find students interested in leadership roles and willing to volunteer their time for this committee.（将“find someone interesting in the leadership club”改为“find students interested in leadership roles”，使句子更自然；将“find someone volunteer to commit their time into this stuff”改为“willing to volunteer their time for this committee”，使句子更清晰。）

So the policy is established to address this problem. Therefore, the policy may not effectively address this issue.（将“is established”改为“may not effectively address”，使句子更准确；将“this problem”改为“this issue”，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The school proposed a policy that students should replace administrators in deciding which organizations can receive funds and how much funding these organizations should receive. Thus, students would find this opportunity interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies. However, the man expresses a negative opinion about these policies. First, he states that students are not suitable decision-makers because they are not as objective or fair as administrators. They might simply allocate the funds to their friends' groups or their own. Secondly, he states that the school would struggle to find students interested in leadership roles and willing to volunteer their time for this committee. Therefore, the policy may not effectively address this issue.

6.思维导图

• School policy

  • Students replace administrators
  • Decide funding for organizations

• Benefits

  • Interesting opportunity
  • Gain leadership experience

• Man's negative opinion

  • Students not suitable decision-makers
    • Not objective or fair
    • Allocate funds to friends' groups or own
  • Difficulty finding interested students
    • Leadership roles
    • Willing to volunteer time for committee

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不太自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持流畅。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中的观点和理由，但在组织结构上还有待加强。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和连贯性，尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词来帮助组织思路。同时，在给出理由时可以适当举例或详细说明，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal suggested that the university should create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations, since students know how much money they need and know better about funding decisions than administrators. And students will be interested in the committee, which offers them a valuable leadership experience. However, the main dislike is the proposal, because the students are too close to the situations that they can't be as objective as administrators. They sometimes may give money to their friend's club or their sub club. In addition, it's hard to find students to serve in the committee because they are too busy to volunteer. And the committee is a very time commitment job, like student council, which didn't recruit as many students as they want.

Corrected Answer: The proposal suggests that the university should create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations because students know how much money they need and have better insight into funding decisions than administrators. Students would also be interested in joining the committee, which offers valuable leadership experience. However, there are concerns with the proposal since students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective as administrators. They might favor their friends' clubs or their own clubs when allocating funds. Additionally, it could be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to their busy schedules and other commitments. The committee would require significant time commitment, similar to the student council, which has struggled to recruit enough members. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然流畅；使用了更高级的词汇；改进了语法错误；增强了结论部分)

Revised Answer (140 words): The proposal suggests that the university should create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations because students have a better understanding of their financial needs and possess more insight into funding decisions than administrators. Furthermore, students would be interested in joining the committee, which offers valuable leadership experience. However, there are concerns with the proposal since students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective as administrators. They might favor their friends' clubs or their own clubs when allocating funds. Additionally, it could be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to their busy schedules and other commitments. The committee would require a significant time commitment, similar to the student council, which has struggled to recruit enough members. This revised answer addresses the concerns and provides a more balanced view of the proposal.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Create student committee
  - Decide funding for student organizations
  - Better insight into funding decisions
  - Valuable leadership experience

- Concerns
  - Objectivity
    - Favoritism towards friends' clubs or own clubs
  - Difficulty finding students to serve
    - Busy schedules
    - Significant time commitment
    - Similar to student council recruitment struggles

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微改进。例如，可以尝试提高语速和减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答是连贯和有组织的。然而，在解释男生观点时可以更具体一些，例如提到男生认为学生可能会偏向于支持自己参与的团体或朋友的团体。另外，在提到学生参与领导岗位的问题时，可以举例说明现有领导岗位空缺以及学生对此不感兴趣。总之，尽量在回答中提供更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The letter proposes that it is necessary to create a student community to decide funding for students' organization. The letter suggests creating a student committee to determine funding for student organizations. (将“community”改为“committee”，使语义更准确；简化句子结构，使表达更自然。) The man in the recording does not like the idea. The man in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. (用“conversation”替换“recording”，使表达更自然；用“disagrees with the proposal”替换“does not like the idea”，使表达更准确。)

Firstly, he thinks that if students are involved in the process of deciding the funding, the results may be subjective and not fair, because the students may give the funding to their friends or some of their close student members. First, he believes that involving students in the decision-making process could lead to biased and unfair outcomes, as they might allocate funds to their friends or organizations they are part of. (简化句子结构，使用更高级的词汇如“biased”和“allocate”，使表达更自然。)

Secondly, the man points out that it is really hard to find suitable students to participate in the community, because students nowadays have barely no time to participate in such activities and they are really, really busy. Second, the man highlights the difficulty in finding suitable students to join the committee, as they often lack time to engage in such activities due to their busy schedules. (简化句子结构，使用更高级的词汇如“highlights”和“engage”，使表达更自然。)

There are already a large number of leadership in the school and nobody participates. There are already numerous leadership positions available at the school, yet they remain unfilled. (简化句子结构，使用更高级的词汇如“numerous”和“unfilled”，使表达更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The letter suggests creating a student committee to determine funding for student organizations. The man in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. First, he believes that involving students in the decision-making process could lead to biased and unfair outcomes, as they might allocate funds to their friends or organizations they are part of. Second, the man highlights the difficulty in finding suitable students to join the committee, as they often lack time to engage in such activities due to their busy schedules. There are already numerous leadership positions available at the school, yet they remain unfilled.

6.思维导图

- Letter Proposal
  - Create student committee
  - Determine funding for student organizations

- Man's Disagreement
  - Biased and unfair outcomes
    - Allocate funds to friends or own organizations
  - Difficulty finding suitable students
    - Lack of time due to busy schedules
    - Unfilled leadership positions

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在不太流畅的现象。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持一致。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。在发音方面，需要注意一些单词的准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够较好地概括男生的观点及其理由。但在组织结构上还有待加强。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，尝试使用一些连接词来帮助连接观点和论据。同时，在给出论据时可以尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal suggests that the university should allow students to create their own committees to decide on funding for student organizations. The proposal recommends that the university should permit students to form their own committees to determine funding allocation for student organizations. (建议使用更高级的词汇，如“recommend”代替“suggest”，“permit”代替“allow”，以及“determine”代替“decide on”。) Since students know each other better and there are a lot of students who like to serve on their own committees which could cultivate their leadership. As students are more familiar with one another and many are interested in serving on committees, this could foster their leadership skills. (改进句子结构，使其更自然流畅。)

However, the men disagree with that idea. However, the man disagrees with this idea. (修正拼写错误。) Firstly, he mentions that since a lot of students involved in the student organizations, they cannot be objective. Firstly, he mentions that since many students are involved in student organizations, they cannot maintain objectivity. (改进句子结构和词汇选择。) They may allocate the money to their friend groups or to the groups they are in. They might allocate funds to their friends' groups or the groups they are part of. (使用更自然的词汇和表达。)

Secondly, it is a hard time to find a suitable student to manage the committee. Secondly, it is challenging to find suitable students to manage the committee. (改进句子结构和词汇选择。) For example, the student council does not have a vice president. For instance, the Student Council currently lacks a vice president. (使用更自然的表达方式。) Besides, there are a lot of leadership groups and students may find it busy to volunteer to work on such committee. Moreover, there are numerous leadership opportunities, and students might find it difficult to volunteer for such a committee due to their busy schedules. (改进句子结构，使其更自然流畅。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal recommends that the university should permit students to form their own committees to determine funding allocation for student organizations. As students are more familiar with one another and many are interested in serving on committees, this could foster their leadership skills. However, the man disagrees with this idea. Firstly, he mentions that since many students are involved in student organizations, they cannot maintain objectivity. They might allocate funds to their friends' groups or the groups they are part of. Secondly, it is challenging to find suitable students to manage the committee. For instance, the Student Council currently lacks a vice president. Moreover, there are numerous leadership opportunities, and students might find it difficult to volunteer for such a committee due to their busy schedules.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
    - Permit students to form committees
    - Determine funding allocation
    - Foster leadership skills

- Man's disagreement
    - Lack of objectivity
        - Allocate funds to friends' groups or own groups
    - Difficulty finding suitable students
        - Student Council lacking vice president
        - Numerous leadership opportunities
        - Busy schedules

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，在表达方面，我认为你的发言相对清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。要提高这方面的表现，你可以多加练习，尝试在发言时保持流畅且连贯的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, you could improve by providing more specific examples or details to support your points. For instance, you could mention the man's concern about potential favoritism among student committee members and how this could lead to unfair funding decisions. Additionally, you could further elaborate on the difficulty of finding students willing to serve on the committee due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in leadership positions.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The man disagreed with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of the funding for students, student organizations. The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of funding for student organizations. (将过去时改为现在时，简化句子结构) First, he thinks that students may not be the right person to decide because they are too close to the organization themselves because they can, themselves can be involved in one of those organizations or their friends can be a part of that organization, makes things very difficult for them to decide. First, he believes that students might not be the right individuals to make decisions since they are closely connected to the organizations, either by being members themselves or having friends involved, which could make it difficult for them to remain impartial. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，使语句更自然流畅) And second, he thinks that finding students to volunteer their time to this organization can be very hard because they are too busy or they are not interested in that. Secondly, he thinks that finding students willing to volunteer their time for this committee could be challenging due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in such responsibilities. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，使语句更自然流畅)

Revised Answer (140 words): The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of funding for student organizations. First, he believes that students might not be the right individuals to make decisions since they are closely connected to the organizations, either by being members themselves or having friends involved, which could make it difficult for them to remain impartial. This could lead to potential favoritism and unfair funding allocations. Secondly, he thinks that finding students willing to volunteer their time for this committee could be challenging due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in such responsibilities. For instance, the Student Council is currently missing a vice president, indicating that many students are not interested in taking on leadership roles. Therefore, the man suggests that university administrators are better suited for making these decisions as they can maintain objectivity and fairness.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Impartiality
    - Closely connected
    - Members or friends involved
    - Potential favoritism
  - Finding volunteers
    - Busy schedules
    - Lack of interest
    - Leadership roles

- Suggestion
  - University administrators
    - Objectivity and fairness

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议练习流利地说话，保持一致的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但是，在描述男生的观点时，请注意使用正确的称呼（例如，“man”而不是“mayor”）。此外，在解释男生观点的原因时，可以更详细地描述听力材料中提到的论据。例如，可以提到男生认为学生可能无法客观地分配资金，因为他们可能会偏向于自己参与的团体或朋友所在的团体。总之，请确保提供足够的支持和例子来更好地发展话题。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school is planning to create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations, but the mayor disagrees with this plan for two reasons. The man disagrees with the proposal of creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations for two reasons. (将“the mayor”改为“the man”，以更准确地描述听力材料中的角色。) First, he thinks that the students are too close to the committee, so they can't distribute the funding fairly, because they may give more funding to their own groups or their friends' groups. First, he believes that students might not be objective in distributing the funds fairly since they could favor their own groups or their friends' groups. (简化句子结构，使表达更自然。) Secondly, the mayor thinks that it is hard for schools to find volunteers to serve this committee, because the students already be a member of a group, so they are busy. Secondly, the man thinks it would be difficult for schools to find volunteers for this committee since students are already members of other groups and are busy. (将“the mayor”改为“the man”，修正语法错误，使句子更流畅。) They don't have time to be a volunteer to the student committee.

Revised Answer (140 words): The man disagrees with the proposal of creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations for two reasons. First, he believes that students might not be objective in distributing the funds fairly since they could favor their own groups or their friends' groups. This lack of objectivity could lead to biased decisions and an unfair allocation of resources. Secondly, the man thinks it would be difficult for schools to find volunteers for this committee since students are already members of other groups and are busy with their academic and extracurricular activities. As a result, they might not have enough time to dedicate to the student committee, making it challenging for the school to form an effective and committed group of volunteers.

6.思维导图

• Disagreement

  • Proposal
    • Student committee
    • Funding decisions

• Reasons

  1. Lack of objectivity
     • Favoritism
       • Own groups
       • Friends' groups
  2. Difficulty finding volunteers
     • Busy students
       • Academic activities
       • Extracurricular activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确，导致拼写错误。此外，语速不够流畅，有些地方停顿过多。建议练习发音和提高语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了男生的观点和原因，但在组织结构上还有改进的空间。可以尝试使用更清晰的连接词来组织句子，使回答更连贯。同时，在解释原因时可以加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The university plans to create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations in order to charge of deciding which student organizations receive money from the university and also be in charge of how much money each organization receives. The university proposes creating a student committee responsible for determining funding allocations for student organizations and deciding how much money each organization should receive.（将句子结构进行了简化，使其更自然流畅）

Original: The man disagreed with this plan. The man opposes this proposal.（使用了更高级的词汇）

Original: First, he said he says the student was not the right person to do this position because they are too close to this situation, and also some of them will be not object and fear because they always give the money to themselves or their friends. First, he argues that students are not suitable for this role as they are too closely involved in the situation, which may lead to a lack of objectivity and fairness when allocating funds to their own groups or friends' groups.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: But the administrator is very fear to do this since. In contrast, administrators can make more impartial decisions.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: Second, he thinks most students are not interested on it because there is already a leader position open, but no one interested on this. Second, he believes that most students are not interested in this committee as there are already open leadership positions that remain unfilled.（修改了介词错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: For example, the council have not vice president until now. For instance, the Student Council still lacks a vice president.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: Besides, there are a lot of work to do for the student and the student may not willing to do this position because they have not much time. Moreover, students may be unwilling to take on this role due to their limited time and heavy workload.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university proposes creating a student committee responsible for determining funding allocations for student organizations and deciding how much money each organization should receive. The man opposes this proposal. First, he argues that students are not suitable for this role as they are too closely involved in the situation, which may lead to a lack of objectivity and fairness when allocating funds to their own groups or friends' groups. In contrast, administrators can make more impartial decisions. Second, he believes that most students are not interested in this committee as there are already open leadership positions that remain unfilled. For instance, the Student Council still lacks a vice president. Moreover, students may be unwilling to take on this role due to their limited time and heavy workload.

6.思维导图

• University Proposal

  • Create student committee
  • Determine funding allocations
  • Decide money for each organization

• Man's Opposition

  • Students unsuitable
    • Lack of objectivity and fairness
    • Close involvement in the situation
  • Administrators more impartial
  • Students uninterested
    • Open leadership positions unfilled
    • Example: Student Council lacks vice president
  • Limited time and heavy workload

7.关键词