TOEFL TPO 53 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the university’s plan. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发音清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意自然地连接句子，避免不必要的停顿。此外，尝试提高发音准确性以减少拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但可以进一步改进。首先，在提到女士的观点时，可以更明确地表达她对计划的反对。其次，在解释原因时，可以更详细地描述女士提到的问题，并强调这些问题如何影响能源节约目标和学生的学习环境。最后，在总结回答时，可以简洁地重申女士的观点和原因。

5.语言使用

Original: The university announced energy-saving plan. The university has announced an energy-saving plan. (将过去时改为现在完成时，表示已经发生的事情对现在仍有影响。)

Original: We'll start at the library in two aspects, lightning and temperature level. It will start at the library, focusing on two aspects: lighting and temperature control. (使用第三人称代词"It"，将"lightning"改为"lighting"，并使用逗号和冒号使句子结构更清晰。)

Original: The woman in the conversation disapproves with the idea. The woman in the conversation disagrees with the idea. (将"disapproves with"改为"disagrees with"以表示反对。)

Original: But now the student should turn it on, which costs some energy. However, students will now need to turn them on, which will consume more energy. (使用“However”进行转折，并将“the student”改为复数形式“students”，使句子更自然。)

Original: And the student will go back to dorm to study, but it is very hard to concentrate on their study because the dorm room is noisy and busy. As a result, students may return to their dormitories to study, but it will be difficult for them to concentrate due to the noisy and busy environment in the dorm rooms. (将“the student”改为复数形式“students”，使用“their dormitories”和“dorm rooms”使句子更自然，同时使用“due to”表示原因。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has announced an energy-saving plan. It will start at the library, focusing on two aspects: lighting and temperature control. The woman in the conversation disagrees with the idea. Firstly, she thinks the new lights are not bright enough, so students did not use the reading lamps before. However, students will now need to turn them on, which will consume more energy. Secondly, she believes that limiting the air conditioning will make the library uncomfortable on hot days. As a result, students may return to their dormitories to study, but it will be difficult for them to concentrate due to the noisy and busy environment in the dorm rooms. In conclusion, the woman opposes the university's plan because she thinks it will not achieve its energy-saving goals and may negatively affect students' study environment.

6.思维导图

- University's energy-saving plan
  - Library
    - Lighting
      - New lights not bright enough
      - Reading lamps usage increases
      - Energy consumption
    - Temperature control
      - Limited air conditioning on hot days
      - Uncomfortable study environment
      - Students studying in noisy dorm rooms
  - Woman's opinion
    - Disagrees with the plan
    - Reasons:
      1. Ineffective energy-saving measures
      2. Negative impact on students' study environment

7.关键词