TOEFL TPO 48 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the letter-writer's proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state the man’s opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意提高语音的连贯性和准确性，同时保持一致的语速。此外，注意纠正发音错误以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对问题进行了回答，并提供了一定程度的支持和例子。然而，在组织内容方面仍有改进空间。建议发言者在陈述观点时更加有条理，明确地表达出与原文的关联，并在给出原因时提供更多具体细节。这样可以使回答更加有说服力和完整。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, a student proposed that the university should create an art museum as a university. The student proposed that the university should establish an art museum on campus.（将“作为大学”改为“在校园内”，使表达更自然。）

This is because it can give students an opportunity to learn to appreciate high-quality art. This is because it would provide students with an opportunity to appreciate high-quality art.（使用“would provide”代替“can give”，使语气更加委婉。）

And the university can ask the alumna donate more money to help the university build the museum. The university could ask alumni to donate money to support the construction of the museum.（使用“could”代替“can”，使语气更加委婉；将“alumna”改为复数形式“alumni”；将“donate more money”改为“donate money”，使表达更准确。）

But in the listening, the man doesn't like this idea. However, in the listening, the man disagrees with this idea.（使用“However”代替“But”，使句子过渡更自然；将“doesn't like”改为“disagrees with”，使表达更准确。）

He says that the student can go to the museum on the downtown very quickly. He says that students can easily visit the downtown museum.（将“去市区的博物馆非常快”改为“轻松参观市区的博物馆”，使表达更自然。）

And the student can pay less money to get in. Students can enter at a reduced price.（将“支付较少的钱进入”改为“以减价进入”，使表达更准确。）

Even the museum is free on Monday. In fact, the museum offers free admission on Mondays.（使用“In fact”代替“Even”，使句子过渡更自然；将“免费”改为“免费入场”，使表达更准确。）

And the museum has very famous art, so students can appreciate it as a museum. The museum houses renowned artworks, allowing students to appreciate them without an on-campus museum.（将“非常著名的艺术品”改为“知名艺术品”，使表达更准确；将“作为博物馆”改为“没有校园博物馆”，使意义更明确。）

Also, he says that it's too expensive project. Additionally, he mentions that it would be an overly expensive project.（使用“Additionally”代替“Also”，使句子过渡更自然；将“太昂贵的项目”改为“过于昂贵的项目”，使表达更准确。）

And the alumna have donate more money to build the libraries, so we couldn't accept them to donate more money to build what we don't need. Since alumni have already donated for the construction of libraries, it is unreasonable to expect them to contribute more for something unnecessary.（将“不能接受他们捐款建造我们不需要的东西”改为“不合理地期望他们为不必要的事物捐款”，使表达更准确。）

So both the two reasons, the man doesn't like these ideas. Due to these reasons, the man opposes the proposal.（将“所以这两个原因，男人不喜欢这些想法”改为“由于这些原因

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Establish an art museum on campus
  - Appreciate high-quality art
  - Alumni donations

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with the idea
  - Reasons:
    - Downtown museum accessibility
      - Reduced price/free admission for students
      - Renowned artworks available
    - Expensive project
      - Alumni already donating for libraries
      - Unnecessary expense

7.关键词