TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高表达的流畅性。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答较为完整，能够概括提案的内容并阐述女士对此的观点及理由。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如在提到女士的观点时可以使用更清晰的连接词。建议在练习中多关注逻辑结构和连接词的使用，使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original: The reason is that students studying outside the university should not be required to take an art course, because they already have some art experience and they can supply the samples to the professors. But the women disagree with the idea. The first reason is that it's a whole range of different courses in university, so students could benefit from the course. For example, they could get something new and be interested in it and they can explore some other area. And the second reason is that the suggestion doesn't work well in the university, because the professors are always busy teaching students or helping students and preparing some meetings. So they don't have time to do it. Submitting samples to them could take too much time often.

Corrected: The reason is that students studyinglearning outside the university should not be required to take an artarts course, because they already have some artarts experience and they can supply the samples to the professors. But the womenwoman disagrees with the idea. The first reason is that there's a whole range of different courses in universitythe university, so students could benefit from the coursethese courses. For example, they could discover something new and become interested in it, and they can explore other areas. And the second reason is that the suggestion doesn't work well in the universityuniversities, because the professors are always busy teaching students, helping students, and preparing for meetings. So they don't have time to do it. Submitting samples to them could often take too much time.

(学习: 更自然的表达方式；艺术课程: 保持一致性；女士: 单数形式；在大学里: 更自然的表达方式；这些课程: 更清晰地表示多个课程；发现新事物并对其感兴趣: 更自然的表达方式；在大学里: 更自然的表达方式)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reason is that students learning outside the university should not be required to take an arts course, because they already have some arts experience and they can supply samples to the professors. However, the woman disagrees with this idea. The first reason is that there's a whole range of different courses in the university, so students could benefit from these courses. For example, they could discover something new and become interested in it, allowing them to explore other areas of art. The second reason is that the suggestion doesn't work well in universities, as professors are always busy teaching students, helping them with their projects, and preparing for meetings. Therefore, they don't have time to evaluate external samples. Submitting samples to them could often take too much time and add to their already busy schedules.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Students learning outside university
  • Not required to take arts course
  • Supply samples to professors

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal
  • Reasons
    • Range of different courses in university
      • Benefit from these courses
      • Discover new interests and explore other areas
    • Professors' busy schedules
      • Teaching, helping students, preparing for meetings
      • No time to evaluate external samples

7.关键词