TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不恰当的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意语速和停顿的控制，以便更清晰地表达自己的观点。同时，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对文章中的计划进行了总结，并提到了女士对计划的看法及其原因。但是，在解释原因时，发言者没有完全准确地传达了女士的观点。例如，关于学校帮助管理汽车的部分，并非女士所提到的原因。建议在练习时更加关注听力材料中的细节，并确保在回答问题时准确地传达这些信息。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the school has implemented a new policy that offers students with car rental program on campus with discounted rate for easier travel and help them deal with car problem. The university has implemented a new policy offering students a car rental program on campus at a discounted rate, making travel easier and helping them handle car-related issues. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。同时，修正了一些词汇和语法错误。)

And in the conversation, the woman totally agree with this policy for two reasons. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this policy for two reasons. (修正了动词时态和词汇选择。)

The first reason she gave is that it's far for students to travel from town to school. The first reason she provides is that it's quite a distance for students to travel between the town and the campus. (调整了句子结构和词汇，使其更自然。)

And if they travel by bus, they will spend two hours on the way. If they take the bus, it will take them two hours each way. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然。)

And if they drive, they can cost just one hour. However, if they drive, it will only take them one hour. (修正了句子结构和词汇错误。)

And the second reason she gave is that the school can help them manage their car. The second reason she mentions is that this program allows students to have access to cars without the expenses of owning one. (根据听力材料修正了原因。)

So it's helpful for students to park or repair. Thus, it's beneficial for students in terms of parking and maintenance. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has implemented a new policy offering students a car rental program on campus at a discounted rate, making travel easier and helping them handle car-related issues. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this policy for two reasons. The first reason she provides is that it's quite a distance for students to travel between the town and the campus. If they take the bus, it will take them two hours each way. However, if they drive, it will only take them one hour. The second reason she mentions is that this program allows students to have access to cars without the expenses of owning one. Thus, it's beneficial for students in terms of parking and maintenance.

6.思维导图

- University policy
  - Car rental program
  - Discounted rate

- Woman's opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Two reasons
    - Distance between town and campus
      - Bus: two hours each way
      - Driving: one hour
    - Access to cars without ownership expenses
      - Parking and maintenance benefits

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的发言相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。建议在练习时注意语速保持一致，尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。加强发音练习和多听多模仿有助于提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上涵盖了文章和听力中的关键信息，并对女生的观点进行了总结。但在组织结构上还可以更加清晰。建议在回答时先简要概括计划，然后明确指出女生的观点，并逐一解释她给出的理由。同时，注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡词使回答更加连贯。多做练习和参考范文可以帮助提高话题发展能力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the university is planning to offer rental cars to students. Well, first of all, it will just make it convenient for students to go shopping and do errands. And secondly, it will just make cars more accessible to students who can't afford to own their own cars. And the man in the conversation agreed with this idea, and the woman also agreed with this idea. First of all, he thinks that it will just make it convenient for students to own their cars. You know, there's always a bus, but it will take two hours to run once. So it's very inconvenient, but with the cars, the situation is completely different. And also, they think that it will just make it more accessible to students to rent their cars. When buying a car, you have to consider gas or permit to park, or some car problems.

Corrected Answer: The university plans to offer rental cars for students. Primarily, this will make it convenient for them to run errands and shop. Moreover, it provides better access to transportation for those who cannot afford their own vehicles. Both the man and woman in the conversation agree with this plan. The woman believes that having rental cars would significantly improve convenience compared to relying on buses that run every two hours. Additionally, they both think renting cars is a more feasible option for students since owning a car involves expenses such as gas, parking permits, and maintenance. (删除了重复的词汇，简化了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇，使句子更自然流畅。同时，修改了原文中的一些语法错误。)

Revised 140-word Answer: The university plans to offer rental cars for students. Primarily, this will make it convenient for them to run errands and shop. Moreover, it provides better access to transportation for those who cannot afford their own vehicles. Both the man and woman in the conversation agree with this plan. The woman believes that having rental cars would significantly improve convenience compared to relying on buses that run every two hours. Additionally, they both think renting cars is a more feasible option for students since owning a car involves expenses such as gas, parking permits, and maintenance. This program will not only save time but also reduce the financial burden on students, allowing them to focus on their studies without worrying about transportation issues. Overall, the woman's opinion is well-supported by her personal experience and the benefits of the car rental program.

6.思维导图

- University plans
  - Rental cars for students

- Benefits
  - Convenience
    - Running errands
    - Shopping
  - Accessibility
    - Students who cannot afford own cars

- Conversation
  - Agreement on the plan
  - Woman's opinion
    - Improved convenience compared to buses
    - Feasible option for students (expenses)

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使表达更流畅。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的计划，并阐述女生对计划的看法及原因。但在表述过程中，部分句子较长，容易造成理解困难。建议在练习时注意简化句子结构，使表达更清晰、有条理。同时，在总结女生观点时可以更加简洁明了。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university recently announced that it has made an arrangement with a local car rental company to offer rental cars to students at a discounted rate. The university recently announced a partnership with a local car rental company to provide discounted rental cars for students. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰) And the woman in the conversation part considers this is a really good proposal. The woman in the conversation believes this is an excellent plan. (使用更高级的词汇，简化句子结构) First, because the campus is really far away from the town, although there are half bus, but it takes every two hours, which is really inconvenient, because you should take hours to visit one store, and if you have a lot of stores to visit, it will take longer time. Firstly, the campus is quite far from the town; although buses are available, they only run every two hours, making it inconvenient as it takes hours to visit just one store and even longer if there are multiple stores to visit. (改善语法和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅) And the second reason is buying a car is too expensive for the students. It cannot be managed by students because they have to pay a maintenance fee to consider such as the permitment to go into the college. The second reason is that buying a car is too costly for students, as they have to consider expenses like maintenance fees and parking permits on campus. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰) So when this fee adds up, students cannot afford this. Thus, when these costs add up, it becomes unaffordable for students. (改善语法和词汇) This is why the woman totally agrees with this proposal, because it is a really cost effective approach for the students. That's why the woman strongly agrees with this plan, as it offers a cost-effective solution for students. (使用更高级的词汇，简化句子结构)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university recently announced a partnership with a local car rental company to provide discounted rental cars for students. The woman in the conversation believes this is an excellent plan. Firstly, the campus is quite far from the town; although buses are available, they only run every two hours, making it inconvenient as it takes hours to visit just one store and even longer if there are multiple stores to visit. The second reason is that buying a car is too costly for students, as they have to consider expenses like maintenance fees and parking permits on campus. Thus, when these costs add up, it becomes unaffordable for students. That's why the woman strongly agrees with this plan, as it offers a cost-effective solution for students.

6.思维导图

- University Partnership
  - Local car rental company
  - Discounted rental cars for students

- Woman's Opinion
  - Excellent plan
  - Reasons:
    - Campus far from town
      - Inconvenient bus schedule
    - Cost of owning a car
      - Maintenance fees
      - Parking permits on campus

- Cost-effective solution for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流畅度和语速较为一致，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在解释女生观点的原因时，可以更加详细地展开。建议发言者在回答问题时尽量提供更多具体的例子和支持观点的论据，以便更好地阐述观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The musical department decide to sponsor launch concert from next semester So this concert is going to be provided by the students In the conversation, the girls are looking forward to it As a musical student, he have two main reasons First, he think it's a great opportunity to practice as musical student have lots of learning, lots of places but now they only have one time to practice every final year Secondly, she think providing food is also a good idea because lots of people attending this concert won't have time to grab some food Meanwhile, the concert is placed in a building far away from the school's building At least 15 minutes walking distance So it's a great idea to provide food

修正后：The music department has decided to sponsor lunchtime concerts starting from next semester. These concerts will be performed by students. In the conversation, the girl is looking forward to it. As a music student, she has two main reasons. First, she thinks it's an excellent opportunity for practice since music students learn many pieces but currently only have one chance to perform at the end of each year. Secondly, she believes that providing food is a good idea because many people attending the concert won't have time to get some food. Moreover, the concert venue is located in a building far from other school buildings, at least a 15-minute walk away. Therefore, offering food is a great idea. (修改了时态、词汇和语法，使句子更自然流畅)

修订版（140字）：

The music department has decided to sponsor lunchtime concerts starting from next semester. These concerts will be performed by students. The girl in the conversation is excited about this plan and has two main reasons. First, she thinks it's an excellent opportunity for practice since music students learn many pieces but currently only have one chance to perform at the end of each year. Secondly, she believes that providing food is a good idea because many people attending the concert won't have time to get some food. Moreover, the concert venue is located in a building far from other school buildings, at least a 15-minute walk away. Therefore, offering food is a great idea.

6.思维导图

- Music department
  - Sponsor lunchtime concerts
  - Starting next semester
  - Performed by students

- Girl's opinion
  - Excited
  - Two main reasons
    - Excellent opportunity for practice
      - Learn many pieces
      - Limited performance opportunities
    - Providing food is a good idea
      - Attendees short on time
      - Concert venue far from other buildings

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。尝试练习更清晰、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容需要更加紧密地围绕主题展开。首先，在总结计划时要更准确地描述大学聘请专业导演的原因。其次，在陈述女生观点时，要确保提到她对导演时间不足和学生对导演名气不熟悉的担忧。最后，尝试使用更多的连接词和例子来使回答更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the university is planning to get a professional director to direct the theatres. The university plans to hire a professional director for the spring musical. (将原句中的“theatres”改为“spring musical”，使描述更准确。) And first of all, he thinks that it will be just better to direct with a complete director. Firstly, they believe that working with an experienced director will benefit the students. (重新组织句子，使表达更清晰。) And besides, he thinks that it will just attract more audience. Additionally, they expect that a professional director will draw larger student audiences. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

And the woman in the conversation doesn't like this idea. First of all, he thinks that the professor is busy. The woman disagrees with this plan because she believes the director is too busy. (修正错误的代词和简化句子结构。) I mean, he already has many theatres to direct in the city. So as a result, he might not have much attention to give to the theatre groups. She mentions that he is already directing several other shows in the city, which may result in him not giving enough attention to the university production. (使用更准确的词汇和更自然的表达方式。) And secondly, he thinks that the studio university is wrong because the professor himself is already famous. But the students themselves just don't get much reputation or fame. Secondly, she argues that the university's assumption about attracting more audiences is incorrect because although the director is famous, most students are not familiar with him. (重新组织句子，使表达更清晰和连贯。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to hire a professional director for the spring musical. Firstly, they believe that working with an experienced director will benefit the students. Additionally, they expect that a professional director will draw larger student audiences. The woman disagrees with this plan because she believes the director is too busy. She mentions that he is already directing several other shows in the city, which may result in him not giving enough attention to the university production. Secondly, she argues that the university's assumption about attracting more audiences is incorrect because although the director is famous, most students are not familiar with him.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Hire professional director
  • Benefits for students
  • Attract larger audiences

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with plan
  • Director too busy
    • Directing other shows in the city
    • Not enough attention to university production
  • Incorrect assumption about attracting audiences
    • Director's fame not known by most students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

由于回答与问题无关，无法根据TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准对表达进行评价。建议重新审阅问题并提供与问题相关的回答。

4.话题发展

同样，由于回答与问题无关，无法根据TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准对话题发展进行评价。建议重新审阅问题并提供与问题相关的回答。

5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The university recently announced a car rental program on campus. (原文无关，已修改为与问题相关的回答。)

根据TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准，原回答与问题无关，因此无法评价语言使用。以下是根据评分标准修改后的回答：

The university recently announced a car rental program on campus, which offers rental cars to students at a discounted rate. The woman expresses her positive opinion about the plan because it makes it easier for students to travel to town for errands and shopping. She mentions that the campus is far from town, and relying on buses is inconvenient due to their infrequent schedule. Driving would save time and make it easier for students to visit multiple places. Additionally, she agrees with the point that owning a car is expensive for students, considering the costs of gas, parking permits, repairs, and maintenance. The car rental program provides an affordable and convenient solution for many students.

此修改后的回答更符合TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准，使用了自然的语言风格、恰当的词汇和语法，并对女士的观点及其理由进行了详细阐述。

6.思维导图

• Car rental program

  • Discounted rate
  • On-campus availability

• Woman's opinion

  • Positive
  • Reasons
    • Inconvenient buses
    • Time-saving
    • High cost of car ownership
      • Gas, parking permits, repairs, maintenance

7.关键词