TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不恰当的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意语速和停顿的控制，以便更清晰地表达自己的观点。同时，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对文章中的计划进行了总结，并提到了女士对计划的看法及其原因。但是，在解释原因时，发言者没有完全准确地传达了女士的观点。例如，关于学校帮助管理汽车的部分，并非女士所提到的原因。建议在练习时更加关注听力材料中的细节，并确保在回答问题时准确地传达这些信息。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the school has implemented a new policy that offers students with car rental program on campus with discounted rate for easier travel and help them deal with car problem. The university has implemented a new policy offering students a car rental program on campus at a discounted rate, making travel easier and helping them handle car-related issues. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。同时，修正了一些词汇和语法错误。)

And in the conversation, the woman totally agree with this policy for two reasons. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this policy for two reasons. (修正了动词时态和词汇选择。)

The first reason she gave is that it's far for students to travel from town to school. The first reason she provides is that it's quite a distance for students to travel between the town and the campus. (调整了句子结构和词汇，使其更自然。)

And if they travel by bus, they will spend two hours on the way. If they take the bus, it will take them two hours each way. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然。)

And if they drive, they can cost just one hour. However, if they drive, it will only take them one hour. (修正了句子结构和词汇错误。)

And the second reason she gave is that the school can help them manage their car. The second reason she mentions is that this program allows students to have access to cars without the expenses of owning one. (根据听力材料修正了原因。)

So it's helpful for students to park or repair. Thus, it's beneficial for students in terms of parking and maintenance. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has implemented a new policy offering students a car rental program on campus at a discounted rate, making travel easier and helping them handle car-related issues. In the conversation, the woman completely agrees with this policy for two reasons. The first reason she provides is that it's quite a distance for students to travel between the town and the campus. If they take the bus, it will take them two hours each way. However, if they drive, it will only take them one hour. The second reason she mentions is that this program allows students to have access to cars without the expenses of owning one. Thus, it's beneficial for students in terms of parking and maintenance.

6.思维导图

- University policy
  - Car rental program
  - Discounted rate

- Woman's opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Two reasons
    - Distance between town and campus
      - Bus: two hours each way
      - Driving: one hour
    - Access to cars without ownership expenses
      - Parking and maintenance benefits

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尽量减少不必要的停顿，使表达更流畅。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的计划，并阐述女生对计划的看法及原因。但在表述过程中，部分句子较长，容易造成理解困难。建议在练习时注意简化句子结构，使表达更清晰、有条理。同时，在总结女生观点时可以更加简洁明了。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university recently announced that it has made an arrangement with a local car rental company to offer rental cars to students at a discounted rate. The university recently announced a partnership with a local car rental company to provide discounted rental cars for students. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰) And the woman in the conversation part considers this is a really good proposal. The woman in the conversation believes this is an excellent plan. (使用更高级的词汇，简化句子结构) First, because the campus is really far away from the town, although there are half bus, but it takes every two hours, which is really inconvenient, because you should take hours to visit one store, and if you have a lot of stores to visit, it will take longer time. Firstly, the campus is quite far from the town; although buses are available, they only run every two hours, making it inconvenient as it takes hours to visit just one store and even longer if there are multiple stores to visit. (改善语法和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅) And the second reason is buying a car is too expensive for the students. It cannot be managed by students because they have to pay a maintenance fee to consider such as the permitment to go into the college. The second reason is that buying a car is too costly for students, as they have to consider expenses like maintenance fees and parking permits on campus. (简化句子结构，使表达更清晰) So when this fee adds up, students cannot afford this. Thus, when these costs add up, it becomes unaffordable for students. (改善语法和词汇) This is why the woman totally agrees with this proposal, because it is a really cost effective approach for the students. That's why the woman strongly agrees with this plan, as it offers a cost-effective solution for students. (使用更高级的词汇，简化句子结构)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university recently announced a partnership with a local car rental company to provide discounted rental cars for students. The woman in the conversation believes this is an excellent plan. Firstly, the campus is quite far from the town; although buses are available, they only run every two hours, making it inconvenient as it takes hours to visit just one store and even longer if there are multiple stores to visit. The second reason is that buying a car is too costly for students, as they have to consider expenses like maintenance fees and parking permits on campus. Thus, when these costs add up, it becomes unaffordable for students. That's why the woman strongly agrees with this plan, as it offers a cost-effective solution for students.

6.思维导图

- University Partnership
  - Local car rental company
  - Discounted rental cars for students

- Woman's Opinion
  - Excellent plan
  - Reasons:
    - Campus far from town
      - Inconvenient bus schedule
    - Cost of owning a car
      - Maintenance fees
      - Parking permits on campus

- Cost-effective solution for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流畅度和语速较为一致，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在解释女生观点的原因时，可以更加详细地展开。建议发言者在回答问题时尽量提供更多具体的例子和支持观点的论据，以便更好地阐述观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The musical department decide to sponsor launch concert from next semester So this concert is going to be provided by the students In the conversation, the girls are looking forward to it As a musical student, he have two main reasons First, he think it's a great opportunity to practice as musical student have lots of learning, lots of places but now they only have one time to practice every final year Secondly, she think providing food is also a good idea because lots of people attending this concert won't have time to grab some food Meanwhile, the concert is placed in a building far away from the school's building At least 15 minutes walking distance So it's a great idea to provide food

修正后：The music department has decided to sponsor lunchtime concerts starting from next semester. These concerts will be performed by students. In the conversation, the girl is looking forward to it. As a music student, she has two main reasons. First, she thinks it's an excellent opportunity for practice since music students learn many pieces but currently only have one chance to perform at the end of each year. Secondly, she believes that providing food is a good idea because many people attending the concert won't have time to get some food. Moreover, the concert venue is located in a building far from other school buildings, at least a 15-minute walk away. Therefore, offering food is a great idea. (修改了时态、词汇和语法，使句子更自然流畅)

修订版（140字）：

The music department has decided to sponsor lunchtime concerts starting from next semester. These concerts will be performed by students. The girl in the conversation is excited about this plan and has two main reasons. First, she thinks it's an excellent opportunity for practice since music students learn many pieces but currently only have one chance to perform at the end of each year. Secondly, she believes that providing food is a good idea because many people attending the concert won't have time to get some food. Moreover, the concert venue is located in a building far from other school buildings, at least a 15-minute walk away. Therefore, offering food is a great idea.

6.思维导图

- Music department
  - Sponsor lunchtime concerts
  - Starting next semester
  - Performed by students

- Girl's opinion
  - Excited
  - Two main reasons
    - Excellent opportunity for practice
      - Learn many pieces
      - Limited performance opportunities
    - Providing food is a good idea
      - Attendees short on time
      - Concert venue far from other buildings

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速基本清晰流畅，但仍有一些不太自然的停顿。建议练习更自然地连接句子，以提高语言表达的流畅性。同时，注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的计划并阐述女生的观点及原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如可以先总结计划，再陈述女生的观点和原因。此外，在解释原因时可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词，使得回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The university will begin to offer practice job interview for students. The university plans to offer practice job interviews for students.（将begin改为plans，使句子更自然；将interview改为interviews，使语法正确）

Firstly, it will help students to improve their chances of getting a job. First, it aims to help students enhance their chances of securing a job.（将Firstly改为First，使语言更自然；将improve改为enhance，词汇更高级；将getting a job改为securing a job，表达更准确）

Besides, the job interview practice will be assigned at the end of the semester. Moreover, the practice interviews will be scheduled towards the end of the semester.（将Besides改为Moreover，过渡词更恰当；将assigned改为scheduled，使句子更自然）

However, the woman disagrees with this idea. Nonetheless, the woman opposes this plan.（将disagrees with this idea改为opposes this plan，表达更准确）

Firstly, she thinks that it's not realistic because it's not like the actual situation. First, she believes it lacks realism as it does not resemble an actual interview scenario.（将thinks改为believes，词汇更高级；将it's not like the actual situation改为it does not resemble an actual interview scenario，表达更准确）

So students will not take it seriously and they will not feel nervous as they will be in the real occasion. As a result, students may not treat it seriously and might not experience the same level of nervousness as in a real interview.（将will改为may和might，使语气更自然；将real occasion改为real interview，表达更准确）

Besides, the girl doesn't like the timing because at the last few months of the semester, students have to do a lot of research projects or exams or they may be doing a part-time job. Additionally, she dislikes the timing as during the final months of the semester, students are occupied with numerous research projects, exams, or part-time jobs.（将girl改为she，使语言更正式；将at the last few months改为during the final months，表达更准确；简化句子结构，使语言更自然）

So it's hard for them to fit into the busy schedule and arrange time for the job interview practice. Thus, it becomes challenging for them to accommodate this practice within their hectic schedules.（将fit into改为accommodate，词汇更高级；将arrange time for改为within，使句子更自然）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to offer practice job interviews for students. First, it aims to help students enhance their chances of securing a job. Moreover, the practice interviews will be scheduled towards the end of the semester. Nonetheless, the woman opposes this plan. First, she believes it lacks realism as it does not resemble an actual interview scenario. As a result, students may not treat it seriously and might not experience the same level of nervousness as in a real interview. Additionally, she dislikes the timing as during the final months of the semester, students are occupied with numerous research projects, exams, or part-time jobs. Thus, it becomes challenging for them to accommodate this practice within their hectic schedules.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Practice job interviews
  • Enhance chances of securing a job
  • Scheduled towards end of semester

• Woman's Opposition

  • Lacks realism
    • Not resembling actual interview scenario
  • Timing issue
    • Final months of semester
    • Busy with research projects, exams, part-time jobs

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时注意连贯性和流利度，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方表述略显混乱。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注意逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的关联清晰，并提供足够的支持或例子来支持自己的观点。同时，在练习时可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使回答更加流畅。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university's proposal is that the train company will discontinue the service of a short train line and close the campus station because of the decreasing passenger number in two years, and the university will convert the station into a cafe shop for students to use the space. The university's plan is to discontinue the short train line service and close the campus station due to a decrease in passenger numbers over two years. The university intends to convert the station into a coffee shop for students to utilize the space. (建议使用更简洁的句子结构和词汇，以提高语言的自然流畅度。)

In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the proposal because firstly, some people who don't have other transportations may rely on the station, and on holidays, many people will use the train line to travel around because it is much cheaper than other transportations. In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the plan for two reasons: first, some people without alternative transportation options rely on this station; second, during holidays, many people use this train line for travel as it is more affordable than other options. (使用更清晰的句子结构和连接词，以提高语言的连贯性和逻辑性。)

Secondly, it is useless for the university to build a cafe shop for students to use since there are cafes which is close to the classroom and the dorm room, but the university should make sure that everyone knows the cafe, and since many students, there are not many students in the cafe, so the woman believes that the students do not know the cafe's location. Furthermore, the woman believes it is unnecessary for the university to create a coffee shop in the station because there are already cafes near classrooms and dormitories. She suggests that the university should ensure students are aware of these existing cafes, as their low attendance might indicate a lack of awareness about their locations. (使用更自然的语言风格和词汇，以及更清晰的句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university's plan is to discontinue the short train line service and close the campus station due to a decrease in passenger numbers over two years. The university intends to convert the station into a coffee shop for students to utilize the space. In the conversation, the woman disagrees with the plan for two reasons: first, some people without alternative transportation options rely on this station; second, during holidays, many people use this train line for travel as it is more affordable than other options. Furthermore, the woman believes it is unnecessary for the university to create a coffee shop in the station because there are already cafes near classrooms and dormitories. She suggests that the university should ensure students are aware of these existing cafes, as their low attendance might indicate a lack of awareness about their locations.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Discontinue train line service
  - Close campus station
  - Convert station into coffee shop

- Woman's Disagreement
  - People rely on station
    - No alternative transportation
  - Train line usage during holidays
    - More affordable than other options

- Unnecessary Coffee Shop
  - Existing cafes near classrooms and dormitories
  - Low attendance due to lack of awareness

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议在练习时注意保持一致的语速和适当的停顿，以便让听众更容易理解你的观点。

4.话题发展 回答在话题发展方面做得相对较好，内容组织清晰，观点之间的联系也比较明确。但是，在提供支持或举例时可以再多加一些细节，以使回答更具说服力。在练习时，可以尝试多思考一些相关的例子或论据来支持你的观点。

5.语言使用

Original: In the letter, the students suggest that a school can hold a program for students to share their thesis papers, and this program can be optional. In the letter, it is suggested that the school should hold a program for students to share their thesis papers, making this program optional.（将主语从“学生”改为“信中”，使句子更自然；同时调整句子结构，使其更符合英语表达习惯。）

Original: In the conversation, the woman agrees with the idea. In the conversation, the woman supports the idea.（将“agrees”替换为“supports”，使词汇更丰富。）

Original: She says that learning unusual topics that they cannot learn in their class is good. She believes that exploring unique topics not covered in their classes is beneficial.（调整句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，如“exploring”和“beneficial”。）

Original: For example, she majors in history. If she can learn literature or anthropology, it would be really cool. For instance, as a history major, she would find it fascinating to learn about literature or anthropology.（调整句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并用“fascinating”替换“really cool”。）

Original: She also agrees that giving people choices is a good idea. She also concurs that providing students with options is a wise approach.（使用更高级的词汇，如“concurs”和“wise approach”，使句子更地道。）

Original: It seems preparing for this kind of project is stressful, and students might get busy to get the project done. It appears that preparing for such projects can be stressful, and students may become occupied in completing them.（调整句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，如“occupied”。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the letter, it is suggested that the school should hold a program for students to share their thesis papers, making this program optional. In the conversation, the woman supports the idea. She believes that exploring unique topics not covered in their classes is beneficial. For instance, as a history major, she would find it fascinating to learn about literature or anthropology. She also concurs that providing students with options is a wise approach. It appears that preparing for such projects can be stressful, and students may become occupied in completing them.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Letter suggestion
  - Optional program

- Woman's opinion
  - Supports the idea
  - Benefits of exploring unique topics
    - History major example
    - Fascinating subjects
  - Providing options
    - Wise approach

- Challenges
  - Stressful projects
  - Occupied students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步加强。例如，在提到女孩对计划的看法时，可以更明确地指出她是支持还是反对，并给出更具体的原因。此外，在描述计划的收益时，可以提供更多详细信息，如收费标准和预期改进项目。总之，为了提高话题发展水平，请确保在回答中提供充足的支持和例证。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university announced to start a summer program for the children for their sport programs, mainly first for they provide valuable work experience for the students. The university announced the initiation of a summer sports program for children, primarily because it provides valuable work experience for students.（将句子结构进行了简化，使其更自然流畅。同时，修正了一些语法错误。）

Also, the extra money charged can be used to improve sports and sports field and facilities. Additionally, the fees collected will be utilized to enhance sports fields and facilities.（使用了更高级的词汇，并改进了句子结构。）

The girls in the conversation really likes this idea mainly for two reasons. The girl in the conversation strongly supports this plan due to two main reasons.（改进了句子结构，使其更自然。）

First, she thinks that this actually provides more opportunities for athlete students to practice being a coach. Firstly, she believes that this plan offers more opportunities for student-athletes to gain coaching experience.（使用了更高级的词汇，并改进了句子结构。）

Well, she used herself as an example because she plays soccer ball but now not quite have enough opportunities for him to experience the coaching skills, so this is really good for him to practice. She uses herself as an example since she plays softball and currently lacks sufficient opportunities to develop her coaching skills, making this program beneficial for her.（修正了一些语法错误，并改进了句子结构。）

On top of that, the extra money can be used to build more seats because it is not good for spectators just Moreover, the additional funds can be allocated to construct more seating as it is inconvenient for spectators.（使用了更高级的词汇，并改进了句子结构。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university announced the initiation of a summer sports program for children, primarily because it provides valuable work experience for students. Additionally, the fees collected will be utilized to enhance sports fields and facilities. The girl in the conversation strongly supports this plan due to two main reasons. Firstly, she believes that this plan offers more opportunities for student-athletes to gain coaching experience. She uses herself as an example since she plays softball and currently lacks sufficient opportunities to develop her coaching skills, making this program beneficial for her. Moreover, the additional funds can be allocated to construct more seating as it is inconvenient for spectators. This improvement would provide a better viewing experience for those attending games and further contribute to the overall success of the university's sports programs.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Summer sports program for children
  • Valuable work experience for students
  • Enhance sports fields and facilities

• Girl's Opinion

  • Strongly supports the plan
  • Reasons:
    • More coaching opportunities for student-athletes
    • Additional funds for constructing more seating

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2.5 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确，导致拼写错误。此外，语速不够稳定，偶尔出现不必要的停顿。建议多练习发音和提高口语流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，确保回答内容更加连贯和有组织。

5.语言使用

Original: The university expressed their policy that they will sell remove (原文中的意思是“移除”，而不是“出售”) the books that didn't buy, didn't borrowed haven't been borrowed (使用正确的时态和表达方式：“没有被借走的书”) by the students for five years and they will copy them to electronic version so that every student could access it very convenient, conveniently conveniently (应使用副词“方便地”来修饰动词). The female students said it's a very great policy. She worked in the school's library last semester and she knows there are so many books in the library and there are so many piles of books that they don't have some rooms to move. It's a very shame thing. And she also said it's a good policy to copy the books to the online version so that we needn't go to the library in the dorm room, then we can also access the electronic books.

Revised (140 words): The university announced a policy to remove books that haven't been borrowed by students for five years and digitize them, allowing students to access them conveniently online. The female student expressed her support for this policy, stating it was a great idea. She mentioned her experience working at the library last semester, where she observed overcrowded shelves and piles of books with no space to move. She considered this situation to be a shame. Furthermore, she appreciated the idea of digitizing the books, as it would eliminate the need for students to visit the library or carry heavy books, allowing them to access the electronic versions from their dorm rooms.

6.思维导图

- University policy
  - Remove books
  - Haven't been borrowed for five years
  - Digitize

- Female student's opinion
  - Great policy
  - Overcrowded shelves
  - Piles of books

- Benefits of digitization
  - Convenient access
  - No need to visit library
  - Access from dorm rooms

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方出现了不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语言的流畅性，减少不自然的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于文章中的计划进行了较好的总结，并表达了女生对该计划的看法及原因。然而，在提到女生观点时，可以更加简洁明了地陈述。建议在组织内容时，尝试使用更清晰的逻辑结构和连接词，使回答更具条理性。

5.语言使用

Original: The announcement suggests that there will be concerts performed live by music students during lunchtime, so that it will not only benefit the music students and give them some opportunities to perform, but can also deliver some snacks for students to enjoy. The announcement states that lunchtime concerts will be performed live by music students, benefiting them by providing performance opportunities and offering snacks for students to enjoy.（将句子结构进行了简化，使表达更加简洁明了。）

Original: Firstly, she proposed that they, music students, may have only chances to play a piece of music at the end of the year in the concert. Firstly, she mentioned that music students currently have limited chances to perform, with only one concert at the end of the year.（调整了句子结构，使表达更加清晰。）

Original: So they really lack some opportunities to play some materials they like. Thus, they lack opportunities to showcase their talents in various pieces.（使用了更高级的词汇，使表达更加自然。）

Original: If the food is delivered, they will have enough time not only to enjoy the performance, but also to get a stomach full. If food is provided, they will have enough time to enjoy the performance and satisfy their hunger.（调整了句子结构，使表达更加自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The announcement states that lunchtime concerts will be performed live by music students, benefiting them by providing performance opportunities and offering snacks for students to enjoy. The woman strongly agrees with the proposal. Firstly, she mentioned that music students currently have limited chances to perform, with only one concert at the end of the year. Thus, they lack opportunities to showcase their talents in various pieces. Additionally, she thinks that providing food during the break is fantastic because the hall is far away from dining halls and classrooms, making it difficult for students to eat in between classes. If food is provided, they will have enough time to enjoy the performance and satisfy their hunger. She believes this plan is a good idea.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Lunchtime concerts
  • Music students
  • Performance opportunities
  • Snacks provided

• Woman's opinion

  • Strongly agrees
  • Limited chances to perform
  • Showcasing talents in various pieces

• Food provision

  • Fantastic idea
  • Distance from dining halls and classrooms
  • Time to enjoy performance and satisfy hunger

7.关键词