TOEFL TPO 25 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习中注意保持语速的稳定，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容组织得很好，观点清晰，并且提供了充足的支持和例子。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school plans to split its graduation ceremony into two the next year for the half students to attend the first one and the half students to attend the next one. The university plans to divide its graduation ceremony into two separate events next year, with half of the students attending the first event and the other half attending the second event. (原句表达不够自然，修改为更自然的表达方式。)

So the woman thinks that this plan is unnecessary because on the one hand while the school thinks that the number of students are climbing so it requires a long time for each students to receive their diploma individually. The woman believes that this plan is unnecessary because, although the university acknowledges that the increasing number of students requires more time for each student to receive their diploma individually, (修改句子结构，使其更清晰。)

The woman thinks that school can solve this problem by cutting down on boring and unnecessary speeches in the graduation ceremony. she suggests that the problem could be solved by reducing the number of boring and unnecessary speeches during the ceremony. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)

And also while the school thinks the hall is too small to hold the large audience, the woman thinks that if the number of guests each students can invite is reduced this problem will also be solved. Additionally, while the university believes that the hall is too small to accommodate a large audience, she argues that limiting the number of guests each student can invite would also solve the problem. (调整句子结构，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to divide its graduation ceremony into two separate events next year, with half of the students attending the first event and the other half attending the second event. The woman believes that this plan is unnecessary because, although the university acknowledges that the increasing number of students requires more time for each student to receive their diploma individually, she suggests that the problem could be solved by reducing the number of boring and unnecessary speeches during the ceremony. Additionally, while the university believes that the hall is too small to accommodate a large audience, she argues that limiting the number of guests each student can invite would also solve the problem.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Divide graduation ceremony
  - Two separate events

- Woman's opinion
  - Unnecessary plan
  - Reasons
    - Reducing speeches
    - Limiting guests

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 27

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice proper pausing and work on refining their pronunciation of certain words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively summarizes the university's plan, states the woman's opinion, and explains her reasons for holding that opinion. To further improve topic development, the speaker could provide more specific examples from the conversation to support their points.

5.Language Use

Original: The university plans to sublease the graduation ceremony. The university plans to split the graduation ceremony. ("sublease" is not the correct term; "split" is more appropriate) The woman disagrees with the proposal. The woman disagrees with the plan. ("proposal" should be replaced with "plan" for consistency) First, the plan claims that due to the increasing number of the students, it becomes much longer than before to hold the graduation ceremony, since we have to award the diploma individually. However, the woman points out that the university could reduce the number of speeches, some of which might be boring and useless for students to wait for a long time. Second, the university claims that the hall is too small to accommodate for all students and their family. The woman highlights that students invite too many guests, and the university should limit the maximum number of invited guests to reduce the amount of people in the hall.

Revised (140 words): The university plans to split the graduation ceremony. The woman disagrees with this plan. First, she argues that although it takes longer to hold a single ceremony due to an increased number of students receiving diplomas individually, reducing speeches could shorten it. She believes that some speeches are unnecessary and contribute to a lengthy waiting time for students. Second, she contends that the hall's size is not an issue; instead, it's about limiting guest invitations. Currently, each student can invite up to ten guests, which is more than most other schools allow. She suggests reducing this number to six guests per student, still higher than average but manageable within the current hall space. By implementing these changes, the university could maintain a single ceremony without compromising the experience for students and their families.

6.Mind Map

- University Plan
  - Split graduation ceremony

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with plan

- Reasons for Disagreement
  - Reducing speeches
    - Shorten ceremony
    - Unnecessary speeches
  - Limiting guest invitations
    - Hall size not an issue
    - Reduce number of guests per student

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3.5 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3.5

2.预估分数

27. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰流畅，语速适中，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，发言者可能需要注意适当的停顿以增强语言连贯性。此外，尽管发音问题不明显，但仍需注意准确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, summarizing the university's plan and the woman's opinion on it, as well as her reasons for disagreeing with the plan. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific examples or details from the conversation to further support the woman's opinion. Additionally, the speaker could work on making clearer connections between ideas to enhance the overall coherence of the response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one for two reasons. The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one, citing two reasons. (原句表达较为生硬，修改后的句子更自然。) First, the increasing number of students in recent years has led to a longer time required for awarding diplomas individually. First, the growing number of students in recent years has resulted in a longer time needed to award diplomas individually. (修改词汇以增强表达。) Additionally, the hall is too small to accommodate the growing audience of friends and family members. Moreover, the hall is insufficient in size to accommodate the expanding audience of friends and family members. (使用更高级的词汇。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one, citing two reasons. First, the growing number of students in recent years has resulted in a longer time needed to award diplomas individually. Moreover, the hall is insufficient in size to accommodate the expanding audience of friends and family members. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan. She believes that there are more straightforward ways to shorten the graduation ceremonies, such as reducing the number of lengthy and uninteresting speeches given by various individuals. Furthermore, she suggests that the university could address the space issue by limiting the number of guests each graduating student is allowed to invite, thus reducing the overall audience size and maintaining a single ceremony.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Two graduation ceremonies
  - Reasons
    - Increased number of students
    - Insufficient hall size

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Alternative solutions
    - Reduce number of speeches
    - Limit guests per student

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 主题发展（Topic Development）：4

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议练习更连贯、自然的语音表达。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容完整、条理清晰，很好地概括了大学计划和女士的观点及原因。在主题发展方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies. According to the university's plan, they will hold two graduation ceremonies. (根据大学的计划，他们将举行两场毕业典礼。) (原句中的表达较为生硬，修改后的句子更自然。)

Original: This is because the number of students has increased in recent years, making a single ceremony uncomfortable. This change is due to the increasing number of students in recent years, which makes a single ceremony inconvenient. (这种变化是由于近年来学生人数的增加，使得单个典礼变得不便。) (修改了一些词汇以提高语言的自然度和准确性。)

Original: However, the woman doesn't agree with this change. However, the woman disagrees with this change. (然而，这位女士不同意这种变化。) (使用更自然的动词形式。)

Original: Instead, she thinks that it is unnecessary because there are two simpler solutions to these issues. Instead, she believes it is unnecessary as there are two more straightforward solutions to these problems. (相反，她认为这是没有必要的，因为有两个更简单的解决方案来解决这些问题。) (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the university's plan, they will hold two graduation ceremonies. This change is due to the increasing number of students in recent years, which makes a single ceremony inconvenient. Secondly, the hall is too small to accommodate students and their family members. However, the woman disagrees with this change. Instead, she believes it is unnecessary as there are two more straightforward solutions to these problems. First of all, the university can shorten the ceremony by cutting out some tedious speeches. Secondly, the university should limit the number of guests students can invite. There are too many people that students can invite currently. In contrast, at most other schools, students are allowed to invite only four or five people.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Two graduation ceremonies
  • Reasons
    • Increasing number of students
    • Small hall

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the change
  • Alternative solutions
    • Shorten ceremony by cutting speeches
    • Limit number of guests

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

26. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的语音清晰，语速适中，偶尔有停顿。但有些地方可以改进，例如在某些句子中适当减少停顿，以使语言更流畅。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答内容连贯、组织良好，观点之间的联系清晰，并提供了足够的支持和例子。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the university's plan, there are two graduation ceremonies. This is because the number of students has increased in recent years, so a single ceremony has become uncomfortable. Secondly, the hall is too small to accommodate students and family members. But the woman doesn't agree with this plan. She thinks that it's unnecessary to do so because there are easier solutions to these issues. First of all, she thinks that the ceremony should be made shorter by cutting out some boring speeches. Secondly, she thinks that the number of guests who each graduate can invite should be limited. In this way, these two issues can be addressed.

Corrected: According to the university's plan, there are will be (用将来时更自然) two graduation ceremonies. This is because the number of students has increased in recent years, so a single ceremony has become uncomfortable infeasible (用infeasible更准确地描述情况). Secondly, Additionally (使用Additionally使句子更自然流畅), the hall is too small to accommodate students and family members. However, the woman doesn't agree with this plan. She believes that it's unnecessary because there are simpler solutions to these issues. Firstly, she suggests that the ceremony could be shortened by eliminating some tedious speeches. Secondly, she proposes that the number of guests each graduate can invite should be restricted. By implementing these changes, both issues can be resolved.

Revised (140 words): According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies due to the increased number of students in recent years, making a single ceremony infeasible. Additionally, the hall is too small to accommodate students and their family members. However, the woman disagrees with this plan, believing it's unnecessary as there are simpler solutions to these issues. Firstly, she suggests shortening the ceremony by eliminating some tedious speeches, which would save time and maintain engagement. Secondly, she proposes restricting the number of guests each graduate can invite, thus reducing overcrowding in the hall. By implementing these changes, both issues can be effectively resolved without resorting to splitting the graduation ceremony into two separate events.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Two graduation ceremonies
  - Reasons
    - Increased number of students
    - Small hall

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Simpler solutions
    - Shorten ceremony by eliminating speeches
    - Restrict number of guests per graduate

- Revised answer
  - Shortening ceremony and restricting guests as effective solutions

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 1

2.预估分数 总分：15

3.表达 在回答中，发音不够清晰，语速不稳定，有时出现较长的停顿。建议练习发音和语调，使语言更流畅。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强表达的连贯性。

4.话题发展 回答没有很好地概括阅读材料中的计划，并且没有明确表达女生的观点及其原因。建议在回答时先简要概括计划，然后明确陈述女生的观点，并解释她提出这个观点的原因。注意在回答中保持思路清晰和组织有序。

5.语言使用

原文：The woman explained how it all pinned in. The woman expresses her opinion about the university's plan.（女士表达了她对大学计划的看法。）

修改原因：原句子结构不清晰，没有明确表达女士的观点。修改后的句子更符合题目要求，表达了女士对大学计划的看法。

修订后的回答（满分30分）：

The university's plan is to hold two separate graduation ceremonies due to the increased number of students and limited space in the hall. The woman, however, disagrees with this plan. She believes that the length of the ceremony could be shortened by reducing the number of speeches given by various individuals, such as students, professors, administrators, and the university president. This would make the ceremony more manageable without splitting it into two separate events. Additionally, she thinks that the issue of limited space could be resolved by reducing the number of guests each graduating student is allowed to invite. Currently, students can invite up to ten people, which is more than most other schools. By limiting the number of guests to six per student, there would still be enough space in the hall for everyone to attend a single ceremony.

6.思维导图

- University's plan
  - Two separate graduation ceremonies
  - Reasons: increased number of students, limited space in the hall

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons:
    - Reduce number of speeches to shorten the ceremony
    - Limit number of guests per student to solve space issue

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，只有偶尔的停顿。但在某些地方，发言者需要注意正确的发音和适当的停顿。建议多练习发音和朗读，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者对于文章中的观点进行了总结，并提出了女士的观点及其理由。然而，在组织结构上还有待加强。建议在回答问题时，先简要概括阅读材料中的计划，然后明确指出女士的观点，并逐一解释她给出的理由。这样可以使回答更加条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading passage, it is proposed that the university decided to hold two ceremonies for graduate students. First of all, the university thinks that there's too many students increases and is hard to send diploma. And also, the university thinks that the hall is too small to hold too many students. The author believes that it isn't a good idea. First of all, she thinks that there's an easy way to reduce the hall is to cut off the numbers of speeches because it is so boring and too many people will do that. And also, she thinks that there's an easy way to reduce the number in the hall is to reduce the number which the students will be invited. If the students invite only six people, it can hold by the hall in the school. So that's why she disagrees.

Corrected Answer: In the reading passage, it is proposed that the university plans (改为现在进行时，使句子更自然) to hold two ceremonies for graduate graduating (改为“毕业的”，更符合语境) students. First of all, The university thinks believes (用believes替换thinks，使句子更正式) that there's too many students increases and is hard to send diploma. the increasing number of students makes it difficult to award diplomas individually. (重新组织句子，使其更清晰) And also, The university thinks believes (同上) that the hall is too small to hold too many students accommodate all the students and their guests. (表达更清晰，包括学生和他们的嘉宾) The woman disagrees with this plan. She thinks argues (用argues替换thinks，使句子更正式) that an easy way to reduce the hall's capacity is to cut off the number of speeches because they are boring and too many people give them. And also, She also believes that another way to reduce the number in the hall is to limit the number of guests each student can invite. If students invite only six people, the hall can accommodate everyone. That's why she disagrees.

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it is proposed that the university plans to hold two ceremonies for graduating students due to the increasing number of students and limited hall capacity. The woman disagrees with this plan. She argues that an easy way to address these issues is by reducing the number of speeches, as they are often boring and given by too many people. Additionally, she believes that limiting the number of guests each student can invite would help alleviate the space problem. If students were allowed to invite only six people, the hall could accommodate everyone. By implementing these changes, the university could maintain a single graduation ceremony while addressing the concerns raised in the reading passage.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - University's Plan
    - Two ceremonies
    - Reasons
      - Increasing number of students
      - Limited hall capacity

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Solutions
    - Reduce number of speeches
      - Boring, too many people give them
    - Limit number of guests per student
      - Invite only six people
      - Hall can accommodate everyone

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 话题发展（Topic Development）：4

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容组织得很好，观点之间的联系清晰，并且提供了足够的支持和例子。在话题发展方面，你已经做得很好。继续保持这种水平，并在其他方面进行改进，你的总分将会有所提高。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies. This is because the number of students has increased in recent years. So a single ceremony is uncomfortable. According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies due to the increased number of students in recent years, making a single ceremony uncomfortable.（将两个句子合并，使表达更自然。）

Secondly, the hall is too small to accommodate these students and their family members. Furthermore, the hall is insufficient to accommodate both students and their family members.（使用“Furthermore”代替“Secondly”，使过渡更顺畅；使用“insufficient”代替“too small”，提高词汇水平。）

The woman doesn't agree with this plan. Instead, she thinks that it's unnecessary because there are two simpler solutions to these issues. The woman disagrees with this plan, considering it unnecessary as there are two simpler solutions to these issues.（将两个句子合并，使表达更自然。）

First of all, the university should shorten the ceremony by cutting out some boring speeches. Firstly, the university could shorten the ceremony by eliminating some uninteresting speeches.（使用“Firstly”代替“First of all”，使过渡更顺畅；使用“eliminating”代替“cutting out”，提高词汇水平；使用“uninteresting”代替“boring”，提高词汇水平。）

Secondly, the number of guests students can invite should be limited. Secondly, the number of guests that students can invite should be restricted.（使用“restricted”代替“limited”，提高词汇水平。）

There are too many people that students can invite currently. Currently, students can invite an excessive number of people.（使用“excessive”代替“too many”，提高词汇水平。）

While at most other schools, students can only invite four or five people. In contrast, at most other schools, students are allowed to invite only four or five people.（使用“In contrast”代替“While”，使过渡更顺畅；添加“are allowed to”，使表达更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies due to the increased number of students in recent years, making a single ceremony uncomfortable. Furthermore, the hall is insufficient to accommodate both students and their family members. The woman disagrees with this plan, considering it unnecessary as there are two simpler solutions to these issues. Firstly, the university could shorten the ceremony by eliminating some uninteresting speeches. Secondly, the number of guests that students can invite should be restricted. Currently, students can invite an excessive number of people. In contrast, at most other schools, students are allowed to invite only four or five people.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Two graduation ceremonies
  • Reasons
    • Increased number of students
    • Insufficient hall space

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Simpler solutions
    • Shorten the ceremony
      • Eliminate uninteresting speeches
    • Restrict the number of guests

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的语言表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在表述观点和论据时可以更加详细和具体。建议在练习时关注提供更多有力的支持或例子来强化观点，并确保各个观点之间有明确的联系。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the university wants to split the graduation, this is because the number of students has increased and the ceremony becomes too long. The university plans to divide the graduation ceremony into two parts due to the increased number of students, which has resulted in a lengthy ceremony.（将原句中的表述进行了优化，使其更加自然和流畅。）

Original: And also, the hall is too small to accommodate the audience, Additionally, the hall cannot accommodate the growing audience,（使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

Original: but the woman doesn't like this idea because she thinks school can simply reduce the number of speeches. but the woman disagrees with this plan as she believes that reducing the number of speeches would be a simpler solution.（改进了句子结构，使其更加清晰。）

Original: You know, they are really boring, so this can stop the problem. As most speeches are uninteresting, this would effectively address the issue.（优化了句子结构和词汇，使表达更加自然。）

Original: And also, students can invite too many people, so they can only invite six people for the ceremony. Furthermore, she suggests limiting each student to inviting only six guests for the ceremony instead of allowing them to invite too many people.（改进了句子结构，使其更加清晰。）

Original: Therefore, the woman doesn't like this idea. Hence, the woman opposes the university's plan.（使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to divide the graduation ceremony into two parts due to the increased number of students, which has resulted in a lengthy ceremony. Additionally, the hall cannot accommodate the growing audience. However, the woman disagrees with this plan as she believes that reducing the number of speeches would be a simpler solution. As most speeches are uninteresting, this would effectively address the issue. Furthermore, she suggests limiting each student to inviting only six guests for the ceremony instead of allowing them to invite too many people. By implementing these changes, the university could maintain a single graduation ceremony while still accommodating all attendees. Hence, the woman opposes the university's plan to split the graduation ceremony into two separate events.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Split graduation ceremony
  • Reasons: increased students, lengthy ceremony, small hall

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Alternative Solutions
    • Reduce number of speeches
    • Limit guests per student

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍微改进。例如，"splay" 应该是 "split"。此外，尝试保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。为了提高发音，请多做练习并注意模仿母语人士的发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在某些方面进行改进。例如，在总结计划时，可以更清楚地说明这是一个新安排，将毕业典礼分为两天进行。此外，在解释女士提出的原因时，可以更详细地描述她的观点，以便听众更好地理解。为了提高话题发展，请确保充分理解听力材料，并在回答问题时提供详细的解释和例子。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university wants to splay graduation. Well, the university wants to split the graduation ceremony.（将 "splay" 改为 "split"，因为 "split" 是正确的词汇。）
That's because the number of students increased, This is because the number of students has increased,（将 "That's because" 改为 "This is because"，使句子更自然。）
and so the ceremony becomes uncomfortably long. and as a result, the ceremony has become uncomfortably long.（将 "becomes" 改为 "has become"，以保持时态一致。）
And besides, the hall is too small to accommodate the number of friends and family members. Moreover, the hall is too small to accommodate all the friends and family members.（将 "And besides" 改为 "Moreover"，使句子更自然。）
However, the woman doesn't like the idea. However, the woman disagrees with this plan.（将 "doesn't like the idea" 改为 "disagrees with this plan"，使句子更自然。）
First off, she says that it's easy to make it shorter. Firstly, she believes that it would be easy to shorten the ceremony.（将 "First off" 改为 "Firstly"，使句子更自然。）
But just by reducing the speech, Simply by reducing the number of speeches,（将 "reducing the speech" 改为 "reducing the number of speeches"，使句子更准确。）
nowadays the university allows each one to make a speech, currently, the university allows many people to give speeches,（将 "each one" 改为 "many people"，使句子更自然。）
which is unnecessary and boring. which she considers unnecessary and boring.（在句子中添加 "she considers"，以明确是女士的观点。）
And besides, she thinks the main problem is the school allows students to invite too many people. Furthermore, she thinks that the main issue is that the school allows students to invite an excessive number of guests.（将 "And besides" 改为 "Furthermore"，使句子更自然。）
If they just cut the number to six, the problem will be solved. If they simply limit each student to six guests, the issue would be resolved.（将 "cut the number to six" 改为 "limit each student to six guests"，使句子更准确。）
Therefore, the woman doesn't like the idea. Therefore, the woman opposes the proposed plan.（将 "doesn't like the idea" 改为 "opposes the proposed plan"，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140字）：

Well, the university wants to split the graduation ceremony. This is because the number of students has increased, and as a result, the ceremony has become uncomfortably long. Moreover, the hall is too small to accommodate all the friends and family members. However, the woman disagrees with this plan. Firstly, she believes that it would be easy to shorten the ceremony simply by reducing the number of speeches. Currently, the university allows many people to give speeches, which she considers unnecessary and boring. Furthermore, she thinks that the main issue is that the school allows students to invite an excessive number of guests. If they simply limit each student to six guests, the issue would be resolved. Therefore, the woman opposes the proposed plan.

6.思维导图

• University's Plan

  • Split graduation ceremony
  • Reasons
    • Increased number of students
    • Uncomfortably long ceremony
    • Small hall for friends and family

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Reasons
    • Shorten the ceremony by reducing speeches
      • Unnecessary and boring speeches
    • Limit the number of guests per student
      • Excessive number of guests allowed

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在语速和停顿方面还有待改进。建议在练习时注意保持一致的语速，并适当减少不必要的停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在论述观点和提供支持或例证方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意明确表达观点，并给出更具说服力的论据和例子，以提高话题发展水平。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman raises counter-argument towards the plans presented in the passage. Well, first, she argues that there is no need to cut the long-term spirit, because we can do it more briefly, like we can cut down the speech time. There are so many people to give their speech, like students and teachers. There were too many people, so we can cut down the number to make the events more short. And second, we can reduce the guests each student can invite. I mean like they can invite only 6 members rather than 10 members, which can cut down the people in all.

Corrected Answer: The woman presents a counter-argument against the plans mentioned in the passage. Firstly, she believes there is no need to split the ceremony because it can be shortened by reducing speech time. She points out that numerous individuals give speeches, such as students and teachers. By decreasing the number of speakers, the event could be made shorter. Secondly, she suggests limiting the number of guests each student can invite to six instead of ten, which would reduce overall attendance. (原文中的“long-term spirit”应改为“split the ceremony”，因为这才是文章中提到的计划。此外，还需要调整一些句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman presents a counter-argument against the university's plan to split graduation ceremonies mentioned in the passage. Firstly, she believes there is no need to divide the ceremony into two separate events because it can be shortened by reducing speech time. She points out that numerous individuals give speeches during graduation ceremonies, such as students and teachers. By decreasing the number of speakers and eliminating unnecessary speeches, the event could be made shorter and more efficient. Secondly, she suggests limiting the number of guests each student can invite to six instead of ten, which would reduce overall attendance and alleviate the issue of limited space in the hall. By implementing these changes, the university could maintain a single graduation ceremony while addressing the concerns mentioned in the passage.

6.思维导图

- Counter-argument
  - No need to split the ceremony
    - Reduce speech time
      - Numerous speakers
      - Shorter event
  - Limit guests per student
    - Six instead of ten
    - Reduce overall attendance
    - Alleviate space issue

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音的准确性，尤其是在一些复杂词汇上。此外，尝试在练习中减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以更加明确地表达观点。例如，在描述女士对政策的反对意见时，可以更详细地解释她提出的解决方案。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地指出女士认为这个政策是不必要的原因。建议在练习时注意提高观点的连贯性和组织性，并确保充分支持和举例说明。

5.语言使用

Original: The policy indicates that there will be two graduation ceremonies due to two reasons. The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies for two reasons. (原句表述不够自然，修改后更符合英语表达习惯。)

Original: And the woman in the conversation disagreed with this policy because the first is that she thinks it is unnecessary to split the whole ceremony into two because we can reduce the number of speeches because some of them are boring and cut them helps to reduce the whole time. The woman disagrees with this plan, arguing that splitting the ceremony is unnecessary since reducing the number of speeches, especially those that are boring, would help shorten the duration. (原句过长，表述不够清晰。修改后更简洁明了。)

Original: And the second is that it's not about the size of the hall, it's about we should reduce the number of guests that each student is allowed to invite, like we can cut the number from 10 to 4. Furthermore, she believes that instead of focusing on the hall's size, they should limit the number of guests each student can invite, such as reducing it from 10 to 4. (原句表述不够流畅，修改后更自然。)

Revised answer (140 words):

The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies for two reasons. The first is that the number of students increases and diplomas are awarded individually so that the whole ceremony takes a long time to complete. The second reason is that holding the ceremony in a small hall cannot accommodate all the students. The woman disagrees with this plan, arguing that splitting the ceremony is unnecessary since reducing the number of speeches, especially those that are boring, would help shorten the duration. Furthermore, she believes that instead of focusing on the hall's size, they should limit the number of guests each student can invite, such as reducing it from 10 to 4.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Two graduation ceremonies
    - Reason 1: Increased number of students
    - Reason 2: Small hall size

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
    - Suggestion 1: Reduce number of speeches
      - Shorten duration
    - Suggestion 2: Limit number of guests
      - Reduce from 10 to 4

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答内容较为清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议在练习中注意语速的一致性，避免不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但可以在解释女士观点的原因时给出更多具体的例子和支持。在练习中，请注意在回答过程中保持观点之间的清晰联系，并提供足够的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the university's plan, the university will hold two graduate ceremonies. According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies.（将句子结构简化，使其更自然。）

This is because the number of students has increased in recent years. This change is due to the increase in the number of students in recent years.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。）

So this makes a single ceremony uncomfortable. As a result, a single ceremony becomes impractical.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。）

But the woman doesn't agree with this trend. However, the woman disagrees with this approach.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。）

She thinks that it's unnecessary because there are two easier ways to solve these problems. She believes it's unnecessary as there are simpler solutions to these issues.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the university's plan, there will be two graduation ceremonies. This change is due to the increase in the number of students in recent years. As a result, a single ceremony becomes impractical. Additionally, the hall is too small to accommodate an increasing number of students and their family members. However, the woman disagrees with this approach. She believes it's unnecessary as there are simpler solutions to these issues. Firstly, the university can make the ceremony shorter by reducing the number of speeches, which would save time and maintain the interest of the audience. Secondly, she suggests limiting the number of guests each graduate can invite, which would help to manage the space issue in the hall. By implementing these changes, the university could maintain a single graduation ceremony while addressing the concerns raised.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Two graduation ceremonies
  - Reasons
    - Increase in students
    - Limited hall capacity

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the approach
  - Simpler solutions
    - Reduce number of speeches
    - Limit guests per graduate

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

26. 3.表达

总体来说，表达清晰流畅，语速适中。但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿，需要注意。建议在练习时注意语音的连贯性和自然停顿的使用，以便更好地提高发音准确度。

4.话题发展 回答内容完整，结构清晰，观点之间的联系明确。针对问题进行了充分的阐述和论证。在话题发展方面表现较好，无需特别改进。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to split the graduation because of the growing number of students. The ceremony lasts too long and the hall is too small to accommodate so many guests of the students. However, the woman in the conversation doesn't agree with this. First, she says the university can reduce the number of the speeches and also they can reduce the guests from 10 people to 6 people so that the ceremony can stay the way it is.

Corrected Answer: The university plans to split divide (“divide” 更自然地表达分割的意思) the graduation because of the growing number of students. The ceremony lasts too long and the hall is too small to accommodate so many guests of the large number of guests for (这样的表达更自然流畅) the students. However, the woman in the conversation doesn't agree with this. First, she says the university can reduce the number of the speeches speeches given (这样的表达更清晰明确) and also they can reduce the guests from 10 people to 6 people so that the ceremony can stay the way it is as it was before (这样的表达更自然地描述保持原状的意思).

Revised Answer (140 words): The university intends to divide its graduation ceremony due to the increasing number of students. The ceremony has become too lengthy, and the hall is insufficient in size to accommodate the large number of guests for each student. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this plan. She proposes two alternative solutions to address the issues. Firstly, she suggests that the university could reduce the number of speeches given during the ceremony, as there are currently too many speakers, including students, professors, administrators, and the university president. Secondly, she recommends limiting the number of guests each graduating student can invite from ten to six people. By implementing these changes, she believes that the ceremony can maintain its original format without having to be split into two separate events.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Divide graduation ceremony
  - Reasons
    - Growing number of students
    - Long ceremony duration
    - Insufficient hall size

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Alternative Solutions
    - Reduce number of speeches given
    - Limit guests per graduating student (from 10 to 6)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速适中，仅有少量停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。同时，注意准确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The speaker provided a coherent and well-organized response, summarizing the university's plan and stating the woman's opinion along with her reasons. However, to improve topic development, the speaker could have elaborated more on the woman's suggestions for reducing the number of speeches and limiting the number of guests each student can invite. Providing more specific examples or details from the conversation would have strengthened the response further.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one due to two reasons. The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one for two reasons. (将 "school" 改为 "university" 使其与原文一致) Firstly, it's because the number of students is increasing in recent years, so if the students need to send diplomas to each individual, it will take a long time. First, the increasing number of students in recent years has led to a longer time required for awarding diplomas individually. (修改句子结构，使其更清晰简洁) Also, the school hall is too small to accommodate so many people at one time. Additionally, the hall is too small to accommodate the growing audience of friends and family members. (修改句子结构，使其更清晰简洁，并与原文保持一致) However, the woman in the conversation disagreed with the idea because first, she thinks that there are easy ways to make the graduation ceremony shorter by cutting up the many boring speeches made by students and professors. Also, due to the accommodation, the school can allow the students to invite smaller sizes of people.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to hold two graduation ceremonies instead of one for two reasons. First, the increasing number of students in recent years has led to a longer time required for awarding diplomas individually. Additionally, the hall is too small to accommodate the growing audience of friends and family members. However, the woman in the conversation disagreed with this plan. She believes that there are simpler ways to shorten the graduation ceremony, such as reducing the number of lengthy and uninteresting speeches given by students, professors, and administrators. Furthermore, she suggests that the university could address the space issue by limiting the number of guests each graduating student is allowed to invite, thus reducing the overall audience size and maintaining a single ceremony.

6.思维导图

- University's Plan
  - Two graduation ceremonies
  - Reasons
    - Increasing number of students
    - Small hall for audience

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Suggestions
    - Reduce number of speeches
    - Limit guests per student

7.关键词