TOEFL TPO 10 Speaking Task 2 Sample: Briefly summarize the proposal in the student's letter. Then state the woman's opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is mostly clear and fluid, but there are occasional pauses that disrupt the flow of speech. To improve, the speaker should practice maintaining a consistent pace and minimizing pauses. Additionally, the speaker should work on accurate pronunciation to avoid spelling errors in their response.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing all aspects of the task. The speaker should focus on providing more specific details from both the reading and listening passages to strengthen their argument and better support their points.

5.Language Use

Original: The student in the letter proposes that lobby is a good location to display artworks and paintings of students. The student in the letter suggests that the lobby would be an ideal location for displaying student artworks and paintings. (Changed "proposes" to "suggests" for a more natural tone, and rephrased the sentence for better flow)

For C, she thinks that there are many people, many students passing through this student center, and these paintings would be viewed by many of the students. She believes that since numerous people pass through the student center, the paintings would be seen by a large audience. (Removed unnecessary repetition and simplified the sentence for clarity)

Also, the front of the lobby is made of glass windows, and the natural light made it perfect for displaying those artworks. Additionally, the lobby's glass windows allow natural light to enter, which seems ideal for showcasing artwork. (Rephrased for better flow and clarity)

The woman totally disagrees with this proposal. However, the woman strongly disagrees with this suggestion. (Changed "totally" to "strongly" for a more formal tone)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student in the letter suggests that the lobby would be an ideal location for displaying student artworks and paintings. She believes that since numerous people pass through the student center, the paintings would be seen by a large audience. Additionally, the lobby's glass windows allow natural light to enter, which seems ideal for showcasing artwork. However, the woman strongly disagrees with this suggestion. She thinks that the lobby is too crowded for appreciating artwork, as people walking around would distract viewers. Furthermore, she believes that natural light is not suitable for displaying art, as it can be too bright on sunny days and too dark on cloudy days. Instead, she suggests using controlled, consistent lighting like that found in art museums to properly display and appreciate the artwork.

6.Mind Map

- Lobby as art display location
  - Large audience
  - Natural light from glass windows

- Woman's disagreement
  - Crowded space
    - Distractions from people walking around
  - Natural light issues
    - Too bright on sunny days
    - Too dark on cloudy days
  - Suggestion for controlled lighting
    - Consistent lighting like in art museums

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰流畅，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高发音准确性，请注意一些拼写错误，如“movement”应为“woman”，“embedded”应为“exposed”。此外，适当地使用标点符号以减少不必要的停顿。练习更自然地连接句子和短语，以便在讲话中保持一致的节奏。

4.话题发展 发言者成功地总结了学生信中的建议，并说明了女士对该建议的看法及她给出的理由。然而，回答可以更加连贯和组织良好。首先，在引入女士的观点时，可以使用更明确的过渡词汇，如“On the other hand”或“However”。其次，在解释女士给出的理由时，请确保使用恰当的连接词和短语来支持你的观点。例如，在描述光线问题时，可以使用“due to”或“because of”来解释为什么自然光不适合展示艺术品。最后，尝试提供更多关于女士观点的详细信息和例子，以使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The student's letter recommends to place artworks from students in the lobby at the entrance to the student center, which from its perspective can not only let numerous people see those artworks, because numerous people pass the student center, but also offers a better vision of people because it's filled with natural light. The student's letter suggests displaying student artworks in the lobby at the entrance to the student center, arguing that it would allow many people to view the art due to high foot traffic and provide better visibility with natural light. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅，并使用了更高级的词汇。)

Original: However, this movement contradicts with this opinion because actually the student entrance are always crowded with people, so it will be numerous people blocking your view or distract you rather than contribute to more people's appreciated work. However, the woman disagrees with this idea, stating that the crowded student entrance would lead to people blocking views and causing distractions instead of allowing more appreciation for the art. (修改了句子结构，纠正了语法错误，并使用了更自然的表达方式。)

Original: Moreover, it will be too dark or have too much light because when the artwork is embedded in the natural sunshine. Moreover, she argues that natural sunlight would cause inconsistent lighting conditions, making it either too dark or too bright for proper art display. (调整了句子结构，使其更自然流畅，并使用了更高级的词汇。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The student's letter suggests displaying student artworks in the lobby at the entrance to the student center, arguing that it would allow many people to view the art due to high foot traffic and provide better visibility with natural light. However, the woman disagrees with this idea, stating that the crowded student entrance would lead to people blocking views and causing distractions instead of allowing more appreciation for the art. Moreover, she argues that natural sunlight would cause inconsistent lighting conditions, making it either too dark or too bright for proper art display. To achieve a score of 30, this revised answer uses advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, a natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and strong conclusions while maintaining a natural-sounding language style.

6.思维导图

- Student's letter
  - Display student artworks
  - Lobby at entrance to student center
  - High foot traffic
  - Natural light for visibility

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with proposal
    - Crowded student entrance
      - Blocking views
      - Causing distractions
    - Inconsistent lighting conditions
      - Too dark or too bright
      - Natural sunlight not ideal for art display

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in pronunciation and reducing pauses. To enhance delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more naturally and focus on accurate pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen their argument. Additionally, the speaker should work on smoothly transitioning between ideas to create a more cohesive response.

5.Language Use

In the letter, the student proposes suggests ("suggests" is a more natural choice) to put the artwork in the lobby at the entrance to the student center because the center has many students and is full of natural light. But the girl doesn't agree with it. She insists argues ("argues" is a more appropriate word for expressing disagreement) that the number of students coming and going through the student center is huge and it could be destructive distracting ("distracting" better describes the issue with viewing artwork in a crowded space) for people to view the artwork. Since the center is always crowded with people, it's hard for people to appreciate it. Also, the weather is a problem. If it's a sunny day, it will be too bright. If it's a cloudy day, it will be too dark. Instead, the artworks need a constant light like the electric lights in an art museum because an electric light is always carefully controlled and stays at the same level. And these are the two reasons the girl suggested provided ("provided" is more accurate for giving reasons) and disagreed with the student proposal.

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the letter, the student suggests placing artwork in the lobby at the entrance to the student center due to its high foot traffic and abundance of natural light. However, the girl disagrees with this idea. She argues that the large number of students passing through the student center would create a distracting environment, making it difficult for people to appreciate the artwork. Additionally, she points out that the natural light from the windows is not ideal for displaying art, as it can be too bright on sunny days and too dark on cloudy days. Instead, she believes that artworks require consistent lighting, such as electric lights found in art museums, which are carefully controlled and maintained at a constant level. These are the two reasons she provided to disagree with the student's proposal.

6.Mind Map

- Student's Proposal
  - Artwork in student center lobby
  - High foot traffic
  - Natural light

- Girl's Disagreement
  - Distracting environment
    - Crowded space
    - Difficulty appreciating art
  - Inconsistent lighting
    - Too bright or dark depending on weather
    - Need for controlled, consistent light (e.g., electric lights in art museums)

7.Key Words