TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the student’s proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但有时语速不稳定，偶尔出现停顿。为了提高发音，请多加练习，尤其是在句子之间保持连贯性。此外，注意正确的语调和重音，以便更自然地表达。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在总结提案时略显简短。为了更好地发展话题，请尝试提供更详细的信息和例子来支持你的观点。同时，在组织回答时，请确保各个观点之间有明确的联系，并适当使用过渡词汇。

5.语言使用

原文：The school plans to make construction projects on campus, like fix sidewalks and parking lots on summer. The school plans to conduct construction projects on campus, such as fixing sidewalks and parking lots during the summer.（将“make”改为“conduct”，将“on summer”改为“during the summer”，使句子更自然。）

However, the woman disagreed with the time period. However, the woman agrees with the proposal.（原文表述错误，女士实际上同意提案。）

Firstly, she assumes that it is inappropriate to make that construction when they are at school, because a lot of people drive every day. Firstly, she believes that it is inconvenient to have construction during the school year since many people drive daily.（将“assumes”改为“believes”，将“inappropriate”改为“inconvenient”，使句子更自然。）

So the constructions will take too many spaces for them to park their cars, which consequently make them late. Thus, the construction will occupy parking spaces, causing delays for students and professors.（简化句子，使其更清晰。）

Secondly, because of the weather, it usually takes longer to finish. Secondly, due to weather conditions, construction projects usually take longer to complete.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to conduct construction projects on campus, such as fixing sidewalks and parking lots during the summer. However, the woman agrees with the proposal. Firstly, she believes that it is inconvenient to have construction during the school year since many people drive daily. Thus, the construction will occupy parking spaces, causing delays for students and professors. She recalls last year's parking lot repairs that led to insufficient parking spots and people arriving late to classes. Secondly, due to weather conditions, construction projects usually take longer to complete. The woman mentions the snowstorms last year that caused interruptions in the parking lot repairs, prolonging the project's completion time. Overall, she supports scheduling construction projects during the summer break to minimize disruptions and ensure timely completion.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Construction projects during summer

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with proposal
  - Reasons
    - Inconvenience during school year
      - Parking issues
      - Delays for students and professors
    - Weather conditions
      - Longer completion time
      - Example: snowstorms last year

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，需要注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在表达观点时可以更加明确和详细。例如，在提到建议的理由时，可以更具体地说明夏天进行校园建设的优势。此外，在总结时可以更清晰地概括女生对提议的看法及其理由。通过进一步练习和完善表达，可以使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the students' proposal is about to reschedule the campus reconstruction time to the summer's three-day holiday. The student's proposal suggests rescheduling campus construction projects to take place during the three-month summer break. (建议将校园建设项目重新安排在为期三个月的暑假期间。)

Original: And the female students stand with the proposal's point. The female student agrees with the proposal. (女生同意这个提议。)

Original: For the first part, the proposal believes that it's very inconvenient for the students and professors to move one place to another, The first reason mentioned in the proposal is that construction projects create inconveniences for students and professors when moving from one place to another, (提案中提到的第一个原因是，建设项目给学生和教授在从一个地方到另一个地方移动时带来了不便，)

Original: and the female students are driving to school very – always drive their car to school, and the female student, who drives her car to school, (女生开车上学，)

Original: and it's always caught that she was late to school because she can't find the suitable ways to park her car. often experienced delays due to difficulty finding parking spaces. (经常因为找不到停车位而耽误时间。)

Original: And even the professor always got late for class. Even professors were sometimes late for class. (甚至教授有时也会迟到。)

Original: For the second reason, if they caught the bad weather, they should stop the working. The second reason is that construction projects may face delays due to bad weather conditions, (第二个原因是，建设项目可能会因恶劣的天气条件而面临延误，)

Original: And the female students also agree with her point. which the female student also agrees with. (女生也同意这一点。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student's proposal suggests rescheduling campus construction projects to take place during the three-month summer break. The female student agrees with the proposal. The first reason mentioned in the proposal is that construction projects create inconveniences for students and professors when moving from one place to another, and the female student, who drives her car to school, often experienced delays due to difficulty finding parking spaces. Even professors were sometimes late for class. The second reason is that construction projects may face delays due to bad weather conditions, which the female student also agrees with. By scheduling construction during the summer break, these inconveniences and delays could be minimized, resulting in a more efficient and less disruptive campus environment for both students and faculty members.

6.思维导图

- Student's Proposal
  - Rescheduling campus construction
  - Three-month summer break

- Female Student's Opinion
  - Agrees with the proposal
  - Reasons
    - Inconveniences for students and professors
      - Difficulty finding parking spaces
      - Professors late for class
    - Delays due to bad weather conditions

- Suggested Outcome
  - Minimized inconveniences and delays
  - Efficient and less disruptive campus environment

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 整体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音的连贯性和减少不必要的停顿。此外，尽量纠正发音错误以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于提案的总结和女生观点的陈述较为清晰，但在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡词汇，使回答更加连贯和有条理。同时，在给出原因时尽量提供更多具体的例子和支持论据，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: There is a student proposal that says the things about construction should mostly be made in the summer holidays, and the first reason is it is disruptive. It disrupts because it blocks the streets and the lots, which in the second opinion is that because summer holidays' weathers are mostly more convenient, better, so it's easier to finish, which the girl mostly agrees. It says first because it's disruptive, when it's replacing the lot, it mostly shuts down four lots, which makes her driving and placing her car more difficult and makes most of her classmates late for class, and even the professors, and the second one is that it took a longer time because the weather is bad and many snowstorms.

Corrected Answer: The student proposal suggests that campus construction should primarily occur during summer vacation due to its disruptive nature. The disruption occurs as construction blocks streets and parking lots. The second reason is that summer weather tends to be more favorable for construction projects, making them easier to complete. The woman agrees with these points. She explains that when parking lot repairs were underway, four lots were closed, causing difficulties in parking for her and others. This led to students and professors arriving late to class. Additionally, she mentions that bad weather conditions like snowstorms prolong construction time. (修改了原文中的语言表达，使其更加自然流畅。同时，对句子结构进行了调整，使其更加清晰易懂。)

Revised 140-word Answer: The student proposal suggests that campus construction should primarily occur during summer vacation due to its disruptive nature. The disruption occurs as construction blocks streets and parking lots. The second reason is that summer weather tends to be more favorable for construction projects, making them easier to complete. The woman agrees with these points. She explains that when parking lot repairs were underway, four lots were closed, causing difficulties in parking for her and others. This led to students and professors arriving late to class. Additionally, she mentions that bad weather conditions like snowstorms prolong construction time. By scheduling construction during summer vacation, the university can minimize disruptions and take advantage of better weather conditions, ultimately leading to a more efficient completion of projects and a better campus experience for everyone.

6.思维导图

- Student Proposal
  - Campus construction during summer vacation
    - Disruptive nature
      - Blocking streets and parking lots
    - Favorable summer weather
      - Easier project completion

- Woman's Opinion
  - Agrees with proposal
    - Parking lot repairs example
      - Closed lots causing difficulties in parking
      - Late arrivals to class (students and professors)
    - Bad weather conditions (snowstorms)
      - Prolonged construction time

7.关键词