TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 24

3.表达 整体而言，你的发言表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高发言的流畅度，请注意在句子之间保持连贯，并尽量减少不自然的停顿。此外，在发音方面，需要注意一些单词的准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 你的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，能够明确地表达出男生对提议的看法及其原因。但在描述提议时，建议将“students proposed the university”修改为“Joanne Grant proposed to the university”，以更准确地反映阅读材料中的信息。此外，在解释男生同意提议的原因时，可以尝试使用更多连接词（如“因此”、“然后”等），以使回答更加流畅和有条理。

5.语言使用

原文：In the lecture, the students proposed the university to create a bicycle borrowing program. In the reading passage, Joanne Grant proposes that the university create a bicycle-borrowing program. (将“students proposed the university”修改为“Joanne Grant proposes that the university”，以更准确地反映阅读材料中的信息。) Firstly, it could substitute driving, and secondly, it could also encourage students to get more exercise. First, it would reduce car traffic on campus, and second, it would promote physical activity among students. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。) And the students totally agree with the point for following reasons. Firstly, it's actually a big campus, First, since the campus is quite large, (使用更自然的表达方式。) so many people try to drive to the class by the car, and it will always make the road crowded and stressful. However, there is a better option to solve the problem. They could just ride a bicycle to the class. And secondly, students are always busy with their education and part-time job, so as a consequence, they have little time to take an exercise. So as a consequence, they could add an exercise during the commute by riding the bicycle.

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, Joanne Grant proposes that the university create a bicycle-borrowing program. First, it would reduce car traffic on campus, and second, it would promote physical activity among students. The man in the conversation agrees with this proposal for the following reasons. First, since the campus is quite large, many people drive to class, causing traffic congestion and stress. By using bicycles instead of cars, students can alleviate this issue. Second, students often have busy schedules due to their academic commitments and part-time jobs, leaving them with limited time for exercise. By incorporating cycling into their daily commute, they can effortlessly integrate physical activity into their routine, benefiting their overall health.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Joanne Grant's proposal
    - Bicycle-borrowing program
      - Reduce car traffic
      - Promote physical activity

- Conversation
  - Man's opinion
    - Agrees with the proposal
      - Reason 1: Large campus
        - Traffic congestion and stress
        - Solution: Use bicycles instead of cars
      - Reason 2: Busy schedules
        - Limited time for exercise
        - Solution: Incorporate cycling into daily commute

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 4

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 在交付方面，你的回答大部分清晰流畅，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，我建议你多练习口语，尝试在说话时保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。此外，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，你的回答非常出色。你提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回应，并在回答中明确地阐述了男生对提议的看法及其理由。为了进一步提高这方面的表现，可以尝试在回答中加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：In the lecture, the student proposes that the list for each course should be available at the time before registration, because it will help students to find less expensive books and allow them to start work on reading early. In the lecture, Alexandra proposes that the textbook list for each course should be made available before registration, as it would help students find more affordable books and enable them to begin their readings earlier.（在讲座中，学生建议在注册之前应提供每门课程的教材清单，因为这将帮助学生找到更便宜的书籍并允许他们提前开始阅读。-> 在讲座中，Alexandra建议在注册之前应提供每门课程的教材清单，因为这将帮助学生找到更实惠的书籍并使他们能够提前开始阅读。）（将"student"改为"Alexandra"以明确指代，将"less expensive books"改为"more affordable books"以更自然地表达价格优势，将"allow them to start work on reading early"改为"enable them to begin their readings earlier"以更自然地表达提前开始阅读的意义。）

And the man agrees with that idea. The man concurs with this proposal.（男子同意这个想法。-> 男子赞同这个提议。）（将"agrees with that idea"改为"concurs with this proposal"以更自然地表达同意的意义。）

Because the university bookstore usually sells new expensive books and only a few used books are on sale, which is cheap but sold out quickly. He explains that university bookstores typically sell expensive new books and have limited used books available, which are more affordable but sell out rapidly.（因为大学书店通常出售新的昂贵书籍，而只有少量二手书在售，价格便宜但很快就售罄了。-> 他解释说，大学书店通常出售昂贵的新书，并且可用的二手书数量有限，这些二手书价格更实惠但销售迅速。）（将原句子结构进行调整，使其更自然地表达男子对大学书店情况的看法。）

In addition, if the list is available, students can find books online and save their money. Furthermore, if the list were accessible, students could search for books online and potentially save money.（此外，如果清单可用，学生可以在线查找书籍并节省资金。-> 此外，如果清单可获取，学生可以在线搜索书籍并可能节省资金。）（将"if the list is available"改为"if the list were accessible"以更自然地表达条件，将"find books online and save their money"改为"search for books online and potentially save money"以更自然地表达在线购书和节省资金的可能性。）

What's more, the things will be busy and hard to keep up before the semester, but it will be an opportunity for students to get things ready if they have the list. Moreover, while the start of the semester can be hectic and challenging to keep up with, having access to the list would provide students an opportunity to prepare beforehand.（而且，在学期开始之前，事情会很忙碌，很难跟上进度，但如果有清单，学生就有机会提前做好准备。-> 此外，虽然学期开始可能会很

6.思维导图

- Alexandra's Proposal
  - Textbook list available before registration
  - Benefits
    - Affordable books
    - Early reading start

- Man's Opinion
  - Agrees with proposal
  - Reasons
    - University bookstore issues
      - Expensive new books
      - Limited used books
    - Online book search and potential savings
    - Opportunity to prepare before semester starts

7.关键词