TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答相对清晰，流畅度尚可，但偶尔有停顿。为了提高发音准确性，请注意纠正发音错误。此外，请注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言表达的连贯性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以尝试更清晰地阐述观点，并在解释原因时提供更多详细信息。为了提高话题发展水平，请注意在回答中明确表达观点，并确保在解释原因时提供充分的支持或例子。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading, a student proposes that the university should let students borrow cameras from the course. In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. (原文中提到的是让所有学生从艺术系借相机，而不仅仅是从课程中借相机。) In this way, students can advance their photograph skills, By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, (使用“enhance”更自然，同时注意将“photograph”改为“photography”。) and if the learning time is shortened, many students can access the cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. Firstly, most of the cameras are technologically sophisticated, so it is not easy for all students to use it without receiving any training before. And secondly, the students who take part in the photograph class have to take a lot of time to finish the assignment, and it's almost impossible for them to finish the assignment in such a shortened time. They have to go off-campus and shoot at different locations, which is not convenient to use the cameras.

Revised Answer (140 words): In the reading passage, a student proposes that the university should allow all students to borrow cameras from the art department. By doing so, students can enhance their photography skills, and if the loan time is reduced, more students could have access to these cameras. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with this proposal for two main reasons. First, most of these cameras are technologically advanced, making it difficult for students without prior training to use them effectively. Second, photography students need a significant amount of time to complete their assignments, and it would be nearly impossible for them to finish within a shortened time frame. These assignments often require off-campus shooting at various locations, making the proposed camera usage inconvenient.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Proposal: Allow all students to borrow cameras
  • Benefits: Enhance photography skills, more students access cameras

• Conversation

  • Man's disagreement
    • Reason 1: Technologically advanced cameras, difficult without training
    • Reason 2: Photography students need more time for assignments, shortened time frame not feasible

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

由于回答中没有任何内容，无法评估发音、语速和停顿等方面的问题。建议重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。

4.话题发展 回答没有提供关于提案的总结，也没有说明男子对提案的看法以及他给出的理由。请重新组织回答，确保包含所有要求的信息。

5.语言使用

原回答：🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨 无回答（原回答没有提供任何内容，因此无法评估语言使用方面的问题。请重新录制回答，并确保提供完整的信息。）

修订后的回答（满分30分）：

In the proposal, Mary suggests that all university students should be allowed to borrow the high-quality professional cameras owned by the art department, instead of just those enrolled in photography courses. She believes that this would give more students the opportunity to advance their photography skills. To accommodate this change, she proposes shortening the loan time from a full day to a couple of hours.

However, the man disagrees with Mary's proposal for two main reasons. First, he believes that most people would not benefit much from using these sophisticated cameras without extensive training, as they have many settings and adjustments. Second, he argues that the assignments for photography students are time-consuming and often require going off-campus to shoot in various locations. If everyone had access to the cameras as Mary suggests, it would be nearly impossible for photography students to complete their assignments within the shortened loan time.

总结：请确保在回答中使用高级词汇、正确的语法、自然的陈述流程、平滑的过渡和有力的结论。同时，请注意使用自然 sounding 的语言风格。

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • All university students borrow cameras
  • Shorten loan time

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Sophisticated technology
    • Extensive training needed
  • Time-consuming assignments
    • Off-campus locations
    • Impossible to complete within shortened loan time

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：0

• 主题发展：0

• 语言使用：0

2.预估分数

• 总分：0

3.表达 由于回答与问题无关，无法评估表达方面的得分。请重新回答问题，并确保内容与问题相关。

4.话题发展 回答没有涉及到问题的主题，因此无法评估话题发展方面的得分。请重新回答问题，并确保内容与问题相关。

5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. (原回答与问题无关，已修改为与问题相关的内容。)

修正后的回答：The proposal suggests paving a sidewalk across the main lawn on campus, but the man disagrees with it. He believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn and can use the existing walkways instead. He also thinks that the dirt path looks more natural and beautiful than a concrete sidewalk would.

根据审阅建议修改后的完整回答（140词）：

The proposal in Patty Greene's letter suggests paving a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to prevent muddy shoes and improve the lawn's appearance. However, the man disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walkways around that area. He thinks students can avoid getting their shoes dirty by taking an extra minute or two to walk around using these existing paths. Second, he finds the dirt path more natural and beautiful compared to a concrete sidewalk. In his opinion, covering the path with concrete would ruin its natural beauty. Therefore, he believes that the lawn should remain as it is without any changes.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Pave sidewalk
  • Main lawn on campus

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees
  • Reasons
    • Existing walkways
    • Natural beauty

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的语言流利度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尤其是在一些单词的发音上。此外，适当减少不必要的停顿，使语言更加流畅。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间也有明确的联系。但在论述原因时可以更具体一些，给出更充分的支持或例子。建议在练习时注意提高论述深度和完整性，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the students think that the university should pave a dirty path with concrete. First of all, they think that by doing so, the students won't get mud in their foot. And besides, they think that it will just make the route more attractive. And the man in the conversation doesn't like his idea. First of all, he thinks that the students don't have the motive to do it. I mean, he said that there's already a road, so they don't have to walk through this dirty path. They just can spend an extra minute to walk through the road. And also, he thinks that this road will just make them look natural. I mean, if you create concrete, the students think that you will just ruin it. And he didn't like concrete.

Corrected Answer: Well, some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete. Firstly, they argue that by doing so, students won't get mud on their shoes. Additionally, they believe that it would make the path more attractive. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this idea. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. (修改了一些词汇和句子结构，使语言更自然、连贯。同时，对一些表达进行了调整，使其更准确。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

Some students believe that the university should pave a dirt path with concrete for two main reasons. Firstly, they argue that paving the path would prevent students from getting mud on their shoes during rainy days. Additionally, they believe that a paved path would be more visually appealing. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. He believes that students don't have a valid reason for taking this shortcut since there's already a paved walkway nearby; they could simply take an extra minute to use it instead of walking through the dirt path. Furthermore, he thinks that leaving the path as is preserves its natural appearance and beauty; paving it with concrete would only ruin its charm. In conclusion, the man opposes the idea of paving the dirt path due to its unnecessary nature and potential negative impact on the environment.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Pave dirt path with concrete
    - Reasons
      - Prevent mud on shoes
      - More visually appealing

- Man's opinion
  - Disagrees with proposal
    - Reasons
      - No valid reason for shortcut
        - Paved walkway nearby
      - Preserve natural appearance and beauty
        - Concrete would ruin charm

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

您的回答与题目无关，因此无法根据TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准对表达进行评价。请重新审阅题目并提供一个与题目相关的回答。

4.话题发展 您的回答与题目无关，因此无法根据TOEFL iBT综合口语评分标准对话题发展进行评价。请重新审阅题目并提供一个与题目相关的回答。

5.语言使用

原回答：MBC 뉴스 이덕영입니다. The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University.（原文与题目无关，已修改为与题目相关的回答。）

修改后的回答： The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University. The man supports the proposal because he believes it would help reduce car traffic on campus and encourage students to get more exercise. He explains that the campus is large, and many students drive to get around, causing traffic congestion. If more students used bicycles, traffic would improve. Additionally, the man mentions that he is busy with classes and part-time jobs, so he doesn't have time for regular exercise. Using the bicycle-borrowing program would allow him to incorporate exercise into his daily routine without setting aside extra time.

根据审阅建议修改后的回答（140字）： The proposal suggests creating a bicycle-borrowing program at State University. The man supports the proposal as it would help reduce car traffic on campus and encourage students to exercise more. He explains that the large campus causes many students to drive, leading to traffic congestion. If more students used bicycles, traffic would improve. Additionally, he mentions his busy schedule with classes and part-time jobs leaves no time for regular exercise. Using the bicycle-borrowing program would allow him to incorporate exercise into his daily routine without setting aside extra time.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Bicycle-borrowing program
  - State University

- Man's opinion
  - Supports proposal
  - Reasons
    - Reduce car traffic
      - Large campus
      - Traffic congestion
    - Encourage exercise
      - Busy schedule
      - Incorporate into daily routine

7.关键词

1.子项得分

Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上说得还算清楚，但有时语速不够稳定，偶尔出现停顿。建议在练习时注意保持稳定的语速和自然的停顿，以提高发音的准确性。

4.话题发展

从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在连接思路和提供足够的支持或例子方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意明确地表达观点，并尝试提供更多相关的细节和例子来支持你的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal in the letter suggests paving a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to provide mud issues and improve the lawn's appearances. The man disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that citizens should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walks around the area, and using them would avoid mud. He considers the shortcut as a sign of laziness. Second, he oversights the concrete path, preferring the natural appearances of the dirt path. He believes the dirt path enhances the campus' natural beauty, and paving it with concrete would ruin its beauty.

Corrected Answer: The proposal in the letter suggests paving constructing a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to provide mud issues address muddy conditions(提供泥泞问题不合适，应改为解决泥泞问题) and improve the lawn's appearances appearance(外观应为单数形式). The man disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. First, he believes that citizens students(这里讨论的是学生，而不是公民) should not be cutting across the lawn as there are already nice walks walkways(应使用更准确的词汇“人行道”) around the area, and using them would avoid mud. He considers the shortcut as a sign of laziness. Second, he oversights overlooks(oversights是疏忽的意思，这里应该用overlooks) the concrete path, preferring the natural appearances appearance(外观应为单数形式) of the dirt path. He believes the dirt path enhances the campus' natural beauty, and paving it with concrete would ruin its beauty.

Revised Answer (140 words): The proposal in the letter suggests constructing a concrete sidewalk across the main lawn on campus to address muddy conditions and improve the lawn's appearance. The man disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. Firstly, he believes that students should not be cutting across the lawn since there are already well-maintained walkways around the area, which would help them avoid mud if used. He perceives taking shortcuts as a sign of laziness. Secondly, he overlooks the concrete path and prefers the natural appearance of the dirt path. In his opinion, the dirt path enhances the campus's natural beauty, and replacing it with a concrete sidewalk would diminish its aesthetic appeal.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Construct concrete sidewalk
  • Address muddy conditions
  • Improve lawn's appearance

• Man's Disagreement

  • Reason 1: Students should use existing walkways
    • Avoid mud
    • Laziness
  • Reason 2: Prefer natural appearance of dirt path
    • Enhances campus beauty
    • Concrete would ruin beauty

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿，可能会影响听众的理解。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，避免不适当的停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得很好，回答内容条理清晰，观点明确。他成功地总结了阅读材料中的建议，并详细解释了男士对此建议的看法及其原因。为了进一步提高话题发展水平，可以尝试在回答中加入更多具体细节或例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In the reading passage, it is argued that a school should run a free bus service from school to the airport. The reading passage proposes that the university should provide a free bus service between the campus and the airport. (原文中的“学校”应该具体为“大学”，同时将句子结构进行了调整，使表达更自然。) In the composition, In the listening, (将“composition”改为“listening”，以准确描述听力材料。) the man likes this idea for two reasons. First off, he argues that doing so makes it less expensive for people to get to the airport from school. This is because there used to be less alternative ways for them to get to the airport, so they have to take taxis, which is extremely costly. Besides, he also mentions that there will be less demand for buses running between teaching buildings during the final exam sessions. Therefore, it is feasible for schools to do so. Based on two reasons mentioned above, the man strongly supports the idea presented in the reading passage.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage proposes that the university should provide a free bus service between the campus and the airport. In the listening, the man supports this idea for two main reasons. Firstly, he believes that offering this service would make transportation more affordable for students traveling to and from the airport, as their only alternative would be taking expensive taxis. Secondly, he mentions that there would be a reduced demand for buses circulating between campus buildings during final exam periods. As a result, reallocating these buses to serve the airport route would be a feasible solution. In conclusion, based on the reasons mentioned above, the man strongly supports the proposal presented in the reading passage.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Proposal: Free bus service between campus and airport

- Listening
  - Man's opinion: Supports the proposal
    - Reason 1: More affordable transportation for students
      - Alternative: Expensive taxis
    - Reason 2: Reduced demand for buses during final exam periods
      - Feasible solution: Reallocate buses to airport route

- Conclusion
  - Man strongly supports the proposal based on reasons mentioned above

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 4

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 26

3.表达 在交付方面，你的回答大部分清晰流畅，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，我建议你多练习口语，尝试在说话时保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。此外，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，你的回答非常出色。你提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回应，并在回答中明确地阐述了男生对提议的看法及其理由。为了进一步提高这方面的表现，可以尝试在回答中加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：In the lecture, the student proposes that the list for each course should be available at the time before registration, because it will help students to find less expensive books and allow them to start work on reading early. In the lecture, Alexandra proposes that the textbook list for each course should be made available before registration, as it would help students find more affordable books and enable them to begin their readings earlier.（在讲座中，学生建议在注册之前应提供每门课程的教材清单，因为这将帮助学生找到更便宜的书籍并允许他们提前开始阅读。-> 在讲座中，Alexandra建议在注册之前应提供每门课程的教材清单，因为这将帮助学生找到更实惠的书籍并使他们能够提前开始阅读。）（将"student"改为"Alexandra"以明确指代，将"less expensive books"改为"more affordable books"以更自然地表达价格优势，将"allow them to start work on reading early"改为"enable them to begin their readings earlier"以更自然地表达提前开始阅读的意义。）

And the man agrees with that idea. The man concurs with this proposal.（男子同意这个想法。-> 男子赞同这个提议。）（将"agrees with that idea"改为"concurs with this proposal"以更自然地表达同意的意义。）

Because the university bookstore usually sells new expensive books and only a few used books are on sale, which is cheap but sold out quickly. He explains that university bookstores typically sell expensive new books and have limited used books available, which are more affordable but sell out rapidly.（因为大学书店通常出售新的昂贵书籍，而只有少量二手书在售，价格便宜但很快就售罄了。-> 他解释说，大学书店通常出售昂贵的新书，并且可用的二手书数量有限，这些二手书价格更实惠但销售迅速。）（将原句子结构进行调整，使其更自然地表达男子对大学书店情况的看法。）

In addition, if the list is available, students can find books online and save their money. Furthermore, if the list were accessible, students could search for books online and potentially save money.（此外，如果清单可用，学生可以在线查找书籍并节省资金。-> 此外，如果清单可获取，学生可以在线搜索书籍并可能节省资金。）（将"if the list is available"改为"if the list were accessible"以更自然地表达条件，将"find books online and save their money"改为"search for books online and potentially save money"以更自然地表达在线购书和节省资金的可能性。）

What's more, the things will be busy and hard to keep up before the semester, but it will be an opportunity for students to get things ready if they have the list. Moreover, while the start of the semester can be hectic and challenging to keep up with, having access to the list would provide students an opportunity to prepare beforehand.（而且，在学期开始之前，事情会很忙碌，很难跟上进度，但如果有清单，学生就有机会提前做好准备。-> 此外，虽然学期开始可能会很

6.思维导图

- Alexandra's Proposal
  - Textbook list available before registration
  - Benefits
    - Affordable books
    - Early reading start

- Man's Opinion
  - Agrees with proposal
  - Reasons
    - University bookstore issues
      - Expensive new books
      - Limited used books
    - Online book search and potential savings
    - Opportunity to prepare before semester starts

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流畅，语速适中，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点符号的使用不当导致了不恰当的停顿。拼写错误是发音不准确的结果。建议说话者注意在发音和停顿方面进行改进，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，说话者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，思路清晰，并给出了足够的支持和例子。但在某些地方，连接词使用得不够恰当，导致了思路的不连贯。建议说话者在组织回答时注意使用合适的连接词，以使回答更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

原文：The student in the letter proposes that the university should set up a small fitness area in the dorm. The letter suggests that the university establish a small fitness area within the dormitory. (将句子结构调整得更自然) And the man in the conversation disagreed with the following statement because he thinks that the room is too remote for the students, and it doesn't fit the busy schedule for the students and they don't have enough time to go there. However, the man in the conversation disagrees, stating that the location is inconvenient for students, and it doesn't accommodate their busy schedules, leaving them with insufficient time to visit. (修改句子结构，使其更连贯；使用更高级的词汇) Besides, he also thinks that it is not the best location for the students because the students often hang out. Additionally, he believes it's not an ideal location since students frequently socialize there. (使用更自然的表达方式) So he suggests that the basement under the dorm is the better location for the students because there are a lot of bikes down there and there is enough room for the students. Therefore, he proposes that a more suitable location would be the dormitory basement, as it has ample space and currently houses numerous bicycles. (调整句子结构，使用更高级的词汇) So he suggests that we just convert the room into the fitness area. He suggests converting the available space into a fitness area. (简化句子，使其更自然)

修订版（140词）：

The letter suggests that the university establish a small fitness area within the dormitory. However, the man in the conversation disagrees, stating that the location is inconvenient for students, and it doesn't accommodate their busy schedules, leaving them with insufficient time to visit. Additionally, he believes it's not an ideal location since students frequently socialize there. Therefore, he proposes that a more suitable location would be the dormitory basement, as it has ample space and currently houses numerous bicycles. He suggests converting the available space into a fitness area.

6.思维导图

- Establish fitness area
  - Dormitory
  - Man's disagreement
    - Inconvenient location
    - Busy schedules
    - Insufficient time
    - Socializing spot
  - Alternative proposal
    - Dormitory basement
      - Ample space
      - Houses bicycles
    - Convert space into fitness area

7.关键词