TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university's plan. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

从发音方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但有时会出现停顿。建议练习更流畅的语言表达，保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时注意准确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答中提到了阅读材料的计划和女生的观点，但在解释原因方面可以更加详细和有组织。建议在解释女生观点时，更清晰地阐述原因，并给出具体例子。此外，在连接不同观点时，使用恰当的过渡词汇，使回答更加连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The reading materials propose that the university will add new requirements for all business students. The reading passage states that the university plans to implement a new requirement for all business students.（将“propose”改为“states”，使语言更自然；将“add”改为“implement”，使表达更准确）

Firstly, there are two-day workshops to develop their websites. First, there will be a two-day workshop for students to learn website development skills.（将“there are”改为“there will be”，使时态更准确；将“to develop their websites”改为“to learn website development skills”，使表达更清晰）

Secondly, the workshops will provide opportunities for all business students. Additionally, these workshops aim to equip business students with valuable skills for their future careers.（将“provide opportunities”改为“equip with valuable skills”，使表达更具体）

But the women thesis agree with it. However, the woman disagrees with this plan.（将“women thesis agree with it”改为“the woman disagrees with this plan”，使表达更清晰）

Their basic knowledge is very easy, but the professional knowledge is very difficult. While acquiring basic knowledge might be easy, mastering professional skills is more challenging.（将原句改写，使表达更自然）

Most of the students didn't have time to do that. Many students may not have enough time to learn everything they need to know.（将“didn't have”改为“may not have”，使语气更委婉；将“to do that”改为“to learn everything they need to know”，使表达更清晰）

Secondly, the work is not very useful because not everyone wants to run their own business. Furthermore, the skill may not be useful for all students since not everyone aspires to start their own business.（将“the work”改为“the skill”，使表达更准确；将“wants to run their own business”改为“aspires to start their own business”，使语言更自然）

The company will hire someone professional to do all the websites. Companies usually hire professionals to handle website development tasks.（将原句改写，使表达更自然）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage states that the university plans to implement a new requirement for all business students. First, there will be a two-day workshop for students to learn website development skills. Additionally, these workshops aim to equip business students with valuable skills for their future careers. However, the woman disagrees with this plan. She believes that learning such skills in a short amount of time is unrealistic. While acquiring basic knowledge might be easy, mastering professional skills is more challenging. Many students may not have enough time to learn everything they need to know. Furthermore, the skill may not be useful for all students since not everyone aspires to start their own business. Companies usually hire professionals to handle website development tasks, making the requirement less relevant for those who do not plan to start their own businesses.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • New requirement
  • Two-day workshop
  • Website development skills

• Woman's Opinion

  • Disagrees with the plan
  • Unrealistic timeframe
  • Not useful for all students

• Reasons

  • Mastering professional skills is challenging
  • Limited time to learn everything
  • Not everyone aspires to start a business
  • Companies hire professionals

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，回答中的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但是，有些地方的停顿不太合适，导致标点符号问题。另外，部分拼写错误可能是由于发音不准确造成的。建议在练习中注意提高发音准确性，并在适当的地方加入停顿。

4.话题发展 From the topic development aspect, the response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details or examples to strengthen the argument. Additionally, try to avoid repetition of certain phrases and focus on using a variety of sentence structures to make the response more engaging and effective.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The plan proposes that the school is going to have a new website requirement for business students. The university plans to implement a new website development requirement for business students. (将句子结构调整为更自然流畅的表达) This way, it will provide the opportunity for the business students to learn skills necessary to develop a company. This will offer business students the chance to acquire essential skills for company development. (使用更高级的词汇和更简洁的表达) Besides, it will also be helpful for students in their future careers. Moreover, it will benefit students in their future professional endeavors. (使用更高级的词汇)

However, the woman disagrees with this specific topic. Nonetheless, the woman opposes this particular plan. (使用更自然的表达方式) She thinks that this new requirement is too difficult and it's not realistic to do things well on a short timescale, She believes that this new requirement is overly challenging and unrealistic within a limited timeframe, (改进句子结构和词汇选择) and needs a lot of time and skill for the students to do so. requiring substantial time and expertise from the students. (使用更简洁的表达)

In addition, the students will need a lot of course assignments or finish all of these exams and finish all of this knowledge, Furthermore, students would have to complete numerous course assignments and exams to acquire the necessary knowledge, (改进句子结构和词汇选择) and they won't have time to do all of this sort of stuff. leaving them with insufficient time for other tasks. (使用更自然的表达方式)

Second, it will not be true that it will be helpful for students in their future careers, Additionally, it may not necessarily benefit students in their future careers, (改进句子结构和词汇选择) because not all students want to create their own business, as not every student aspires to establish their own enterprise, (使用更高级的词汇) and even if they do, they will hire someone else to do so. and those who do may prefer to delegate such tasks to others. (使用更自然的表达方式) Therefore, this plan isn't necessary. Hence, this plan is not essential. (使用更高级的词汇)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to implement a new website development requirement for business students. This will offer business students the chance to acquire essential skills for company development. Moreover, it will benefit students in their future professional endeavors. Nonetheless, the woman opposes this particular plan. She believes that this new requirement is overly challenging and unrealistic within a limited timeframe, requiring substantial time and expertise from the students. Furthermore, students would have to complete numerous course assignments and exams to acquire the necessary knowledge, leaving them with insufficient time for other tasks. Additionally, it may not necessarily benefit students in their future careers, as not every student aspires to establish their own enterprise, and those who do may prefer

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • New website development requirement
  • Business students
  • Acquire essential skills
  • Future professional endeavors

• Woman's Opinion

  • Opposes the plan
  • Overly challenging
  • Unrealistic within a limited timeframe
  • Insufficient time for other tasks
  • Not necessarily beneficial for future careers

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高发言的流畅性，建议在练习时注意自然地连接句子和控制语速。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者提供了一个相对连贯和组织良好的回答，并对观点进行了支持。然而，可以进一步改进回答的结构，例如先总结计划，再陈述女士的观点，最后解释她给出的理由。此外，在解释理由时可以更详细地描述女士的观点以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school proposes that the business students are required to have two days workshop to learn how to design a website. The university plans to require business students to attend a two-day workshop on website design. (将句子结构简化，使其更自然) But the woman in the conversation strongly disagrees for two reasons. However, the woman strongly disagrees due to two main reasons. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达) Firstly, it won't be a valuable opportunity to learn some specialized skills because these skills are really difficult, which can't be learned in such a short time. First, she believes that mastering these complex skills is unrealistic within such a limited timeframe. (使用更高级的词汇和更简洁的表达) Maybe teaching some basic knowledge or encouraging students to attend some extra course for whole semesters is a better choice. She suggests offering basic instruction or promoting semester-long courses as better alternatives. (改进句子结构，使其更清晰) Second, it won't be help for students' future careers because not all students want to run their own business. Second, she argues that it may not benefit their future careers since not everyone intends to start their own businesses. (使用更自然的表达和更高级的词汇) Even though they run their own business, they won't be responsible for these kind of things. Moreover, even if they do start a business, they may not be responsible for website design tasks. (使用更准确的表达) They can help someone else to design a website, so it won't be useful for them for their future careers. Thus, hiring professionals for website design would be more practical, making the workshop less relevant to their careers. (改进句子结构，使其更连贯) For these two reasons, the woman strongly disagrees with the university and thinks it useless. Due to these reasons, the woman firmly opposes the university's plan and considers it ineffective. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to require business students to attend a two-day workshop on website design. However, the woman strongly disagrees due to two main reasons. First, she believes that mastering these complex skills is unrealistic within such a limited timeframe. She suggests offering basic instruction or promoting semester-long courses as better alternatives. Second, she argues that it may not benefit their future careers since not everyone intends to start their own businesses. Moreover, even if they do start a business, they may not be responsible for website design tasks. Thus, hiring professionals for website design would be more practical, making the workshop less relevant to their careers. Due to these reasons, the woman firmly opposes the university's plan and considers it ineffective.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Two-day workshop
  - Website design

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Reason 1: Unrealistic timeframe
    - Complex skills
    - Better alternatives: Basic instruction, semester-long courses
  - Reason 2: Limited career benefits
    - Not all students start businesses
    - Not responsible for website design tasks
    - Hiring professionals more practical

- Conclusion: Woman opposes plan, considers it ineffective

7.关键词