TOEFL TPO 21 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the university’s plan. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion of the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 24

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are a few instances where the pacing could be improved, and some occasional pauses could be reduced. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice maintaining a consistent pace throughout the response and work on minimizing unnecessary pauses.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen the response. The speaker should focus on incorporating more direct quotes or paraphrases from the listening passage to better support their points and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the material.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: According to a recent announcement, the university plans to send students the latest information and campus events through daily email instead of weekly newspaper. The university recently announced plans to send students up-to-date information on campus events via daily emails, replacing the weekly newspaper. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) They believe that doing so students can get the most updated information. This change is expected to provide students with the most current information. (Simplified sentence structure) Also, it is a sensible move since students nowadays rely on internet so much. Additionally, this decision makes sense as students increasingly rely on the internet for communication. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) The Romana Conversation thinks that this is a great idea for two reasons. The woman in the conversation believes this plan is beneficial for two main reasons. (Clarified subject and improved vocabulary) First, she says that email is just a daily reminder helping her to catch up with all the fun things. Firstly, she mentions that daily emails serve as reminders, helping her stay informed about various events. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary) And even if the concert that she is going to cancel the last minute, she would know before the event through daily email. Furthermore, if an event like a concert were to be canceled at the last minute, she would be informed beforehand via the daily email. (Rephrased for clarity and natural flow) Furthermore, she says that students will definitely read the email once a day and it would be more exciting if the university could include the cafe menu in the email. She also believes that students will certainly check their emails daily, and including the cafeteria menu would make it even more appealing. (Improved sentence structure and vocabulary)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university recently announced plans to send students up-to-date information on campus events via daily emails, replacing the weekly newspaper. This change is expected to provide students with the most current information. Additionally, this decision makes sense as students increasingly rely on the internet for communication. The woman in the conversation believes this plan is beneficial for two main reasons. Firstly, she mentions that daily emails serve as reminders, helping her stay informed about various events. Furthermore, if an event like a concert were to be canceled at the last minute, she would be informed beforehand via the daily email. She also believes that students will certainly check their emails daily, and including the cafeteria menu would make it even more appealing.

6. Mind Map

- University announcement
  - Daily emails
    - Replace weekly newspaper
    - Up-to-date information

- Woman's opinion
  - Beneficial plan
    - Reasons:
      1. Daily reminders for events
      2. Last-minute cancellations notification
      3. Students check emails daily
      4. Including cafeteria menu (appealing)

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的语音清晰，流畅度较好，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括计划并阐述女生的观点及理由。但在表述时，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇来增强句子之间的衔接，使回答更加连贯。此外，在描述女生观点时，可以考虑使用更多具体的例子来支持观点，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: University plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students in the university, and Man Woman strongly agrees with this plan. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forgot forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is cancelled unexpectedly, students will be informed promotedly promptly through email. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates.

(将“Man”改为“Woman”，因为原文中是女生表达了观点。将“forgot”改为“forget”，以保持一致的时态。将“promotedly”改为“promptly”，以表示及时地。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to send daily emails containing information about campus activities to all students, and the woman strongly supports this initiative. She asserts that receiving information through a weekly newspaper is not as effective because students may read it on Monday and forget about events scheduled later in the week, such as on Thursday or Friday. Moreover, she contends that if an event is canceled unexpectedly, students will be promptly notified via email, preventing them from wasting time attending a non-existent event. Lastly, she is confident that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they stay informed about important updates and do not miss any crucial information. By implementing this daily email system, the university can provide a more efficient and reliable method of communication for its student body.

6.思维导图

• University plans

  • Daily emails
    • Campus activities

• Woman's opinion

  • Supportive
    • Reasons
      • Weekly newspaper inefficiency
        • Forget events later in the week
      • Prompt notification for cancellations
      • Daily email checking

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太恰当，导致句子的连贯性受到影响。建议发言者在练习时注意语音的连贯性和自然停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 发言者对于女生的观点和原因进行了较为充分的阐述，但在总结计划时略显简单。建议在描述计划时可以更详细地介绍一下具体内容，以使回答更加完整。同时，在组织回答时注意逻辑性和条理性，使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The university proposes to send daily news through email to every student about the campus event and activities. The university plans to send daily emails to all students about campus events and activities.（将“proposes”改为“plans”，使句子更自然；将“news through email”改为“emails”，简化表达；将“every student”改为“all students”，使表达更准确。）

And the girl in the conversation agrees with this idea because the newspaper just fails to send the most up-to-date information to students because it's a weekly newspaper. The woman in the conversation supports this plan as the weekly newspaper cannot provide the most current information to students.（将“girl”改为“woman”，使表达更恰当；简化句子结构，避免重复使用“because”。）

So for instance, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, she'll just forget the information about conference or about film. For example, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, they might forget about upcoming conferences or film screenings.（使用“they”代替“she”，使表达更中性；将“conference or about film”改为“upcoming conferences or film screenings”，使表达更清晰。）

However, if there's such email, then it will remind the students so that she wouldn't forget. However, with daily emails, students will be reminded of these events and won't forget them.（简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And even if the activities get cancelled, the students will know it immediately instead of wasting time showing up there. Moreover, if events are cancelled, students will be informed promptly, preventing them from wasting time attending.（使用“moreover”代替“and”，使表达更连贯；简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And the second reason is that actually students will check the newspaper every day so that if the school could include cafeteria menu in this, students will be more interested. The second reason is that students check their email daily, and if the school includes the cafeteria menu, it would increase their interest in reading these emails.（将“newspaper”改为“email”，避免混淆；简化句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And these are the two reasons why students think it's a reasonable idea. These are the two reasons why the woman believes this plan is beneficial for students.（将“students”改为“the woman”，使表达更准确；将“reasonable idea”改为“beneficial for students”，使表达更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to send daily emails to all students about campus events and activities. The woman in the conversation supports this plan as the weekly newspaper cannot provide the most current information to students. For example, when a student reads the newspaper on Monday, they might forget about upcoming conferences or film screenings. However, with daily emails, students will be reminded of these events and won't forget them. Moreover, if events are cancelled, students will be informed promptly, preventing them from wasting time attending. The second reason is that students check their email daily, and if the school includes the cafeteria menu, it would increase their interest in reading these emails. These are the two reasons why the woman believes this plan is beneficial for students.

6.思维导图

- University Plan
  - Daily emails
  - Campus events and activities

- Woman's Opinion
  - Supports the plan
  - Reasons
    - Weekly newspaper limitations
      - Not up-to-date
      - Easy to forget events
    - Daily email benefits
      - Reminders for events
      - Cancellations informed promptly
      - Increased interest (cafeteria menu)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答基本上是连贯和有条理的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到活动取消时，可以更详细地解释这种情况下邮件通知的优势。此外，在论述学生查看邮件的习惯时，可以提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。建议发言者在练习时尝试提供更多相关的支持和例子，以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The university is planning to send a daily email about the activities held in the university to all the students, The university plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students, (将“is planning to”简化为“plans to”，将“held in the university”改为“campus”，使句子更简洁自然。) and the woman totally agrees with the idea. and the woman strongly agrees with this plan. (用“strongly agrees”替换“totally agrees”，使表达更地道。)

First off, she thinks that if the information was contained in the newspaper and they read about it on Monday and will forget the activities which will hold maybe Thursday or Friday. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. (修改时态，简化句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

Besides, she thinks if the activities will cancel by accident, they will find out at time when the information was sent by email. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is canceled unexpectedly, students will be informed promptly through email. (修正语法错误，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。)

Besides, she thinks that all the students will check up the email once a day so they won't ignore the information. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates. (避免重复使用“besides”，改为“furthermore”，并简化句子结构。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university plans to send daily emails about campus activities to all students, and the woman strongly agrees with this plan. Firstly, she believes that if the information is in the newspaper, students might read it on Monday and forget about activities scheduled for Thursday or Friday. Additionally, she thinks that if an activity is canceled unexpectedly, students will be informed promptly through email. Furthermore, she believes that students will check their emails daily, ensuring they don't miss any important updates. By receiving daily emails, students can stay up-to-date with campus events and make better use of available opportunities. The woman also suggests including the cafeteria menu in the emails to encourage more students to read them. Overall, she is confident that this new plan will greatly benefit the university community.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Daily emails
  • Campus activities

• Woman's Opinion

  • Strongly agrees
  • Reasons
    • Newspaper limitations
    • Prompt updates
    • Daily email checking
  • Additional suggestion
    • Include cafeteria menu

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，能够清楚地总结计划并陈述女生的观点及理由。但在表述过程中，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使得回答更加连贯和有条理。此外，可以适当举例或提供更多细节来支持观点，使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman holds a very positive attitude towards the plan. She thinks it is very necessary to switch the media from newspaper to email. There are two reasons for this. First of all, students can get the exact detail for everything daily and it will be a good reminder so that they won't forget the daily schedule and they can show up at the exact time when an event happens. And secondly, every student checks on their email at least once a day so it will be a

Corrected Answer: The woman has a very positive attitude towards the plan. She believes it is essential to switch from newspapers to emails as a medium for information dissemination. There are two main reasons for this. Firstly, students can receive accurate details about daily events, which serve as helpful reminders, ensuring they don't miss any activities and arrive on time. Secondly, since every student checks their email at least once a day, this method will be more effective. (将部分词汇替换为更高级的词汇，改善句子结构，使语言更自然流畅。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman has a very positive attitude towards the university's plan to send daily emails containing information about campus events and activities instead of using the campus newspaper. She believes that switching from newspapers to emails as a medium for information dissemination is essential for two main reasons. Firstly, students can receive accurate details about daily events through emails, which serve as helpful reminders, ensuring they don't miss any activities and arrive on time for each event. Secondly, since every student checks their email at least once a day, this method of communication will be more effective in reaching them and keeping them informed about campus happenings. By adopting this approach, the university can ensure that students are always up-to-date with the latest events and activities, leading to better engagement and participation in campus life.

6.思维导图

- Positive attitude
  - Switch from newspapers to emails
    - Essential
      - Two main reasons
        - Accurate details and reminders
          - Don't miss activities
          - Arrive on time
        - Effective communication method
          - Students check email daily
          - Better engagement and participation

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

24. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确度，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于问题的回答较为完整，能够简要概括计划，并阐述女生对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上还有待加强，建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，使回答更加有条理和连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The school proposed an idea that the compass events should be sent to students on a daily basis rather than once a week and keep the students up to date. The university proposed a plan to send campus events information to students daily instead of weekly, keeping them up-to-date.（将“school”改为“university”，将“compass events”改为“campus events information”，将“on a daily basis”改为“daily”，使句子更简洁。）

In this way, the woman has a positive attitude towards these ideas. The woman has a positive opinion about this plan.（将“in this way”删除，将“towards these ideas”改为“about this plan”，使句子更简洁。）

First, she thinks that she always forgot about information on Wednesdays or Thursdays because she usually tends to read the information on Monday. First, she believes that she often forgets about events happening on Wednesdays or Thursdays since she usually reads the information on Mondays.（将“thinks”改为“believes”，将“forgot”改为“forgets”，使句子更自然。）

So the daily notifications serve as a reminder. Thus, daily notifications will serve as reminders.（将“So”改为“Thus”，使句子更自然。）

So if something is cancelled, she would not waste any time on these things. Therefore, if an event is cancelled, she will not waste time on it.（将“on these things”改为“on it”，使句子更简洁。）

And secondly, she pointed out that actually every student will check the email box once a day. Secondly, she points out that students typically check their email at least once a day.（将“pointed out”改为“points out”，将“email box”改为“email”，使句子更自然。）

So the student will definitely read these informations. Thus, students will certainly read this information.（将“informations”改为“information”，使句子更自然。）

If the cafeteria checklist is posted, it will be more interesting. If the cafeteria menu is included, it will be even more appealing.（将“cafeteria checklist”改为“cafeteria menu”，将“interesting”改为“appealing”，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The university proposed a plan to send campus events information to students daily instead of weekly, keeping them up-to-date. The woman has a positive opinion about this plan. First, she believes that she often forgets about events happening on Wednesdays or Thursdays since she usually reads the information on Mondays. Thus, daily notifications will serve as reminders. Therefore, if an event is cancelled, she will not waste time on it. Secondly, she points out that students typically check their email at least once a day. Thus, students will certainly read this information. If the cafeteria menu is included, it will be even more appealing.

6.思维导图

• University Plan

  • Daily emails
  • Campus events information

• Woman's Opinion

  • Positive
  • Reasons
    • Reminder for events
    • Avoid wasting time on cancelled events
    • Students check email daily
    • Inclusion of cafeteria menu

7.关键词