TOEFL TPO 43 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the change described in the article. Briefly summarize the change Then state his opinion about the change and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言较为清晰，流利度尚可，但仍有一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语速和连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的变化，并说明男生对变化的看法及原因。但在组织结构上还有待加强，可以尝试使用更清晰的逻辑连接词来组织句子，使回答更加条理清晰。同时，在举例和论述方面可以更具体一些，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

There are two changes to the orientation program. The orientation program has two changes. (改变语序，使句子更自然) Firstly, the university will offer students with choices of activities and these activities will only last one day. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. (修改表达，使句子更清晰) In the listening, the men man (拼写错误) thinks (单数第三人称动词需加s) the changes are very interesting and attractive. Firstly, First, (保持一致性) people usually don't like the same things. So like if if (删除多余词汇) the student doesn't like sleep in the tank, sleeping in a tent, (修正表达) they can choose the hiking one other option (更清晰的表达) instead and they were not feeling missed out. won't feel left out. (修正时态和表达) And secondly, change the program with last one day only. Students will not give up the whole weekend. They have other big bigger more significant (修正表达) commitments (名词复数形式) such as buying books, cleaning their dormitory and preparing for their first classes. So these are the two reasons why students agree with that.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The orientation program has two changes. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. In the listening, the man thinks these changes are interesting and attractive. First, people usually don't like the same things. If a student doesn't like sleeping in a tent, they can choose the other option instead and won't feel left out. Second, by making the program last only one day, students won't have to give up their entire weekend. They have more significant commitments such as buying books, setting up their dormitory, and preparing for their first classes. These are the two reasons why students agree with these changes.

6.思维导图

Orientation Program Changes
├── Two Changes
│   ├── Choice of activities
│   └── One-day duration
└── Man's Opinion
    ├── Reasons
    │   ├── Different preferences
    │   │   └── Example: Tent vs. other option
    │   └── Time commitment
    │       └── Example: Buying books, setting up dormitory, preparing for classes
    └── Agreement with changes

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高交付效果，建议练习更连贯、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。此外，注意在适当的地方暂停，以避免出现不必要的标点错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在某些方面进行改进。例如，在描述男子对变化的看法时，可以更详细地解释他为什么认为这些变化会吸引更多人参加。此外，在提供支持或举例时，尝试使用更具体和详细的信息，以便更充分地支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the announcement, Medicine University will make some changes to the orientation program for newcoming students. According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students.（将Medicine University改为Madison University，将newcoming students改为incoming students。）

The first change is that the university will offer choice of activities to either go hiking or participate in group games. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus.（在choice前加上a，以及在group games后加上on campus。）

The second change is that the program will last only one day. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day.（将last only one day改为be shortened to last only one day。）

The mayor agrees with these policies. The man agrees with these changes.（将mayor改为man，将policies改为changes。）

To begin with, he points out that it's more attractive since not everybody likes the same thing. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences.（将attractive改为appealing，将likes the same thing改为has the same preferences。）

For example, somebody that likes sleeping in the tent will not participate in this activity. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity.（将somebody改为someone，将likes改为dislikes，将in the tent改为in a tent，将this activity改为the camping activity。）

Moreover, he argues that students will not have to waste the whole weekend because students will have a lot of other things to do for the few days like buying books, setting up rooms, or preparing for classes. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.（将waste改为sacrifice，将a lot of other things改为numerous tasks，将for the few days改为during their first few days。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day. The man agrees with these changes. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.

6.思维导图

• Madison University

  • Changes to orientation program
    • Choice of activities
      • Hiking
      • Group games on campus
    • Duration
      • Shortened to one day

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with changes
    • More appealing
      • Different preferences
    • Time-efficient
      • Numerous tasks during first few days

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还有一些不必要的停顿。建议同学在练习口语时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但在解释男生观点时，可以更具体地提到男生所提到的原因，例如“有些人不喜欢露营”可以改为“有些人不喜欢在帐篷里过夜”。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出男生对这个改变的态度是积极的。建议同学在练习时注意更加详细地阐述观点，并在总结时明确表达态度。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the article, the university is deciding to change the orientation programs for the new students. They want to change the two-day program into one day, and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men strongly support this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend. Because for the students, they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, or prepare for the class, or find the classroom, and so on. In conclusion, the men strongly support the change of the university, and he gives his point.

Corrected Answer: According to the article, the university has decided (改为完成时，表示已经决定) to change the orientation programs the orientation program (改为单数，因为只有一个项目) for the new students incoming students (用更专业的词汇). They want to change the two-day program into one day, it from a two-day program to a one-day event, (改为更自然的表达方式) and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men the man (改为单数，因为只有一个人) strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips on camping trips (加on，使句子更自然). The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend, (加逗号，使句子更自然) because they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, prepare for the class classes (改为复数，表示多个课程), or find the classrooms (加s，表示多个教室). In conclusion, the man strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) the change of the university, made by the university, (改为更自然的表达方式) and he gives his point.

Revised Answer (140 words): According to the article, the university has decided to change the orientation program for incoming students. They want to change it from a two-day program to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between activities. In the conversation, the man strongly supports this change. He first mentions that not everyone enjoys the same activities, and some people do not want to go on camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up their entire weekend because they have other tasks to complete, such as buying books, preparing for classes, or finding classrooms. In conclusion, the man strongly supports the change made by the university and provides valid reasons for his opinion.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - University's decision
  - Change in orientation program

- Conversation
  - Man's support for the change
  - Reasons
    - Different preferences
      - Example: Dislike camping trips
    - Time commitment
      - Example: Other tasks (buying books, preparing for classes, finding classrooms)

- Conclusion
  - Man's strong support
  - Valid reasons for his opinion

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 在交付方面，您的发言相对清晰，但仍有改进的空间。建议您练习更流畅、自然的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，请注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，您的回答基本上涵盖了所需内容，但组织和连贯性还有待提高。建议您在回答时更明确地总结变化，并确保提到男生对变化的看法以及他给出的理由。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词来使回答更连贯。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to change the orientation program. The university decided to change the orientation program.（删除多余的助动词has，使句子更自然）
The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of some activities, which will last one day only instead of all the weekend, and mine in the listening part likes this idea. The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of activities, lasting only one day instead of the entire weekend, and the man in the listening part likes this idea.（删除多余的some，改为entire weekend，修改mine为man，使句子更自然）
Because, firstly, he thinks that not all students like the similar activities. Firstly, he thinks that not all students enjoy similar activities.（删除because，改为enjoy，使句子更自然）
That's because some students prefer to get up late and participate these activities, but other students prefer to give up these activities. This is because some students prefer to sleep in and participate in these activities, while others prefer to skip them.（改为sleep in和participate in，使用while连接，使句子更自然）
So with this new trend, this is good for students to make choice. Therefore, with this new option, it is beneficial for students to make a choice.（改为new option和beneficial，使句子更自然）
Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have all the free time on the weekend. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time during the weekend.（改为ample free time和during，使句子更自然）
That's because some students prefer to buy some books and set up their rooms and prepare some materials. This is because some students prefer to purchase books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials.（删除多余的some，改为purchase，使句子更自然）
So this is good for students to study. Thus, this change is beneficial for students' studies.（改为beneficial和students' studies，使句子更自然）

修订版（140词）：

The university decided to change the orientation program. The first reason is that the university will offer a choice of activities, lasting only one day instead of the entire weekend, and the man in the listening part likes this idea. Firstly, he thinks that not all students enjoy similar activities. This is because some students prefer to sleep in and participate in these activities, while others prefer to skip them. Therefore, with this new option, it is beneficial for students to make a choice. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time during the weekend. This is because some students prefer to purchase books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials. Thus, this change is beneficial for students' studies.

6.思维导图

• Orientation Program Change
  • Choice of Activities
    • One-day duration
    • Man's opinion: Positive
      • Reason 1: Different preferences
        • Enjoyment of activities
        • Sleep in vs. participate
      • Reason 2: Limited free time
        • Weekend tasks
          • Purchase books
          • Set up rooms
          • Prepare materials
      • Benefits for students' studies

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：2

• 主题发展：2

• 语言使用：2

2.预估分数

• 总分：18

3.表达 在交付方面，您的回答需要改进。您的语速不够流畅，有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高这方面的表现，请尝试练习更自然、流畅的语音，并注意在适当的地方停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，您的回答需要更加清晰和有组织。首先，请确保简要总结文章中描述的变化，并明确陈述男子对变化的看法。然后，在解释他给出的理由时，请提供更多具体细节和例子来支持您的观点。为了改进这方面，请尝试使用更清晰的连接词汇和短语来组织您的想法，并确保充分支持您的论点。

5.语言使用

原文：The university has decided to change orientation program. The university has decided to change the orientation program.（在“orientation”前加上定冠词“the”使句子更自然。）

The first reason is that students could take some advantages of the opportunity to get to know other students, and students could hear or participate some program activities. The first reason is that students can take advantage of the opportunity to get to know other students by participating in various program activities.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生可以通过参加各种活动来了解其他学生的机会。）

And Mai in the listening part supports this idea, because first he mentioned that not all students like the similar activities. The man in the listening part supports this idea, stating that not all students enjoy similar activities.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述男子在听力部分支持这个想法的原因。）

That's because some students prefer to get up late and participate activities, and other students prefer to give up these activities. This is because some students prefer engaging in different activities, while others may choose not to participate at all.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生对活动的不同偏好。）

With this new change, this is good for students. This new change benefits the students.（使用更简洁、自然的表达方式来描述这个变化对学生的好处。）

Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have all the free time on the weekend. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time on the weekend.（使用“ample”替换“all”使句子更自然。）

That's because some students need to buy some books, clean some rooms, and prepare some materials. This is because some students need to buy books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials.（使用更自然的表达方式来描述学生需要做的事情。）

So with this new change, this is good for students to study. Thus, this new change is beneficial for students' studies.（使用更简洁、自然的表达方式来描述这个变化对学生学习的好处。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

The university has decided to change the orientation program. The first reason is that students can take advantage of the opportunity to get to know other students by participating in various program activities. The man in the listening part supports this idea, stating that not all students enjoy similar activities. This is because some students prefer engaging in different activities, while others may choose not to participate at all. This new change benefits the students. Secondly, he mentioned that not all students have ample free time on the weekend. This is because some students need to buy books, set up their rooms, and prepare materials. Thus, this new change is beneficial for students' studies.

6.思维导图

• Change in Orientation Program
  • More choices
    • Different activities
  • Man's opinion
    • Supports the change
      • Not all students enjoy similar activities
      • Limited free time on weekends
  • Benefits for students
    • Better socialization
    • Flexibility in schedule

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这个回答的语言流畅度和语速基本上是一致的，偶尔有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在练习时注意提高发音的准确性，同时尽量减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这个回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但是，在提供支持或例子方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体的例子和详细的解释来支持观点，以便使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In Reading Passive, we first decided to make change to the orientation programs that will differ from the past that students will spend two days going hiking. In this year, students can make a choice between going hiking and participating in the organized group games. In the conversation, the men agree with this plan. He believes that it's become more attractive for the change. First, he believes that since not everyone likes the same things, so not every student wants to go hiking together. And second, he believes that if you need to go hiking for two days, that means you need to give up your whole weekend. However, students are always so busy. The week before they start up, they need to buy some books and also they prepare for the first week class.

Corrected Answer: In the reading passage, it was mentioned that changes were made to the orientation program, which now offers students a choice between going hiking and participating in organized group games on campus. In the conversation, the man agrees with this change. He believes that it has become more attractive due to these changes. Firstly, he thinks that since not everyone has the same preferences, not all students want to go hiking together. Secondly, he believes that if students have to go hiking for two days, it means they have to give up their entire weekend. However, students are usually very busy during their first week of school; they need to buy books and prepare for their classes. (原文中的语言表达较为简单，修改后的回答使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的语言风格。同时，修正了一些语法错误。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, it was mentioned that Madison University made changes to the orientation program for first-year students. Instead of the previous two-day hiking trip, students now have a choice between going hiking and participating in organized group games on campus. In the conversation, the man expresses his agreement with this change, stating that it has become more attractive due to these modifications. Firstly, he thinks that since people have different preferences, not all students want to participate in hiking activities. Secondly, he believes that if students have to go hiking for two days, they would need to give up their entire weekend. This is inconvenient as students are usually very busy during their first week of school, needing time to buy books and prepare for their classes. Overall, the man supports the change because it offers more options and is less time-consuming for students.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Changes to orientation program
  • Choice between hiking and group games

• Conversation

  • Man's opinion
    • More attractive
      • Different preferences
      • Less time-consuming

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，可能导致了标点符号的问题。建议发言者在练习时注意自己的停顿，以便更好地掌握语言节奏。此外，尽量减少发音错误，以免影响听众的理解。

4.话题发展 发言者对话题进行了较好的阐述和组织，但仍有改进空间。首先，在总结变化时，需要更准确地描述这个变化：新增了校园内的团队游戏活动作为选择，并将活动时间缩短为一天。其次，在解释男生观点时，可以更具体地说明他认为这种变化能吸引更多人参加，并给出他提到的原因。例如，可以提到女生没有参加露营活动的经历来支持观点。最后，在组织上可以更加流畅和连贯，使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The change in the university's announcement is that students will be able to decide whether to join the orientation program by themselves. The change announced by the university is that students can now choose between different orientation activities. (修改了句子结构，使描述更准确) It will not be a mandatory program. These activities are no longer mandatory. (简化了句子结构，使表达更自然) The men in the listening totally agree with it, because for one, he thinks that not everyone likes the same program, so it will be better for students to listen to themselves. The man in the conversation completely agrees with this change, as he believes that offering different options caters to diverse preferences among students. (改进了句子结构和词汇，使表达更清晰) What's more, he thinks that some students can not give up the weekend for other things such as get prepared for the further education and swap the house or reading what they want to read. Moreover, he thinks that some students cannot sacrifice their entire weekend for other tasks like preparing for classes and setting up their living spaces. (修改了句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然和准确) So he thinks that it is a good change.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The change announced by the university is that students can now choose between different orientation activities, such as hiking or participating in organized group games on campus. These activities are no longer mandatory. The man in the conversation completely agrees with this change, as he believes that offering different options caters to diverse preferences among students. He also mentions that not everyone enjoys camping and hiking, so providing alternatives allows more students to participate in the orientation program. Moreover, he thinks that some students cannot sacrifice their entire weekend for other tasks like preparing for classes and setting up their living spaces. By reducing the duration of the activities to one day, the university addresses these concerns and makes the orientation program more appealing to a wider range of students. The man believes that these changes are positive and will benefit incoming students.

6.思维导图

• Change announced

  • Choose between activities
  • No longer mandatory

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with change
  • Reasons
    • Diverse preferences
    • Time commitment
    • More appealing to students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分：27

3.表达 回答中的表达大部分清晰流畅，但在某些地方稍显生硬。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然地组织句子，注意语速和停顿的恰当性。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容完整，结构清晰，观点明确。在主题发展方面已经做得很好。可以尝试在解释观点时提供更多具体的例子和细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The university plans to change its orientation program from two days to one day, allowing students to choose between hiking or playing games. The university plans to change its orientation program from a two-day event to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between hiking and playing games.（将“from two days to one day”改为“from a two-day event to a one-day event”，使句子结构更自然；将“or”改为“and”，表示两个选项之间的关系。）

In the conversation, the man supports this change. In the conversation, the man expresses his support for this change.（将“supports”改为“expresses his support for”，使句子更自然。）

Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities and since many people didn't like camping during the first year, they didn't participate. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities; thus, many people who didn't like camping during their first year chose not to participate.（在两个独立子句之间添加分号，使句子结构更清晰；将“since”改为“thus”，表示因果关系。）

Another reason is that students have many tasks to accomplish during the first week. Another reason is that students have numerous tasks to complete during their first week.（将“many”改为“numerous”，提高词汇水平；将“accomplish”改为“complete”，使句子更自然。）

As a result, students won't have to stay quiet their entire weekend. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend.（将“stay quiet”改为“sacrifice”，使句子更自然。）

They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class or purchasing textbooks. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class and purchasing textbooks.（将“or”改为“and”，表示两个任务都需要完成。）

That's why the man supports this proposal. That's why the man supports this change.（将“proposal”改为“change”，与前文保持一致。）

修订版（140词）：

The university plans to change its orientation program from a two-day event to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between hiking and playing games. In the conversation, the man expresses his support for this change. Firstly, he believes that not everyone enjoys the same activities; thus, many people who didn't like camping during their first year chose not to participate. Another reason is that students have numerous tasks to complete during their first week. As a result, students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend. They can focus on more important tasks, such as preparing for their first class and purchasing textbooks. That's why the man supports this change.

6.思维导图

• Change in Orientation Program

  • Two-day event to one-day event
  • Choice between hiking and playing games

• Man's support for the change

  • Not everyone enjoys the same activities
    • Many didn't like camping, chose not to participate
  • Numerous tasks during the first week
    • Students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend
    • Focus on important tasks (preparing for class, purchasing textbooks)

7.关键词