TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the example from the lecture illustrates the concept offacilitators.

1.子项得分

Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，该回答的语音清晰，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点符号的使用不当可能导致不适当的停顿。拼写错误可能是发音不准确的结果。建议练习更多的朗读和发音练习，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展

从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系清晰，举例也足够支持观点。但可以尝试更深入地阐述观点，提供更详细的解释和例证。建议多做一些类似题目的练习，以便更好地掌握如何在有限的时间内组织和发展话题。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the reading, the early species could facilitate us to inhibit this damaged area may make it possible for other species to live in the area later. The professor elaborates on this. For example, when some rocks exposed to storms are hard for new plants to grow. However, brown allergies with strong roots sticking in the surface of rocks can change the situation. After these brown allergies grow in these rocks, other species can live in this area because this can give situations for living.

Corrected Answer: According to the reading, the early species could facilitate us help (“facilitate us”不符合语境，应改为“help”) to inhibit colonize (“inhibit”意为抑制，应改为“colonize”表示殖民地化) this damaged area may make it possible for other species to live in the area later. The professor elaborates on this. For example, when some rocks exposed to storms are hard for new plants to grow. However, brown allergies brown algae (拼写错误，应为“brown algae”而非“brown allergies”) with strong roots sticking in the surface of rocks can change the situation. After these brown allergies brown algae grow in these rocks, other species can live in this area because this can give situations conditions (“situations”不符合语境，应改为“conditions”表示条件) for living.

Revised Answer (140 words): According to the reading, early species can help colonize damaged areas, making it possible for other species to live there later. The professor elaborates on this concept using an example from the ocean. When storms expose rocks, it becomes difficult for new plants to grow due to the slippery surface. However, brown algae, with their strong root-like structures, can attach themselves to the rocks and change the situation. Once the brown algae grow on these rocks, they create a more suitable environment for other species to live in. This is because the rocks are no longer slippery, allowing other plants such as ocean grasses to attach their seeds and grow into mature plants. In this way, brown algae act as facilitators by creating favorable conditions for other species to thrive in previously uninhabitable areas.

6.思维导图

• Early species

  • Help colonize damaged areas
  • Enable other species to live later

• Professor's example

  • Ocean rocks exposed by storms
  • Difficult for new plants to grow

• Brown algae

  • Strong root-like structures
  • Attach to slippery rocks

• Changing the situation

  • Rocks no longer slippery
  • Other plants can grow (e.g., ocean grasses)

7.关键词