TOEFL TPO 75 Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the example of the lecture illustrates the technique of behavioral exposure.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在语音和语调方面还有一些不足。建议同学在发音和语调上多加练习，以提高口语的流利度和自然度。同时，在回答问题时，注意适当的停顿和强调关键词。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是符合题目要求的。但在组织结构和论证方面还有一些不足。建议同学在回答问题时，先简要概括阅读材料中的观点，然后详细描述听力材料中的例子，并明确指出这个例子如何说明阅读材料中的观点。此外，在使用连接词和过渡词时要更加自然，以提高回答的连贯性和条理性。

5.语言使用

Original: Behavioral exposure is the definition mentioned in the reading, which is one technique that can encourage children to perform gradually increasing amounts of the feared behavior. In the lecture, the professor used his own children as an example to explain it. You know, when his son was 18 years old, they moved to a new place. At first, his son was very afraid to talk to their neighbors. And at one night, the professor encouraged his son to say hi to a group of kids, but his son was very reluctant. And then on the way back to their homes, the professor encouraged his son to say nice about their back. And when they reached the homes, their son just went outside by bicycle. And at the end of the night, his son made several new friends. So therefore, there is one example.

Corrected: Behavioral exposure is the definition mentioned in the reading The reading passage introduces behavioral exposure (将原句改为更自然的表达方式), which is one technique that can encourage children to perform gradually increasing amounts of the feared behavior. In the lecture, the professor used his own children child (原文只提到了一个孩子) as an example to explain it. You know, when his son was 18 8 (听力原文中提到的是8岁) years old, they moved to a new place. At first, his son was very afraid to talk to their neighbors. And at one night, the professor encouraged his son to say hi to a group of kids, but his son was very reluctant. And then on the way back to their homes home (家应该是单数), the professor encouraged his son to say nice about their back something nice about their bikes (原句意思不清，应该是关于孩子们的自行车说些好话). And when they reached the home, their son just went outside by bicycle. And at the end of the night, his son made several new friends. So therefore, there is one example.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage introduces behavioral exposure, a technique that encourages children to gradually perform more of a feared behavior. In the lecture, the professor used his own child as an example to explain this concept. When his son was 8 years old, they moved to a new place where the boy was initially afraid to talk to their neighbors. One night, the professor encouraged his son to greet a group of kids; although reluctant, he did so. On their way back home, the professor urged his son to compliment the kids' bikes. After returning home, the boy went outside to ride his bicycle and eventually made several new friends by the end of the night. This example effectively illustrates how behavioral exposure can help children overcome their fears.

6.思维导图

- Behavioral Exposure
    - Technique
        - Gradually perform more of a feared behavior
    - Lecture Example
        - Professor's son
            - 8 years old
            - Moved to a new place
            - Afraid to talk to neighbors
        - Encouragement
            - Greet kids
            - Compliment bikes
        - Result
            - Overcame fear
            - Made new friends

7.关键词