TOEFL TPO None Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the professor's lecture illustrates the concept of a conservation-reliant species.

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

• 话题发展（Topic Development）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议练习更流畅、自然的语音表达，以便在考试中更好地展示自己的英语水平。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有条理的，但可以进一步优化。建议在描述保护区和围栏设施方面提供更多细节，以便更好地说明这些措施如何帮助鸟类生存。同时，在提到成本问题时，可以给出具体的数字或例子，以增强说服力。总之，在准备托福口语考试时，要确保充分利用时间来组织和阐述观点，并提供充足的支持和例证。

5.语言使用

Original: Conservation-reliant species refers to animals whose survival relies on the conservation of people to their habitats. Stop of these conservation can lead to extinction of these animals. The professor give an example of bird species struggling for survival in the forest of Hawaii. Due to the introducing of domestic pigs and goats and their escaping to the forest, the vegetation environment of these birds living in has been destroyed greatly. In that case, people started their preservation of these birds by setting specific areas that keep the pigs and goats outside. This is very effective in some area but also very expensive due to the high cost of establishing equipments and repairments. However, if these efforts were stopped, then these kind of birds are likely to extinct.

Corrected: Conservation-reliant species Conservation-dependent species (用词更准确) refers to animals whose survival relies on the conservation of people human conservation efforts (表达更自然) to their habitats. Stop of these conservation Discontinuation of these efforts (语法更准确) can lead to extinction of these animals. The professor give gives (动词形式错误) an example of bird species struggling for survival in the forest of Hawaii in Hawaii(表达更自然). Due to the introducing introduction (词形错误) of domestic pigs and goats and their escaping to the forest, the vegetation environment of these birds living in has been destroyed greatly severely damaged (表达更自然). In that case, people started their preservation conservation (用词更准确) of these birds by setting specific areas that keep the pigs and goats outside. This is very effective in some area areas (单复数错误) but also very expensive due to the high cost of establishing equipments and repairments equipment and repairs(词形错误). However, if these efforts were stopped, then these kind of birds are likely to extinct. of birds would likely become extinct.(语法更准确)

Revised (140 words): Conservation-dependent species refers to animals whose survival relies on human conservation efforts to their habitats. Discontinuation of these efforts can lead to the extinction of these animals. The professor gives an example of bird species struggling for survival in the forests in Hawaii. Due to the introduction of domestic pigs and goats and their escape into the forest, the vegetation environment that these birds live in has been severely damaged. To address this issue, people started conserving these birds by establishing specific areas that keep the pigs and goats out. This approach has been very effective in some areas but also very expensive due to the high cost of setting up equipment and repairs. However, if these efforts were discontinued, these kinds of birds would likely become extinct.

6.思维导图

- Conservation-dependent species
  - Definition
  - Human conservation efforts

- Example: Hawaii's forests
  - Bird species struggling for survival
  - Introduction of domestic pigs and goats
  - Damage to vegetation environment

- Conservation efforts
  - Establishing specific areas
  - Effectiveness and cost

- Potential extinction
  - If efforts discontinued

7.关键词