TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 3 Sample: explain how example from the lecturer illustrates the concept of appeasement behaviors

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答中的语音清晰，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但是，有一些标点问题是由于不适当的停顿造成的，拼写错误是由于发音不准确造成的。建议在练习口语时注意提高发音准确性和适当控制停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，观点之间的联系清晰，举例也足够支持观点。但需要注意的是，在回答开头部分出现了与原文不符的描述（提到了警察行为），这可能会影响整体评分。建议在练习时注意仔细审题，确保回答内容与原文保持一致。

5.语言使用

Original: The reading passage talks about a policeman's behavior. The concept of appeasement behaviors (原文中没有提到警察行为，应改为“缓和行为”的概念) means that a weaker animal communicates that it does not want to fight and is willing to submit to a more powerful individual. The professor takes wolves for example. Wolves live in packs and hunt, prey, and share food together (删除重复的“prey”并将句子结构调整为更自然的表达). Sometimes bigger wolves want to get food from another smaller member of the pack. The bigger wolves will threaten to attack smaller wolves, seeing that smaller wolves will lower their heads and flatten their fur, which signs are signs (改为正确的语法结构) that smaller wolves will give in. As a result, the bigger wolf will let them go without any hurt or trouble.

Revised (140 words): The concept of appeasement behaviors, as discussed in the reading passage, refers to a weaker animal communicating its unwillingness to fight and its submission to a more powerful individual. The professor provides an example of this behavior among wolves. Wolves live in packs, hunting and sharing food together. Occasionally, larger wolves may attempt to take food from smaller pack members. In response to the threat of attack from the larger wolf, the smaller wolf exhibits appeasement behaviors by lowering its head and flattening its fur. These actions serve as signs of submission, indicating that the smaller wolf is willing to give in. Consequently, the larger wolf allows the smaller wolf to leave without causing any harm or conflict, illustrating the concept of appeasement behaviors effectively.

6.思维导图

- Appeasement Behaviors
  - Weaker animal
    - Unwillingness to fight
    - Submission to stronger individual
  - Example: Wolves
    - Live in packs
      - Hunting and sharing food together
    - Larger wolves vs. smaller wolves
      - Threat of attack
      - Smaller wolf's response
        - Lowering head
        - Flattening fur
        - Signs of submission
      - Outcome
        - Larger wolf allows smaller wolf to leave
        - No harm or conflict

7.关键词