TOEFL TPO 42 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man disagrees with the decision announced in the student newspaper. Explain why the university made the decision and why the man disagrees with.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 27

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor punctuation issues that can be improved upon. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on appropriate pauses and work on accurate pronunciation to avoid any spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The speaker effectively explains the university's decision and the man's disagreement with it. To further improve topic development, the speaker could provide more specific examples or details from the conversation to strengthen their argument.

5.Language Use

Original: According to a recent announcement, starting next fall, the university will stop providing evening classes in many departments due to a steady decline in enrollments. The university recently announced that starting next fall, they will discontinue evening classes in numerous departments because of a consistent decrease in enrollment. (Rephrased for better flow and clarity)

The fact that the evening classes are taught by teaching assistants is the primary reason for the decline. The main reason for this decline is that most evening classes are led by teaching assistants. (Simplified sentence structure)

However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision. Nonetheless, the man in the discussion opposes this decision. (Improved word choice)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university recently announced that starting next fall, they will discontinue evening classes in numerous departments because of a consistent decrease in enrollment. The main reason for this decline is that most evening classes are led by teaching assistants. Nonetheless, the man in the discussion opposes this decision. He believes that small classes are more preferable as students can be more involved in discussions or activities, leading to a better learning experience. Additionally, he argues that experienced faculty members may have been teaching for over 20 years and could be tired by now. In contrast, young and inexperienced teachers might be more enthusiastic when teaching, which could bring different perspectives to students. To achieve a higher score, the speaker should focus on using advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and strong conclusions in their response.

6.Mind Map

• University decision

  • Discontinue evening classes
  • Decrease in enrollment
  • Teaching assistants as instructors

• Man's disagreement

  • Benefits of small classes
  • Experienced faculty vs. enthusiastic teaching assistants

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议考生在练习时注意语音语调的准确性，并尝试在不影响理解的情况下减少停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，考生的回答基本上符合题目要求，能够解释大学做出这个决定的原因以及男生对此表示反对的原因。但是，在组织结构和论据方面还有改进的空间。建议考生在练习时注意提高论点之间的逻辑关联，并尝试使用更多具体事例来支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university is going to stop offering evening classes in many departments in next fall, but the man in the listening part doesn't like this idea, because firstly he says that most students prefer more classes, because it's a better way for them to learn more knowledge, and he knows a lot of students who feel opposite to the survey. Secondly, he thinks that most experienced teachers have been teaching the same thing for over 20 years, so they may be tired about teaching. Therefore, teaching assistants with no experience may be more enthusiastic than the experienced teachers, so they can communicate that excitement.

Corrected Answer: The university is going to stop offering evening classes in many departments instarting next fall(改为starting，使句子更自然), but the man in the listening part doesn't like this idea. becauseFirstly, he says that most students prefer moresmaller classes(改为smaller，更符合原文意思), because it's a better way for them to learn more knowledgegain knowledge(改为gain knowledge，使句子更自然), and he knows a lot of students who feel opposite tocontrary to the survey(改为contrary to，使句子更自然). Secondly, he thinks that most experienced teachers have been teaching the same thing for over 20 years, so they may be tired aboutof teaching(改为of，使句子更自然). Therefore, teaching assistants with no experience may be more enthusiastic than the experienced teachers, so they can communicate that excitement.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to stop offering evening classes in many departments starting next fall. However, the man in the listening part disagrees with this decision. Firstly, he believes that most students prefer smaller classes as it provides a better learning environment for them to gain knowledge. He also knows many students who feel contrary to the survey results. Secondly, he thinks that experienced teachers who have been teaching the same subject for over 20 years may become tired of teaching and lose their enthusiasm. In contrast, teaching assistants with less experience might be more passionate and eager to teach, which allows them to effectively communicate their excitement to the students. Therefore, the man argues that eliminating evening classes might not be the best solution for improving students' learning experience.

6.思维导图

- University's decision
  - Stop offering evening classes
  - Starting next fall

- Man's disagreement
  - Students prefer smaller classes
    - Better learning environment
    - Gain knowledge
  - Experienced teachers vs. teaching assistants
    - Experienced teachers may be tired of teaching
    - Teaching assistants may be more enthusiastic and passionate

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的语音清晰，但在某些地方稍微有些停顿。建议练习更连贯、流畅的发音，保持一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在解释男生不同意大学决定的原因时可以更加详细。例如，在提到小班课程有助于学生参与度时，可以进一步举例说明这种情况如何提高学生的学习效果。同时，在论述教师经验问题时，可以补充更多关于新老教师教学风格差异的观点。总体来说，尝试在回答中加入更多具体事例和论据以支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：The university administration decided to cancel the evening classes because of their small size and they believe that students might prefer experienced faculty members. The university administration decided to cancel the evening classes due to their small size, believing that students might prefer experienced faculty members.（将两个句子合并为一个更自然的句子，用逗号连接。）

原文：However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the decision because he believes that students actually prefer small classes as they can participate more actively and pay better attention which leads to a better learning experience. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the decision, arguing that students actually prefer small classes since they can participate more actively and pay better attention, leading to a better learning experience.（在句子中添加逗号以提高可读性，并使用“arguing”和“since”使句子更自然。）

原文：Another reason is the teacher with around 20 years of teaching experience might be less enthusiastic. Another reason is that a teacher with around 20 years of teaching experience might be less enthusiastic.（在“reason”后添加“that”以使句子更自然。）

原文：On the other hand, interacting with first-year teaching teacher could be more engaging and a better way to study. On the other hand, interacting with first-year teaching assistants could be more engaging and a more effective way to study.（将“teacher”改为“teaching assistants”，并使用“a more effective way”使句子更自然。）

根据修改建议，回答的修订版本（140词）：

The university administration decided to cancel the evening classes due to their small size, believing that students might prefer experienced faculty members. However, in the conversation, the man disagrees with the decision, arguing that students actually prefer small classes since they can participate more actively and pay better attention, leading to a better learning experience. Another reason is that a teacher with around 20 years of teaching experience might be less enthusiastic. On the other hand, interacting with first-year teaching assistants could be more engaging and a more effective way to study. That's why the man disagrees with this proposal.

6.思维导图

- University decision
  - Cancel evening classes
  - Small size
  - Preference for experienced faculty members

- Man's disagreement
  - Benefits of small classes
    - Active participation
    - Better attention
    - Improved learning experience
  - Teacher experience
    - Less enthusiasm in experienced teachers
    - More engaging interaction with first-year teaching assistants

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 2

• Topic Development: 2.5

• Language Use: 2

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 19

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer and more fluid speech, maintaining a consistent pace, and reducing the number of pauses. To enhance pronunciation, it is essential to practice speaking out loud and listening to native speakers. Additionally, working on intonation and stress patterns will help the speaker sound more natural.

4. Topic Development The response does address the university's decision and the man's disagreement, but it could be better organized and more coherent. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on clearly stating the main points from both the reading and listening passages, then provide specific examples or reasons to support these points. It is also important to make clear connections between ideas and ensure that the response flows logically from one point to another.

5. Language Use

Original: The school is going to stop offering the evening classes because the enrollment number has been declined over the past years, and that is mostly because the lacking of experienced faculty and students prefer the bigger classes. However, the women and the men in the listening do not suppose that it makes sense. That is because the small classes is still good, and it means students can participate in the classes more and actively involve in the classes more. They can be attend more attention and get more support from their teachers and classmates. Additionally, the survey does not make sense because still a lot of people that have the opposite idea to the service result. Some of them believe the teacher that full of experience has already retired and lose their enthusiasm, and especially for those teachers that teach the course for the first time, they would be very excited.

Corrected: The school is going to stop offering the evening classes because the enrollment number has been declined enrollment has declined (improved phrasing) over the past years, and that is mostly because the lacking of experienced faculty of a lack of experienced faculty (corrected grammar) and students preferthe bigger classes. larger classes. However, the women and the men in the listening do not suppose that it makes sense. the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision. (clarified subject) That is because the small classes is still good, small classes have their benefits, (improved phrasing) and it means students can participate more and be more actively involved in the classes. They can receive more attention and support from their teachers and classmates. Additionally, the survey's results may not be accurate because many people have the opposite opinion. Some believe that experienced teachers may have lost their enthusiasm, while those teaching a course for the first time would be more excited.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school plans to stop offering evening classes due to declining enrollment over the past years, primarily because of a lack of experienced faculty and students' preference for larger classes. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this decision, arguing that small classes have their benefits. He believes that students can participate more actively and receive greater attention and support from teachers and classmates in smaller settings. Furthermore, he questions the accuracy of the survey's results, as many people hold opposing views. Some individuals think that experienced teachers may have lost their enthusiasm over time, whereas those teaching a course for the first time are likely to be more excited and engaged.

6. Mind Map

- University's decision
  - Stop offering evening classes
  - Declining enrollment
  - Lack of experienced faculty
  - Preference for larger classes

- Man's disagreement
  - Benefits of small classes
    - Active participation
    - More attention and support
  - Questioning survey accuracy
    - Opposing opinions
    - Experienced teachers' enthusiasm
    - First-time teachers' excitement

7. Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达还算清晰，但有些地方需要改进。首先，在发音方面，有些单词发音不准确，需要加强练习。其次，在语速方面，要保持一致的速度，避免过快或过慢。最后，在停顿方面，要注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题所要求的信息，但在组织结构和论述方面还有待提高。首先，在组织结构上，可以先阐述学校的决定原因，然后再表达男生的反驳意见。其次，在论述方面，可以更详细地解释为什么学生更喜欢小班教学和年轻教师。例如，可以举一些具体的例子来说明年轻教师如何激发学生的学习兴趣。这样可以让回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the announcement that school wanted to stop the evening classes because school thinks most evening classes are taught by young teachers who are just graduated. According to the announcement, the school wants to stop offering evening classes because it believes that most of them are taught by inexperienced teachers who have recently graduated.（根据公告，学校想要停止提供晚间课程，因为它认为大多数这样的课程是由刚刚毕业的没有经验的老师教授的。）
And the students disagree with the decision. However, the students disagree with this decision.（然而，学生们不同意这个决定。）
He mentioned that most students prefer to have small classes because they can actively involve in the classes and gain more attention. He mentioned that most students prefer smaller classes as they can actively participate and receive more attention from the teacher.（他提到，大多数学生更喜欢小班教学，因为他们可以积极参与并从老师那里获得更多关注。）
He also mentioned that experienced teachers teach the same classes year and year. He also pointed out that experienced teachers teach the same courses year after year.（他还指出，有经验的老师年复一年地教授相同的课程。）
That will make them lose their enthusiasm. This may cause them to lose their enthusiasm for teaching.（这可能会导致他们失去教学的热情。）
If for the young teachers who just taught one or two times, they will be more excited and give more contentment to the students. In contrast, young teachers who have only taught a course once or twice are likely to be more enthusiastic and provide a more engaging learning experience for the students.（相比之下，只教过一两次课的年轻老师可能会更有热情，并为学生提供更吸引人的学习体验。）
That's why they disagree with that. That's why they disagree with the decision.（这就是他们不同意这个决定的原因。）

修订版（140词）：

According to the announcement, the school wants to stop offering evening classes because it believes that most of them are taught by inexperienced teachers who have recently graduated. However, the students disagree with this decision. The man mentioned that most students prefer smaller classes as they can actively participate and receive more attention from the teacher. He also pointed out that experienced teachers teach the same courses year after year, which may cause them to lose their enthusiasm for teaching. In contrast, young teachers who have only taught a course once or twice are likely to be more enthusiastic and provide a more engaging learning experience for the students. That's why they disagree with the decision.

6.思维导图

• Announcement

  • Stop evening classes
  • Inexperienced teachers

• Students' disagreement

  • Preference for smaller classes
    • Active participation
    • More attention from teacher
  • Experienced teachers
    • Repetitive teaching
    • Loss of enthusiasm
  • Young teachers
    • Enthusiasm and engagement

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3.5

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分: 27

3.表达 整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议在练习时注意保持语速的稳定性，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，能够清楚地阐述大学做出决定的原因以及男生对此表示反对的观点。但在提供支持或举例方面还有待加强。建议在练习时尝试多给出一些具体的例子或详细的解释，以便更充分地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

原文：Essentially, the university decides to cancel the evening classes because the number of students is too small, and students prefer to be taught by experienced professors according to the survey. Essentially, the university has decided to cancel evening classes due to low enrollment, as students reportedly prefer being taught by experienced professors, according to a survey.（将decides改为has decided，使时态更自然；将prefer to be taught改为prefer being taught，使表达更流畅。）

However, the man in the conversation disagrees with the decision for two reasons. Nonetheless, the man in the conversation opposes this decision for two main reasons.（将However改为Nonetheless，使过渡更自然；将disagrees with改为opposes，使表达更准确。）

The first reason is that students actually prefer small classes because they can participate more in the class with more attention and support, contributing to better learning experience. Firstly, he believes that students actually favor smaller classes as they can engage more actively and receive greater attention and support, leading to an enhanced learning experience.（将prefer改为favor，使词汇更丰富；将participate more改为engage more actively，使表达更生动。）

The second reason is that teaching assistants with less experience are actually with more excitement. Secondly, he argues that less experienced teaching assistants are often more enthusiastic.（将with more excitement改为more enthusiastic，使表达更准确。）

They can communicate with students about their teaching excitement better. They can better convey their enthusiasm for teaching to students.（将communicate with students about their teaching excitement改为convey their enthusiasm for teaching，使表达更简洁。）

However, with professors who have taught their class for 20 years, they are always tired. In contrast, professors who have been teaching the same subject for 20 years may become fatigued.（将they are always tired改为may become fatigued，使表达更准确。）

Therefore, these are the reasons why the man in the conversation disagrees with the proposal. Hence, these are the reasons why the man in the conversation opposes the university's decision.（将disagrees with the proposal改为opposes the university's decision，使表达更清晰。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

Essentially, the university has decided to cancel evening classes due to low enrollment, as students reportedly prefer being taught by experienced professors, according to a survey. Nonetheless, the man in the conversation opposes this decision for two main reasons. Firstly, he believes that students actually favor smaller classes as they can engage more actively and receive greater attention and support, leading to an enhanced learning experience. Secondly, he argues that less experienced teaching assistants are often more enthusiastic. They can better convey their enthusiasm for teaching to students. In contrast, professors who have been teaching the same subject for 20 years may become fatigued. Hence, these are the reasons why the man in the conversation opposes the university's decision.

6.思维导图

• University's decision

  • Cancel evening classes
  • Low enrollment
  • Survey: preference for experienced professors

• Man's disagreement

  • Reason 1: Favor smaller classes
    • Active engagement
    • Greater attention and support
    • Enhanced learning experience
  • Reason 2: Less experienced teaching assistants
    • More enthusiastic
    • Better convey enthusiasm to students
  • Contrast: Professors teaching for 20 years
    • Fatigued

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，说话者的语言流利，语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点符号的使用不当可能导致不恰当的停顿。拼写错误可能是发音不准确的结果。建议说话者在练习发音时注意正确的发音，并尝试在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，说话者提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回答，观点之间关系明确，举例和论证也较为充分。但仍有改进空间。建议说话者在练习时更加关注论点之间的逻辑关系，并尝试提供更多相关例子来支持观点，以提高话题发展能力。

5.语言使用

Original: The university decided to have no more evening classes because the evening classes are always taught by the graduate students. However, according to a survey that the students are preferred to teach by the experienced faculty members, in a conversation, the man disagreed with this plan. He believes that the small classes can help students get involved in the class more easily and then, in this way, they can grasp more advanced knowledge. And second, he feels opposite to the survey from the university. He believes that since the experienced faculty always do not have so many enthusiastic to the classes because they have taught the classes for so many times, on the other hand, the graduate students can always commute their excitement to the students since they are the first or second time to teach this class.

Corrected: The university decided to haveeliminate evening classes because the evening classes are always taught by the graduate students. However, according to a survey(根据一项调查), that students are preferred to teach byprefer being taught by experienced faculty members(学生更喜欢由有经验的教师教授). In a conversation, the man disagreed with this plan. He believes that small classes can help students get involved in the classlearning more easily and then(然后), in this way, they can grasp more advanced knowledge. And Second(第二), he feels opposite tocontrary to the survey from the university. He believes that since experienced faculty always do not have so many enthusiastic tomay lack enthusiasm for the classes because they have taught them for so many times(因为他们已经教了很多次). On the other hand, graduate students can always commutecommunicate their excitement to the students since they are teaching the class for the first or second time(因为他们是第一次或第二次教这门课).

Revised (140 words): The university decided to eliminate evening classes because evening classes are always taught by graduate students. However, according to a survey, students prefer being taught by experienced faculty members. In a conversation, the man disagreed with this plan. He believes that small classes can help students get involved in learning more easily and then, in this way, they can grasp more advanced knowledge. Second, he feels contrary to the survey from the university. He believes that since experienced faculty may lack enthusiasm for the classes because they have taught them for so many times. On the other hand, graduate students can always communicate their excitement to the students since they are teaching the class for the first or second time.

6.思维导图

- University decision
  - Eliminate evening classes
  - Taught by graduate students

- Survey
  - Students prefer experienced faculty members

- Man's disagreement
  - Small classes benefits
    - Easier involvement
    - Grasp advanced knowledge
  - Contrary to survey results
    - Experienced faculty may lack enthusiasm
    - Graduate students communicate excitement

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result from inappropriate pauses, and some spelling errors due to inaccurate pronunciation. To improve, the speaker should focus on practicing proper pronunciation and using appropriate pauses to enhance the clarity of their speech.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in fully addressing the reasons behind the university's decision and the man's disagreement. To enhance topic development, the speaker should ensure that they thoroughly explain both sides of the issue and provide more specific examples or evidence to support their points.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The letter stressed that the university would stop evening classes in campus as due to a steady decline in the enrollments in the evening classes, the main disagreed with the proposal. The passage stated that the university decided to stop offering evening classes on campus due to a steady decline in enrollment, but the man disagreed with this decision. (Clarified the subject and rephrased for better flow) First he preferred more classes so the students can participate more and be actually involved in a broader range of classes so they can search for more attention and support. He argued that smaller class sizes allowed students to participate more actively and receive greater attention and support from instructors. (Simplified and clarified the argument) One may argue that the evening classes are taught by teaching assistants, which is not experiments comparing with the faculties. It was mentioned that evening classes are often taught by teaching assistants, who may lack experience compared to faculty members. (Improved sentence structure and clarity) In contrast, the main points of this, experiment faculties who teach classes for 20 years is not increased ethic, but for those new students, graduate students, they can deliver their excitement and they can further provide a better teaching outcome to students. However, the man countered that experienced faculty members might not necessarily be more effective teachers than graduate students, who could bring enthusiasm and fresh perspectives to their classes. (Rephrased for clarity and coherence)

Revised Answer (140 words): The passage stated that the university decided to stop offering evening classes on campus due to a steady decline in enrollment, but the man disagreed with this decision. He argued that smaller class sizes allowed students to participate more actively and receive greater attention and support from instructors. It was mentioned that evening classes are often taught by teaching assistants, who may lack experience compared to faculty members. However, the man countered that experienced faculty members might not necessarily be more effective teachers than graduate students, who could bring enthusiasm and fresh perspectives to their classes. By addressing both sides of the issue and providing specific examples or evidence, the speaker can achieve a higher score in language use, resulting in a more coherent and well-developed response.

6.Mind Map

- University decision
  - Stop evening classes
  - Decline in enrollment

- Man's disagreement
  - Smaller class sizes
    - Active participation
    - Greater attention and support
  - Teaching assistants vs. faculty members
    - Experience vs. enthusiasm
    - Fresh perspectives

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方稍有停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议考生在练习时注意保持流利的语言表达，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，考生的回答较为连贯和有组织。然而，在解释大学做出决定的原因和男生不同意的原因时，可以更加明确地阐述观点，并给出更充分的支持或例子。建议在练习时关注提高论据的质量和组织结构，以便更好地回答问题。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university announced that there will be no more evening classes in the course schedule because firstly, the classes are always small and secondly, according to the survey that more students, because currently there are more teaching assistants teaching the evening class, so more people want the more experienced faculty to take part in it. The university announced that it would no longer offer evening classes in the course schedule due to two main reasons: small class sizes and students' preference for experienced faculty members, as indicated by a survey. (原句过长，表达不够简洁。修改后的句子更加简洁明了。)

The man disagrees with that because firstly, he thinks that small classes are better because they can actively be involved in the classes, The man disagrees with this decision, arguing that small classes are better as they allow students to be more actively involved, (句子结构和表达需要改进。修改后的句子更加清晰。)

secondly, he thinks that the survey is not true because he feels that lots of people opposite are opposite, and secondly, he questions the survey's accuracy since he believes many students hold opposing views. (原句表达不清晰，需要重新组织。修改后的句子更加明确。)

sometimes the faculties are tired of teaching that thing, and maybe new teaching assistants may be more enthusiastic and excited about teaching. He also points out that experienced faculty members may become tired of teaching the same subject, while new teaching assistants could be more enthusiastic and passionate about teaching. (原句表达不够准确，需要改进。修改后的句子更加清晰。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university announced that it would no longer offer evening classes in the course schedule due to two main reasons: small class sizes and students' preference for experienced faculty members, as indicated by a survey. The man disagrees with this decision, arguing that small classes are better as they allow students to be more actively involved, and secondly, he questions the survey's accuracy since he believes many students hold opposing views. He also points out that experienced faculty members may become tired of teaching the same subject, while new teaching assistants could be more enthusiastic and passionate about teaching.

6.思维导图

• University Decision

  • No more evening classes
  • Reasons
    • Small class sizes
    • Survey: students prefer experienced faculty members

• Man's Disagreement

  • Small classes are better
    • Active involvement
  • Questions survey's accuracy
    • Many students hold opposing views
  • Experienced faculty vs. new teaching assistants
    • Tired of teaching the same subject vs. enthusiastic and passionate

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体而言，发言者的表达相对清晰，语速较为稳定。但在某些地方，发言者的停顿不太合适，可能导致了标点符号的问题。此外，发言者在发音方面也存在一些不准确之处。建议发言者加强对停顿和发音的练习，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面做得较好，回答内容与问题相关，并提供了一定的支持和例证。然而，在组织结构上仍有改进空间。建议发言者在回答问题时更加注意逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密，并尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The professor opposed that evening classes will be cancelled in many departments and the reason that they are too small and some students want to be taught by experienced faculty instead of graduate students. Firstly, numerous students prefer to have smaller evening classes because they can be actively involved in the class and get more attention and support, which is a good way to learn. Secondly, those experienced teachers have been teaching the same subject for 20 years and they may be enthusiastic to teach, but for those graduated students, it's their first or second time to teach so they are excited and they tend to communicate their excitement with the people they taught. Thank you for your attention.

Corrected: The professor man opposed that the idea that evening classes will be cancelled in many departments(改为“the idea that”使句子更自然), and the reason that is they are too small and some students want to be taught by experienced faculty instead of graduate students. Firstly, numerous students prefer to have smaller evening classes because they can be actively involved in the class and get more attention and support, which is a good way to learn. Secondly, those experienced teachers have been teaching the same subject for 20 years(此处无需修改), and they may be enthusiastic to teach(此处无需修改), but for those graduated graduate students, it's their first or second time to teaching so they are excited and they tend to communicate their excitement with the people they taught teach. Thank you for your attention.(将“graduated”改为“graduate”，将“to”改为“teaching”，将“taught”改为“teach”使句子更自然)

Revised (140 words): The man opposed the idea that evening classes will be cancelled in many departments, and the reason is that they are too small, and some students want to be taught by experienced faculty instead of graduate students. Firstly, numerous students prefer smaller evening classes because they can actively participate in the class and receive more individual attention and support, which enhances their learning experience. Secondly, although experienced teachers have been teaching the same subject for many years and may be enthusiastic, graduate students who are teaching for the first or second time bring excitement and fresh perspectives to the classroom. They tend to communicate their enthusiasm effectively with the students they teach. In conclusion, the man disagrees with the university's decision because he believes that smaller classes and graduate student instructors offer unique benefits to students' learning experiences.

6.思维导图

- Man's opposition
  - Evening classes cancellation
  - Reasons
    - Small class size
    - Experienced faculty preference

- Benefits of small classes
  - Active participation
  - Individual attention and support

- Graduate students vs. experienced teachers
  - Enthusiasm and fresh perspectives
  - Effective communication of excitement

- Conclusion
  - Disagreement with the university's decision
  - Unique benefits of smaller classes and graduate student instructors

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速一致，仅有少量停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容连贯、组织良好，观点之间关系明确，并给出了足够的支持和例证。为了进一步提高话题发展能力，建议发言者在阐述观点时尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词汇，使得论述更加紧密。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university decides to stop offering evening classes which are always taught by graduate students due to decline in enrollment in evening classes, caused by that people want to be taught by experienced members. The boy isn't in favor of this idea, because he thinks it's a better way to learn, you can be more actively involved and get more attention and support. Additionally, compared with the experienced teachers with less enthusiasm, the graduate teaching assistants are more exciting and you can communicate that excitement with them.

Corrected Answer: The university decides has decided(决定的过去时态) to stop offering evening classes, which are always taught by graduate students, due to decline a decline(需要加定冠词) in enrollment in evening classes. This is caused by that people want students' preference(更自然的表达) for being taught by experienced faculty members. The man isn't in favor of this idea because he thinks it's a better way to learn; you can be more actively involved and get more attention and support. Additionally, compared with experienced teachers who may have less enthusiasm, graduate teaching assistants are more engaging, and you can share their excitement during the learning process.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has decided to stop offering evening classes, which are predominantly taught by graduate students, due to a decline in enrollment. This decision is based on students' preference for being taught by experienced faculty members rather than graduate teaching assistants. However, the man disagrees with this decision as he believes smaller class sizes offer a better learning environment where students can be more actively involved and receive more attention and support from instructors. Furthermore, he argues that graduate teaching assistants may be more engaging and enthusiastic about their subjects compared to experienced teachers who might have lost their passion for teaching over the years. In his opinion, this enthusiasm can positively impact the students' learning experience, making the classes more enjoyable and effective.

6.思维导图

- University's decision
  - Stop offering evening classes
  - Taught by graduate students
  - Decline in enrollment
  - Students' preference for experienced faculty members

- Man's disagreement
  - Benefits of small class sizes
    - Active involvement
    - More attention and support
  - Graduate teaching assistants
    - Engaging and enthusiastic
    - Positive impact on learning experience

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数

22. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答内容基本清晰，但语速较快，偶尔有停顿。建议在练习时注意语速和发音的准确性，尽量保持流利且连贯的表达。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容较为简单，没有充分展开论述。建议在练习时尝试提供更多具体的例子和论据来支持你的观点，并注意组织结构的清晰性。同时，在回答问题时要确保紧扣题目要求，避免偏离主题。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university plans to stop offering evening classes in the college or begin next fall. The university plans to stop offering evening classes starting next fall.（删除多余的词汇，使句子更简洁。）
Because the evening classes are too small, most of the evening classes are taught by teaching assistants who are usually graduate students. This is because evening classes have low enrollment and are mostly taught by graduate teaching assistants.（重新组织句子结构，使其更清晰。）
The women and men in the conversation are disagree with this proposal. The man and woman in the conversation disagree with this decision.（修改语法错误。）
Firstly, they think the small class is a better way to learn the knowledge and it's a good way for students to make friends in the class. First, they believe that smaller classes provide a better learning environment and foster closer relationships among students.（使用更高级的词汇和表达。）
Secondly, the professor may be teaching too long time in the college, like 20 years or more, who will feel so tired, but a teaching assistant is the first time to teach, so they will be more exciting and more careful to students. Secondly, they argue that professors with many years of teaching experience may become less enthusiastic, whereas teaching assistants who are new to teaching can bring more excitement and attentiveness to the classroom.（重新组织句子结构，使其更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The university plans to stop offering evening classes starting next fall. This is because evening classes have low enrollment and are mostly taught by graduate teaching assistants. The man and woman in the conversation disagree with this decision. First, they believe that smaller classes provide a better learning environment and foster closer relationships among students. Secondly, they argue that professors with many years of teaching experience may become less enthusiastic, whereas teaching assistants who are new to teaching can bring more excitement and attentiveness to the classroom. They also emphasize the benefits of having a more engaging learning experience with newer instructors who are passionate about their subject matter. Overall, the students feel that the university's decision to discontinue evening classes may not be in the best interest of learners who value smaller class sizes and enthusiastic instructors.

6.思维导图

- University decision
  - Stop offering evening classes
  - Starting next fall
  - Reasons
    - Low enrollment
    - Taught by graduate teaching assistants

- Conversation
  - Man and woman disagree
  - Benefits of smaller classes
    - Better learning environment
    - Closer relationships among students
  - Teaching experience vs. enthusiasm
    - Professors may become less enthusiastic over time
    - Teaching assistants bring excitement and attentiveness to the classroom

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2.5

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流畅度和语速较为稳定，但偶尔会有停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议发言者注意以下几点：1) 在练习时，尽量减少不必要的停顿，让语言更加流畅；2) 注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误；3) 多加练习，提高自信心。

4.话题发展 The speaker provides a coherent response, explaining the university's decision and the man's disagreement with it. However, there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. The speaker could have elaborated more on the reasons behind the university's decision, such as the preference for experienced faculty members and the decline in enrollment. Additionally, the speaker could have provided more examples or details to support the man's disagreement, such as his belief that smaller classes lead to better learning experiences and that less experienced teachers may be more enthusiastic about teaching. To improve topic development, the speaker should focus on providing a more well-rounded response with clearer connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples.

6.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the university will decide to cancel evening classes, this is because it has declined in enrollment in evening classes. The university has decided to cancel evening classes due to a decline in enrollment. (将句子进行了简化，使其更自然流畅) Furthermore, students prefer to take classes taught by experienced faculty members. Moreover, students have a preference for classes taught by experienced faculty members. (使用了更高级的词汇) However, the man disagrees with this idea. First of all, he believes that it can actively involve and get more attention, which is the best way to learn. Besides, he believes that it can make you more exciting and communicate with students about this excitement. Additionally, he thinks that less experienced teachers can be more engaging and better at communicating their enthusiasm to students. (改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表达更清晰) Therefore, the man opposes this idea that decides to cancel evening classes.

Revised Answer (140 words): The university has decided to cancel evening classes due to a decline in enrollment. Moreover, students have a preference for classes taught by experienced faculty members. However, the man disagrees with this decision for several reasons. Firstly, he believes that smaller class sizes allow for more active involvement and individual attention from teachers, which ultimately leads to a better learning experience. Additionally, he thinks that less experienced teachers can be more engaging and better at communicating their enthusiasm to students. In his opinion, an experienced teacher may have taught the same subject for many years and could potentially lack enthusiasm, whereas a less experienced teacher might bring a fresh perspective and excitement to the class. Therefore, the man opposes the university's decision to cancel evening classes.

7.思维导图

- University's Decision
  - Cancel evening classes
  - Decline in enrollment
  - Preference for experienced faculty members

- Man's Disagreement
  - Smaller class sizes
    - Active involvement
    - Individual attention
  - Less experienced teachers
    - Engaging
    - Communicating enthusiasm

8.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更流利地说话，减少不必要的停顿。同时注意正确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，阐述了大学做出决定的原因以及男生对此表示不同意的观点。但在组织结构和论述方面还有提升空间。建议在回答时更加明确地陈述观点，并在论述过程中加强逻辑性和连贯性，以便让听众更容易理解。

5.语言使用

Original: The university administration announced that starting next fall, the university will stop offering evening classes in many departments. The university administration has announced that starting from next fall, the university will no longer offer evening classes in many departments. (将stop改为no longer offer，使句子更自然。)

Original: The man in the recording doesn't think that the announcement makes sense. The man in the conversation believes that the announcement doesn't make sense. (将recording改为conversation，使句子更自然。)

Original: Firstly, he thinks that students actually prefer to study in those evening classes because those classes are way more active and involved, and it is a way better method for students to learn. First, he argues that students actually prefer evening classes as they are more engaging and interactive, providing a better learning experience. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

Original: And secondly, the man mentions that lots of people around him actually like to take classes offered by graduate students because they think that those students are way more excited and because faculty members have taught those classes for so many years, their classes tend to be more boring. Secondly, the man points out that many people he knows prefer classes taught by graduate students as they believe these instructors are more enthusiastic. In contrast, faculty members who have taught the same subjects for years may lack enthusiasm, making their classes less engaging. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university administration has announced that starting from next fall, the university will no longer offer evening classes in many departments. The man in the conversation believes that the announcement doesn't make sense. First, he argues that students actually prefer evening classes as they are more engaging and interactive, providing a better learning experience. Secondly, the man points out that many people he knows prefer classes taught by graduate students as they believe these instructors are more enthusiastic. In contrast, faculty members who have taught the same subjects for years may lack enthusiasm, making their classes less engaging.

6.思维导图

• University administration

  • Announcement
    • No more evening classes

• Man's disagreement

  • Reasons
    • Engaging and interactive classes
    • Enthusiastic graduate students
    • Faculty members' lack of enthusiasm

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确性，尤其是在一些单词的发音上。同时，尝试在句子之间保持流畅度，避免过多的停顿。

4.话题发展 发言者对于大学决定和男生反对的原因进行了解释，但在论述过程中有些地方缺乏连贯性。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注意逻辑顺序和衔接词的使用，以便让听众更容易理解观点。此外，在提供支持或举例时，可以尝试给出更具体和详细的信息，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the announcement, the university decided to stop offering evening classes in many departments from next fall. Starting from next fall, the university has decided to discontinue evening classes in several departments.（将原句中的“从下个秋天开始”改为“从下个秋天起”，使句子更自然。）

This is because there are few students choose to enroll in these classes and the teacher of these classes is inexperienced. This decision was made due to low enrollment rates and the inexperience of the teachers in these classes.（将原句中的“因为有很少的学生选择这些课程，而这些课程的老师没有经验”改为“这个决定是由于低报名率和这些课程的老师缺乏经验”，使句子更自然。）

The man opposes this policy. The man disagrees with this decision.（将原句中的“反对这个政策”改为“不同意这个决定”，使句子更自然。）

To begin with, he points out that a class with few students make it more likely for students to participate in the class, which leads to better academic performance. Firstly, he argues that smaller class sizes encourage student participation, leading to improved academic performance.（将原句中的“首先，他指出一个少数学生的课程更容易让学生参与课堂，从而提高学术表现”改为“首先，他认为较小的班级规模鼓励学生参与，从而提高学术表现”，使句子更自然。）

Moreover, he argues that experience is not very important. Additionally, he contends that experience is not crucial.（将原句中的“此外，他认为经验不是很重要”改为“此外，他认为经验不是关键”，使句子更自然。）

A class with less experience will be more excited and the excitement will bring to the people who Inexperienced teachers may be more enthusiastic, and this enthusiasm can be contagious to the students.（将原句中的“一个经验较少的课程会更兴奋，这种兴奋会传给人们”改为“没有经验的老师可能会更有热情，这种热情可能会感染到学生”，使句子更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

Starting from next fall, the university has decided to discontinue evening classes in several departments. This decision was made due to low enrollment rates and the inexperience of the teachers in these classes. The man disagrees with this decision. Firstly, he argues that smaller class sizes encourage student participation, leading to improved academic performance. Additionally, he contends that experience is not crucial. Inexperienced teachers may be more enthusiastic, and this enthusiasm can be contagious to the students.

6.思维导图

• University Decision

  • Discontinue evening classes
  • Next fall
  • Low enrollment rates
  • Inexperienced teachers

• Man's Disagreement

  • Smaller class sizes
    • Encourage participation
    • Improved academic performance
  • Experience not crucial
    • Enthusiasm of inexperienced teachers
    • Contagious to students

7.关键词