TOEFL TPO 24 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the student’s proposal. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

27. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are a few instances of awkward phrasing and pauses. To improve, the speaker should work on maintaining a consistent pace and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help minimize any spelling errors that may arise from mispronunciations.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details to further strengthen the argument. For instance, the speaker could mention specific examples of the new food options available at the coffeehouse or share personal experiences that demonstrate the benefits of studying in a quiet environment like the coffeehouse.

5.Language Use

Original Answer: The woman opposes the student's proposal for two reasons. Firstly, the students complain that the coffee house is too empty and it is not a popular place for students, but that is just the reason why the woman likes it. She thinks it is a great place for studying and it is even better than the library because there is no noise, there is lower noise. What's more, the woman mentioned that recently the food quality has been improved a lot due to a new manager introduced there, and there will be a larger variety of choices for the students.

Corrected Answer: The woman opposes the student's proposal for two reasons. Firstly, the students complain that the coffee house is too empty and it is not a popular place for students (change "students" to "them"), but that is just the reason why the woman likes it. She thinks it is an excellent (change "great" to "excellent") place for studying and it is even better than the library because there is no noise, there is lower noise (remove repetition). Furthermore (change "What's more" to "Furthermore"), the woman mentioned that recently the food quality has significantly (add "significantly") improved due to a new manager introduced there, and there will be a larger variety of choices for the students.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman opposes the student's proposal for two main reasons. Firstly, she disagrees with their complaint about the coffee house being too empty and unpopular among them; in fact, she appreciates its quiet atmosphere. She believes it is an excellent place for studying, even surpassing the library in terms of tranquility. Secondly, she refutes the claim about poor food quality, stating that there have been significant improvements recently due to a new manager's introduction. This change has not only enhanced the taste but also expanded the variety of choices available to students. In conclusion, the woman values the coffee house as a peaceful study environment and acknowledges the recent positive changes in food quality, which is why she disagrees with the proposal to close it.

6.Mind Map

- Woman's opinion
  - Opposes proposal
  - Two reasons
    - Quiet atmosphere
      - Excellent for studying
      - Better than library
    - Improved food quality
      - New manager
      - Enhanced taste
      - Expanded variety of choices

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

在表达方面，整体上说得比较清楚，但有时候语速稍快，需要注意适当放慢语速。此外，尽量减少在句子之间的停顿。在发音方面，有些单词发音不够准确，需要加强练习。

4.话题发展

在话题发展方面，回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的信息，但可以更加有条理地组织。例如，在提到学生对咖啡馆的看法时，可以先总结一下她的观点，然后再详细解释原因。此外，在给出原因时，尽量提供更多具体的例子和细节来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The student in the letter suggests that the university should close the campus coffeehouse. The student in the letter proposes that the university close the campus coffeehouse.（建议使用"proposes"替换"suggests"，使表达更准确。）

But the woman in the listening part doesn't like this idea, because firstly she says that due to lack of customers, it's really a good place for her to study, such as dealing with paper for classes, preparing for final exams and doing something that are not allowed to do in library. However, the woman in the listening section disagrees with this proposal, stating that because of its low customer traffic, it serves as an ideal study spot for her. She can work on class assignments, prepare for final exams, and engage in activities not permitted in the library.（改进句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。）

Secondly, she thinks that food of the campus coffeehouse is a lot better than before, because this campus coffeehouse has a new manager who brings a new quality of food, which is quite delicious for them. Additionally, she believes that the food at the campus coffeehouse has significantly improved due to a new manager who has introduced higher-quality food options that are quite delicious.（改进句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student in the letter proposes that the university close the campus coffeehouse. However, the woman in the listening section disagrees with this proposal, stating that because of its low customer traffic, it serves as an ideal study spot for her. She can work on class assignments, prepare for final exams, and engage in activities not permitted in the library. Additionally, she believes that the food at the campus coffeehouse has significantly improved due to a new manager who has introduced higher-quality food options that are quite delicious. In conclusion, the woman opposes the proposal to close the campus coffeehouse because it provides a quiet study environment and offers better food options under new management.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Close campus coffeehouse

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Ideal study spot
    • Low customer traffic
    • Activities not allowed in library
  • Improved food quality
    • New manager
    • Delicious options

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语速较为稳定，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高语言流畅度。此外，尽量减少发音错误，以免影响听众理解。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者基本上提供了一个连贯且组织良好的回应，并对女士的观点进行了解释。然而，可以进一步完善回应的结构和逻辑性。例如，在提到女士对食物质量改善的看法时，可以更清晰地说明新经理如何改进食物质量。此外，在总结时，可以更明确地表示女士反对关闭咖啡馆的原因。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the students think the university should close the campus coffee house. The students propose that the university close the campus coffee house.（建议使用更正式的表达方式，如“propose”代替“think”。）
The first reason is because students actually don't use their campus coffee house. One reason is that students seemingly don't utilize the campus coffee house.（使用更高级的词汇，如“utilize”代替“use”。）
And also the food is not very good in this coffee house. Additionally, the food quality at the coffee house is reportedly poor.（使用更高级的连接词，如“additionally”，并改进句子结构。）
However, in the conversation, the woman doesn't like this idea. Nonetheless, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this proposal.（使用更正式的表达方式，如“disagrees with this proposal”代替“doesn't like this idea”。）
And she says this coffee house is actually she very like it because it's never crowded. She states that she appreciates the coffee house precisely because it's never crowded.（改进句子结构和语法。）
And she thinks this is a good place for study because it's not noisy. She believes it's an ideal study spot due to its quiet atmosphere.（使用更高级的词汇和表达。）
And she prefers this house rather than the library because she and her friend actually use it to prepare their final exam. She favors the coffee house over the library, as she and her friends often prepare for their final exams there.（改进句子结构和语法。）
And also she don't think this food is not delicious now. Moreover, she doesn't believe the food is unpalatable anymore.（使用更高级的词汇，如“unpalatable”代替“not delicious”。）
This is because there are a new manager here who focus on the quality of food. This is attributed to a new manager who prioritizes food quality.（改进句子结构和语法。）
And she even adds unhealthy food for them. The manager has even introduced healthier food options for students.（修正原文中的错误表述。）
Therefore, the woman doesn't like this idea. Hence, the woman opposes the proposal to close the coffee house.（使用更正式的表达方式，如“opposes the proposal”代替“doesn't like this idea”。）

修订版（140字）：

The students propose that the university close the campus coffee house. One reason is that students seemingly don't utilize the campus coffee house. Additionally, the food quality at the coffee house is reportedly poor. Nonetheless, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this proposal. She states that she appreciates the coffee house precisely because it's never crowded. She believes it's an ideal study spot due to its quiet atmosphere. She favors the coffee house over the library, as she and her friends often prepare for their final exams there. Moreover, she doesn't believe the food is unpalatable anymore. This is attributed to a new manager who prioritizes food quality. The manager has even introduced healthier food options for students. Hence, the woman opposes the proposal to close the coffee house.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Close campus coffee house
  - Reasons
    - Underutilized
    - Poor food quality

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with proposal
  - Reasons
    - Never crowded
      - Ideal study spot
      - Quiet atmosphere
    - Better than library
      - Study for final exams
    - Improved food quality
      - New manager
      - Healthier options

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这个回答的语速和发音大致清晰，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习口语时注意保持连贯流畅的语速，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在表述原因时有些重复。建议在练习时注意用更多不同的词汇和表达方式来阐述观点，以增强说辞的说服力。同时，在提供支持或例子时尽量详细说明，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The woman holds his opinion that closing the campus coffee halls is not suitable for two reasons. The woman disagrees with the proposal to close the campus coffeehouse for two reasons. (修改了句子结构和词汇，使表达更自然。) Firstly, he thinks that the new coffee house is not crowded and it is a great place for studying and working. First, she believes that the uncrowded coffeehouse provides an ideal study and work environment. (修改了句子结构和词汇，使表达更准确。) She frequently brings her laptop there and works there. She often takes her laptop and works there. (删除了重复的表达。) She thinks that the coffee house is not noisy which is good for doing some work. She appreciates the quiet atmosphere, which is conducive to productivity. (使用了更高级的词汇和表达方式。) And he prefers the coffee house to the library and he often works in the coffee house to study for the final exam. The second reason is that the food is better now. They change a new manager and there are some delicious food there and they often give you some delicious food and snacks to provide delicious food.

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the proposal to close the campus coffeehouse for two reasons. First, she believes that the uncrowded coffeehouse provides an ideal study and work environment. She often takes her laptop and works there, appreciating the quiet atmosphere, which is conducive to productivity. She even prefers the coffeehouse to the library for studying, especially during final exams. The second reason is the improvement in food quality. With a new manager in place, the coffeehouse now offers a variety of delicious and healthy food options. In conclusion, the woman opposes closing the campus coffeehouse because it serves as a valuable study space and has improved its food offerings under new management.

6.思维导图

- Disagrees with proposal
  - Uncrowded coffeehouse
    - Ideal study and work environment
    - Quiet atmosphere
    - Conducive to productivity
  - Improved food quality
    - New manager
    - Delicious and healthy options

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数 总分：15

3.表达 从表达方面来看，这个回答的语言流利度和连贯性有待提高。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，避免过多的停顿和拖长音节。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。在练习过程中，可以尝试朗读一些英文文章，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，这个回答并没有明确回答问题，没有涉及到女生对于学生提议的看法及其原因。建议在准备回答时先理清思路，确保回答内容与问题紧密相关，并给出足够的支持或例子。可以尝试使用提纲来组织思路，确保回答内容条理清晰。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: In general, I believe that television has exerted a positive influence on society. The woman disagrees with the student's proposal to close the campus coffeehouse. (原文没有回答问题，这里修改为针对问题的回答。) First and foremost, television significantly enhances the dissemination of information and fosters communication. One reason is that she finds it a great place to study since it's never crowded and not noisy. (修改为与问题相关的原因。) For instance, news programs provide timely updates on global events, enabling viewers to stay informed. Through television, individuals gain broader exposure to global affairs and societal events. Secondly, television serves as a vital source of entertainment. Another reason is that she believes the food quality has improved under the new manager, who has introduced healthier options. (再次修改为与问题相关的原因。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman disagrees with the student's proposal to close the campus coffeehouse. One reason is that she finds it a great place to study since it's never crowded and not noisy. She prefers it over the library because she can eat while working there, which is not allowed in the library. Many other students also choose the coffeehouse as their study spot, especially during final exams. Another reason is that she believes the food quality has improved under the new manager, who has introduced healthier options. The woman thinks that the student who wrote the proposal hasn't visited the coffeehouse recently, as she found the food to be delicious during her last visit. Overall, the woman values the coffeehouse as a quiet study space and appreciates the recent improvements in food quality.

6.思维导图

- Disagrees with proposal
  - Great place to study
    - Not crowded
    - Not noisy
    - Eating allowed
    - Preferred over library
  - Improved food quality
    - New manager
    - Healthier options
    - Delicious food

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发音清晰，语速适中。但在某些地方，停顿稍显不自然。建议在练习时注意自然的停顿和连贯的发音。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了所需的观点和原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如先陈述女生的观点，再分条列举她给出的理由。此外，在提供支持或例子时，可以尝试更具体地描述以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: The letter proposes that the university should close the campus coffeehouse. The first reason is that students are not using the coffeehouse because there are always a lot of empty tables. Also, the food at the coffeehouse is not very satisfactory. However, the woman in the conversation doesn't agree with it. Firstly, she thinks that the coffeehouse is never crowded and noisy. Therefore, it is a great place for students to study for their final exams. Also, students can eat in the coffeehouse. So, it is better than the school library. Besides, she argues that because of the new manager, there has been a lot of improvements about the coffeehouse. For example, the food is healthy and delicious now. Well, that's why she doesn't like this idea.

Corrected: The letter proposes suggests ("suggests" 更自然) that the university should close the campus coffeehouse. The first reason is that students are not using the coffeehouse because there are always a lot of empty tables. Also, Moreover, ("Moreover" 更适合连接句子) the food at the coffeehouse is not very satisfactory. However, the woman in the conversation doesn't agree with it. Firstly, she thinks that the coffeehouse is never crowded and noisy. Therefore, it is a great place for students to study for their final exams. Also, Additionally, ("Additionally" 更适合连接句子) students can eat in the coffeehouse, making it So, it is better than the school library. Besides, she argues that because of the new manager, there have been a lot of improvements about significant enhancements to ("significant enhancements to" 更准确地描述改进) the coffeehouse. For example, the food is healthy and delicious now. Well, (删除 "Well," 以保持语言流畅) that's why she doesn't like this idea.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The letter suggests that the university should close the campus coffeehouse due to low student usage and unsatisfactory food quality. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. She believes that the coffeehouse's uncrowded and quiet atmosphere makes it an ideal study location for students preparing for their final exams. Additionally, unlike the school library, students can eat while studying at the coffeehouse. She also mentions that significant enhancements have been made to the coffeehouse under its new management, resulting in healthier and more delicious food options. These improvements have made the coffeehouse a more appealing place for students to visit and study. Therefore, she opposes the idea of closing down the campus coffeehouse.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Uncrowded and quiet atmosphere
    - Ideal study location
    - Final exams preparation
  - Eating while studying
    - Advantage over the school library
  - New management
    - Significant enhancements
      - Healthier food options
      - Improved taste

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3.5

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意连贯性和自然的停顿，以提高发音的准确性。

4.话题发展 回答内容完整，结构清晰，观点之间的联系明确，且提供了足够的支持和例子。在这方面已经做得很好，继续保持。

5.语言使用

原文：It's not good to end the coffee house. It's not a good idea to close the coffee house.（“end”不是最佳词汇选择，用“close”更自然。）

修订版：

The student proposed to close the campus coffee house because there are not many students using the coffee house, it's just a waste of space, and the food there was not that great. The woman is opposed to this proposal because first of all, she likes it because it's never crowded, it's good to study there for example to work on a paper. She prefers it to the library because she could eat there while working on her work. And furthermore, the food there is better than what it is in the past. It's a lot better now because the coffee house has a new manager now and she improved the quality of the food. And there are many healthy food options on the menu now, so it's not good to end the coffee house it's not a good idea to close the coffee house（“end”不是最佳词汇选择，用“close”更自然。）.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student proposed closing the campus coffee house due to its low usage, wasted space, and subpar food quality. However, the woman disagrees with this proposal for several reasons. Firstly, she appreciates that it is never crowded, providing an ideal study environment for tasks such as writing papers. She even prefers it over the library since she can eat while working there. Moreover, she argues that the food quality has significantly improved compared to before, thanks to a new manager who has enhanced the menu and introduced healthier options. Therefore, she believes that it is not a good idea to close the coffee house, as it serves as a valuable study space and now offers better food choices for students.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Close campus coffee house
  • Low usage
  • Wasted space
  • Subpar food quality

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal
  • Reasons
    • Never crowded
    • Ideal study environment
    • Food quality improvement
      • New manager
      • Healthier options

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 从交付方面来看，回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议在练习口语时注意保持连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中的关键信息，并对女生的观点进行了解释。然而，在组织结构上可以进一步优化。建议在回答时先简要陈述女生的观点，然后再详细解释她提出的理由。此外，在提供支持或例子时，尽量确保信息准确无误。

5.语言使用

原文：The student proposes that the university should close the campus coffee, because first, there was a lot of empty space, and that is a waste of space, because they can be used to do other things, and second, the food there doesn't taste good. The student proposes that the university should close the campus coffeehouse because, firstly, there is a lot of empty space which could be utilized for other purposes, and secondly, the food there is not tasty.（将"campus coffee"改为"campus coffeehouse"，将过去时态改为现在时态，简化句子结构。）

Well, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this argument. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this proposal.（将"Well"改为"However"，将"argument"改为"proposal"。）

First, he thinks the place there was not crowded and noisy. Firstly, she believes that the place is not crowded and noisy.（将"he"改为"she"，将过去时态改为现在时态。）

She and her friends already studied there, and they can eat something there just like what they do in the library, She and her friends often study there and can enjoy snacks while studying, similar to what they do in the library,（修改句子结构，使其更自然。）

and second, the food there is better now, and secondly, the food quality has improved,（简化句子结构。）

because the manager improved the quality of the food and added some healthy fruits next to it, as the new manager has made some improvements and added healthier options,（修改句子结构，使其更自然。）

so he disagrees with the argument. so she disagrees with the proposal.（将"he"改为"she"，将"argument"改为"proposal"。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

The student proposes that the university should close the campus coffeehouse because, firstly, there is a lot of empty space which could be utilized for other purposes, and secondly, the food there is not tasty. However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, she believes that the place is not crowded and noisy. She and her friends often study there and can enjoy snacks while studying, similar to what they do in the library. Secondly, the food quality has improved, as the new manager has made some improvements and added healthier options. Therefore, she disagrees with the proposal.

6.思维导图

- Student's Proposal
  - Close campus coffeehouse
  - Reasons
    - Empty space
    - Poor food quality

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Not crowded and noisy
    - Good study environment
    - Snacks while studying
  - Improved food quality
    - New manager
    - Healthier options

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，你的发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现一些不自然的停顿。为了提高你的发音，请多加练习，尤其是在句子之间的连接处。此外，注意保持语速的一致性，以便让听众更容易理解你的观点。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement. Make sure to clearly state the woman's opinion at the beginning of your response and then provide the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. Also, try to use more transitional phrases to connect your ideas and make your response flow more smoothly. Finally, consider providing more specific examples or details from the listening passage to further support your points and strengthen your response.

6.语言使用

Original Answer: Well, the student, the student suggested that the university should close the coffee campus of the coffee house. Because the students don't use it, and so it is a waste of space, and the food there is not good. The student proposed that the university should close the campus coffeehouse since it is underutilized, resulting in wasted space, and offers poor-quality food. (将原句中的重复词汇删除，并使用更高级的词汇和更自然的语言表达)

In the conversation, the woman disagrees with this idea, because the coffee house is narrow-crowded, so it is a great place to study for her, and she can eat there, unlike the libraries don't allow it. In the conversation, the woman disagrees with this proposal as she finds the uncrowded coffeehouse an ideal study spot where she can also eat, unlike in libraries where eating is not allowed. (修正了语法错误，提高了句子结构和词汇的使用)

So, it is a great place to study. In addition, the food in the past is not good, but the new managers improve the quality of the food, the food becomes healthful, and it not only tastes good, but also... Therefore, she considers it an excellent study location. Moreover, although the food quality was poor in the past, under new management it has improved significantly; now offering healthier options that taste good as well. (改进了句子结构，使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的语言表达)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The student proposed that the university should close the campus coffeehouse since it is underutilized, resulting in wasted space, and offers poor-quality food. In the conversation, the woman disagrees with this proposal as she finds the uncrowded coffeehouse an ideal study spot where she can also eat, unlike in libraries where eating is not allowed. Therefore, she considers it an excellent study location. Moreover, although the food quality was poor in the past, under new management it has improved significantly; now offering healthier options that taste good as well.

7.思维导图

- Student's Proposal
  - Close campus coffeehouse
  - Underutilized
  - Wasted space
  - Poor-quality food

- Woman's Disagreement
  - Uncrowded coffeehouse
    - Ideal study spot
    - Eating allowed (unlike libraries)
  - Improved food quality
    - New management
    - Healthier options
    - Tastes good

8.关键词