TOEFL TPO 70 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更自然、流畅的发音和语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在解释女士持有这一观点的原因时，可以更详细地说明。例如，在提到图书馆空间不足时，可以具体描述新书如何受到影响；在谈到电子图书的便利性时，可以进一步解释为什么在线查阅对学生更有帮助。通过提供更多具体细节和例子，可以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The plan is that the school will implement the policy that the books that have not been borrowed in the past five years will be removed from the library and make the room for the new books and bring the old books into the Internet and students can check them at their leisure time. The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience.（将原句拆分为多个子句，使表达更清晰。）

The women agree with the plan, there are two primary reasons. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons.（改进语法和表达。）

One reason is that she thinks that the shelf is pretty crowded, so piles of new books have no room to lay. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books.（改进词汇和表达。）

Second reason is that it is easier to use the old books which are not frequently being borrowed from the library. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online.（改进语法和表达。）

We can stay in the draw room and it is easier to watch them and check them from the Internet. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.（改进词汇和表达。）

修订版（140字）：

The plan involves the university implementing a policy to remove books that have not been borrowed in the past five years from the library, creating space for new books, and digitizing old books for students to access online at their convenience. The woman agrees with the plan for two main reasons. One reason is that she believes the shelves are quite crowded, leaving no space for stacks of new books. The second reason is that it would be more convenient to access infrequently borrowed old books online. Students can stay in their dorm rooms and easily view and check these books on the internet.

6.思维导图

- Plan
  - University policy
  - Remove books (not borrowed in 5 years)
  - Create space for new books
  - Digitize old books

- Woman's opinion
  - Agrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Crowded shelves
    - Convenience of online access

- Students' benefits
  - Access from dorm rooms
  - Easy viewing and checking online

7.关键词