TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the article. Briefly summarize the plan then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3.5

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 24

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。建议在练习发音时注意语速和停顿，以便让听众更容易理解。此外，尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持流畅的语言表达。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步改进。首先，在总结阅读材料时，请确保提供足够的详细信息以便听众了解背景。其次，在解释女学生观点时，请确保提供充足的支持和例子来证明她的观点。最后，注意在回答中保持一致性和逻辑性，以便让听众更容易跟随你的思路。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading material, there is an announcement that the university wants to afford the students' rental car at a discounted rate. In the reading passage, it is announced that the university plans to provide students with rental cars at discounted rates.（将“afford”改为“provide”，使句子更自然。同时，调整句子结构以提高语言流畅性。）

This is because the campus thinks it is much more easier for the students to go shopping for a shortened use of the campus to go to the town. The campus believes this will make it easier for students to travel to town for short-term use, such as shopping.（简化句子结构，去掉多余的词汇，使表达更清晰。）

And besides, the university thinks it is expensive for the students to afford to own their own cars. Additionally, the university considers car ownership too expensive for students.（简化句子结构，去掉重复的词汇。）

And the student strongly agrees with this proposal. The woman in the conversation strongly agrees with this plan.（将“student”改为“woman in the conversation”，使描述更准确。）

She believes that first of all, the university is far from the town, so the bus is very inconvenient because it costs a lot of time. She believes that, firstly, since the university is far from town, taking the bus is inconvenient due to the time it consumes.（调整句子结构，使表达更自然。）

And the second reason is that managing a car is not only about its own rates, it also requires extra costs on the gas and the parking lot. Her second reason is that owning a car involves not only its initial cost but also additional expenses for gas and parking.（调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。）

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, it is announced that the university plans to provide students with rental cars at discounted rates. The campus believes this will make it easier for students to travel to town for short-term use, such as shopping. Additionally, the university considers car ownership too expensive for students. The woman in the conversation strongly agrees with this plan. She believes that, firstly, since the university is far from town, taking the bus is inconvenient due to the time it consumes. Her second reason is that owning a car involves not only its initial cost but also additional expenses for gas and parking.

6.思维导图

• Reading passage

  • University plan
    • Rental cars
      • Discounted rates

• Campus opinion

  • Easier travel
    • Short-term use
      • Shopping
  • Car ownership
    • Expensive for students

• Woman's agreement

  • Distance from town
    • Inconvenient bus
      • Time-consuming
  • Car ownership costs
    • Initial cost
    • Additional expenses
      • Gas and parking

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音不够清晰，语速不稳定，有时出现不必要的停顿。建议练习发音和语调，以便在说话时更自然流畅。同时，注意在适当的地方停顿，以提高整体表达效果。

4.话题发展 回答内容虽然涉及了文章和听力的部分信息，但组织结构不够清晰。建议在回答时先简要概括计划，然后明确陈述女士的观点，并给出她的理由。此外，在陈述理由时，尽量使用准确的细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university had decided to discontinue their summer yoga, because only a few students participate in, so they decided to cancel some courses because they believe it doesn't work for that. The university decided to discontinue the summer yoga program due to low student participation, leading them to cancel some courses as they believed it was not effective. (将原句中的语法错误进行了修正，使句子更加通顺。)

And the women, both the men and women in the conversation, felt disappointed about this policy. The woman in the conversation expressed her disappointment about this decision. (删除了重复的信息，并简化了句子结构。)

First, batch is noisy and chaotic for the women where she resides, and also sometimes she even hides in the window of his room. First, she mentioned that the gym is noisy and chaotic, making it difficult for her to relax during yoga sessions. (修正了原句中的错误词汇和不清晰的表述。)

But there are also benefits, like, for example, the women, she don't need to get up so early because some courses set up in the 7 a.m. and she can stay up late and to play something. However, she acknowledged that there were benefits to having classes later in the day since students wouldn't have to wake up as early as 7 a.m. for yoga sessions. (重新组织了句子结构，使其更加清晰。)

But she also felt She also suggested that (改进了句子的开头，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The university decided to discontinue the summer yoga program due to low student participation, leading them to cancel some courses as they believed it was not effective. The woman in the conversation expressed her disappointment about this decision. First, she mentioned that the gym is noisy and chaotic, making it difficult for her to relax during yoga sessions. She also shared her positive experience with the outdoor yoga classes by the river, highlighting the calming effect of nature and the sound of water. However, she acknowledged that there were benefits to having classes later in the day since students wouldn't have to wake up as early as 7 a.m. for yoga sessions. She suggested that if the university scheduled these classes at a more convenient time, more students might be interested in participating.

6.思维导图

- Discontinue Summer Yoga Program
  - Low student participation
  - Cancel some courses

- Woman's Opinion
  - Disappointment
  - Gym: noisy and chaotic
  - Outdoor yoga: calming effect of nature and sound of water

- Benefits of later classes
  - More convenient for students
  - Increased participation

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要更好地组织句子结构。建议在练习时注意提高发音的准确性，并尝试保持一致的语速，以便听众更容易理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在解释女士观点时提供更多详细信息。例如，在提到她需要大量书籍进行研究时，可以进一步说明这对她学术成果的重要性。此外，尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加流畅。

5.语言使用

Original: In reading, the student suggests that school should limit on the number of library books a student can borrow one time. In the reading, it is suggested that schools should limit the number of library books a student can borrow at one time. (在原文中，建议将“the student suggests”改为“it is suggested”，使句子更自然。同时，将“limit on”改为“limit”，并将“one time”改为“at one time”。)

Original: However, in listening, the woman disagrees. However, the woman in the listening disagrees. (在原文中，建议将“in listening”改为“the woman in the listening”，使句子更清晰。)

Original: As her, she has registered for five classes and all of them need to do research. She has enrolled in five classes, and all of them require research. (在原文中，建议将“As her”删除，并将“registered for”改为“enrolled in”。同时，将“need to do research”改为“require research”。)

Original: So she needs a lot of books before and during her research's progress. Therefore, she needs numerous books both before and during her research process. (在原文中，建议将“So”改为“Therefore”，并将“a lot of books”改为“numerous books”。同时，将“research's progress”改为“research process”。)

Original: Once she had borrowed for like 20 books, but she can read all of them. She once borrowed around 20 books and was able to read all of them. (在原文中，建议将“for like”改为“around”，并将“can read”改为“was able to read”。)

Original: It's good for her to have this book. Having access to these books is beneficial for her. (在原文中，建议将“It's good for her to have this book”改为“Having access to these books is beneficial for her”，使句子更自然。)

Original: And second, she thinks that it won't easily happen for students to lose a lot of books as the reading thinks. Secondly, she believes that students losing many books, as the reading suggests, is unlikely. (在原文中，建议将“And second”改为“Secondly”，并重新组织句子结构以使其更自然。)

Original: The students are already adults, so school need to trust them that they can take care of the book but not just assume they will get the book lost. Since students are already adults, schools should trust them to take care of the books instead of assuming they will lose them. (在原文中，建议重新组织句子结构以使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading, it is suggested that schools should limit the number of library books a student can borrow at one time. However, the woman in the listening disagrees. She has enrolled in five classes, and all of them require research. Therefore, she needs numerous books both before and during her research process. She once borrowed around 20 books and was able to read all of them. Having access to these books is beneficial for her. Secondly, she believes that students losing many books, as the reading suggests, is unlikely. Since students are already adults, schools should trust them to take care of the books instead of assuming they will lose them.

6.思维导图

- Reading suggestion
  - Limit number of books

- Woman's disagreement
  - Enrolled in five classes
    - Require research
    - Numerous books needed
  - Borrowed 20 books
    - Able to read all
    - Beneficial access
  - Unlikely to lose books
    - Students are adults
    - Trust instead of assuming loss

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，语速适中，但有时会出现不必要的停顿。为了提高发音的准确性，请注意在练习时纠正发音错误，并尝试在句子之间保持自然的停顿。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但可以在连接观点和提供足够的支持或例子方面做得更好。为了提高话题发展，请确保在解释原因时提供更详细的信息，并尝试使用更多的连接词来使句子之间的过渡更自然。

5.语言使用

Original: In the reading, the university decides to cancel the jazz corps because the participation rate is low and not enough students can fill in the jazz corps besides students can participate in other corps. In the reading, the university decides to discontinue the jazz choir due to low participation rates and insufficient students to fill the choir; however, students can join other choirs.（将 "cancel" 改为 "discontinue"，将 "corps" 改为 "choir"，并简化句子结构。）

Original: However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with the proposal for two reasons. Nevertheless, in the conversation, the woman opposes the plan for two reasons.（将 "proposal" 改为 "plan"，使语言更自然。）

Original: Firstly, the lower participation rate is due to the intense rehearsal schedules, like three times a week, which puts too much pressure on a student, and it can be cut to once a week, lots of students can't participate into it. Firstly, she believes that low participation is due to demanding rehearsal schedules, such as three times a week, which places excessive pressure on students. She suggests that if rehearsals were reduced to once a week, more students could participate.（改进句子结构，使语言更自然。）

Original: And secondly, the music in other corps is different. They use the classic music, which the woman dislikes, and many students will feel the same way as the woman said. Secondly, she points out that the music in other choirs is different, focusing on classical music, which she dislikes. She believes that many students share her sentiment.（改进句子结构，使语言更自然。）

Revised answer (140 words):

In the reading, the university decides to discontinue the jazz choir due to low participation rates and insufficient students to fill the choir; however, students can join other choirs. Nevertheless, in the conversation, the woman opposes the plan for two reasons. Firstly, she believes that low participation is due to demanding rehearsal schedules, such as three times a week, which places excessive pressure on students. She suggests that if rehearsals were reduced to once a week, more students could participate. Secondly, she points out that the music in other choirs is different, focusing on classical music, which she dislikes. She believes that many students share her sentiment.

6.思维导图

- Reading
  - Discontinue jazz choir
  - Low participation
  - Insufficient students
  - Alternative choirs

- Conversation
  - Woman's opposition
    - Reason 1: Demanding rehearsal schedules
      - Three times a week
      - Suggestion: Reduce to once a week
    - Reason 2: Different music in other choirs
      - Classical music focus
      - Shared sentiment among students

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2 Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

15. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery could be improved by focusing on clearer pronunciation and reducing pauses. Additionally, the speaker should work on maintaining a consistent pace throughout their response. Practicing speaking aloud and listening to native English speakers can help improve these areas.

4.Topic Development The response could be better organized and more coherent. The speaker should focus on clearly summarizing the plan and stating the woman's opinion, followed by explaining her reasons for holding that opinion. To improve topic development, the speaker should practice outlining their thoughts before speaking and ensuring that their response follows a logical structure.

5.Language Use

The woman disagreed with this statement decision that J's core choir will be discontinued and no longer exist in this school because of firstly, participate student is very low low student participation(participate student is very low is not grammatically correct) and not enough student can enjoy this and join this J's core choir. The woman think that's because the intense reheard education rehearsal schedule(reheard education is not a proper term) and the course should reduce the practice in times like once a week. And secondly, the letter said there have very different music and bad student don't like it, but the woman think it's not the same. In fact, the music are different and students don't like the music which...

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman disagrees with the decision to discontinue the jazz choir at the university due to low student participation. She believes that the intense rehearsal schedule is a significant factor contributing to this issue. The woman suggests that reducing practice sessions to once a week could encourage more students to join the choir. Additionally, she points out that although there is an alternative choir available for students, it focuses solely on classical music, which may not appeal to everyone. The woman emphasizes that jazz and classical music are distinct genres, and discontinuing the jazz choir would deprive students of an opportunity to explore their musical interests. In conclusion, she believes that modifying the rehearsal schedule and considering students' preferences could help maintain the jazz choir and increase participation.

6.Mind Map

- Disagreement with decision
  - Low student participation
    - Intense rehearsal schedule
      - Suggestion: Reduce practice sessions
  - Alternative choir
    - Classical music focus
      - Different musical preferences
        - Jazz vs. Classical
  - Conclusion
    - Modify rehearsal schedule
    - Consider students' preferences

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答基本清晰流畅，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更多的口语练习，注意保持语速的一致性和减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但可以在解释女士对计划的看法时提供更多细节和例子。例如，在提到女士认为瑜伽课可以安排在早晨稍晚的时间时，可以进一步解释这样做可能会吸引更多学生参加。总之，尝试在回答中加入更多支持观点的细节和例子，以使回答更加充实和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The university has decided to cancel summer yoga outdoor classes this summer since so few students participated in last year, so they felt it wasn't worth paying for instructors again. The university decided to cancel the outdoor summer yoga classes this year because few students participated last year, and they felt it wasn't worth paying for instructors again.（将句子结构进行了调整，使其更自然流畅。）

And the women disagrees with the announcement. The woman disagrees with the decision.（将“announcement”改为“decision”，使表达更准确。）

First, the women says summer yoga classes are great because students can enjoy the outdoors which is more relaxing and calming. First, the woman believes that summer yoga classes are beneficial as they allow students to enjoy the outdoors, providing a more relaxing and calming environment.（对句子进行了重组，使其更自然且表达更准确。）

However, the gym is quite noisy and chaotic. In contrast, the gym tends to be noisy and chaotic.（使用“In contrast”替换“However”，使句子过渡更自然。）

Second, the women mentions that yoga classes can be arranged later in the morning since some students don't want to get up early, especially they don't have time. Second, the woman suggests that yoga classes could be scheduled later in the morning as some students may not want to wake up early, particularly if they have no other commitments.（对句子进行了重组，使其更自然且表达更准确。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university decided to cancel the outdoor summer yoga classes this year because few students participated last year, and they felt it wasn't worth paying for instructors again. The woman disagrees with the decision. First, she believes that summer yoga classes are beneficial as they allow students to enjoy the outdoors, providing a more relaxing and calming environment. In contrast, the gym tends to be noisy and chaotic. Second, she suggests that yoga classes could be scheduled later in the morning as some students may not want to wake up early, particularly if they have no other commitments. By offering classes at a more convenient time, the university might attract more participants and make the program worthwhile. Overall, the woman's opinion is that the university should reconsider their decision and explore alternative solutions to improve attendance.

6.思维导图

• Cancel outdoor summer yoga classes

  • Few students participated last year
  • Not worth paying for instructors

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the decision
  • Benefits of outdoor classes
    • Relaxing and calming environment
    • Enjoy the outdoors
  • Gym: noisy and chaotic
  • Scheduling suggestion
    • Later in the morning
    • Attract more participants

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 话题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 25

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速较为清晰和流畅，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯性，尽量减少不自然的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和有组织的，但在某些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在提到女士的观点时，可以更明确地指出她认为限制图书数量不合理。此外，在给出女士反驳意见的理由时，可以更详细地解释她为什么需要大量图书进行研究，并强调她实际使用了每一本书。总体来说，可以在组织和论证方面进行一些改进，使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The student suggests the university to limit the number of books the students can take out at one time to ten for two reasons, The author suggests that the university should limit the number of books students can check out at once to ten, for two reasons, (修改了句子结构，使其更自然流畅) because it can help the university avoid checking out more books than the students need, as it could prevent students from borrowing more books than they need, (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) and it can reduce the number of lost books. and reduce the number of lost books. (简化了句子结构，使其更自然) However, the woman disagrees with the idea for two reasons. The first is that he she (修正了代词错误) always has many classes at a semester, so he she (修正了代词错误) has a lot of research to do at one time, so he she (修正了代词错误) needs lots of books of the subject. It's convenient for her to have lots of books at home, and she actually uses each one. The next reason is that the students should be trusted to take care of the books, because some of them never lost or forgotten to return the books to the university library.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The author suggests that the university should limit the number of books students can check out at once to ten, for two reasons, as it could prevent students from borrowing more books than they need, and reduce the number of lost books. However, the woman disagrees with this proposal for two reasons. First, she often takes multiple classes each semester and needs a large number of books for her research projects. Having access to many books at home is convenient for her, and she claims to utilize each one. Second, she believes that students should be trusted to take care of the borrowed books since some students have never misplaced or failed to return them to the library.

6.思维导图

- Author's suggestion
  - Limit books to 10
  - Reasons
    - Prevent borrowing excess books
    - Reduce lost books

- Woman's disagreement
  - Reason 1
    - Multiple classes and research projects
    - Need for many books
    - Convenience of having books at home
  - Reason 2
    - Trust students with book care
    - Some students never lose or forget to return books

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得还算清楚，但有些地方需要改进。首先，尝试提高语速并保持一致的语调。其次，在适当的地方稍作停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。最后，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，你的回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但是，在总结计划时，你提到“学校将创建另一个团体”，这与原文中提到的“学校已经有另一个合唱团”有所出入。为了使回答更准确，请仔细阅读原文并确保理解正确。此外，在解释女士对计划的看法时，可以更详细地说明她的理由，例如强调她对爵士音乐和古典音乐之间差异的看法。

5.语言使用

Original: So in the proposal, Jazz Tour is a group of students who sing jazz and give a concert and the school decided to cancel next year because there's no enough students to sing and they will create another group. And in the listening, the woman believes that it is a shame and they should not do that. Firstly, because they have intense rehearsal schedules for students for three days a week. So students are always busy so that the school should reduce it to once a week. In addition, the group created next year will be doing classical music, which the woman doesn't really like the style of classical music. So she believes that it is a shame to cancel the jazz group and create another.

Corrected: So in the proposal, Jazz Tour the Jazz Choir is a group of students who sing jazz and give a concerts, and the school decided to cancel next year it starting next year because there's no enough not enough students to sing, and they will create another group. And in the listening, the woman believes that it is a shame and they should not do that. Firstly, because they have intense rehearsal schedules for students for three days a week. So students are always busy so that the school should reduce it to once a week. In addition, the group created next year will be doing classical music, which the woman doesn't really likethe style of classical music. So she believes that it is a shame to cancel the jazz group and create another.

(将“Jazz Tour”改为“the Jazz Choir”，因为原文中提到的是“jazz choir”。将“a”改为“concerts”，因为原文中提到的是多场音乐会。将“next year”改为“it starting next year”，以使句子更清晰。将“no enough”改为“not enough”，以纠正语法错误。删除“the style of”，以使句子更自然。)

Revised Version (140 words):

In the proposal, the Jazz Choir is a group of students who sing jazz and give concerts. The school decided to cancel it starting next year because there are not enough students to participate, and they suggest students join another existing choir. The woman in the listening disagrees with this decision, believing it is a shame to discontinue the Jazz Choir. She thinks that the intense rehearsal schedule, which requires students to practice three days a week, is the main reason for low participation. She suggests reducing rehearsals to once a week to attract more students. Additionally, she points out that the alternative choir focuses on classical music, which she and possibly other students do not enjoy as much as jazz. Therefore, she believes it is unfortunate to cancel the Jazz Choir and merely offer a classical music alternative.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Jazz Choir
  • Cancel starting next year
  • Not enough students
  • Alternative choir

• Woman's opinion

  • Disagrees with the decision
  • Intense rehearsal schedule
    • Reduce to once a week
  • Classical music alternative
    • Different from jazz music

7.关键词