TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the proposal described in theletter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion about theproposal and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但偶尔出现了不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语音的连贯性和减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者在话题发展方面表现良好，能够概括阅读和听力材料的内容，并提供了两个理由来支持女生的观点。但在组织结构上还有待提高，建议在练习时注意使用恰当的连接词和过渡词，使得回答更加连贯和有条理。同时，在给出理由时可以尝试提供更多具体的例子或细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the doctor, In the reading passage, (原文中并未提到医生，应改为阅读材料) the student's advice is that students who take outside art courses should not be re-required to take art courses in college. For that, they have the experience and also they can supply some samples of the artistic work to their professors to show that they have the experience. In listening, the woman doesn't support Chen for two reasons to begin with. She mentions that there are a whole range of art courses for students to take. So if students just take music courses outside of college, they can also take photography or painting courses in college. In this way, they can explore other areas, some new things. The second is that professors are too busy to check out each student's samples of artistic work. So it may take too much professors' time.

Revised (140 words): In the reading passage, the student proposes that those who participate in outside art courses should not be required to take additional art courses in college since they already have experience and can provide samples of their artistic work as proof. However, in the listening passage, the woman disagrees with this proposal for two main reasons. Firstly, she highlights that there is a wide variety of art courses available for students to explore different areas beyond their current interests, such as photography or painting. Secondly, she argues that professors are already overwhelmed with their responsibilities and evaluating each student's artistic samples would consume too much of their time. Therefore, she believes that requiring all students to take an arts course within the university is still necessary.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Student's proposal
    - Outside art courses
    - No additional art courses in college
    - Experience and samples as proof

- Listening Passage
  - Woman's disagreement
    - Reason 1: Variety of art courses
      - Explore different areas
      - Photography, painting, etc.
    - Reason 2: Professors' workload
      - Evaluating samples time-consuming
      - Overwhelmed with responsibilities

7.关键词