TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the letter-writer’s proposal. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但仍有改进的空间。建议在发音和语速方面多加练习，以提高口语的流利度。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。建议在回答时更明确地阐述观点，并给出更具说服力的例子来支持你的观点。同时，注意保持回答内容的连贯性，让整个回答更加有条理。

5.语言使用

Original: A student proposed that to display artwork in the building for several benefits. Firstly, the work of art students can be widely publicized and their work can be seen by more and more people. Also, it can make the building more pleasant surroundings. In the conversation, both students agreed about the proposal for several reasons. Firstly, others won't be bothered, I mean other students from different majors. Also, the building is empty and other students may come to the building to study with their friends. Secondly, it is a brand new building, other students can give color to the building and sometimes it looks bare and boring for art students to come to the building.

Corrected: A student proposed that to to display artwork in the building for several benefits(将“that to”改为“to”，使句子更自然). Firstly, the work of art students can be widely publicized, and their work can be seen by more and more people(添加逗号，使句子更流畅). Also, it can make the building more pleasant surroundingsa more pleasant environment(将“more pleasant surroundings”改为“a more pleasant environment”，使句子更自然). In the conversation, both students agreed aboutwith the proposal for several reasons(将“about”改为“with”，使句子更自然). Firstly, others won't be bothered, I mean other students from different majors. Also, the building is empty, and other students may come to the building to study with their friends(添加逗号，使句子更流畅). Secondly, it is a brand new building, other students can give color toadd color to the building and sometimes it looks bare and boring for art students to come to the building(将“give color to”改为“add color to”，使句子更自然；添加逗号，使句子更流畅).

Revised (140 words): A student proposed to display artwork in the library for several benefits. Firstly, the work of art students can be widely publicized, allowing their creations to be seen by a larger audience. Additionally, displaying artwork would make the library a more pleasant environment for all students. In the conversation, both students agreed with the proposal for several reasons. One reason is that non-art major students would not be bothered by the artwork, and they might even come to the library more often to study with friends. Another reason is that since the library is a brand new building with empty walls, adding student artwork would provide much-needed color and visual interest, making it more inviting for all students, including art majors.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Display artwork in library
  - Benefits
    - Publicize art students' work
    - Pleasant environment

- Conversation
  - Agreement with proposal
  - Reasons
    - Non-art majors not bothered
    - Attract more students to library
    - Brand new building
      - Empty walls
      - Add color and visual interest

7.关键词