TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Do you agree or disagree? Some people want to change their appearance, even bysurgery.

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Do you agree or disagree? Some people want to change their appearance, even bysurgery.

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1.子项得分

交付 (Delivery): 3
主题发展 (Topic Development): 3
语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

总分: 23

3.表达从交付方面来看，发言者的语速较为稳定，但有时会出现停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持流利的语速和自然的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展从话题发展方面来看，发言者提供了一个与主题相关的例子，但可以进一步完善。建议在回答问题时，尝试提供更多支持观点的细节和例子，以使回答更具说服力。同时，注意保持思路清晰和组织有序。

5. 语言使用

Original:

Well, personally, I disagree with that idea. I don't want to change my appearance even by surgery because it will harm our body and it is risky. This is the case of my best friend. He just wants to change his lips by surgery. However, the doctor makes medical mistakes and his lips become bigger than normal ones. My friend just feels angry and makes a lawsuit about this company. After that, he feels very disappointed about this surgery because he spent a lot of money on this process. From this experience, I don't want to change my appearance even by surgery.

Revised:

In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the notion of altering one's appearance through surgery. This is primarily due to the potential harm it can cause to our bodies and the inherent risks involved. To illustrate my point, I would like to share two supporting examples.

Firstly, a close friend of mine decided to undergo surgery to modify his lips. Unfortunately, the procedure went awry due to a medical error, resulting in his lips becoming unnaturally enlarged. This incident not only caused him emotional distress but also led him to file a lawsuit against the clinic.

Secondly, another reason for my stance is the financial burden that such surgeries can impose. In the case of my friend, he invested a significant amount of money into the procedure, only to be left with disappointment and regret.

In conclusion, based on these examples, I firmly believe that changing one's appearance through surgery is not a wise decision due to the potential risks and financial implications involved.

In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the notion of altering one's appearance through surgery (revised for a more formal tone). This is primarily due to the potential harm it can cause to our bodies (clarified) and the inherent risks involved (more concise). To illustrate my point, I would like to share two supporting examples (added structure).

Firstly, a close friend of mine decided to undergo surgery to modify his lips (clarified). Unfortunately, the procedure went awry due to a medical error (more precise), resulting in his lips becoming unnaturally enlarged (improved flow). This incident not only caused him emotional distress but also led him to file a lawsuit against the clinic (more concise).

Secondly, another reason for my stance is the financial burden that such surgeries can impose (added transition and clarified). In the case of my friend, he invested a significant amount of money into the procedure, only to be left with disappointment and regret (improved flow).

In conclusion, based on these examples, I firmly believe that changing one's appearance through surgery is not a wise decision due to the potential risks and financial implications involved (stronger conclusion).

Corrected:

~~Well, personally,~~

In my opinion, I strongly disagree with ~~that idea. I don't want to change my~~ the notion of altering one's appearance ~~even by~~ through surgery ~~because it will harm our body and it is risky.~~ (revised for a more formal tone). This is ~~the case of my best friend. He just wants to change~~ primarily due to the potential harm it can cause to our bodies (clarified) and the inherent risks involved (more concise). To illustrate my point, I would like to share two supporting examples (added structure).

Firstly, a close friend of mine decided to undergo surgery to modify his lips ~~by surgery. However, the doctor makes~~ (clarified). Unfortunately, the procedure went awry due to a medical ~~mistakes and~~ error (more precise), resulting in his lips ~~become bigger than normal ones. My friend just feels angry and makes~~ becoming unnaturally enlarged (improved flow). This incident not only caused him emotional distress but also led him to file a lawsuit ~~about this company. After that,~~ against the clinic (more concise).

Secondly, another reason for my stance is the financial burden that such surgeries can impose (added transition and clarified). In the case of my friend, he ~~feels very disappointed about this~~ invested a significant amount of money into the procedure, only to be left with disappointment and regret (improved flow).

In conclusion, based on these examples, I firmly believe that changing one's appearance through surgery ~~because he spent a lot of money on this process. From this experience, I don't want to change my appearance even by surgery.~~is not a wise decision due to the potential risks and financial implications involved (stronger conclusion).

思维导图


- Preference or Opinion
  - Disagree with changing appearance through surgery

- Main Point
  - Surgery is risky and can harm the body

- Supporting Examples
  - Best friend's experience with lip surgery
    - Medical mistakes made by the doctor
    - Lips became bigger than normal
    - Anger and disappointment, lawsuit against the company
    - Wasted money on the process

- Conclusion
  - Based on the experience, not willing to change appearance through surgery

关键词

Word	Phonetic Symbols	Parts of Speech	English definitions	Simplified Chinese translations	Sample sentences
Disagree	/dɪsəˈɡriː/	verb	To have a different opinion	不同意	I disagree with the idea of changing my appearance through surgery.
Risky	/ˈrɪski/	adjective	Involving the possibility of harm	有风险的	Surgery is a risky procedure that can cause harm to our bodies.
Lawsuit	/ˈlɔːsuːt/	noun	A legal case brought to court	诉讼	My friend filed a lawsuit against the company after his failed surgery.
Disappointment	/ˌdɪsəˈpɔɪntmənt/	noun	Feeling of dissatisfaction	失望	He felt great disappointment after spending so much money on the unsuccessful surgery.
Appearance	/əˈpɪrəns/	noun	The way something looks	外貌	I don't want to change my appearance even by surgery.

补充示例
Sub-opinion: Surgery can lead to long-term health issues. Explanation: Complications from surgery may cause chronic pain or other health problems. Supporting example: A neighbor had a nose job and now suffers from breathing difficulties.
Sub-opinion: Surgery is expensive and not always worth the cost. Explanation: The financial burden of surgery can be significant, especially if complications arise. Supporting example: A colleague spent thousands of dollars on a facelift, only to be unhappy with the results.
Sub-opinion: Accepting one's natural appearance promotes self-confidence. Explanation: Embracing our unique features can help us feel more comfortable in our own skin. Supporting example: A famous actress chose not to have surgery and is now known for her distinctive look.
Sub-opinion: There are non-surgical alternatives for enhancing one's appearance. Explanation: Options like makeup, exercise, and healthy eating can improve our looks without the risks of surgery. Supporting example: A friend started working out regularly and improved their appearance without resorting to surgery.
Sub-opinion: Society should focus on inner beauty rather than physical appearance. Explanation: Placing too much emphasis on looks can lead to superficial judgments and unhealthy obsessions. Supporting example: A well-known public figure advocates for self-love and inner beauty over physical perfection.