TOEFL TPO 44 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the letter writer's proposal. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2.预估分数

0. 3.表达

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5.语言使用

原回答：Bye-bye. You This The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators. Additionally, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled and students being too busy. (原回答内容不完整，已根据听力材料进行修改和补充。)

修订后的回答（140字）：

The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal because he believes that students are not the right people to make decisions about funding for student organizations. He thinks that students are too close to the situation and may not be as objective or fair as university administrators, potentially favoring their friends' groups or their own groups. Furthermore, he doubts that there would be enough students interested in serving on the committee due to existing leadership positions being unfilled, such as the Student Council lacking a vice president, and students being too busy with other commitments.

6.思维导图

• Man's opinion

  • Disagrees with proposal

• Reasons

  • Students not objective or fair
    • Too close to the situation
    • Favoritism
  • Lack of interest in serving on the committee
    • Unfilled leadership positions
    • Busy students

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的语言表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议在练习口语时注意保持流利且连贯的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够概括听力中男生的观点及理由。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如可以先总结男生的观点，然后分点阐述他给出的理由。同时，在给出例子时可以更详细地描述，以增强论据的说服力。在练习时，注意提高回答的条理性和连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the reading, the student wants to create a student committee to decide funding for the student organization. According to the reading, the author suggests creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations.（将"the student wants"改为"the author suggests"，使句子更加准确。将"the student organization"改为"student organizations"，保持一致性。）

However, according to the listening, the man disagrees with that by saying that, first, he thinks the students are too close to the situation and so they cannot be objective, maybe they will give money to their friend group. However, according to the listening, the man disagrees for two reasons. First, he believes students are too close to the situation and may lack objectivity, potentially favoring their friends' groups.（将句子结构进行调整，使表达更加清晰。）

Moreover, the second reason is that although the women think it's a very good experience for the students about their leadership, but the man said that they already have so many leadership in the college and many students are not interested in that. Furthermore, although the woman thinks it would provide valuable leadership experience for students, the man argues that there are already numerous leadership opportunities on campus and many students show no interest in them.（调整句子结构，使表达更加清晰。）

For example, the council does not have an president now. For instance, there is currently no vice president in the Student Council.（将"an president"改为"vice president"，使句子更加准确。）

The students are all very busy and it will be a very big project for them if they create a student committee. Most students are too busy, and forming a student committee would require a significant time commitment.（调整句子结构，使表达更加清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the reading, the author suggests creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations. However, according to the listening, the man disagrees for two reasons. First, he believes students are too close to the situation and may lack objectivity, potentially favoring their friends' groups. Furthermore, although the woman thinks it would provide valuable leadership experience for students, the man argues that there are already numerous leadership opportunities on campus and many students show no interest in them. For instance, there is currently no vice president in the Student Council. Most students are too busy, and forming a student committee would require a significant time commitment.

6.思维导图

• Reading

  • Author's suggestion
    • Student committee
    • Funding decisions

• Listening

  • Man's disagreement
    • Lack of objectivity
    • Leadership opportunities
  • Woman's opinion
    • Valuable experience

• Example

  • Student Council

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要改进。例如，可以尝试减少不必要的停顿，以保持连贯性。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。建议多加练习，提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以尝试更详细地解释原因和例子，以便更充分地支持观点。例如，在谈论学生可能偏袒朋友团体时，可以提供具体的例子来说明这一问题。同时，在谈论学生对领导职位缺乏兴趣时，也可以给出更多证据来支持这一观点。总之，多提供一些具体的例子和证据将有助于进一步加强话题发展。

5.语言使用

Original: A student suggests that school need allocate its funding to student organizations. The man in the conversation didn't agree with it. Firstly, the students are too close to make decisions. The students will be subjective as they may allocate the money to their friends' group. It's not fair. Second, he argues that many students are not interested in being in student leadership because students are always so busy in their study. They have not enough time to do these student organization jobs. So it's not suitable for students to be the leadership to make decisions.

Corrected: A student suggests that school need the school needs (需要改为需要，以匹配主语) to allocate its funding to student organizations. The man in the conversation didn't does not (使用一般现在时，而不是过去时) agree with it. Firstly, the students are too close to make decisions. The students will be subjective as they may allocate the money to their friends' groups (复数形式，因为可能有多个团体). It's not fair. Second, he argues that many students are not interested in being in student leadership because students are always so busy in their study with their studies (用复数形式表示学习的多个方面). They have not insufficient (使用更高级的词汇) time to do these student organization jobs. So it's not suitable for students to be the leadership in leadership positions (更自然的表达方式) to make decisions.

Revised (140 words): The student suggests that the school needs to allocate its funding to student organizations. However, the man in the conversation does not agree with this proposal. He believes that students are too close to the situation, which may lead them to make subjective decisions, such as allocating funds to their friends' groups, resulting in unfairness. Furthermore, he argues that many students are not interested in taking on leadership roles due to their busy schedules and involvement in their studies. As a result, they have insufficient time to dedicate themselves to managing student organizations effectively. Therefore, it is not suitable for students to hold leadership positions when making decisions about funding allocation for student organizations. Instead, having university administrators make these decisions would ensure a more objective and fair distribution of funds.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - Student's proposal
  - Man's disagreement

- Reason 1
  - Students too close to the situation
  - Subjective decisions
  - Unfairness

- Reason 2
  - Lack of interest in leadership roles
  - Busy schedules
  - Insufficient time for managing organizations

- Conclusion
  - Not suitable for students to hold leadership positions
  - University administrators ensure objectivity and fairness in funding allocation

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there is room for improvement in terms of pronunciation and reducing unnecessary pauses. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking more confidently and focus on proper pronunciation of words.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could improve by providing more specific details from the listening passage to support their points. Additionally, the speaker should work on making smoother transitions between ideas to create a more cohesive response.

5.Language Use

Original: According to a recent article, a student suggests the university should create a student committee for them to design how to allocate the funding for student organizations instead of by the university administration. This is because students know the situation better so they could make the best allocation for the funding. Furthermore, through the process, students could learn and gain valuable leadership experience. However, the men in the conversation disagreed with this proposal. First, he claims that students are too close to the situation so they cannot be as objective as the administrators. Furthermore, he claims that they are going to have a hard time to find students to serve on the committee because it is such a big commitment and takes up a lot of time.

Corrected: According to a recent article, a student suggests that the university should create a student committee for them to determine how to allocate funding for student organizations, rather than having it done by university administration(changed "instead of by" to "rather than having it done by" for better clarity). This is because students have better knowledge of the situation(changed "know" to "have better knowledge" for advanced vocabulary), allowing them to make optimal allocations for funding. Moreover, through this process, students can acquire valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, he argues that students are too close to the situation and cannot be as objective as administrators(changed "claims" to "argues" for variety). Additionally, he asserts that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to its significant time commitment(rephrased sentence for better flow).

Revised (140 words): According to a recent article, a student suggests that the university should create a student committee to determine how to allocate funding for student organizations, rather than having it done by university administration. This is because students have better knowledge of the situation, allowing them to make optimal allocations for funding. Moreover, through this process, students can acquire valuable leadership experience. However, the man in the conversation disagrees with this proposal. Firstly, he argues that students are too close to the situation and cannot be as objective as administrators. Additionally, he asserts that it would be difficult to find students willing to serve on the committee due to its significant time commitment. To achieve a score of 30, the speaker should focus on using advanced vocabulary, proper grammar, natural flow of statements, smooth transitions, and strong conclusions in their response.

6.Mind Map

- Introduction
  - Recent article
  - Student proposal

- Advantages
  - Better knowledge of situation
  - Optimal allocations
  - Leadership experience

- Disagreement (man's opinion)
  - Lack of objectivity
  - Difficulty finding students to serve

- Conclusion
  - Focus on advanced vocabulary, grammar, flow, transitions, conclusions

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要改进。例如，可以尝试提高语速和连贯性，以及减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。但是，在解释男子给出的理由时可以更详细一些。例如，在谈到学生可能会偏袒朋友或自己所在团体时，可以进一步说明这种情况为什么不公平。同时，在提到学生对领导职位缺乏兴趣时，可以给出更多具体的例子。总之，为了提高话题发展水平，可以尝试在解释观点时提供更多详细信息和例子。

5.语言使用

原文：The school proposed a policy that the students should take the place of administrators to decide which organizations can receive funds and how much funds can these organizations receive. The school proposed a policy that students should replace administrators in deciding which organizations can receive funds and how much funding these organizations should receive.（将“take the place of”改为“replace”，使句子更自然；将“how much funds can these organizations receive”改为“how much funding these organizations should receive”，使句子结构更合适。）

So the students must be interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies. Thus, students would find this opportunity interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies.（将“must be interesting”改为“would find this opportunity interesting”，使句子更自然；在“gain leadership experience”前加上“and”，使句子结构更完整。）

However, the man has a negative attitude towards these policies. However, the man expresses a negative opinion about these policies.（将“has a negative attitude towards”改为“expresses a negative opinion about”，使句子更自然。）

First, he states that the students are not the right person because they are not as subject or as fire as the administrators. First, he states that students are not suitable decision-makers because they are not as objective or fair as administrators.（将“the right person”改为“suitable decision-makers”，使句子更准确；将“subject or as fire”改为“objective or fair”，纠正拼写错误。）

They can just donate the money to their friends or themselves. They might simply allocate the funds to their friends' groups or their own.（将“donate the money”改为“allocate the funds”，使句子更准确；将“to their friends or themselves”改为“to their friends' groups or their own”，使句子更清晰。）

Secondly, he states that the school cannot find someone interesting in the leadership club and cannot find someone volunteer to commit their time into this stuff. Secondly, he states that the school would struggle to find students interested in leadership roles and willing to volunteer their time for this committee.（将“find someone interesting in the leadership club”改为“find students interested in leadership roles”，使句子更自然；将“find someone volunteer to commit their time into this stuff”改为“willing to volunteer their time for this committee”，使句子更清晰。）

So the policy is established to address this problem. Therefore, the policy may not effectively address this issue.（将“is established”改为“may not effectively address”，使句子更准确；将“this problem”改为“this issue”，使句子更自然。）

修订版（140词）：

The school proposed a policy that students should replace administrators in deciding which organizations can receive funds and how much funding these organizations should receive. Thus, students would find this opportunity interesting and gain leadership experience through these policies. However, the man expresses a negative opinion about these policies. First, he states that students are not suitable decision-makers because they are not as objective or fair as administrators. They might simply allocate the funds to their friends' groups or their own. Secondly, he states that the school would struggle to find students interested in leadership roles and willing to volunteer their time for this committee. Therefore, the policy may not effectively address this issue.

6.思维导图

• School policy

  • Students replace administrators
  • Decide funding for organizations

• Benefits

  • Interesting opportunity
  • Gain leadership experience

• Man's negative opinion

  • Students not suitable decision-makers
    • Not objective or fair
    • Allocate funds to friends' groups or own
  • Difficulty finding interested students
    • Leadership roles
    • Willing to volunteer time for committee

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

整体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在不太流畅的现象。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，尽量保持一致。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强语言的连贯性。在发音方面，需要注意一些单词的准确发音，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够较好地概括男生的观点及其理由。但在组织结构上还有待加强。建议在练习时注意逻辑性和条理性，尝试使用一些连接词来帮助连接观点和论据。同时，在给出论据时可以尝试提供更多具体的例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The proposal suggests that the university should allow students to create their own committees to decide on funding for student organizations. The proposal recommends that the university should permit students to form their own committees to determine funding allocation for student organizations. (建议使用更高级的词汇，如“recommend”代替“suggest”，“permit”代替“allow”，以及“determine”代替“decide on”。) Since students know each other better and there are a lot of students who like to serve on their own committees which could cultivate their leadership. As students are more familiar with one another and many are interested in serving on committees, this could foster their leadership skills. (改进句子结构，使其更自然流畅。)

However, the men disagree with that idea. However, the man disagrees with this idea. (修正拼写错误。) Firstly, he mentions that since a lot of students involved in the student organizations, they cannot be objective. Firstly, he mentions that since many students are involved in student organizations, they cannot maintain objectivity. (改进句子结构和词汇选择。) They may allocate the money to their friend groups or to the groups they are in. They might allocate funds to their friends' groups or the groups they are part of. (使用更自然的词汇和表达。)

Secondly, it is a hard time to find a suitable student to manage the committee. Secondly, it is challenging to find suitable students to manage the committee. (改进句子结构和词汇选择。) For example, the student council does not have a vice president. For instance, the Student Council currently lacks a vice president. (使用更自然的表达方式。) Besides, there are a lot of leadership groups and students may find it busy to volunteer to work on such committee. Moreover, there are numerous leadership opportunities, and students might find it difficult to volunteer for such a committee due to their busy schedules. (改进句子结构，使其更自然流畅。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal recommends that the university should permit students to form their own committees to determine funding allocation for student organizations. As students are more familiar with one another and many are interested in serving on committees, this could foster their leadership skills. However, the man disagrees with this idea. Firstly, he mentions that since many students are involved in student organizations, they cannot maintain objectivity. They might allocate funds to their friends' groups or the groups they are part of. Secondly, it is challenging to find suitable students to manage the committee. For instance, the Student Council currently lacks a vice president. Moreover, there are numerous leadership opportunities, and students might find it difficult to volunteer for such a committee due to their busy schedules.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
    - Permit students to form committees
    - Determine funding allocation
    - Foster leadership skills

- Man's disagreement
    - Lack of objectivity
        - Allocate funds to friends' groups or own groups
    - Difficulty finding suitable students
        - Student Council lacking vice president
        - Numerous leadership opportunities
        - Busy schedules

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，在表达方面，我认为你的发言相对清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。要提高这方面的表现，你可以多加练习，尝试在发言时保持流畅且连贯的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, you could improve by providing more specific examples or details to support your points. For instance, you could mention the man's concern about potential favoritism among student committee members and how this could lead to unfair funding decisions. Additionally, you could further elaborate on the difficulty of finding students willing to serve on the committee due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in leadership positions.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The man disagreed with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of the funding for students, student organizations. The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of funding for student organizations. (将过去时改为现在时，简化句子结构) First, he thinks that students may not be the right person to decide because they are too close to the organization themselves because they can, themselves can be involved in one of those organizations or their friends can be a part of that organization, makes things very difficult for them to decide. First, he believes that students might not be the right individuals to make decisions since they are closely connected to the organizations, either by being members themselves or having friends involved, which could make it difficult for them to remain impartial. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，使语句更自然流畅) And second, he thinks that finding students to volunteer their time to this organization can be very hard because they are too busy or they are not interested in that. Secondly, he thinks that finding students willing to volunteer their time for this committee could be challenging due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in such responsibilities. (改进句子结构，使用更高级的词汇，使语句更自然流畅)

Revised Answer (140 words): The man disagrees with the letter writer's proposal that students should be in charge of funding for student organizations. First, he believes that students might not be the right individuals to make decisions since they are closely connected to the organizations, either by being members themselves or having friends involved, which could make it difficult for them to remain impartial. This could lead to potential favoritism and unfair funding allocations. Secondly, he thinks that finding students willing to volunteer their time for this committee could be challenging due to their busy schedules and lack of interest in such responsibilities. For instance, the Student Council is currently missing a vice president, indicating that many students are not interested in taking on leadership roles. Therefore, the man suggests that university administrators are better suited for making these decisions as they can maintain objectivity and fairness.

6.思维导图

- Disagreement
  - Impartiality
    - Closely connected
    - Members or friends involved
    - Potential favoritism
  - Finding volunteers
    - Busy schedules
    - Lack of interest
    - Leadership roles

- Suggestion
  - University administrators
    - Objectivity and fairness

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在回答中，发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现停顿。为了提高表达能力，建议练习流利地说话，保持一致的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，请注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，回答基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但是，在描述男生的观点时，请注意使用正确的称呼（例如，“man”而不是“mayor”）。此外，在解释男生观点的原因时，可以更详细地描述听力材料中提到的论据。例如，可以提到男生认为学生可能无法客观地分配资金，因为他们可能会偏向于自己参与的团体或朋友所在的团体。总之，请确保提供足够的支持和例子来更好地发展话题。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The school is planning to create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations, but the mayor disagrees with this plan for two reasons. The man disagrees with the proposal of creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations for two reasons. (将“the mayor”改为“the man”，以更准确地描述听力材料中的角色。) First, he thinks that the students are too close to the committee, so they can't distribute the funding fairly, because they may give more funding to their own groups or their friends' groups. First, he believes that students might not be objective in distributing the funds fairly since they could favor their own groups or their friends' groups. (简化句子结构，使表达更自然。) Secondly, the mayor thinks that it is hard for schools to find volunteers to serve this committee, because the students already be a member of a group, so they are busy. Secondly, the man thinks it would be difficult for schools to find volunteers for this committee since students are already members of other groups and are busy. (将“the mayor”改为“the man”，修正语法错误，使句子更流畅。) They don't have time to be a volunteer to the student committee.

Revised Answer (140 words): The man disagrees with the proposal of creating a student committee to decide funding for student organizations for two reasons. First, he believes that students might not be objective in distributing the funds fairly since they could favor their own groups or their friends' groups. This lack of objectivity could lead to biased decisions and an unfair allocation of resources. Secondly, the man thinks it would be difficult for schools to find volunteers for this committee since students are already members of other groups and are busy with their academic and extracurricular activities. As a result, they might not have enough time to dedicate to the student committee, making it challenging for the school to form an effective and committed group of volunteers.

6.思维导图

• Disagreement

  • Proposal
    • Student committee
    • Funding decisions

• Reasons

  1. Lack of objectivity
     • Favoritism
       • Own groups
       • Friends' groups
  2. Difficulty finding volunteers
     • Busy students
       • Academic activities
       • Extracurricular activities

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确，导致拼写错误。此外，语速不够流畅，有些地方停顿过多。建议练习发音和提高语言流利度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了男生的观点和原因，但在组织结构上还有改进的空间。可以尝试使用更清晰的连接词来组织句子，使回答更连贯。同时，在解释原因时可以加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

Original: The university plans to create a student committee to decide funding for student organizations in order to charge of deciding which student organizations receive money from the university and also be in charge of how much money each organization receives. The university proposes creating a student committee responsible for determining funding allocations for student organizations and deciding how much money each organization should receive.（将句子结构进行了简化，使其更自然流畅）

Original: The man disagreed with this plan. The man opposes this proposal.（使用了更高级的词汇）

Original: First, he said he says the student was not the right person to do this position because they are too close to this situation, and also some of them will be not object and fear because they always give the money to themselves or their friends. First, he argues that students are not suitable for this role as they are too closely involved in the situation, which may lead to a lack of objectivity and fairness when allocating funds to their own groups or friends' groups.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: But the administrator is very fear to do this since. In contrast, administrators can make more impartial decisions.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: Second, he thinks most students are not interested on it because there is already a leader position open, but no one interested on this. Second, he believes that most students are not interested in this committee as there are already open leadership positions that remain unfilled.（修改了介词错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: For example, the council have not vice president until now. For instance, the Student Council still lacks a vice president.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Original: Besides, there are a lot of work to do for the student and the student may not willing to do this position because they have not much time. Moreover, students may be unwilling to take on this role due to their limited time and heavy workload.（修改了语法错误，使句子更通顺）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university proposes creating a student committee responsible for determining funding allocations for student organizations and deciding how much money each organization should receive. The man opposes this proposal. First, he argues that students are not suitable for this role as they are too closely involved in the situation, which may lead to a lack of objectivity and fairness when allocating funds to their own groups or friends' groups. In contrast, administrators can make more impartial decisions. Second, he believes that most students are not interested in this committee as there are already open leadership positions that remain unfilled. For instance, the Student Council still lacks a vice president. Moreover, students may be unwilling to take on this role due to their limited time and heavy workload.

6.思维导图

• University Proposal

  • Create student committee
  • Determine funding allocations
  • Decide money for each organization

• Man's Opposition

  • Students unsuitable
    • Lack of objectivity and fairness
    • Close involvement in the situation
  • Administrators more impartial
  • Students uninterested
    • Open leadership positions unfilled
    • Example: Student Council lacks vice president
  • Limited time and heavy workload

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 2

2. Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3. Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear, but there are some occasional pauses and minor punctuation issues. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking more fluidly and consistently, focusing on appropriate pauses and pronunciation. This will help to enhance the overall clarity of the speech.

4. Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas. However, there is room for improvement in providing more sufficient support or examples to strengthen the argument. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on elaborating on the reasons given by the man in the conversation and providing more specific examples to support his opinion. This will make the response more persuasive and comprehensive.

5. Language Use

Original: The proposal stress that students should decide to fund for student organization. The proposal emphasizes that students should decide on funding for student organizations. (Changed "stress" to "emphasizes" and rephrased the sentence for clarity)

Original: However, the main disagrees with the proposal. However, the man disagrees with the proposal. (Corrected "main" to "man")

Original: First, the proposal says that students committee can know better, and it's more important for students to get funds, and they know which organization deserves financial support. First, the proposal states that a student committee would have a better understanding of which organizations deserve financial support. (Rephrased the sentence for clarity and conciseness)

Original: However, the main says that the students are too close to do this decision, as there exist conflicts of interest. However, the man argues that students are too close to make this decision due to potential conflicts of interest. (Corrected "main" to "man" and rephrased the sentence for clarity)

Original: They might just provide funds for their friends group or themselves. They might simply allocate funds to their friends' groups or their own groups. (Rephrased the sentence for clarity)

Original: Second, the letter says that the students can gain more valuable leadership experience. Second, the letter suggests that students can gain valuable leadership experience through this process. (Rephrased the sentence for clarity)

Original: However, the students contradict and says that students are too busy to volunteer to the leadership position in campus group, as it would take too much time and too much time to commit on this work, and university are hard to find anyone. However, the man counters by saying that students are too busy to volunteer for leadership positions in campus groups due to the significant time commitment required, making it difficult for the university to find willing participants. (Rephrased the sentence for clarity and conciseness)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal emphasizes that students should decide on funding for student organizations. However, the man disagrees with the proposal. First, the proposal states that a student committee would have a better understanding of which organizations deserve financial support. However, the man argues that students are too close to make this decision due to potential conflicts of interest. They might simply allocate funds to their friends' groups or their own groups. Second, the letter suggests that students can gain valuable leadership experience through this process. However, the man counters by saying that students are too busy to volunteer for leadership positions in campus groups due to the significant time commitment required, making it difficult for the university to find willing participants.

6. Mind Map

• Proposal

  • Emphasizes
  • Student decision on funding

• Man's disagreement

  • Conflicts of interest
  • Allocation to friends' or own groups

• Leadership experience

  • Letter's suggestion
  • Man's counterargument
    • Busy students
    • Time commitment

7. Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高发音，请注意在句子中保持连贯的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在某些方面进行改进。首先，请确保准确理解听力对话中的观点，并在回答中明确表达。例如，在回答中提到“女生”不同意建议，实际上应该是“男生”不同意。此外，在解释原因时，请尝试更详细地描述听力对话中提到的观点，并确保使用恰当的连接词来组织你的想法。这将有助于使你的回答更加清晰和有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：A student suggested that students in the university should be in charge to decide which student's organization should receive the money from the university and how much money they can receive because a special committee made up of students can know better than the university administration and they can save money in this way. The reading passage suggests that a student committee should be responsible for deciding which student organizations should receive funding from the university and how much they should receive. This is because a committee composed of students would have a better understanding of the needs of the organizations than the university administration, potentially leading to more efficient use of funds.（建议使用更自然的表达方式，以及更清晰地描述阅读段落中的观点。）

The students in the conversation disagreed with the suggestion because she thinks students are not the right person to decide the money. The man in the conversation disagreed with this proposal, arguing that students might not be the most suitable decision-makers regarding funding allocation.（请注意正确引用听力对话中的观点，并使用更自然的表达方式。）

Students may be too close to the situation so they may give the money to the friend groups or they just save the money for themselves. He believes that students might be too personally involved, which could lead to favoritism or self-interest in allocating funds.（尝试使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。）

So it's unfair for students to do this thing. As a result, he thinks it would be unfair for students to handle this responsibility.（使用更自然的表达方式。）

And second time she thinks students are very busy, they don't have lots of time and they are not interested in the leadership. Additionally, the man points out that students are often busy and may not have enough time or interest in taking on leadership roles.（请注意正确引用听力对话中的观点，并使用更自然的表达方式。）

They are not willing to volunteer their time to save the money for the groups. It's a big-time commitment. He believes that students might be unwilling to volunteer their time for such a significant commitment.（尝试使用更自然的表达方式。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The reading passage suggests that a student committee should be responsible for deciding which student organizations should receive funding from the university and how much they should receive. This is because a committee composed of students would have a better understanding of the needs of the organizations than the university administration, potentially leading to more efficient use of funds. The man in the conversation disagreed with this proposal, arguing that students might not be the most suitable decision-makers regarding funding allocation. He believes that students might be too personally involved, which could lead to favoritism or self-interest in allocating funds. As a result, he thinks it would be unfair for students to handle this responsibility. Additionally, the man points out that students are often busy and may not have enough time or interest in taking on leadership roles. He believes that students might be unwilling to volunteer their time for such a significant commitment.

6.思维导图

• Reading Passage

  • Student Committee
  • Funding Decisions
  • Better Understanding
  • Efficient Use of Funds

• Listening Passage

  • Man's Disagreement
    • Unsuitable Decision-makers
    • Personal Involvement
    • Unfairness
    • Busy Students
    • Lack of Interest in Leadership Roles

7.关键词