TOEFL TPO 41 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion of the assignment. State her opinion and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但有时会出现停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以进一步加强观点之间的联系和提供更多支持或例子。在练习时，尝试更深入地探讨原因和结果，以使回答更具说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The final project of the history course is an oral presentation with a partner. The final project for this course involves an oral presentation with a partner. (修改了表述，使其更自然) It will help students to discover the rewards and challenges of working with another individual, This project aims to help students explore the benefits and challenges of collaborating with others, (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达) and also help students to share their discoveries with the class and learn from their work. while also enabling them to share their findings with the class and learn from each other's efforts. (改进了语句结构和词汇)

However, the woman doesn't like this proposal because depending on others makes her feel nervous. One of her roommates did this kind of assignment before, but her partner was unreliable. She didn't do anything. It really hurt her grade. Besides, at the end of the semester, students are focusing on their exams, so they won't do a good job because they don't have enough time. They are occupied. They won't listen to others carefully.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The final project for this course involves an oral presentation with a partner. This project aims to help students explore the benefits and challenges of collaborating with others, while also enabling them to share their findings with the class and learn from each other's efforts. However, the woman expresses her concerns about this assignment as she feels uneasy relying on others. She shares an experience of her roommate, who had an unreliable partner in a similar project, leading to a negative impact on her grade. Furthermore, the woman believes that students will be preoccupied with their exams towards the end of the semester, leaving them with insufficient time to devote to the project. Consequently, she thinks that students might not be able to deliver quality work and may not pay adequate attention to their peers' presentations.

6.思维导图

- Final project
  - Oral presentation
  - Partner collaboration

- Woman's concerns
  - Uneasy relying on others
    - Roommate's experience
      - Unreliable partner
      - Negative impact on grade
  - End of semester
    - Preoccupied with exams
    - Insufficient time for project
    - Quality of work and attention to presentations affected

7.关键词

1.子项得分

Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 1 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

总分：18 (Delivery 2, Topic Development 1, Language Use 2)

3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语速较快，有时会出现不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习口语时，注意控制语速，保持稳定的节奏，并尽量避免不必要的停顿。此外，发言者在发音方面也有一些错误，需要加强发音练习，提高准确度。

4.话题发展

从话题发展方面来看，发言者没有明确回答问题，内容与题目关系不大。建议在回答问题时，先明确问题要求，然后结合阅读和听力材料进行回答。在本题中，应该阐述女生对于这个任务的看法以及她给出的理由。可以这样回答：“女生对这个任务表示担忧。她认为依赖别人可能会影响自己的成绩，因为她室友曾经遇到过类似的问题，合作伙伴没有承担责任导致她室友一个人完成所有工作。此外，女生还担心在学期末大家都忙于复习考试，可能没有足够的时间和精力来完成这个任务，导致整个课堂表现不佳，让教授失望，学生们感到沮丧。”

5.语言使用

原文：The university announced a change on course schedule for no further evening class, and the man disagreed with that. The woman expresses her opinion of the assignment. (原文与题目无关，修改为回答题目的内容) Firstly, the man disagreed with the reason that the evening class is too small for students. She is concerned about depending on someone else and gives an example of her roommate's negative experience in a similar project. (删除与题目无关的内容，添加女生的观点和理由) To be more specific, the man mentioned that he liked to study in the small classes, because small classes allow students to practice more and gain more support from the teaching assistant. Hence, he believed that it is a better environment for students to learn in the small class. Secondly, the man disagreed with the survey that mentioned most students are preferred taught by experienced practicality, not young teaching assistants. Additionally, she worries about students being preoccupied with exams at the end of the semester and not having enough time to complete the project properly. (删除与题目无关的内容，添加女生的另一个担忧) The man further said that young teachers could be more interactive and more enthusiastic for students to learn. On the other hand, old teachers might be retired on teaching repeated classes. Therefore, the man disagreed with the proposal.

修订版（140字）：

The woman expresses her opinion of the assignment. She is concerned about depending on someone else and gives an example of her roommate's negative experience in a similar project, where her partner did not contribute and left her to do all the work. Additionally, she worries about students being preoccupied with exams at the end of the semester and not having enough time to complete the project properly. She believes that this situation will lead to poor presentations, disappointment for the professor, and frustration for the students.

6.思维导图

- Woman's opinion
  - Concerns
    - Depending on someone else
      - Roommate's negative experience
    - Preoccupied with exams
      - Lack of time for the project
  - Consequences
    - Poor presentations
    - Disappointment for the professor
    - Frustration for students

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation problems that result from inappropriate pauses. To improve, the speaker should focus on using proper punctuation and pausing at appropriate moments to enhance the clarity of their speech. Additionally, working on pronunciation can help eliminate spelling errors caused by inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details and elaborating on the reasons behind the woman's opinion. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on expanding their explanations and providing more concrete examples to support their points.

5.Language Use

In the statement reading passage, we know that the final project for this course will be an oral presentation. The presentation not only gives the students the opportunity to discover the challenge challenges of working with another individual, but also benefits the entire class by enabling others to learn from everyone's work. But in the conversation, we know the girls woman (use "woman" to refer to one person) disagree(remove "s" for subject-verb agreement) with this statement. Firstly, in the previous experience, her roommate doesn't do anything when they had a team work. She doesn't want it to happen again to her. And also, she thinks everyone has no time to do that and they can't really do well. The professor will feel unsatisfaction dissatisfied and students will feel frustrated.

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the reading passage, we learn that the final project for this course will be an oral presentation, which aims to provide students with opportunities to discover the challenges of working with a partner and benefit the entire class by sharing their findings. However, in the conversation, the woman disagrees with this approach. Her main concerns stem from a previous negative experience where her roommate had to complete a similar project alone due to an uncooperative partner. She fears that such a situation might happen again and affect her grade. Additionally, she believes that students will be preoccupied with studying for exams at the end of the semester, leaving them with insufficient time to prepare and deliver a high-quality presentation. Consequently, she anticipates that the professor will be dissatisfied with the results, and students will feel frustrated by the entire process.

6.Mind Map

- Reading Passage
  - Final project: oral presentation
  - Partner work
  - Benefits: discover challenges, learn from others

- Conversation
  - Woman's disagreement
    - Previous negative experience
      - Uncooperative partner
    - Concerns about time management
      - End of semester exams
      - Insufficient time for preparation
    - Anticipated outcomes
      - Dissatisfied professor
      - Frustrated students

7.Key Words

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should work on maintaining a consistent pace throughout the response and reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, the speaker should focus on accurate pronunciation to avoid any potential spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific details from the listening passage to strengthen the argument. To enhance topic development, the speaker should focus on incorporating more direct quotes or paraphrasing from the listening passage to better support their points and demonstrate a deeper understanding of the material.

5.Language Use

The school announces that final project the final project (added "the" for clarity) will be an oral presentation. In fact, the woman totally disagrees with the idea. This is because she believes that students may not have a good partner. To be more specific, her friend just did a group work in another class, and her teammate did not show up at any meeting. As a result, she needed to do everything by herself. So now, the woman are is (corrected verb form) more concerned about getting a good grade at in the (changed preposition and added "the") final project. In addition, she disagrees with the idea because she believes that students would prepare for final exams at the semester end. As a result, they had no time to put into final project the final project (added "the" for clarity). They would not do a good job and listen to others' project anyway. As a result, the professor might be disappointed, and students might be frustrated by the whole thing.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The school announces that the final project will be an oral presentation. However, the woman strongly disagrees with this idea, mainly due to concerns about potential unreliable partners. She cites her friend's recent experience in another class where her teammate failed to attend meetings and contribute to their group work, leaving her friend to complete everything alone. Consequently, the woman is now more concerned about obtaining a high grade in the final project. Additionally, she argues that students will be preoccupied with preparing for their final exams towards the end of the semester, leaving them with insufficient time to dedicate to the final project. This could result in poor-quality presentations and a lack of attentiveness from their peers. Ultimately, she believes that both the professor and students may end up disappointed and frustrated by this assignment.

6.Mind Map

• Disagreement
  • Unreliable partners
    • Friend's experience
    • Impact on grade
  • End of semester
    • Preparing for final exams
    • Insufficient time for project
  • Consequences
    • Poor-quality presentations
    • Disappointment and frustration

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰的，但在某些地方可能需要稍微调整一下语速和停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的控制，避免过快或过慢。同时，在适当的地方加入停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。此外，注意发音的准确性，以免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。但是，在提供支持或举例时可以更加详细和具体。建议在练习时尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡词，使观点之间的联系更加明确。同时，在提供支持或举例时要确保内容充实且相关性强，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: So the proposed thought suggests that the final project will be the oral presentation in the last two weeks, and it will be completed with assigned partners. The reading passage proposes that the final project will be an oral presentation during the last two weeks of classes, and students will complete it with assigned partners. (将原句中的“proposed thought”改为更自然的“reading passage”，同时调整句子结构，使其更清晰。)

And the woman doesn't agree with it, because first, she feels that depending on someone will make her stressed. The woman disagrees with this arrangement because she believes that relying on someone else could cause her stress. (简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。)

Like her roommate wants to do similar jobs, and the roommate's partner didn't show up for her meetings, so the roommate has to do everything for herself. For instance, her roommate had a similar project, but her partner did not attend meetings, leaving the roommate to complete all tasks alone. (调整句子结构，使其更连贯。)

And finally, it affects her grades, and the woman is really afraid of these things. This situation negatively impacted her roommate's grades, which is what the woman fears might happen to her as well. (使用更准确的词汇，使句子更清晰。)

And second, she doesn't think people will have time, because it's during the exam, so students may not have time to do an excellent job. Secondly, she believes that students may not have enough time to excel in the project since it takes place during exams. (简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇。)

And second, because everyone is preoccupied, so nobody will listen to other presentations, it will make the professor disappointed. Furthermore, she thinks that due to everyone being preoccupied with their studies, they might not pay attention to other presentations, which could disappoint the professor. (调整句子结构，使其更连贯。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage proposes that the final project will be an oral presentation during the last two weeks of classes, and students will complete it with assigned partners. The woman disagrees with this arrangement because she believes that relying on someone else could cause her stress. For instance, her roommate had a similar project, but her partner did not attend meetings, leaving the roommate to complete all tasks alone. This situation negatively impacted her roommate's grades, which is what the woman fears might happen to her as well. Secondly, she believes that students may not have enough time to excel in the project since it takes place during exams. Furthermore, she thinks that due to everyone being preoccupied with their studies, they might not pay attention to other presentations, which could disappoint the professor.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
    - Final project
        - Oral presentation
        - Last two weeks of classes
        - Assigned partners

- Woman's Opinion
    - Disagrees with the arrangement
        - Reasons:
            1. Relying on someone else causes stress
                - Roommate's experience
            2. Insufficient time during exams
            3. Preoccupied students might not pay attention to presentations
                - Disappointing the professor

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some instances where the speaker could improve their delivery by avoiding repetition of certain phrases or words. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should focus on varying their sentence structure and using a wider range of vocabulary.

4.Topic Development The speaking answer provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, the speaker could further improve their topic development by elaborating on the reasons for the woman's concerns and providing more specific examples from the listening passage. Additionally, the speaker should work on making smoother transitions between ideas to create a more cohesive response.

5.Language Use

The woman opposes disapproves of (opposes is too strong, disapproves of is more appropriate) the final project out of two reasons for two reasons (use "for" instead of "out of"). First, the planner of the project believes that it will be a nice opportunity for the students to learn the rewards and challenges to work of working (use "of working" for better flow) with other individuals. However, the woman concerns that she will meet someone irresponsible so that she needs to undertake all of the works by her own. Second, the planner of the project expects it to benefit the entire class. Students can learn related knowledges from each other's oral presentation, but the woman thinks it is because it is nearly the final season, so everyone is focusing on the final exam preparation, which means it is nearly impossible for students to really do a good job or listen to the presentation carefully.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The woman disapproves of the final project for two reasons. Firstly, she believes that although the project aims to provide students with an opportunity to learn about teamwork and collaboration, she fears being paired with an irresponsible partner who might not contribute equally, leaving her to complete all tasks alone. Secondly, she doubts whether these presentations will truly benefit the entire class as intended. She argues that since these presentations are scheduled towards the end of the semester when students are preoccupied with exam preparations, they may not have enough time or focus to deliver high-quality presentations or attentively listen to their peers' work. Consequently, she anticipates that both professors and students might end up feeling disappointed and frustrated with the outcome of this project.

6.Mind Map

- Disapproves of the final project
  - Fear of irresponsible partner
    - Unequal contribution
    - Impact on personal grade
  - Timing of presentations
    - End of semester
    - Exam preparations
    - Limited focus and quality
    - Disappointment and frustration

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答相对清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作调整以提高流畅度。建议同学注意在适当的地方停顿，以便更好地组织语言。此外，注意正确发音，避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，这位同学的回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。然而，在解释女生观点的原因时可以提供更多具体的例子和支持。建议同学在回答中加入更多细节，以便更好地展示对材料的理解和分析。

5.语言使用

Original: The woman believes that this assignment is not good, because it really depends on the sense of responsibility of the team member. Take her roommate as an example, her roommate just finished the project like that. Another girl didn't appear in the meeting, so her roommate finished the project herself. The woman really don't want to experience such situation. Besides, at the end of the semester, many students are concerned about their good grades and they are very busy with preparation for their exams. They are so occupied by studying, so they won't be concentrated on the oral presentation in class. As a result, the professor will be disappointed and the students will be frustrated for everything.

Corrected: The woman believes that this assignment is not goodunsuitable, because it reallyheavily depends on the sense of responsibility of the team member. Take her roommate as an example(用更自然的表达方式), her roommate justhad to finish the project like thaton her own. Another girl didn't appearattend in the meeting, so her roommate finished the project herself. The woman really don'tdoesn't really want to experience such situationa scenario. Besides, at the end of the semester, many students are concerned about their good grades and they are very busy with preparationpreparing for their exams. They are so occupied by studying, so they won't be concentratedfocused on the oral presentation in class. As a result, the professor will be disappointed and the students will be frustrated for everythingwith the entire process.

Revised (140 words): The woman believes that this assignment is unsuitable, as it heavily relies on the sense of responsibility of each team member. For instance, her roommate had to finish a similar project on her own because her partner failed to attend meetings and contribute. The woman doesn't really want to experience such a scenario. Furthermore, at the end of the semester, many students prioritize their grades and are preoccupied with preparing for exams. Consequently, they won't be focused on delivering a quality oral presentation in class. This could lead to disappointment for the professor and frustration for the students with the entire process. To achieve a better outcome, it would be beneficial to consider alternative approaches or provide additional support for students during this critical period.

6.思维导图

- Unsuitable Assignment
  - Heavily relies on team member responsibility
    - Roommate's experience
      - Partner's lack of contribution
  - End of semester challenges
    - Prioritizing grades
    - Preoccupied with exam preparation
  - Consequences
    - Disappointment for professor
    - Frustration for students

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

作为一名托福老师，从表达方面来看，这位考生的回答相对清晰，语速稳定，仅有少量停顿。但在某些地方，标点符号的使用不太恰当，可能是因为发音不准确导致的。建议考生在练习口语时注意提高发音准确性，并适当控制停顿。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，考生的回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够陈述女生的观点及其原因。但在组织结构上略显简单，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和过渡句来使回答更加连贯。同时，在举例子时可以尝试提供更具体的细节，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The final project of this course is let everyone to work with an assigned partner on a research and present their results at the end of semester. The final project of this course requires everyone to work with an assigned partner on research and present their results at the end of the semester. (这里的表述应该更加自然和准确。)

This project is said to provide everyone the opportunity to work with others and let them learn to each other. This project aims to provide everyone the opportunity to collaborate with others and learn from each other. (这里的表述可以更加简洁明了。)

However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with it. However, the woman in the conversation expresses her concerns about it. (这里可以使用更恰当的词汇来描述女生的态度。)

On one hand, she thinks that depending on others makes her really nervous because her roommate used to work with a lazy partner and had to do all things by herself. On one hand, she feels uneasy relying on others because her roommate once worked with an irresponsible partner and had to complete all tasks by herself. (这里可以使用更准确的词汇来描述女生的感受和原因。)

On the other hand, she thinks that as the presentation is at the end of semester, nobody has the mood to listen to others' presentation as they are very busy. On the other hand, she believes that since the presentation is scheduled at the end of the semester, no one will be in the mood to listen to others' presentations due to their busy schedules. (这里可以使用更恰当的词汇和语法来表达女生的观点。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The final project of this course requires everyone to work with an assigned partner on research and present their results at the end of the semester. This project aims to provide everyone the opportunity to collaborate with others and learn from each other. However, the woman in the conversation expresses her concerns about it. On one hand, she feels uneasy relying on others because her roommate once worked with an irresponsible partner and had to complete all tasks by herself. On the other hand, she believes that since the presentation is scheduled at the end of the semester, no one will be in the mood to listen to others' presentations due to their busy schedules.

6.思维导图

- Final project
  - Assigned partner
  - Research and presentation

- Project aims
  - Collaboration
  - Learning from each other

- Woman's concerns
  - Uneasy relying on others
    - Roommate's experience
  - Presentation timing
    - End of semester
    - Busy schedules

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 从表达方面来看，整体上讲得还算清楚，但是在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 The response is coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement in topic development. The speaker successfully states the woman's opinion and provides reasons for her opinion. However, the response could be more detailed by including specific examples from the listening passage, such as the woman's concern about her grade and her belief that students will be too preoccupied with studying for exams to fully engage in the project. To improve, focus on providing more specific examples and elaborating on the reasons given in the listening passage to support the woman's opinion.

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the university will conduct final project, this is because it can provide students to discover the rewards and challenges of work with another student. The university will conduct a final project, as it allows students to discover the rewards and challenges of working with another student. (将conduct改为will conduct，将work改为working，并在final project前加a。这样句子更自然。)

Furthermore, it will benefit the entire class since it can enable other students to learn from their work. Furthermore, it benefits the entire class as it enables other students to learn from their peers' work. (将since改为as，将can enable改为enables，并将their work改为peers' work。这样句子更自然。)

However, the woman disagreed with this idea. However, the woman disagrees with this idea. (将disagreed改为disagrees，使时态一致。)

First of all, she said that her roommate engaged in this project and do everything herself since other girls don't research anything. Firstly, she mentioned that her roommate participated in a similar project and had to do everything herself because her partner didn't contribute any research. (将engaged改为participated，将do改为had to do，将since改为because，并在similar project前加a。这样句子更自然。)

As a result, it hurt her rate. As a result, it negatively affected her grade. (将hurt her rate改为negatively affected her grade，使表达更准确。)

Besides, she argued that many students are very busy and don't listen anyway since they just focus on their final exam. Additionally, she argued that many students are too busy and won't pay attention to the presentations because they are focused on their final exams. (将don't listen anyway改为won't pay attention to the presentations，并将just focus on their final exam改为are focused on their final exams。这样句子更自然。)

Consequently, many students and professors could be disappointed by the whole thing. Consequently, both students and professors might be disappointed by the entire process. (将could be改为might be，并将whole thing改为entire process。这样句子更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university will conduct a final project, as it allows students to discover the rewards and challenges of working with another student. Furthermore, it benefits the entire class as it enables other students to learn from their peers' work. However, the woman disagrees with this idea. Firstly, she mentioned that her roommate participated in a similar project and had to do everything herself because her partner didn't contribute any research. As a result, it negatively affected her grade. Additionally, she argued that many students are too busy and won't pay attention to the presentations because they are focused on their final exams. Consequently, both students and professors might be disappointed by the entire process.

6.思维导图

- Final Project
  - Rewards and challenges
  - Benefits the entire class

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the idea
  - Reasons
    - Roommate's experience
      - Partner didn't contribute
      - Negatively affected grade
    - Students too busy
      - Focused on final exams
      - Won't pay attention to presentations
  - Consequences
    - Disappointment for students and professors

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some occasional pauses that could be improved. To enhance the delivery, the speaker should practice speaking at a consistent pace and work on reducing unnecessary pauses. Additionally, focusing on accurate pronunciation will help minimize spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement in terms of providing more specific examples and support for the woman's opinion. To strengthen topic development, the speaker should elaborate on the reasons behind the woman's concerns and provide more detailed explanations of her experiences and thoughts. This will help create a more comprehensive and persuasive response.

5.Language Use

Original: The professor asked an hourly oral presentation during the last two weeks for his final project. He believes that this final project is a reward and students can challenge working with others and share their discoveries. But the woman disagreed with the idea. She believes she will be nervous about it. Based on her roommate's experience, her roommate met a partner who did not do anything, so the whole project will do by herself. So that the woman said he did not want others to affect his grade. And by learning by others' presentation, people are all frustrated and focus on exams. They will be preoccupied.

(Replace "hourly" with "oral" as it is more appropriate in this context.)

Revised (140 words): The professor assigned an oral presentation for the final project, to be completed during the last two weeks of the semester. He believes that this project offers a rewarding experience for students to collaborate and share their findings. However, the woman disagrees with this approach, expressing concerns about potential anxiety and reliance on her partner. Drawing from her roommate's negative experience, she fears that an uncooperative partner might jeopardize her grade. Furthermore, she argues that students will be preoccupied with exam preparations during this period, leading to frustration and a lack of focus on the presentations. Consequently, she doubts the effectiveness of this assignment in achieving its intended goals and anticipates disappointment for both the professor and students involved.

6.Mind Map

- Final Project
  - Oral presentation
  - Collaboration
  - Professor's perspective
    - Rewarding experience
    - Sharing findings
  - Woman's opinion
    - Anxiety
    - Reliance on partner
    - Roommate's experience
      - Uncooperative partner
      - Jeopardized grade
    - Exam preparations
      - Frustration
      - Lack of focus on presentations

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 话题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：23

3.表达 回答中的表达相对清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。为了提高交付得分，建议在练习时注意保持连贯、流畅的语速，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，但在组织结构和论据方面还有待加强。为了提高话题发展得分，建议在回答时更明确地陈述女士的观点，并给出更具体的例子来支持她的观点。此外，可以尝试使用更多的连接词和短语来使回答更加连贯和有条理。

5.语言使用

原文：The history course plans to have a final project of oral presentation because it can contribute students to collaborate with each other and the rest of the class can benefit from their research. The final project in the history course is an oral presentation, which encourages students to collaborate and allows the rest of the class to benefit from their research. (修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。)

However, the woman in the conversation disagrees with the idea for two reasons. However, the woman expresses her concerns about this assignment for two main reasons. (使用了更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式。)

The first reason is that the final project will probably hurt her grade since some of the partners didn't show up at the meeting at all and she had to do everything by herself which lead to a bad grade. The first reason is that she worries about her grade being negatively affected if her partner doesn't contribute, as she has seen this happen to others who had to complete the project alone, resulting in a poor grade. (修改了句子结构，使表达更清晰。)

The second reason is that during the final times, all the students are so occupied that they won't pay much attention to listen to others' content and have effort to put everything together. The second reason is that during finals, students are preoccupied with their studies and may not have time or focus to listen attentively to others' presentations or put in the effort to create a well-prepared presentation. (修改了句子结构，使表达更自然。)

Therefore, the woman in the conversation feels frustrated. Therefore, the woman feels frustrated with this assignment. (简化了表达，使其更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The final project in the history course is an oral presentation, which encourages students to collaborate and allows the rest of the class to benefit from their research. However, the woman expresses her concerns about this assignment for two main reasons. The first reason is that she worries about her grade being negatively affected if her partner doesn't contribute, as she has seen this happen to others who had to complete the project alone, resulting in a poor grade. The second reason is that during finals, students are preoccupied with their studies and may not have time or focus to listen attentively to others' presentations or put in the effort to create a well-prepared presentation. Therefore, the woman feels frustrated with this assignment.

6.思维导图

- Final project
  - Oral presentation
  - Collaboration
  - Class benefits

- Woman's concerns
  - Grade affected
    - Irresponsible partner
    - Poor grade example
  - Finals period
    - Preoccupied students
    - Lack of attention and effort

- Frustration

7.关键词

1. Sub Scores Delivery: 0 Topic Development: 0 Language Use: 0

2. Estimated Scores Estimated Score: 0

3. Delivery Unfortunately, the speaking answer provided is incomplete and does not allow for a proper evaluation of the delivery aspect. To improve, please provide a complete response to the question, ensuring that you speak clearly and at a consistent pace.

4. Topic Development The speaking answer provided is insufficient to evaluate topic development. To improve, please provide a complete response to the question, addressing the woman's opinion of the assignment and explaining the reasons she gives for holding that opinion. Make sure your response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples.

5. Language Use

Original Answer: We know from the statement the

Corrected Answer: We know from the statement the The woman expresses her concerns about the final project assignment. (The original sentence was incomplete and did not address the question. The corrected sentence provides a clear statement of the woman's opinion.)

Revised Answer (140 words): The woman expresses her concerns about the final project assignment, as she believes it might negatively impact her grade. She is worried about depending on someone else for the project, as she has seen her roommate suffer due to an irresponsible partner who did not contribute to their joint project. This experience has made her apprehensive about collaborating with others, even though she acknowledges that this is not the intended lesson from the professor.

Additionally, she thinks that the timing of the presentations is not ideal, as students will be preoccupied with studying for exams during the last two weeks of classes. She doubts that anyone will be able to do a good job on their projects or pay attention to others' presentations under such circumstances. Overall, she anticipates that both the professor and students will be disappointed and frustrated by this assignment.

6. Mind Map

- Woman's concerns
  - Impact on grade
  - Dependence on partner
    - Roommate's experience
  - Timing of presentations
    - Exam period
    - Students' preoccupation
  - Anticipated outcomes
    - Disappointment
    - Frustration

7. Key Words