TOEFL TPO 52 Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain the concept of impression management, using the examples provided by the professor.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Language Use: 3 Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言流利，语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但在发音方面，有些单词发音不准确，导致拼写错误。建议发言者多加练习，提高发音准确度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰，并且提供了足够的支持和例子。但在阐述观点时，可以更加详细地解释和展开。建议在练习中尝试更深入地探讨话题，以便更好地支持自己的观点。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, in the site of Ontario, In the context of the reading passage, (原文中的表达不清晰，建议用更准确的描述) the reading passage mainly talks about impression management, which means that people may control their impression that we take on others in social situations. In the sociology lecture, the professor gives again two examples to explain this concept. The first example is that when students take their class presentation, some students would take their T-shirt while other students may dress up, like wear their nice sweater. And this can indicate that whether students take this presentation seriously or not, can show that whether they are a responsible man, or they would have a good performance. The other example is that when the professor take a car to pick up one, you know, president to cross the town, he wanted to make her happy so that he can show that he is a responsible and respective man. So also he changed his radio into a classical music station, since it can show his sophisticated

Corrected: In the context of the reading passage, it mainly talks about impression management, which means that people may control the impression they make on others in social situations. In the sociology lecture, the professor provides two examples to explain this concept. The first example is when students give a class presentation; some students might wear a T-shirt while others may dress up, like wearing a nice sweater. This can indicate whether students take the presentation seriously or not and show if they are responsible or if they will have a good performance. The other example is when the professor takes a car to pick up the university president to drive across town; he wants to make a good impression so that he can show he is responsible and respectful. So, he also changed his radio to a classical music station, as it can demonstrate his sophistication.

Revised (140 words): In the context of the reading passage, it discusses impression management, which is about controlling the impression people make on others in social situations. The sociology lecture provides two examples to illustrate this concept. Firstly, when students give a class presentation, their attire can indicate their seriousness and responsibility, affecting their performance. Secondly, the professor's actions when picking up the university president, such as cleaning his car and changing the radio station to classical music, are intended to create a responsible and sophisticated image. These examples demonstrate how individuals consciously or unconsciously manage their impressions in various social situations to influence others' perceptions of them. By understanding impression management, we can better navigate social interactions and present ourselves in a favorable light.

6.思维导图

- Impression Management
  - Definition
  - Sociology Lecture
    - Example 1: Class Presentation
      - Attire
      - Seriousness
      - Responsibility
    - Example 2: Picking up University President
      - Car cleanliness
      - Radio station
      - Sophistication
  - Conscious and Unconscious Efforts
  - Influencing Perceptions

7.关键词