TOEFL TPO 73 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people like to send text messages when they need information. Others prefer to call people on their cell phones for the information they need. Explain which method you prefer and why.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3

• Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 23

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, but there are some areas for improvement. The speaker should work on varying their sentence structure to create a more engaging and natural flow. Additionally, the speaker could benefit from using more transitional phrases to connect ideas smoothly. To improve, the speaker should practice speaking aloud, focusing on pacing and incorporating pauses at appropriate moments.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with a clear preference stated at the beginning. The speaker provides two reasons for their preference and gives an example to support their argument. However, the example could be more detailed and specific to better illustrate the point. To improve topic development, the speaker should work on expanding their examples and providing more in-depth explanations of their reasons. This will help create a more persuasive and compelling response.

5. Grammar

I would prefer calling people on their cell phones for the information I need instead of messaging the people for information. I think so because of two reasons. One thing is there is no time that is wasted in you typing out all the informationinformation, and the second reason is that you can ask multiple questions at the same timetime, so that it doesn't waste your time, like the first reason. So, for example, I had some questions about a banking procedure and I called the bank to ask those questions. If I used messages, it would takehave taken a lot of time for meme, but all my questions were clarified at the same time.

5. Language Use

Original:

I would prefer calling people on their cell phones for the information I need instead of messaging the people for information. I think so because of two reasons. One thing is there is no time that is wasted in you typing out all the information and the second reason is that you can ask multiple questions at the same time so that it doesn't waste your time, like the first reason. So, for example, I had some questions about a banking procedure and I called the bank to ask those questions. If I used messages, it would take a lot of time for me but all my questions were clarified at the same time.

Revised:

I prefer calling people on their cell phones for the information I need, rather than sending text messages. This preference is based on two main reasons. Firstly, calling allows for immediate communication without wasting time typing out lengthy messages. Secondly, it enables me to ask multiple questions simultaneously, resulting in a more efficient exchange of information.

For instance, I once had several questions about a banking procedure and decided to call the bank for clarification. If I had chosen to send text messages instead, it would have taken much longer to receive answers to all my inquiries. By making a phone call, I was able to quickly resolve my concerns and save valuable time.

I prefer calling people on their cell phones for the information I need, rather than sending text messages (revised for clarity and conciseness). This preference is based on two main reasons (structured the sentence to introduce supporting examples). Firstly, calling allows for immediate communication without wasting time typing out lengthy messages (rephrased for better flow and clarity). Secondly, it enables me to ask multiple questions simultaneously, resulting in a more efficient exchange of information (rephrased for better flow and clarity).

For instance (smooth transition), I once had several questions about a banking procedure and decided to call the bank for clarification (providing a specific example). If I had chosen to send text messages instead, it would have taken much longer to receive answers to all my inquiries (explaining the reason behind the example). By making a phone call, I was able to quickly resolve my concerns and save valuable time (strong conclusion that reinforces the argument).

Corrected:

I would prefer calling people on their cell phones for the information I need instead of messaging need, rather than sending text messages (revised for clarity and conciseness). This preference is based on two main reasons (structured the people sentence to introduce supporting examples). Firstly, calling allows for information. I think so because of two reasons. One thing is there is no immediate communication without wasting time that is wasted in you typing out all the information lengthy messages (rephrased for better flow and the second reason is that you can clarity). Secondly, it enables me to ask multiple questions at the same time so that it doesn't waste your time, like the first reason. So, simultaneously, resulting in a more efficient exchange of information (rephrased for example, better flow and clarity).

For instance (smooth transition), I once had some several questions about a banking procedure and I called decided to call the bank to ask those questions. for clarification (providing a specific example). If I used messages, had chosen to send text messages instead, it would take a lot of time for me but have taken much longer to receive answers to all my questions were clarified at inquiries (explaining the same time.reason behind the example). By making a phone call, I was able to quickly resolve my concerns and save valuable time (strong conclusion that reinforces the argument).

7. Display title: 7.Mind Map

- Preference: Calling over messaging
  - Main Point: Time efficiency
    - Supporting Example: Faster communication
    - Supporting Example: Simultaneous multiple questions
  - Main Point: Clarity of information
    - Supporting Example: Immediate clarification
    - Supporting Example: Avoiding misunderstandings
  - Conclusion: Calling is more efficient and clear than messaging for obtaining information

8. Display title: 8.Key Words

9. Display title: 9.Additional Examples

10. Example: Discussing complex topics

    • Sub-opinion: Calling allows for better understanding
    • Explanation: Tone of voice and immediate feedback help clarify complex topics
    • Supporting Example: Discussing a work project with colleagues over the phone

11. Example: Making appointments or reservations

    • Sub-opinion: Calling ensures accurate bookings
    • Explanation: Immediate confirmation and ability to ask questions about availability
    • Supporting Example: Calling a restaurant to make a reservation for a large group

12. Example: Handling emergencies or urgent situations

    • Sub-opinion: Calling provides instant communication
    • Explanation: Faster response time in critical situations
    • Supporting Example: Calling a tow truck when your car breaks down

13. Example: Building personal connections

    • Sub-opinion: Calling fosters stronger relationships
    • Explanation: Conversations feel more personal and engaging over the phone
    • Supporting Example: Catching up with a long-distance friend through a phone call

14. Example: Resolving customer service issues

    • Sub-opinion: Calling leads to quicker resolutions
    • Explanation: Direct contact with customer service representatives allows for immediate assistance
    • Supporting Example: Calling an airline to change a flight reservation