TOEFL TPO 69 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the plan described in the announcement. Briefly summarize the plan. Then state her opinion about the plan and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 2 Topic Development: 2.5 Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

19. 3.表达

在表达方面，发言者的语速和发音需要改进。有时候，发言者在句子中的停顿不太合适，导致语句听起来不够流畅。此外，发言者需要注意正确的发音，以避免拼写错误。建议发言者多练习发音和语速控制，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，发言者对于阅读和听力材料的总结较为简略，没有充分展示对材料的理解。建议发言者在回答问题时更加详细地概括阅读和听力材料，并给出更多支持或例子来说明女士对计划的看法及其原因。同时，在组织回答时要注意逻辑性和连贯性，使回答更加清晰易懂。

5.语言使用

Original: Well, the university has decided to change the policy about parking lounge to let the undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge.（将“parking lounge”改为“Perkins Lounge”，并调整句子结构使其更自然。）

First off, the university thinks that they can let all the students to use in this study lounge because they have some spare room for undergraduate students. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Besides, the undergraduate students have insufficient room for studying, so they had to find some new places for studying. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying.（使用更高级的词汇，并调整句子结构。）

And in the conversation, the woman doesn't like this idea because she says that she wants some place to spread their books, but the study lounge for graduate students is too noisy and crowded. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded.（调整句子结构，使其更自然。）

Besides, the woman points that she needs a diagnosed place like dormitory for studying. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying.（将“diagnosed”改为“designated”，并调整句子结构。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has decided to change the policy about Perkins Lounge, allowing undergraduate students to study in the graduate study lounge. Firstly, the university believes that they can accommodate all students in this study lounge because there is extra space for undergraduate students. Moreover, undergraduate students lack adequate study space, so they need to find additional places for studying. In the conversation, the woman dislikes this idea because she wants a place to spread out her books; however, she believes that opening the graduate study lounge to undergraduates will make it noisy and crowded. Furthermore, the woman suggests that a designated space, such as a dormitory, should be provided for studying. This would address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates while maintaining a quiet and less crowded environment for graduate students in Perkins Lounge.

6.思维导图

• University policy change

  • Perkins Lounge
  • Allowing undergraduates

• Reasons for change

  • Extra space available
  • Insufficient study space for undergraduates

• Woman's opinion

  • Dislikes the idea
  • Quiet and less crowded environment needed

• Suggestion

  • Designated study space (e.g., dormitory)

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高发音准确度，避免出现拼写错误。同时，尽量保持语速一致，减少不必要的停顿。

4.话题发展 发言者对问题进行了回答，并提供了一定程度的解释和例子。但在话题发展方面还有提升空间。建议发言者在组织回答时更加注重逻辑性和条理性，确保观点之间的联系更加紧密，并尝试提供更多具体的支持或例子来增强论述。

5.语言使用

Original: The university is going to allow undergraduates to use Parkinson's Perkins Lounge as well, but the woman in the listening part doesn't like it, first because she said that the Parkinson's Perkins Lounge offers a quiet space for graduate students to sit and think. (原文中的“Parkinson's”应为“Perkins”，请注意发音。)

Revised: The university is going to allow undergraduates to use Perkins Lounge as well, but the woman in the listening part doesn't like it, first because she said that the Perkins Lounge offers a quiet space for graduate students to sit and think.

Original: The students can spread out their books on the table. As a graduate student, it's really nice to have a space that is not noisy and crowded. Secondly, she said that if the university wants to address the problem that there is not enough space for studying, the university can build a new dormitory for undergraduate students to study in there.

Revised: The students can spread out their books on the table. As graduate students, it's really nice to have a space that is not noisy and crowded. Secondly, she said that if the university wants to address the problem of insufficient study space, they can build a new dormitory with designated study areas for undergraduate students.

140. words revised version:

The university plans to allow undergraduates access to Perkins Lounge, which was previously reserved for graduate students. However, the woman in the listening part disagrees with this decision. She believes that Perkins Lounge provides a quiet and peaceful environment for graduate students to concentrate on their work and spread out their books on tables. As graduate students, having such a space without noise and crowds is highly valuable. Furthermore, she suggests that if the university wants to address the issue of insufficient study space for undergraduates, they should consider constructing a new dormitory with designated study areas specifically for undergraduate students. This way, both graduate and undergraduate students can have their own dedicated spaces for studying and working on projects.

6.思维导图

- University plan
  - Allow undergraduates access to Perkins Lounge

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagrees with the plan
  - Reasons
    - Quiet and peaceful environment for graduate students
    - Insufficient study space for undergraduates can be addressed differently
      - Construct new dormitory with designated study areas for undergraduates

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 主题发展（Topic Development）：3.5

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答中的发音和语速较为清晰和流畅，但偶尔会有停顿。建议在练习时注意掌握适当的停顿，以提高语言表达的连贯性。同时，注意纠正发音错误，以免影响听众理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求，能够简要概括计划，并说明女士对计划的看法及原因。但在组织结构上可以进一步优化，例如在提到女士的观点时，可以更明确地指出她反对这个计划。此外，在给出女士建议时，可以更详细地描述她提出的替代方案。总体来说，需要在组织结构和论据方面进行一些改进，以使回答更加有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The announcement is about a change of the policy in a study lunch, The announcement is about a change in the policy of a study lounge,（将“a change of”改为“a change in”，将“study lunch”改为“study lounge”，使句子更自然。）which was reserved only for graduate students, but now it is also available for additional undergraduate students. which was previously reserved only for graduate students, but now it has been opened to undergraduate students as well.（在描述计划变化时，使用更准确的词汇和表达。）

This is mainly because the enrollment of undergraduate students has started to increase for the last few years. This is mainly due to the increasing enrollment of undergraduate students over the past few years.（将“has started to increase for the last few years”改为“over the past few years”，使句子更自然。）

However, in a conversation, the woman disagreed with the announcement because of two main reasons. However, during the conversation, the woman expressed her disagreement with the announcement for two main reasons.（将“in a conversation”改为“during the conversation”，使句子更自然。）

The study lunch can be not perfect anymore because there are more students, The study lounge may no longer be ideal due to an increased number of students,（将“can be not perfect anymore”改为“may no longer be ideal”，使句子更自然。）

so less rooms can be used for the graduate students to spread their book out for doing some research. thus reducing the space available for graduate students to spread out their books and conduct research.（将“less rooms can be used”改为“reducing the space available”，使句子更自然。）

In addition, the study lunch will be noisy and crowded, Additionally, the study lounge may become noisy and crowded,（将“In addition”改为“Additionally”，使句子更自然。）

so the woman suggests that the university should use the spare areas in the dormitory as study rooms for undergraduate students. so the woman suggests that the university should designate spare areas in the dormitory as study spaces specifically for undergraduate students.（将“use”改为“designate”，使句子更自然。）

修订后的回答（140词）：

The announcement is about a change in the policy of a study lounge, which was previously reserved only for graduate students, but now it has been opened to undergraduate students as well. This is mainly due to the increasing enrollment of undergraduate students over the past few years. However, during the conversation, the woman expressed her disagreement with the announcement for two main reasons. The study lounge may no longer be ideal due to an increased number of students, thus reducing the space available for graduate students to spread out their books and conduct research. Additionally, the study lounge may become noisy and crowded, so the woman suggests that the university should designate spare areas in the dormitory as study spaces specifically for undergraduate students.

6.思维导图

- Announcement
  - Change in policy
  - Study lounge
  - Open to undergraduate students

- Reason for change
  - Increasing enrollment of undergraduate students

- Woman's opinion
  - Disagreement with the announcement
  - Reasons for disagreement
    - Reduced space for graduate students' research
    - Noisy and crowded study lounge

- Woman's suggestion
  - Designate spare areas in dormitory as study spaces for undergraduate students

7.关键词