TOEFL TPO 43 Writing Task 1 Sample: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.
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Agnostids were a group of marine animals that became extinct about 450 million years ago. Agnostid fossils can be found in rocks in many areas around the world. From the fossil remains, we know that agnostids were primitive arthropods—relatives of modern-day insects. However, the fossil information does not allow paleontologists to determine with certainty what agnostids ate or how they behaved. There are several different theories about how agnostids may have lived.Free-Swimming PredatorsFirst, the agnostids may have been free-swimming predators that hunted smaller animals. It is known that other types of primitive arthropods were strong swimmers and active predators, so it is reasonable that the agnostids may have lived that way as well. And while the agnostids were small, sometimes just six millimeters long, there were plenty of smaller organisms in the ancient ocean for them to prey on.Seafloor DwellersSecond, they may have dwelled on the seafloor. Again, there are examples of other types of primitive arthropods living this way, so it is possible that agnostids did too. On the seafloor they would have survived by scavenging dead organisms or by grazing on bacteria.ParasitesThird, there is the possibility that the agnostids were parasites, living on and feeding off larger organisms. One reason that this seems possible is that there are many species of modern-day arthropods that exist as parasites, such as fleas, ticks, and mites. The agnostids might have lived on primitive fish or even on other, larger arthropods.
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Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.
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The author of the reading passage discusses the theories about the behavior and eat habits of the agnostids, which is a group of marine animals that beacame extinct about 450 million years go. However, the professor of the lecturer challenges all 3 notions, and then put forward her explanations. First, according to the reading passage, the author claims that these agnostids have the ability of free-swimming, cause they can hunt smaller animals easily. This ability contibute to better chase the pray. even if they only six kilometers long. On the contrary, the professor refutes that by emphasizing if they good at chasing the prays, agnostid must have the developed eyes. Actually, they were blind and used the special sensory to chase the prays, but there were never recorded. Therefore, people can not asserts that they are free-swimming predators. Second, the author puts forward an example to analogy the behavior of aginostid, since the arthropods have dwelled on the seafloor. Consequently, the author also speculates that the aginostid have the same ability. However, the lecturer asserts that it is not an ability to help them move fast, instead, they can spread largely and even able to move fast. As a result, it is unusual to sea floor dwellers. At last, the professor casts doubt on the population of organisms, since the author claims that agnoatids were parasites, living on and feeding off larger organisms. While organisms will decline, if the aginatids ate the organisms. Consequently, it contradicts to the therory of the aginostids were parasites. The population rule out thisis theory.
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1.Sub Scores
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Task fulfillment: 3
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Organization: 3
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Coherence and Cohesion: 3
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Language Use: 2
2.Estimated Scores
- Estimated Score: 20
3.Task completeness The essay does address the specific requirements of the task by summarizing the points made in the lecture and explaining how they challenge the theories presented in the reading passage. However, there are some inaccuracies and misunderstandings in the content, which affect the overall clarity of the essay. To improve task fulfillment, ensure that you accurately represent both the reading passage and lecture's main points. Additionally, work on providing clearer explanations for how each point from the lecture challenges a specific theory from the reading passage.
Example 1: Original sentence: "On the contrary, the professor refutes that by emphasizing if they good at chasing the prays, agnostid must have developed eyes." Improved sentence: "On the contrary, the professor refutes this theory by emphasizing that if agnostids were good at chasing prey, they would need to have well-developed eyes."
Example 2: Original sentence: "However, the lecturer asserts that it is not an ability to help them move fast, instead, they can spread largely and even able to move fast." Improved sentence: "However, according to the lecturer, agnostids' ability to inhabit multiple geographic areas suggests that they were able to move quickly across large distances – an unusual trait for seafloor dwellers."
4.Essay structure and organization The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs addressing each theory from both sources (reading passage and lecture), and a conclusion. However, some paragraphs lack clear topic sentences or transitions between ideas. To improve organization and coherence within your essay:
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Begin each body paragraph with a clear topic sentence that introduces its main point.
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Use transition words or phrases to guide the reader through your essay and connect ideas more smoothly.
Example 1: Original sentence: "First, according to the reading passage, the author claims that these agnostids have the ability of free-swimming..." Improved sentence: "Firstly, the reading passage suggests that agnostids may have been free-swimming predators due to their ability to hunt smaller animals."
Example 2: Original sentence: "Second, the author puts forward an example to analogy the behavior of aginostid, since the arthropods have dwelled on the seafloor." Improved sentence: "Secondly, the reading passage proposes that agnostids could have been seafloor dwellers based on similarities with other arthropods' behaviors."
5. 语法批改
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At last, the professor casts doubt on the population of organisms, since the author claims that agnoatidsagnostics(misspelling) were parasites, living on and feeding off larger organisms. While organisms will decline, if the aginatidsagitated(misspelling) ate the organisms. Consequently, it contradicts to the therorytheory(misspelling) of the aginostidsagnostics(misspelling) were parasites. The population rule out thisisthesis(misspelling) theory.
Section Title: 6. Revised Essay
The reading passage presents three theories about the lifestyle and eating habits of agnostids, a group of extinct marine animals that lived around 450 million years ago. However, the lecturer challenges each of these theories and provides her own explanations.
Firstly, the reading passage suggests that agnostids may have been free-swimming predators capable of hunting smaller animals due to their ability to chase prey effectively, despite their small size. In contrast, the lecturer disputes this by emphasizing that efficient predators would require well-developed eyes for tracking prey. In reality, agnostids were often blind and relied on special sensory organs to locate prey; however, there is no evidence supporting this in the fossil record. Thus, it cannot be concluded that they were free-swimming predators.
Secondly, the author proposes that agnostids may have dwelled on the seafloor like other primitive arthropods. Consequently, it is speculated that agnostids possessed similar abilities. However, the lecturer contends that this would not enable them to move quickly or cover large distances. Instead, they would have been limited to localized areas rather than spreading across vast regions. The fact that many agnostid species inhabited multiple geographic areas spread over large distances suggests they were capable of moving rapidly – an unusual trait for seafloor dwellers.
Lastly, the lecturer casts doubt on the theory that agnostids were parasites living on and feeding off larger organisms as suggested by the author. The population of parasites must remain within certain limits; otherwise, they could kill off their host organisms. However, it is believed that many agnostid populations were quite large based on the vast amounts of fossilized individuals found. This significant population size contradicts the theory that agnostids were parasites and rules out this possibility. (290 words)
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- Mind Map
- Introduction
- Reading passage theories
- Lecturer's challenges
- Theory 1: Free-swimming predators
- Reading passage: small size, effective chasing
- Lecturer's challenge: lack of well-developed eyes, no evidence in fossil record
- Theory 2: Seafloor dwellers
- Reading passage: similarities to primitive arthropods
- Lecturer's challenge: limited movement, widespread geographic distribution
- Theory 3: Parasites
- Reading passage: living on and feeding off larger organisms
- Lecturer's challenge: large population size, contradicting parasite theory
- Conclusion
- Key Words
| Word | Phonetic Symbol | Part of Speech | English Definition | Sample Sentence |
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| agnostids | æɡˈnɒstɪdz | noun | A group of extinct marine animals that lived around 450 million years ago. | The reading passage presents three theories about the lifestyle and eating habits of agnostids. |
| predators | ˈprɛdətərz | noun | Animals that hunt and kill other animals for food. | The reading passage suggests that agnostids may have been free-swimming predators capable of hunting smaller animals. |
| seafloor | ˈsiːflɔːr | noun | The bottom of the ocean or sea. | The author proposes that agnostids may have dwelled on the seafloor like other primitive arthropods. |
| arthropods | -ˈɑrθrəpɒdz | noun | Invertebrate animals with an exoskeleton, segmented body, and jointed limbs. | Consequently, it is speculated that agnostids possessed similar abilities to other primitive arthropods. |
| parasites | ˈpærəsaɪts | noun | Organisms that live on or in a host organism and obtain nourishment from the host without benefiting it. | The lecturer casts doubt on the theory that agnostids were parasites living on and feeding off larger organisms. |
| sensory organs | -ˈsɛnsəri ˈɔrɡənz | noun | Body parts responsible for receiving stimuli and transmitting signals to the nervous system. | In reality, agnostids were often blind and relied on special sensory organs to locate prey. |
| fossil record | -ˈfɒsəl rɪkɔrd | noun | The total number of fossils that have been discovered, as well as information derived from them. | However, there is no evidence supporting this in the fossil record. |
| geographic | -dʒiəˈɡræfɪk | adjective | Relating to the arrangement of physical features, climate, soil, and vegetation of a region or area. | The fact that many agnostid species inhabited multiple geographic areas spread over large distances suggests they were capable of moving rapidly. |
| contradict | -kəntrəˈdikt | verb | To assert the opposite of a statement or idea expressed by someone else; deny directly and categorically. | This significant population size contradicts the theory that agnostids were parasites and rules out this possibility. |
- Revised Essay
The reading passage presents three theories about the lifestyle and eating habits of agnostids, a group of extinct marine animals that lived around 450 million years ago. However, the lecturer challenges each of these theories and provides her own explanations.
Firstly, the reading passage suggests that agnostids may have been free-swimming predators capable of hunting smaller animals due to their ability to chase prey effectively, despite their small size. In contrast, the lecturer disputes this by emphasizing that efficient predators would require well-developed eyes for tracking prey. In reality, agnostids were often blind and relied on special sensory organs to locate prey; however, there is no evidence supporting this in the fossil record. Thus, it cannot be concluded that they were free-swimming predators.
Secondly, the author proposes that agnostids may have dwelled on the seafloor like other primitive arthropods. Consequently, it is speculated that agnostids possessed similar abilities. However, the lecturer contends that this would not enable them to move quickly or cover large distances. Instead, they would have been limited to localized areas rather than spreading across vast regions. The fact that many agnostid species inhabited multiple geographic areas spread over large distances suggests they were capable of moving rapidly – an unusual trait for seafloor dwellers.
Lastly, the lecturer casts doubt on the theory that agnostids were parasites living on and feeding off larger organisms as suggested by the author. The population of parasites must remain within certain limits; otherwise, they could kill off their host organisms. However, it is believed that many agnostid populations were quite large based on the vast amounts of fossilized individuals found. This significant population size contradicts the theory that agnostids were parasites and rules out this possibility.
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