TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 3 Sample:

1.子项得分

• 交付（Delivery）：3

• 语言使用（Language Use）：3

• 话题发展（Topic Development）：2

2.预估分数

• 总分：22

3.表达 从交付方面来看，回答中的语音清晰，语速基本稳定，偶尔有停顿。但在某些地方，如“they would try to test whether the product could be successful at the supermarket”，可以改进为“they would test whether the product would be successful in the supermarket”以提高流畅度。此外，注意正确发音单词，避免拼写错误。建议多练习发音和语速控制。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容与主题相关，但组织结构和论证不够充分。首先，在介绍阅读材料时，应提到“市场调查”这一关键词。其次，在描述听力材料时，应详细说明教授如何通过电影公司的例子来证明市场调查的重要性。最后，在总结时，可以强调市场调查在产品发布前的重要作用。建议在练习时关注材料的核心观点，并尝试用更清晰的逻辑结构组织回答。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The reading describes a target that before a product was launched in the supermarket, they would try to test whether the product could be successful at the supermarket. And the professor demonstrated this target with an example of a movie company. The movie company never made the cartoon, so before the movie was published to the market, they invited some students and tested them what was their favorite character. And judging from the character, they changed the comment of the movie, and then the movie would be successful.

Corrected Answer: The reading describes a targetgoal (“目标”改为“目的”，使语言更自然) that before a product was launched in the supermarket, they would try to (删除“try to”，使句子更简洁) test whether the product could bewould be (将“could be”改为“would be”，使语法更准确) successful atin (将“at”改为“in”，使介词更准确) the supermarket. The professor demonstrated this targetgoal (同上，改为“目的”) with an example of a movie company. The movie company never made the cartoon, so before the movie was publishedreleased (将“published”改为“released”，使词汇更准确) to the market, they invited some students and tested themtheir preferences regarding (将“them”改为“their preferences regarding”，使句子更清晰) what was their favorite character. And (删除“and”，使句子更流畅) Judging from the character, they changed the commentcontent (将“comment”改为“content”，使词汇更准确) of the movie, and then the movie would be successful.

Revised Answer (140 words): The reading passage discusses the goal of conducting market research before launching a product in the supermarket to ensure its success. The professor illustrates this goal with an example of a movie company that had never produced a cartoon before. To guarantee the success of their upcoming movie, the company conducted market research by inviting students to provide feedback on their favorite characters. Based on this feedback, they modified the content of the film to better appeal to their target audience. This example demonstrates how market research can significantly contribute to a product's success by identifying and addressing consumer preferences before its release.

6.思维导图

- Market Research
    - Goal
        - Ensure product success
    - Example
        - Movie company
            - Cartoon movie
            - Invited students
                - Feedback on favorite characters
            - Modified content
                - Based on feedback
    - Result
        - Successful product launch

7.关键词