TOEFL Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion of the student's proposal. State his opinion and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不自然的停顿。建议在练习时注意语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音单词，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但在一些地方可以进一步完善。例如，在描述女生与室友关系时，可以更详细地说明这种关系如何受到噪音问题的影响。此外，在提到学校规定对改善宿舍环境的作用时，可以给出更多具体的例子来支持观点。在练习时，请注意提供充足的支持或例子，并确保观点之间有清晰的联系。

5.语言使用

原文：Well, the university wants to keep a quiet time at night in the students' dormitory. The university plans to implement a quiet time policy at night in the student dormitories. (改为更自然的表达方式) They won't let the loud noises permit after 10 p.m. Loud noises will not be permitted after 10 p.m. (修正语法错误) And in the conversation, the woman really agrees with this idea. This is because, firstly, she believes that she has to go to the library for studying because there are too much parties in her dormitory, so she cannot study in the dormitory. She strongly agrees with this policy as it addresses her concerns about excessive noise from parties in her dormitory, which forces her to study in the library instead. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式) Besides, she thinks when she has some morning classes, she wants to go back early, but it's inconvenient for her in the dormitory. Moreover, she finds it difficult to sleep early due to noise when she has morning classes. (简化句子结构，使其更自然流畅) For example, as a friend of herself, she often plays loud music in the dormitory, and her friends make some arguments with her dormitory, but in the end, they cannot keep the value down, so she thinks students tell to the others it's not valid, but schools can do this, so she agrees with this idea. so she believes that it's challenging for students to confront each other about noise issues, but a university policy would be more effective in addressing the problem, which is why she supports it. (修正语法错误，提供更强烈的结论)

修订版（140字）：

The university plans to implement a quiet time policy at night in the student dormitories. Loud noises will not be permitted after 10 p.m. The woman strongly agrees with this policy as it addresses her concerns about excessive noise from parties in her dormitory, which forces her to study in the library instead. Moreover, she finds it difficult to sleep early due to noise when she has morning classes. For example, her friend often plays loud music in the dormitory, leading to arguments among roommates. However, they cannot resolve the issue themselves. She believes that it's challenging for students to confront each other about noise issues, but a university policy would be more effective in addressing the problem, which is why she supports it.

6.思维导图

- University policy
  - Quiet time at night
  - Student dormitories

- Woman's opinion
  - Strongly agrees
  - Reasons
    - Excessive noise from parties
    - Difficulty sleeping early for morning classes
    - Challenging for students to confront each other
    - University policy more effective in addressing the problem

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are a few instances where the speaker could improve their delivery by avoiding unnecessary repetitions and focusing on maintaining a steady pace throughout the response. Additionally, the speaker should work on pronouncing certain words more accurately to avoid confusion.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there are some areas where the speaker could improve topic development. For instance, the speaker should ensure that they accurately represent the opinions of the individuals in the listening passage. In this case, it was the man who agreed with the policy, not the woman. Furthermore, providing more specific examples from the listening passage would help strengthen the response and make it more convincing.

5.Language Use

The university introduces a quiet time policy after 10 o'clock PM in the dorm, which can not only reduce the noise but also the number of disputes among the roommates and the co-residents. The woman in the listening disagreed agreed (The speaker incorrectly stated that the woman disagreed with the policy, when in fact, she agreed) with this idea. Firstly, she believed that the students who actually want to study in the dorm are now forced to study in the library because of the noise in the dorm. Besides, if the students have early morning classes, they're probably going to want to get out of bed early, which is now impossible because of the noise. Besides Moreover (To avoid repetition and improve vocabulary), the relationship can be soothed if this policy makes up. You know, the students can hardly tell another person to stop noise and be quiet, like the example of this woman's friends whose roommates always play loud music in the dorm, but the two always end up in a disagreement about this noise problem. However, the students will always obey the university rule.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university is introducing a quiet time policy at 10 PM in dormitories to reduce noise and disputes among roommates and co-residents. The man in the listening passage agrees with this policy for several reasons. First, he believes that students who want to study are currently forced to use libraries due to excessive noise in dorms. Second, he thinks that students with early morning classes struggle to sleep early because of loud noises. Moreover, he suggests that relationships between students can improve as a result of this policy since it eliminates confrontations over noise levels. For example, he mentions a situation where a woman's friend constantly argues with her roommate over loud music. With the implementation of this policy, students will be more likely to follow university rules and maintain a peaceful atmosphere in dormitories.

6.Mind Map

• Introduction

  • University policy
  • Quiet time at 10 PM

• Agreement

  • Man's opinion
  • Reasons for agreement

• Studying environment

  • Library vs. dorms
  • Early morning classes

• Relationships improvement

  • Noise confrontations
  • Example: woman's friend and roommate

• Conclusion

  • Following university rules
  • Peaceful atmosphere

7.Key Words

1.子项得分

• 交付: 3

• 主题发展: 3

• 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

• 总分: 23

3.表达 回答中的语言流利度较好，但在某些地方存在轻微的停顿。为了提高口语表达能力，建议练习更连贯、自然的发音和语调。同时注意在适当的地方停顿，以增强表达的清晰度。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了听力材料中提到的观点，并对这些观点进行了解释。但是，在组织结构和连接思路方面还有待提高。建议在准备回答时，先梳理好要点，确保内容条理清晰、逻辑顺畅。同时，可以尝试使用一些过渡词汇来连接不同的观点，使回答更具连贯性。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the letter, the student proposed the school to prohibit riding bikes at the center of the campus because the roads are too narrow for riding bikes, and students who fail to obey the rule should pay a fine. In the letter, it is proposed that the school should ban bike riding in the center of campus due to narrow roads, and students who disobey this rule should be fined. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加简洁明了)

The woman, however, disagreed with the statement because most of the students riding bikes will get off their bikes at the center of the campus because they know it's not safe enough to ride their bikes through the roadway, so we only need to politely ask the students to do so. However, the man disagrees with this proposal, stating that most students already dismount their bikes in the central area due to safety concerns, and a simple request for them to walk their bikes would suffice. (对句子进行了重组，使其更加清晰易懂)

Also, enforcing students to get off their bike won't work because it's a waste of resources to put some security in the central way to ask the students to. Additionally, he believes that enforcing such a rule would be ineffective and a waste of resources, as it would require security personnel monitoring the area. (调整了句子结构，使表达更加准确)

Thus, the woman don't think the idea will work. Therefore, the man does not believe that the proposed idea would be effective. (修正了语法错误，并进行了简化)

Revised Answer (140 words):

In the letter, it is proposed that the school should ban bike riding in the center of campus due to narrow roads, and students who disobey this rule should be fined. However, the man disagrees with this proposal, stating that most students already dismount their bikes in the central area due to safety concerns, and a simple request for them to walk their bikes would suffice. Additionally, he believes that enforcing such a rule would be ineffective and a waste of resources, as it would require security personnel monitoring the area. Therefore, the man does not believe that the proposed idea would be effective.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Ban bike riding
  - Center of campus
  - Narrow roads
  - Fines for disobedience

- Man's disagreement
  - Most students dismount bikes
  - Safety concerns
  - Simple request to walk bikes

- Ineffectiveness of enforcement
  - Waste of resources
  - Security personnel monitoring

- Man's conclusion
  - Proposed idea not effective

7.关键词