TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people think that those children who do not want to keep learning a musical instrument course should be required to keep learning the course; while others think that those children should be allowed to make decisions by themselves (they can still do exercises by themselves without continuing with the class). What is your opinion and why?Please give specific details to support vour opinion.

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Some people think that those children who do not want to keep learning a musical instrument course should be required to keep learning the course; while others think that those children should be allowed to make decisions by themselves (they can still do exercises by themselves without continuing with the class). What is your opinion and why?Please give specific details to support vour opinion.

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1.子项得分

Delivery: 3
Language Use: 3
Topic Development: 3

2.预估分数

3.表达在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速较为稳定，仅有少量停顿。为了提高发言质量，建议发言者注意在适当的地方停顿，以及提高发音准确性。

4.话题发展在话题发展方面，发言者的回答内容较为连贯和有组织，观点之间的联系也较为清晰。但是，可以考虑增加更多具体的例子或支持观点的论据来丰富回答内容。同时，在表述观点时尽量使用更多的连接词和过渡词，使得回答更加流畅。

5.语言使用

In my opinion, children should be allowed to make decisions by themselves. because (原文缺少连接词，改为“因为”)Firstly, I think personal interest and motivation play an important role in children's learning process. For example, if a child is more interested in sports or arts, he should be allowed to explore this area instead of being forced to learn a musical instrument. Secondly, letting children to make their own decisions can also help reduce their mental stress(去掉多余的“to”). For example, a child who is not passionate in music may feel anxious and overwhelmed if he is forced to continue with a course.

In my opinion, children should be allowed to make decisions by themselves because personal interest and motivation play a crucial role in their learning process. For instance, if a child is more captivated by sports or arts, they should be encouraged to explore these areas rather than being compelled to learn a musical instrument. Additionally, allowing children to make their own decisions can significantly alleviate their mental stress. For example, a child who lacks passion for music might experience anxiety and become overwhelmed if they are forced to persist with the course. By providing children with the autonomy to choose their interests and activities, we foster their sense of responsibility and self-confidence while promoting a more enjoyable learning experience.

6.思维导图

Preference/Opinion: Children should be allowed to make decisions by themselves
- Main Point 1: Personal interest and motivation play a crucial role in the learning process
  - Supporting Example 1: A child more captivated by sports or arts should be encouraged to explore these areas
- Main Point 2: Allowing children to make their own decisions can alleviate mental stress
  - Supporting Example 2: A child who lacks passion for music might experience anxiety if forced to persist with the course
- Conclusion: Providing children with autonomy fosters responsibility, self-confidence, and a more enjoyable learning experience

7.关键词

Word	Phonetic Symbols	Parts of Speech	English Definition	Simplified Chinese Translation	Sample Sentence
Autonomy	/ɔːˈtɒnəmi/	Noun	The right or condition of self-government	自治，自主	Allowing children autonomy in their learning can lead to increased motivation and engagement.
Alleviate	/əˈliːvieɪt/	Verb	To make (suffering, deficiency, or a problem) less severe	减轻，缓解	Allowing children to make their own decisions can alleviate their mental stress.
Compel	/kəmˈpel/	Verb	To force or oblige (someone) to do something	强迫，迫使	Children should not be compelled to continue with a musical instrument course if they lack interest.
Captivate	/ˈkæptiveɪt/	Verb	To attract and hold the interest and attention of	吸引，迷住	The captivating world of arts and sports can be more appealing to some children than music.
Responsibility	/rɪˌspɒnsəˈbɪləti/	Noun	The state or fact of having a duty to deal with something or of having control over someone	责任，义务	Providing children with autonomy fosters a sense of responsibility in their learning process.

8.补充示例

Allowing children to choose their extracurricular activities can lead to the development of diverse skills and talents.
Children who are given the freedom to make decisions about their learning are more likely to become independent thinkers and problem solvers.
When children are forced to participate in activities they dislike, it may result in a negative attitude towards learning in general.
Encouraging children to explore various interests helps them discover their passions and strengths, which can guide them towards a fulfilling career path.
Providing children with the opportunity to make choices about their education fosters a sense of ownership, which can lead to increased commitment and effort in their studies.