TOEFL TPO -1 Academic Discussion Writing Sample: Admittedly, Bob makes a meaningful point that students could be unwilling to engage in volunteer works and volunteer is not mandate for university application. However, in today's highly competitive world, having good academic performance is not enough for attending top-tier universities, while having vonlunteering experiences could beautify your personal resume for your application. This because, volunteering experiences illustrate that you are responsible, warmhearted young adults, who care about societies and will to contribute to better society. These are precious virtues that universities are in favor of. Also, by taking volunteering jobs,students could expand their friend circle, enabling them to have more friends which are useful resources for further personal development. • LingoLeap