TOEFL TPO 43 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the change described in the article. Briefly summarize the change Then state his opinion about the change and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，发言者的语言较为清晰，流利度尚可，但仍有一些不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意提高语速和连贯性，减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，发言者的回答基本上符合题目要求，能够概括文章中的变化，并说明男生对变化的看法及原因。但在组织结构上还有待加强，可以尝试使用更清晰的逻辑连接词来组织句子，使回答更加条理清晰。同时，在举例和论述方面可以更具体一些，以便更好地支持观点。

5.语言使用

There are two changes to the orientation program. The orientation program has two changes. (改变语序，使句子更自然) Firstly, the university will offer students with choices of activities and these activities will only last one day. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. (修改表达，使句子更清晰) In the listening, the men man (拼写错误) thinks (单数第三人称动词需加s) the changes are very interesting and attractive. Firstly, First, (保持一致性) people usually don't like the same things. So like if if (删除多余词汇) the student doesn't like sleep in the tank, sleeping in a tent, (修正表达) they can choose the hiking one other option (更清晰的表达) instead and they were not feeling missed out. won't feel left out. (修正时态和表达) And secondly, change the program with last one day only. Students will not give up the whole weekend. They have other big bigger more significant (修正表达) commitments (名词复数形式) such as buying books, cleaning their dormitory and preparing for their first classes. So these are the two reasons why students agree with that.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The orientation program has two changes. First, the university will provide students with a choice of activities, which will only last for one day. In the listening, the man thinks these changes are interesting and attractive. First, people usually don't like the same things. If a student doesn't like sleeping in a tent, they can choose the other option instead and won't feel left out. Second, by making the program last only one day, students won't have to give up their entire weekend. They have more significant commitments such as buying books, setting up their dormitory, and preparing for their first classes. These are the two reasons why students agree with these changes.

6.思维导图

Orientation Program Changes
├── Two Changes
│   ├── Choice of activities
│   └── One-day duration
└── Man's Opinion
    ├── Reasons
    │   ├── Different preferences
    │   │   └── Example: Tent vs. other option
    │   └── Time commitment
    │       └── Example: Buying books, setting up dormitory, preparing for classes
    └── Agreement with changes

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：25

3.表达 回答中的发音大部分清晰，但在某些地方可能需要稍作改进。为了提高交付效果，建议练习更连贯、流畅的发音，并保持一致的语速。此外，注意在适当的地方暂停，以避免出现不必要的标点错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，但可以在某些方面进行改进。例如，在描述男子对变化的看法时，可以更详细地解释他为什么认为这些变化会吸引更多人参加。此外，在提供支持或举例时，尝试使用更具体和详细的信息，以便更充分地支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：According to the announcement, Medicine University will make some changes to the orientation program for newcoming students. According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students.（将Medicine University改为Madison University，将newcoming students改为incoming students。）

The first change is that the university will offer choice of activities to either go hiking or participate in group games. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus.（在choice前加上a，以及在group games后加上on campus。）

The second change is that the program will last only one day. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day.（将last only one day改为be shortened to last only one day。）

The mayor agrees with these policies. The man agrees with these changes.（将mayor改为man，将policies改为changes。）

To begin with, he points out that it's more attractive since not everybody likes the same thing. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences.（将attractive改为appealing，将likes the same thing改为has the same preferences。）

For example, somebody that likes sleeping in the tent will not participate in this activity. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity.（将somebody改为someone，将likes改为dislikes，将in the tent改为in a tent，将this activity改为the camping activity。）

Moreover, he argues that students will not have to waste the whole weekend because students will have a lot of other things to do for the few days like buying books, setting up rooms, or preparing for classes. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.（将waste改为sacrifice，将a lot of other things改为numerous tasks，将for the few days改为during their first few days。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

According to the announcement, Madison University will make some changes to the orientation program for incoming students. The first change is that the university will offer a choice of activities: either go hiking or participate in group games on campus. The second change is that the program will be shortened to last only one day. The man agrees with these changes. To begin with, he points out that it's more appealing because not everyone has the same preferences. For instance, someone who dislikes sleeping in a tent might not participate in the camping activity. Furthermore, he argues that students won't have to sacrifice their entire weekend since they have numerous tasks to complete during their first few days, such as purchasing books, arranging their rooms, and preparing for classes.

6.思维导图

• Madison University

  • Changes to orientation program
    • Choice of activities
      • Hiking
      • Group games on campus
    • Duration
      • Shortened to one day

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with changes
    • More appealing
      • Different preferences
    • Time-efficient
      • Numerous tasks during first few days

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，这位同学的回答基本上是清晰流畅的，但在某些地方还有一些不必要的停顿。建议同学在练习口语时注意保持连贯性和一致的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，这位同学的回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的。但在解释男生观点时，可以更具体地提到男生所提到的原因，例如“有些人不喜欢露营”可以改为“有些人不喜欢在帐篷里过夜”。此外，在总结时可以更明确地指出男生对这个改变的态度是积极的。建议同学在练习时注意更加详细地阐述观点，并在总结时明确表达态度。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: According to the article, the university is deciding to change the orientation programs for the new students. They want to change the two-day program into one day, and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men strongly support this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend. Because for the students, they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, or prepare for the class, or find the classroom, and so on. In conclusion, the men strongly support the change of the university, and he gives his point.

Corrected Answer: According to the article, the university has decided (改为完成时，表示已经决定) to change the orientation programs the orientation program (改为单数，因为只有一个项目) for the new students incoming students (用更专业的词汇). They want to change the two-day program into one day, it from a two-day program to a one-day event, (改为更自然的表达方式) and then students can choose which one to take. In the conversation, the men the man (改为单数，因为只有一个人) strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) this change. Firstly, he mentioned that not everyone likes the same things. For example, some people do not want to go camping trips on camping trips (加on，使句子更自然). The second reason is that some students do not want to give up the whole weekend, (加逗号，使句子更自然) because they have many other things to do. For example, they have to buy books, prepare for the class classes (改为复数，表示多个课程), or find the classrooms (加s，表示多个教室). In conclusion, the man strongly supports (加s，使动词与主语一致) the change of the university, made by the university, (改为更自然的表达方式) and he gives his point.

Revised Answer (140 words): According to the article, the university has decided to change the orientation program for incoming students. They want to change it from a two-day program to a one-day event, allowing students to choose between activities. In the conversation, the man strongly supports this change. He first mentions that not everyone enjoys the same activities, and some people do not want to go on camping trips. The second reason is that some students do not want to give up their entire weekend because they have other tasks to complete, such as buying books, preparing for classes, or finding classrooms. In conclusion, the man strongly supports the change made by the university and provides valid reasons for his opinion.

6.思维导图

- Introduction
  - University's decision
  - Change in orientation program

- Conversation
  - Man's support for the change
  - Reasons
    - Different preferences
      - Example: Dislike camping trips
    - Time commitment
      - Example: Other tasks (buying books, preparing for classes, finding classrooms)

- Conclusion
  - Man's strong support
  - Valid reasons for his opinion

7.关键词