TOEFL TPO 4 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The computer department is considering a scheduling change. Explain the man's opinion of the change and the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上说得比较清楚，但有时候语速稍快，导致一些词汇发音不准确。建议在练习时注意控制语速，保持稳定的节奏，并尝试减少不必要的停顿。同时，多加练习发音，提高准确度。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上涵盖了男生的观点和理由。但在组织结构上可以更加清晰。建议在回答时先简要总结男生的观点，然后逐一阐述他提出的理由，并在每个理由之间保持连贯性。此外，在举例子时可以尝试更具体地描述，以增强说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The computer department is scheduling a change that they will add more classes in the evening. The computer department is considering a change to add more evening classes. (改为更自然的表达方式) The mayor The man (更正为正确的主语) totally disagrees with this idea. He thinks that most of the students' affairs have other things at night and it is difficult for them to spend more time attending classes at the evening. Second, Furthermore, (使用更恰当的过渡词) he thinks that it is more expensive to have a teacher work at the academic and he thinks that it is cheaper to buy a computer in the classroom and the classroom is big enough to accommodate more computers.

修订版（140词）：

The computer department is considering a change to add more evening classes. The man, however, strongly disagrees with this idea. He believes that most students already have various commitments at night, such as jobs, family responsibilities, and extracurricular activities, making it difficult for them to attend additional evening classes. Furthermore, he argues that the proposed solution would be more expensive due to the costs associated with hiring additional teachers and keeping the academic building open later. Instead, he suggests that purchasing more computers for the classrooms would be a more cost-effective solution, as computer prices have significantly decreased in recent years. Moreover, he points out that there is ample space in the computer department classrooms to accommodate additional computers, which would help alleviate overcrowding issues during daytime classes.

6.思维导图

- Computer department
  - Considering a change
    - Add more evening classes

- The man's opinion
  - Disagrees with the idea
    - Reasons
      - Students' commitments at night
      - More expensive solution
        - Hiring additional teachers
        - Keeping academic building open later
      - Alternative solution
        - Purchasing more computers
          - Lower prices in recent years
          - Ample space in classrooms

7.关键词