TOEFL TPO None Speaking Task 2 Sample: The woman expresses her opinion about the announcement in the newspaper. Briefly summarize the announcement.Then state her opinion about the announcement and explain the reasons she gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23

3.表达 在交付方面，答案基本上是清晰的，但有时可能会出现停顿。为了提高这方面的得分，请尝试练习更流畅、连贯的语音表达，保持一致的语速，并减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 在话题发展方面，答案基本上是连贯和组织良好的。然而，可以进一步改进。首先，在总结公告时，请确保更准确地传达信息。例如，可以提到大学将购买皮划艇和独木舟，并提供给学生折扣。其次，在解释女士对公告的看法时，请注意使用正确的代词（例如，“她”而不是“他”）。最后，在提供原因和例子时，请确保它们与女士的观点直接相关，并清楚地表达这些观点。

5.语言使用

原文：In the reading, the university decided to provide a boat rental program. The reading passage mentions that the university plans to introduce a boat rental program.（将“decided”改为“plans to introduce”，使语言更自然。）（将“decided”改为“plans to introduce”，使语言更自然。） Firstly, it will discount the paid boat rent price. First, it will offer a generous student discount on boat rental fees.（使用“offer a generous student discount on boat rental fees”替换“discount the paid boat rent price”，使表达更准确。）（使用“offer a generous student discount on boat rental fees”替换“discount the paid boat rent price”，使表达更准确。） Secondly, it will require students complete training courses. Second, it will mandate students to complete a training course before renting boats.（使用“mandate students to complete a training course before renting boats”替换“require students complete training courses”，使表达更清晰。）（使用“mandate students to complete a training course before renting boats”替换“require students complete training courses”，使表达更清晰。）

The woman thinks this is a cool idea. The woman expresses her positive opinion about the announcement.（使用“expresses her positive opinion about the announcement”替换“thinks this is a cool idea”，使表达更正式。）（使用“expresses her positive opinion about the announcement”替换“thinks this is a cool idea”，使表达更正式。） Firstly, it is really expensive to rent a boat in another place, and he experienced the same thing. First, she mentions that renting boats from private companies is quite expensive, and she has experienced this issue herself.（使用“she mentions that renting boats from private companies is quite expensive, and she has experienced this issue herself”替换“it is really expensive to rent a boat in another place, and he experienced the same thing”，使表达更清晰且使用正确的代词。）（使用“she mentions that renting boats from private companies is quite expensive, and she has experienced this issue herself”替换“it is really expensive to rent a boat in another place, and he experienced the same thing”，使表达更清晰且使用正确的代词。） Also, there are a lot of other students have the same situation. Also, many other students likely face the same financial constraints.（使用“many other students likely face the same financial constraints”替换“there are a lot of other students have the same situation”，使表达更准确。）（使用“many other students likely face the same financial constraints”替换“there are a lot of other students have the same situation”，使表达更准确。） Secondly, although the process is not really complex, there are another things we need to care about. Second, she believes that while boating is not overly complicated, there are other aspects to consider.（使用“she believes that while boating is not overly complicated, there are other aspects to consider”替换“although the process is not really complex, there are another things we need to care about”，使表达更清晰。）（使用“she believes that while boating is not overly complicated, there are other aspects to consider”替换“although the process is not really complex, there are another things we need to care about”，使表达更清晰。）

根据修改建议，答案的修订版本（140词）：

The reading passage mentions that the university plans to introduce a boat rental program. First, it will offer a generous student discount on boat rental fees. Second, it will mandate students

6.思维导图

• Introduction

  • Reading passage
  • Boat rental program

• Woman's opinion

  • Positive view
  • Reasons
    • Expensive private rentals
    • Personal experience
    • Other students' financial constraints
    • Boating techniques
      • Not overly complicated
      • Important for enjoyment

7.关键词