TOEFL TPO 49 Speaking Task 2 Sample: The man expresses his opinion about the proposal described in the letter. Briefly summarize the proposal. Then state his opinion about the proposal and explain the reasons he gives for holding that opinion.

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但有些地方需要改进。例如，可以尝试提高语速，使语言更流畅。此外，注意在适当的地方停顿，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。在发音方面，也需要注意一些单词的准确发音。

4.话题发展 从话题发展的角度来看，回答基本上是连贯和有组织的。但是，在解释男生同意提议的原因时，可以尝试更详细地说明，并给出更多具体的例子。例如，在谈到节省钱的问题时，可以提到一些具体的数字或者网站来支持观点。同时，在谈到学生在学期开始前有足够时间准备课程时，可以进一步说明这对学生的学习有什么积极影响。

5.语言使用

原文：A student proposed that the university should make the course list available before classes begin, due to students can have time to shop for the extensive book and it can start the work. A student proposed that the university should make the course list available before classes begin so that students can have time to shop for affordable textbooks and start their work early.（将"due to"改为"so that"，使句子更自然；将"extensive book"改为"affordable textbooks"，更准确地表达意思。）

In the conversation, the man agrees with this perspective, because firstly, he believes that the book in the bookshop is very expensive, though they have few of cheap books, but it will sell quickly. In the conversation, the man agrees with this perspective because he believes that books in the bookstore are very expensive. Although there are a few cheap books available, they sell out quickly.（将"in the bookshop"改为"in the bookstore"，更符合美式英语；简化句子结构，使其更自然。）

However, if the university can sell it before the semester, students can find the cheaper book online, so it can save a lot of money. However, if the university makes the list available before the semester starts, students can find cheaper books online and save a significant amount of money.（调整句子结构，使其更自然；将"it"改为"the list"，明确指代对象。）

The another reason is it is very busy at the semester start. However, students have enough time to prepare for the course before the semester begin. Another reason is that it is very busy at the start of the semester. However, students have enough time to prepare for their courses before the semester begins.（将"The another reason"改为"Another reason"，使句子更自然；将"begin"改为"begins"，使动词与主语一致。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

A student proposed that the university should make the course list available before classes begin so that students can have time to shop for affordable textbooks and start their work early. In the conversation, the man agrees with this perspective because he believes that books in the bookstore are very expensive. Although there are a few cheap books available, they sell out quickly. However, if the university makes the list available before the semester starts, students can find cheaper books online and save a significant amount of money. Another reason is that it is very busy at the start of the semester. However, students have enough time to prepare for their courses before the semester begins.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Course list available before classes
  • Affordable textbooks
  • Early start on work

• Man's opinion

  • Agrees with proposal
  • Reasons:
    • Expensive books in bookstore
    • Limited cheap books sell out quickly
    • Online shopping for cheaper books
    • Saving money
    • Busy start of the semester
    • Time for course preparation

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

24. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方出现了不必要的停顿。建议发言者注意在句子之间保持流畅的过渡，避免不自然的停顿。同时，需要注意正确发音以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对话题进行了充分的阐述和发展，结构清晰，观点之间的联系紧密。可以看出发言者对于提案的理解和支持，并给出了合理的原因。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

Original: According to the letter, a student suggests that a list for each course should be available at once. This is because students can have more time to buy cheaper books and preview on the courses earlier. The man supports this challenge. To begin with, he points out that the books in the university bookshop are pretty high. Besides, second-hand books are sold out quickly as well. So this challenge enables students to search books on their own ways. For example, they can search on the internet to save more money. Moreover, the man argues that at the beginning of the semester, students are usually too busy to look through the books. So this challenge is very beneficial for students' study.

Corrected: According to the letter, a student suggests that a list for each course should be available at once immediately (“at once”不太符合语境，建议改为“immediately”). This is because students can have more time to buy cheaper less expensive (为了避免重复，建议将“cheaper”改为“less expensive”) books and preview on prepare for (建议将“preview on”改为“prepare for”，使表达更自然) the courses earlier. The man supports this challenge proposal (将“challenge”改为“proposal”，以保持一致性). To begin with, he points out that the books in the university bookshop are pretty high quite expensive (将“pretty high”改为“quite expensive”，使表达更准确). Besides, second-hand books are sold out quickly as well. So this challenge proposal (将“challenge”改为“proposal”，以保持一致性) enables students to search for books on their own ways independently (将“on their own ways”改为“independently”，使表达更简洁). For example, they can search on the internet to save more money. Moreover, the man argues that at the beginning of the semester, students are usually too busy to look through the books. So this challenge proposal (将“challenge”改为“proposal”，以保持一致性) is very beneficial for students' study.

Revised (140 words): According to the letter, a student suggests that a list for each course should be available immediately. This is because students can have more time to buy less expensive books and prepare for the courses earlier. The man supports this proposal. To begin with, he points out that the books in the university bookshop are quite expensive. Besides, second-hand books are sold out quickly as well. So this proposal enables students to search for books independently. For example, they can search on the internet to save more money. Moreover, the man argues that at the beginning of the semester, students are usually too busy to look through the books. So this proposal is very beneficial for students' study.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Immediate availability of course lists
  - Benefits
    - More time to buy less expensive books
      - University bookshop: quite expensive
      - Second-hand books: sell out quickly
      - Independent search: internet, save money
    - Prepare for courses earlier
      - Busy at the beginning of the semester
      - Beneficial for students' study

- Man's opinion
  - Supports the proposal
  - Reasons explained

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：3.5

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 23分

3.表达 回答中的表达整体较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了问题要求的方面，但在组织结构上还有改进空间。建议在回答时先简要概括提案内容，然后再陈述男生的观点及其理由。此外，在论述理由时可以适当加入更多细节和例子来支持观点。

5.语言使用

原文：While the proposal suggests that the list for each course should be available at the time of the gestation for two main reasons. The proposal suggests making the list of required textbooks for each course available at the time of registration for two main reasons. (修改了句子结构，使其更自然流畅) First, students can shop the old books in time, and next, students can have time to prepare for the knowledge and assignment in the book. First, students can purchase used textbooks in advance, and second, they can have more time to prepare for the course content and assignments. (修改了词汇和句子结构，使其更清晰准确) The man likes this idea. First off, he thinks that it is too expensive to buy the brand new book, but the old book will be quickly sold out. used textbooks sell out quickly. (简化了句子结构，使其更自然流畅) If students know the list of each course immediately, the required textbooks for each course in advance, (修改了词汇，使其更准确) then they can shop online to buy it, which will save them money. Next, before the semester, students can have time to prepare for the reading assignment, their reading assignments, (修改了词汇，使其更自然) which will benefit their academic performance.

修订版（140词）：

The proposal suggests making the list of required textbooks for each course available at the time of registration for two main reasons. First, students can purchase used textbooks in advance, and second, they can have more time to prepare for the course content and assignments. The man agrees with this idea. He believes that buying brand new textbooks is too expensive, but used textbooks sell out quickly. If students know the required textbooks for each course in advance, they can shop online to find more affordable options, which will save them money. Additionally, having access to the reading list before the semester begins allows students to better manage their time and prepare for their reading assignments, ultimately benefiting their academic performance.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Available at registration
  - Reasons
    - Purchase used textbooks
    - Prepare for course content and assignments

- Man's opinion
  - Agrees with the proposal
  - Reasons
    - Expensive brand new textbooks
    - Used textbooks sell out quickly
    - Online shopping for affordable options
    - Time management and preparation before semester

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付 (Delivery): 3

• 主题发展 (Topic Development): 3.5

• 语言使用 (Language Use): 3

2.预估分数: 25

3.表达 总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持语速的一致性，减少不必要的停顿。此外，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对提案进行了概括，并阐述了对话中男生对提案的看法及其理由。整体上，回答内容连贯、组织良好。但在解释男生观点时，可以尝试更加简洁明了地表达，以便让听众更容易理解。同时，在提供支持或例子时，可以尝试多给一些具体的细节，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：A student suggests that the list for each course should be available immediately at the time of the registration, because this will allow more time for students to buy the book and they will buy less expensive books, and this can allow students more time to go through the reading materials. A student suggests making the textbook list for each course available immediately upon registration, as it would provide students with more time to purchase less expensive books and allow them to review the reading materials in advance. (将句子结构进行了调整，使其更加简洁明了。同时，使用了更高级的词汇。)

The students in the conversation agree with the proposal because he thinks the new books in the bookstore is very expensive and there are several used books but they sell out quickly. The students in the conversation agree with the proposal because they believe that new books in the bookstore are very expensive, and while there are some used books available, they sell out quickly. (调整了句子结构，修正了语法错误，并使用了更自然的表达方式。)

If there is more time, students can buy what they need on the internet and it can save students lots of money. With more time, students could purchase their required textbooks online, potentially saving a significant amount of money. (使用了条件句和高级词汇，使句子更加自然且连贯。)

And the second point he agrees is students are very busy at the start of the semester but there will be free time before the start of the semester and it's hard for students to find time to go through the reading material at the start of the semester. The second point they agree on is that students are often busy at the beginning of the semester, but they usually have free time before it starts, making it difficult for them to review the reading materials during the initial weeks. (调整了句子结构，使其更加简洁明了，并使用了更高级的词汇。)

修订版（140字）：

A student suggests making the textbook list for each course available immediately upon registration, as it would provide students with more time to purchase less expensive books and allow them to review the reading materials in advance. The students in the conversation agree with the proposal because they believe that new books in the bookstore are very expensive, and while there are some used books available, they sell out quickly. With more time, students could purchase their required textbooks online, potentially saving a significant amount of money. The second point they agree on is that students are often busy at the beginning of the semester, but they usually have free time before it starts, making it difficult for them to review the reading materials during the initial weeks.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
    - Textbook list availability
        - Upon registration
    - Benefits
        - More time to purchase
            - Less expensive books
        - Review reading materials
            - In advance

- Students' agreement
    - Expensive new books
    - Limited used books
        - Sell out quickly
    - Online purchases
        - Save money
    - Busy start of the semester
        - Free time before it starts
        - Difficulty reviewing materials during initial weeks

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。建议在练习时注意提高语言的流利度，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容基本上是连贯和组织良好的，观点之间的联系也比较清晰。但在提供支持或例子方面还可以加强。建议在练习时尝试多给出一些具体的例子和论据来支持观点，使回答更有说服力。

5.语言使用

原文：The proposal suggests that the university should make the textbook list available earlier. The proposal recommends making the textbook list available earlier at the university. (建议使用更自然的表达方式) By doing so, students will have more time to shop and find less expensive textbooks. This would allow students to have more time to search for and purchase affordable textbooks. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达) Besides, they can work on the teaching for new courses early. Additionally, they can start preparing for their new courses in advance. (改进句子结构和词汇选择) The man quite agreed with that idea because he thinks that the brand new textbooks in the bookstore are very expensive and the number is few. Besides, if students can find books online ahead of time, they can save a lot of money. Furthermore, if students can locate books online beforehand, they can save a significant amount of money. (使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达) Besides, in the beginning of the semester, students are always very busy. Moreover, at the start of the semester, students are typically quite busy. (改进句子结构和词汇选择) But they often have free time before the semester, so they can make preparation for it ahead of time.

修订版（140字）：

The proposal recommends making the textbook list available earlier at the university. This would allow students to have more time to search for and purchase affordable textbooks. Additionally, they can start preparing for their new courses in advance. The man strongly agrees with this idea because he believes that brand new textbooks in the bookstore are very expensive and limited in quantity. Furthermore, if students can locate books online beforehand, they can save a significant amount of money. Moreover, at the start of the semester, students are typically quite busy, but they often have free time before the semester begins, allowing them to prepare ahead of time.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Make textbook list available earlier
  • Benefits
    • More time to search for affordable textbooks
    • Prepare for new courses in advance

• Man's opinion

  • Strongly agrees
  • Reasons
    • Expensive and limited brand new textbooks in bookstore
    • Save money by locating books online beforehand
    • Busy start of the semester, but free time before it begins

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

23. 3.Delivery

The delivery of the answer is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some punctuation issues that result in inappropriate pauses. To improve the delivery, focus on proper punctuation and phrasing to ensure a smoother flow of speech. Additionally, work on accurate pronunciation to avoid any spelling errors.

4.Topic Development The response is coherent and well-organized, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. However, there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. Make sure to provide a more concise summary of the proposal and the man's opinion, as well as elaborating on the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. This will help create a more comprehensive and well-developed response.

5.Language Use

The school university (use a more specific term) has implemented a new policy that the list should be available immediately as the registration upon registration (improve sentence structure), and the board man (clarify the subject) holds a positive view to this policy of this policy (improve preposition usage). The first reason he mentioned is that since the book is really expensive, textbooks can be quite costly, (use more formal language and proper plural form) and if students have more time, they can find the internet to find some more cheaper book, search online for more affordable options, (improve sentence structure and word choice) and this way they can save money. The second reason he mentioned is that students are really busy because they need to keep up with assignments after the course begins, and they have some time before the semester starts. So, students can have more preparation if they can get a list as early as possible.

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university has implemented a new policy that makes textbook lists available immediately upon registration, and the man holds a positive view of this policy. He provides two reasons for his opinion. Firstly, he believes that textbooks can be quite costly, and by having more time, students can search online for more affordable options, ultimately saving money. Secondly, he mentions that students are often busy with assignments once the course begins, but they usually have some free time before the semester starts. By receiving the textbook list earlier, students can better prepare for their courses and manage their workload more effectively. Overall, the man supports the new policy as it allows students to save money on textbooks and provides them with an opportunity to prepare for their courses in advance.

6.Mind Map

- University policy
  - Textbook list availability
    - Upon registration

- Man's opinion
  - Positive view
    - Reason 1: Cost-saving
      - Online search for affordable options
    - Reason 2: Better preparation
      - Time before semester starts
      - Manage workload effectively

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

25. 3.表达

从表达方面来看，整体上讲得比较清楚，但在某些地方存在一些不太流畅的现象。建议在练习时注意保持语速的稳定，并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 从话题发展方面来看，回答内容条理清晰，组织良好。回答中明确提到了阅读和听力材料中的观点，并对这些观点进行了充分的支持和举例。在这方面没有需要改进的地方。

5.语言使用

Original: In the reading passage, the student suggests that the school should make the textbook less lists(建议将“less”改为“lists”，因为这里讨论的是教材清单，而不是减少教材) available for students immediately at the time of registration, reasoning that students can have more time to shop for books and review the lessons this way. And in the lecture, the man agreed with this idea. Firstly, he thinks that this way students can save some money when they have more time to shop around for books. The new textbooks are quite expensive. Used textbooks are cheaper but usually sell out quickly. But if the students have the list earlier, they would have the time to order the books from the Internet in advance. And secondly, he agrees that the change is good for the students' reading assignments. At the beginning of the semester, students are usually very busy and have many assignments, but they have some free time before the semester started. And if this proposal goes through, the students will have more time to prepare for the assignment.

Revised (140 words): In the reading passage, a student proposes that schools should make textbook lists available immediately upon registration, allowing students more time to purchase books and review course material. The man in the lecture agrees with this proposal for two main reasons. First, he believes that having more time to shop for books will enable students to save money by finding less expensive options online or purchasing used textbooks before they sell out. Second, he thinks that providing textbook lists earlier will allow students to better manage their reading assignments at the beginning of a busy semester by giving them an opportunity to prepare during their free time before classes start.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Proposal: Textbook lists available upon registration
  - Benefits: More time to shop, review course material

- Lecture
  - Man's opinion: Agrees with proposal
    - Reason 1: Save money
      - Expensive new textbooks
      - Cheaper used textbooks sell out quickly
      - Online shopping opportunities
    - Reason 2: Better manage reading assignments
      - Busy start of the semester
      - Free time before classes start
      - Opportunity to prepare in advance

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，回答的表达较为清晰，但在某些地方存在一些不太自然的停顿。建议在练习口语时，注意保持语速的一致性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答在话题发展方面做得很好，内容条理清晰，观点之间的联系明确。为了进一步提高，可以尝试在回答中加入更多具体的例子和细节，使观点更加充分和有说服力。

5.语言使用

Original Answer: Universities should make their course list available before the semester begins. Universities should make their textbook list available before the semester begins. (将“course list”改为“textbook list”，更符合题目要求) Allow students to have time to search for the textbook and start their work. This would allow students to have time to search for textbooks and start their work early. (句子结构调整，使表达更自然) In the conversation, the man agreed with his perspective because he believed that textbooks are very expensive. Although bookshelves have few useful books that are cheaper, they sell out quickly. If universities announced the required book earlier, students would have enough time to search for them online and potentially save a lot of money. Another reason is that students are busy at the beginning of the semester. If they know the required book earlier, they can have time to start studying the material.

Revised Answer (140 words): Universities should make their textbook list available before the semester begins. This would allow students to have time to search for textbooks and start their work early. In the conversation, the man agreed with Alexandra's proposal because he believed that textbooks can be very expensive, especially when purchased from university bookstores. He mentioned that although there are a few used books available at lower prices, they sell out quickly. If universities announced the required textbooks earlier, students would have enough time to search for them online and potentially save a significant amount of money. Another reason he agreed with the proposal is that students tend to be busy at the beginning of the semester. Knowing the required textbooks earlier would give them time to start studying the material and be better prepared for their courses.

6.思维导图

- Textbook list availability
  - Save money
    - Expensive textbooks
    - Limited used books
    - Online search
  - Early preparation
    - Busy semester start
    - Time management
    - Better prepared for courses

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：3

• 主题发展：4

• 语言使用：3

2.预估分数

• 总分：26

3.表达 回答内容清晰，但在某些地方语速略有不稳定，导致了一些不必要的停顿。建议练习更加流畅、稳定的语速，并注意在适当的地方停顿。同时，注意发音的准确性，以避免拼写错误。

4.话题发展 回答内容条理清晰，观点明确，能够很好地阐述男生对提议的看法及其原因。在这方面无需改进。

5.语言使用

原文：The student suggests the university should make textbook lists available earlier. The student proposes that the university make textbook lists available earlier.（建议使用更自然的表达方式）
In the conversation, the man agrees with this proposal. In the conversation, the man supports this proposal.（使用更高级的词汇）
His first reason is that the brand new books in the bookstore are quite expensive, and there are only a few used textbooks, and they sold out quite quickly. His first reason is that brand new books in the bookstore are rather expensive, and there are only a limited number of used textbooks, which sell out rapidly.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的句子结构）
If the students can get the list earlier, they can find the books online to save money. If students receive the list earlier, they can search for books online to save money.（使用更自然的表达方式和词汇）
For his second reason, he said that students will be quite busy at the beginning of the semester, and it is hard for them to keep up with their courses. For his second reason, he states that students become extremely busy at the beginning of the semester, making it difficult for them to keep up with their courses.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的句子结构）
So if they get the list earlier, they can use the free time to prepare for the class. Thus, if they obtain the list earlier, they can utilize their free time to prepare for the class.（使用更高级的词汇和更自然的表达方式）

修订版（140字）：

The student proposes that the university make textbook lists available earlier. In the conversation, the man supports this proposal. His first reason is that brand new books in the bookstore are rather expensive, and there are only a limited number of used textbooks, which sell out rapidly. If students receive the list earlier, they can search for books online to save money. For his second reason, he states that students become extremely busy at the beginning of the semester, making it difficult for them to keep up with their courses. Thus, if they obtain the list earlier, they can utilize their free time to prepare for the class.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Make textbook lists available earlier

• Man's opinion

  • Supports the proposal

• Reasons

  • Expensive brand new books
    • Limited used textbooks
    • Rapid sellout
  • Busy beginning of the semester
    • Difficulty keeping up with courses

• Benefits

  • Save money by searching online
  • Utilize free time for preparation

7.关键词

1.Sub Scores Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.Estimated Scores

27. 3.Delivery

The speaker's delivery is generally clear and fluid, with a consistent pace and only occasional pauses. However, there are some minor issues with punctuation and pronunciation that could be improved. For example, the speaker could work on enunciating words more clearly and using appropriate pauses to make the speech sound more natural. Additionally, practicing pronunciation of specific words and phrases can help improve overall delivery.

4.Topic Development The speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The summary of the proposal is accurate, and the man's opinion is clearly stated along with the reasons for his agreement. To further improve topic development, the speaker could elaborate on some points or provide additional examples to support their arguments. This would help create a more in-depth response that fully addresses all aspects of the task.

5.Language Use

The university should provide book lists textbook lists available earlier at the time of registration. The main agreement reason for agreeing with the proposal, first, it will make the students shop around and find the inexpensive more affordable books. The man says that the new books are much more expensive for students, and the students can find a few old books, which is much cheaper, but it sells out quickly. And they can also find books online, which will save money for the students. Second, the students can start to read new books before the semester, and they will be really busy with the semester and cannot keep all the assignments. However, they have free time to prepare ahead of the semester if they can know their book list.

(Textbook lists: more specific term; Reason for agreeing: clearer expression; More affordable: advanced vocabulary)

Revised Answer (140 words):

The university should make textbook lists available earlier, at the time of registration. The main reason for agreeing with this proposal is that it would allow students to shop around and find more affordable textbooks. The man explains that new textbooks are often expensive for students, while used textbooks are cheaper but sell out quickly. By having access to textbook lists earlier, students could also search for books online and potentially save money. Additionally, having access to textbooks before the semester begins would enable students to start reading and preparing for their courses in advance. This is particularly helpful since students tend to be very busy during the semester and may struggle to keep up with all their assignments. By knowing their textbook list ahead of time, students can make better use of their free time before the semester starts.

6.Mind Map

- University
  - Textbook lists
    - Early availability
      - Time of registration

- Benefits
  - Affordable textbooks
    - Shop around
    - Online options
  - Advance preparation
    - Pre-semester reading
    - Manage assignments

7.Key Words

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 4 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 26

3.表达 在表达方面，发言者的语言流利度和语速基本一致，仅有少量停顿。但是，有些地方的标点使用不当，可能导致不恰当的停顿。此外，部分拼写错误可能源于发音不准确。建议发言者注意在练习时加强对标点和发音的掌握，以提高口语表达能力。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, the speaker provides a coherent and well-organized response, with clear connections between ideas and sufficient support or examples. The answer effectively summarizes the proposal and states the man's opinion, along with the reasons he gives for holding that opinion. To improve further, the speaker could work on refining their language use and delivery to make their response even more polished and clear.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The writer proposes that the list for each course should be available at the time of registration, because first, this can give students more time to shop around to find less expensive textbooks. Secondly, it can allow them to start working on their teaching earlier. The author suggests making the course textbook list available during registration, as it would provide students with more time to search for affordable textbooks and enable them to begin their studies earlier. (将句子结构进行了优化，使用了更高级的词汇，使表达更自然。)

The man in the listening totally agrees. The man from the conversation completely agrees. (改进了表达方式，使其更自然。)

He thinks that if a student is going to buy a brand new textbook at the university's bookstore, it will be a lot more expensive, and there are only a few used textbooks around that are cheap but sold out quickly, He believes that purchasing new textbooks from the university bookstore can be costly, and while there are some inexpensive used textbooks available, they tend to sell out fast, (优化了句子结构和词汇，使表达更流畅。)

and the students can get the book ahead of time on the internet if they have the list of the books. and having access to the textbook list would allow students to acquire their books online in advance. (改进了句子结构，使表达更自然。)

Secondly, things go busy when the semester starts, and it will be hard for students to keep up with all assignments. Furthermore, the beginning of the semester tends to be hectic, making it difficult for students to manage all their assignments. (优化了句子结构和词汇，使表达更流畅。)

But they have time before the start of the semester, and they can use this time to do some preparations. However, students usually have free time before the semester begins, which can be utilized for preparation. (改进了句子结构，使表达更自然。)

Revised Answer (140 words): The author suggests making the course textbook list available during registration, as it would provide students with more time to search for affordable textbooks and enable them to begin their studies earlier. The man from the conversation completely agrees. He believes that purchasing new textbooks from the university bookstore can be costly, and while there are some inexpensive used textbooks available, they tend to sell out fast. Having access to the textbook list would allow students to acquire their books online in advance. Furthermore, the beginning of the semester tends to be hectic, making it difficult for students to manage all their assignments. However, students usually have free time before the semester begins, which can be utilized for preparation.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Textbook list available during registration
  - Benefits
    - Affordable textbooks
    - Early studies

- Man's opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Reasons
    - Costly new textbooks at university bookstore
    - Limited inexpensive used textbooks
    - Online acquisition in advance
    - Hectic semester start
    - Time management for assignments
    - Utilizing free time for preparation

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 3

• Topic Development: 3.5

• Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

• 26

3.表达 整体来说，表达较为清晰，语速适中，但在某些地方存在不必要的停顿。建议在练习时注意语音的连贯性和发音的准确性，避免因为停顿和发音问题影响听力理解。

4.话题发展 回答内容基本上涵盖了题目要求的信息，结构也比较清晰。但在论述原因时可以更加具体和详细一些，以增强说服力。例如，在谈到图书价格问题时，可以提到学生通过提前购买图书可以节省开支；在谈到学生在学期开始前有空闲时间时，可以强调这有助于他们提前预习课程内容。

5.语言使用

Original: The proposal suggests that the list of each cost should be available immediately at the time of the registration because of two reasons. The proposal suggests that the textbook list for each course should be made available immediately at the time of registration for two reasons.（建议将“cost”改为“textbook list for each course”，以更准确地表达原意。同时，将“because of two reasons”改为“for two reasons”，使语言更自然。）

Original: Maybe they can find books on the line. Maybe they can find books online.（将“on the line”改为正确的表达方式“online”。）

Original: But students usually have some free time right before the start of the semester, so they have good opportunities to do some preparations, such as reading the textbooks. Since students usually have some free time right before the start of the semester, they would have a better opportunity to prepare, such as by reading the textbooks in advance.（将“so they have good opportunities”改为“they would have a better opportunity”，使语言更自然。同时，将“do some preparations”改为“prepare”，并在“reading the textbooks”前加上“by”，使句子结构更清晰。）

Revised Answer (140 words):

The proposal suggests that the textbook list for each course should be made available immediately at the time of registration for two reasons. The main speaker agrees with this proposal. He gives two reasons. Firstly, there are few brand textbooks in the library. They are pretty expensive. And although the library usually has only a few used textbooks around, they are cheaper, but they sell out quickly. So it is necessary to give students time to look around on their own. Maybe they can find books online. And second, the students are very busy at the start of the semester, and they need to have time to keep up with all of the assignments. Since students usually have some free time right before the start of the semester, they would have a better opportunity to prepare, such as by reading the textbooks in advance.

6.思维导图

• Proposal

  • Textbook list availability
  • Time of registration

• Main speaker's opinion

  • Agreement
  • Reasons
    • Expensive textbooks
      • Few brand textbooks
      • Limited used textbooks
    • Busy start of the semester
      • Time management
      • Free time before semester

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数 Estimated Score: 23

3.表达 在表达方面，你的发音大部分清晰，但有时会出现一些不自然的停顿。为了提高你的发音，请注意在句子中保持连贯性和一致的语速。此外，尝试减少不必要的停顿，以使你的发言更流畅。练习朗读和模仿母语者的发音也会有所帮助。

4.话题发展 Your response is generally coherent and well-organized, but there is room for improvement in terms of topic development. Make sure to clearly summarize the proposal from the reading passage and then state the man's opinion about it. Additionally, try to provide more specific examples or details from the listening passage to support your points. This will help you create a more comprehensive and well-developed response.

5.语言使用

Original Answer: The writer proposes that the list for each course should be available at the time of registration because first, this can give time to students to find less expensive textbook. The writer suggests making the textbook list for each course available at the time of registration, allowing students to find more affordable textbooks.（将句子结构进行了简化，使其更自然。同时，将"less expensive"替换为"more affordable"，使词汇更高级。）Secondly, the students can start their work earlier. Furthermore, this enables students to begin their coursework in advance.（使用了更高级的词汇和连接词。）

The man in the listening totally agrees. The man from the listening passage completely agrees.（使用了更自然的表达方式。）He thinks that if the students are going to buy a brand new textbook, it will be a lot more expensive. He believes that purchasing brand new textbooks would be significantly more costly for students.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）And there are only a few used textbooks around which are sold out quickly. Additionally, used textbooks are limited in availability and sell out rapidly.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

If they have time, they can look around on their own to find some less expensive textbook. Given more time, students can search independently for more affordable textbooks.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）Secondly, the things are going to be busy when the semester starts, so they won't have time to study and it will be hard for them to keep up with their own work. Moreover, the beginning of the semester is typically hectic, leaving students with limited time to study and making it difficult for them to keep up with their coursework.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）So they can use the time before the semester to do some preparations. Therefore, utilizing the time before the semester for preparation would be beneficial.（改进了句子结构和词汇。）

Revised Answer (140 words): The writer suggests making the textbook list for each course available at the time of registration, allowing students to find more affordable textbooks. Furthermore, this enables students to begin their coursework in advance. The man from the listening passage completely agrees. He believes that purchasing brand new textbooks would be significantly more costly for students. Additionally, used textbooks are limited in availability and sell out rapidly. Given more time, students can search independently for more affordable textbooks. Moreover, the beginning of the semester is typically hectic, leaving students with limited time to study and making it difficult for them to keep up with their coursework. Therefore, utilizing the time before the semester for preparation would be beneficial.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Available at registration
  - Affordable textbooks
  - Early coursework start

- Man's opinion
  - Completely agrees
  - Costly new textbooks
  - Limited used textbooks
  - Independent search for affordability
  - Hectic semester start
  - Beneficial preparation time

7.关键词

1.子项得分 Delivery: 3 Topic Development: 3.5 Language Use: 3

2.预估分数

23. 3.表达

总体来说，发言者的表达清晰，语速适中，但偶尔有些停顿。建议发言者在练习时注意保持连贯性，尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时，注意提高发音的准确性，避免出现拼写错误。

4.话题发展 发言者对于提案的总结和男生观点的陈述都较为清晰，但在论述原因方面可以进一步加强。建议在解释男生观点的原因时，可以更详细地描述他们的对话内容，以便让听众更好地理解他们的观点。同时，在组织回答时，尽量保持逻辑清晰和条理分明。

5.语言使用

原文：The writer proposed that the textbook list should be available earlier, because this can give more time for students to shop for less expensive textbooks and help them to start work on teaching earlier. The writer proposed making the textbook list available earlier, as it would provide students with more time to find affordable textbooks and allow them to begin their coursework sooner.（将句子结构调整得更自然，使用了更高级的词汇，如"affordable"代替"less expensive"。）（将句子结构调整得更自然，使用了更高级的词汇，如"affordable"代替"less expensive"。）

The man agreed with this proposal. Firstly, he says that the brand new textbook is very expensive, and the cheap textbooks will be sold out quickly. The man agreed with this proposal, stating that brand new textbooks are very expensive and affordable ones sell out quickly.（改善了句子结构和语法，使表述更自然。）（改善了句子结构和语法，使表述更自然。）

So this proposal can give students time to look for the cheap textbooks and give them time to purchase books online through the internet. Thus, this proposal would allow students more time to search for affordable textbooks and purchase them online.（简化了句子结构，避免重复表述。）（简化了句子结构，避免重复表述。）

Secondly, students will always be busy at the start of the semester, and they will always be free before the semester. Secondly, students are typically busy at the beginning of the semester and have more free time before it starts.（改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表述更自然。）（改进了句子结构和词汇选择，使表述更自然。）

So this proposal can help them to keep up with the teaching. Therefore, this proposal would help them keep up with their coursework.（简化了句子结构，使表述更自然。）（简化了句子结构，使表述更自然。）

修订版（140字）：

The writer proposed making the textbook list available earlier, as it would provide students with more time to find affordable textbooks and allow them to begin their coursework sooner. The man agreed with this proposal, stating that brand new textbooks are very expensive and affordable ones sell out quickly. Thus, this proposal would allow students more time to search for affordable textbooks and purchase them online. Secondly, students are typically busy at the beginning of the semester and have more free time before it starts. Therefore, this proposal would help them keep up with their coursework.

6.思维导图

- Proposal
  - Make textbook list available earlier
  - Benefits
    - Find affordable textbooks
    - Begin coursework sooner

- Man's opinion
  - Agrees with proposal
  - Reasons
    - Expensive brand new textbooks
    - Affordable ones sell out quickly
    - More time to search and purchase online
    - Busy at the beginning of the semester
    - More free time before semester starts
    - Helps keep up with coursework

7.关键词

1.子项得分

• 交付：2

• 主题发展：2

• 语言使用：2

2.预估分数

• 总分：19

3.表达 在回答中，发音和语速需要改进。有时候，发音不准确，导致了拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也很重要，以便让听众更好地理解你的观点。建议多加练习，提高发音准确度和语速控制。

4.话题发展 回答内容方面，虽然提到了信中的建议和男士的观点，但组织结构和逻辑性还有待加强。在总结信中的建议时，请确保清楚地表述其目的；在陈述男士的观点时，请注意使用恰当的连接词，使表述更连贯。同时，在解释男士观点原因时，请给出更具体的例子或详细说明。多加练习，提高回答的条理性和逻辑性。

5.语言使用

原文：In the letter, the woman thinks that it is better to keep a proposal in a letter. In the reading passage, Alexandra proposes that the textbook list should be made available earlier. (原文中的表述不准确，需要明确指出阅读材料中的建议) Firstly, it is cheap, and secondly, it is early to register. She believes this would allow students to find less expensive textbooks and start their readings earlier. (修改了原文的表述，使其更准确地反映信中的观点) In the lecture, the man agrees with this advice. In the listening passage, the man supports Alexandra's proposal. (用更准确的词汇描述听力材料中的内容) Firstly, the new book is very expensive, and it can save a lot of time, and it can be sold out quickly. Firstly, he mentions that new textbooks are expensive and used ones sell out quickly at the university bookstore. (修改了原文的表述，使其更清晰、连贯) Second, online, people can buy books online on the internet. Second, he suggests that students can find cheaper textbooks online. (简化了原文的表述，使其更简洁明了) It will save a lot of money. This would help them save money. (修改了原文的表述，使其更自然) Secondly, students will be very busy. It is very difficult to keep up with the assignment, so they need a lot of time. Lastly, the man agrees that students are usually busy at the beginning of the semester and having access to the reading materials earlier would help them manage their time better. (修改了原文的表述，使其更清晰、连贯，并补充了一些细节)

修订版（140词）：

In the reading passage, Alexandra proposes that the textbook list should be made available earlier. She believes this would allow students to find less expensive textbooks and start their readings earlier. In the listening passage, the man supports Alexandra's proposal for two main reasons. Firstly, he mentions that new textbooks are expensive and used ones sell out quickly at the university bookstore. By having access to the textbook list earlier, students can search for cheaper alternatives online and save money. Secondly, he agrees that students are usually busy at the beginning of the semester with multiple assignments and tasks. Having access to the reading materials earlier would help them manage their time better and stay on top of their coursework. Overall, both the man and Alexandra believe that making textbook lists available earlier would benefit students in terms of cost and time management.

6.思维导图

- Reading Passage
  - Alexandra's Proposal
    - Textbook list available earlier
      - Find less expensive textbooks
      - Start readings earlier

- Listening Passage
  - Man's Opinion
    - Supports the proposal
      - Reason 1: Expensive new textbooks and limited used ones
        - Cheaper alternatives online
      - Reason 2: Busy at the beginning of the semester
        - Better time management with early access to materials

7.关键词