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TOEFL TPO 48 Writing Task 1 Sample: Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific methods proposed in the reading passage.

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지문

In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems in which frogs live; for example, frogs help play a role in protecting humans by eating disease-carrying insects. Several methods have been proposed to solve the problem of declining frog populations.First, frogs are being harmed by pesticides, which are chemicals used to prevent insects from damaging farm crops such as corn and sugarcane. Pesticides often spread from farmland into neighboring frog habitats. Once pesticides enter a frog’s body, they attack the nervous system, leading to severe breathing problems. If laws prohibited the farmers from using harmful pesticides near sensitive frog populations, it would significantly reduce the harm pesticides cause to frogs.A second major factor in frog population decline is a fungus that has spread around the world with deadly effect. The fungus causes thickening of the skin, and since frogs use their skin to absorb water, infected frogs die of dehydration. Recently, researchers have discovered several ways to treat or prevent infection, including antifungal medication and treatments that kill the fungus with heat. Those treatments, if applied on a large scale, would protect sensitive frog populations from infection.Third, in a great many cases, frog populations are in decline simply because their natural habitats are threatened. Since most frog species lay their eggs in water, they are dependent on water and wetland habitats. Many such habitats are threatened by human activities, including excessive water use or the draining of wetlands to make them suitable for development. If key water habitats such as lakes and marshes were better protected from excessive water use and development, many frog species would recover.

질문

Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific methods proposed in the reading passage.

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Due to the crucial role of eating pests that the frogs play, it's important to protect them in return. In order to save the frogs' declining populatio...

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Due to the crucial role of eating pests that the frogs play, it's important to protect them in return. In order to save the frogs' declining population, the article proposes several likely approaches, such as reducing pesticides, kill harmful fungus with medication and protect water from being excessively exploited. Firstly, the passage claims that pesticides can deteriorate frogs' health so that we can restrict the farmland nearby frog habitats from using pesticides. However, the lecture opposes that the means isn't practical either economically or fairly. Because the farmers are competing against each other with the production of their crops. Reducing the use of pesticide in particular farmlands will lower their yield and induce them to have a huge disadvantage in this competition, which is totally unfair. In addition, the passage points out that we humans can use medication and treatments to eliminate the deadly fungus for frogs. However, the lecture refutes that it's unlikely to be approachable, because this medication needs us to cure the frogs individually, which makes it inaccessible to large scales. Moreover, it can't prevent the fungus from spreading to the frogs' offspring, so it means we have to do it repeated, which is definitely undoable. Lastly, the passage posits that we can protect frogs' water habitats from being exccessively used, but the lecture argues that the main reason for declination in frogs' population is global warming.

평가 결과

1.子项得分 任务完成度: 4 组织: 3 连贯与衔接: 3 语言使用: 3

2.预估分数

22. 3.任务完成度

整体来说,文章在任务完成度方面表现较好,但仍有改进空间。首先,在总结听力部分时,需要更详细地解释讲座中提到的观点是如何对阅读部分提出的方法产生质疑的。此外,在文章开头和结尾处加入更明确的论述会使文章更具说服力。

示例1: 改进前: "However, the lecture opposes that the means isn't practical either economically or fairly." 改进后: "However, the lecture argues that reducing pesticide use is not a practical solution because it would put farmers near frog habitats at an economic disadvantage compared to their competitors."

示例2: 改进前: "Lastly, the passage posits that we can protect frogs' water habitats from being excessively used, but the lecture argues that the main reason for declination in frogs' population is global warming." 改进后: "Lastly, although the passage suggests protecting frog habitats from excessive water use, the lecture contends that global warming is the primary cause of declining frog populations and protecting water resources alone would not be sufficient."

4.文章结构与组织 在文章结构与组织方面,有待提高。首先,需要加强段落之间的衔接,使文章阅读起来更流畅。其次,在引入听力部分观点时,可以使用更明确的过渡词或短语。最后,可以在文章结尾处加入一个总结性的陈述,以便更好地呈现文章的主题。

示例1: 改进前: "Firstly, the passage claims that pesticides can deteriorate frogs' health so that we can restrict the farmland nearby frog habitats from using pesticides." 改进后: "Firstly, while the passage claims that restricting pesticide use near frog habitats can protect their health, the lecture presents a different perspective."

示例2: 改进前: "In addition, the passage points out that we humans can use medication and treatments to eliminate the deadly fungus for frogs." 改进后: "In addition, although the passage suggests using medication and treatments to combat the deadly fungus affecting frogs, the lecture highlights several issues with this approach."

  1. 语法批改

Due to the crucial role of eating pests that the frogs play, it's important to protect them in return. In order to save the frogs' declining population, the article proposes several likely approaches, such as reducing pesticides, kill harmful fungus with medication and protect water from being excessively exploited. Firstly, the passage claims that pesticides can deteriorate frogs' health so that we can restrict the farmland nearby frog habitats from using pesticides. However, the lecture opposes that the means isn't practical either economically or fairly. Because the farmers are competing against each other with the production of their crops. Reducing the use of pesticide in particular farmlands will lower their yield and induce them to have a huge disadvantage in this competition, which is totally unfair. In addition, the passage points out that we humans can use medication and treatments to eliminate the deadly fungus for frogs. However, the lecture refutes that it's unlikely to be approachable, because this medication needs us to cure the frogs individually, which makes it inaccessible to large scales. Moreover, (Two consecutive spaces)it can't prevent the fungus from spreading to the frogs' offspring, so it means we have to do it repeated, which is definitely undoable. Lastly, the passage posits that we can protect frogs' water habitats from being exccessivelyexcessively(misspelling) used, but the lecture argues that the main reason for declination in frogs' population is global warming.

6.文章修订

The decline in frog populations worldwide has raised concerns due to their vital role in controlling pest populations. The reading passage proposes several solutions, including reducing pesticide use, combating harmful fungus with medication, and protecting water resources from overuse. However, the lecture casts doubt on the effectiveness of these methods.

Firstly, while the passage claims that restricting pesticide use near frog habitats can protect their health, the lecture presents a different perspective. It argues that this approach is neither economically practical nor fair for farmers. Farmers rely on pesticides to minimize crop losses and remain competitive in the market. Imposing stricter regulations on pesticide use in areas close to endangered frog populations would put those farmers at a significant disadvantage compared to their competitors, leading to reduced crop yields and unfair competition.

In addition, although the passage suggests using medication and treatments to combat the deadly fungus affecting frogs, the lecture highlights several issues with this approach. Applying these treatments requires capturing and treating each individual frog within a population, making large-scale implementation extremely challenging. Furthermore, these treatments do not prevent frogs from passing the fungus onto their offspring; thus, they would need to be applied repeatedly to each new generation of frogs. Consequently, this method would be both complex and costly.

Lastly, while the passage posits that protecting frog habitats from excessive water use could help preserve their populations, the lecture contends that global warming is the primary cause of declining frog populations. As such, simply protecting water resources alone would not be sufficient in addressing this issue. The ongoing habitat changes caused by global warming pose a more significant threat than human activities such as water use or development near frog habitats.

In light of these points made in the lecture, it becomes evident that the proposed solutions in the reading passage may not effectively address the decline in frog populations. (314 words)

Due to the crucial 7.文章批改

The decline in frog populations worldwide has raised concerns due to their vital role of eating pests that the frogs play, it's important to protect them in return. In order to save the frogs' declining population, the article in controlling pest populations. (Revised for clarity and conciseness) The reading passage proposes several likely approaches, such as solutions, including reducing pesticides, kill pesticide use, combating harmful fungus with medication, and protecting water resources from overuse. However, the lecture casts doubt on the effectiveness of these methods. (Added a clear transition)

Firstly, while the passage claims that restricting pesticide use near frog habitats can protect their health, the lecture presents a different perspective. (Improved transition) It argues that this approach is neither economically practical nor fair for farmers. Farmers rely on pesticides to minimize crop losses and remain competitive in the market. Imposing stricter regulations on pesticide use in areas close to endangered frog populations would put those farmers at a significant disadvantage compared to their competitors, leading to reduced crop yields and unfair competition. (Enhanced sentence structure)

In addition, although the passage suggests using medication and protect water treatments to combat the deadly fungus affecting frogs, the lecture highlights several issues with this approach. (Improved transition) Applying these treatments requires capturing and treating each individual frog within a population, making large-scale implementation extremely challenging. Furthermore, these treatments do not prevent frogs from being excessively exploited. ¶ Firstly, the passage claims that pesticides can deteriorate frogs' health so that we can restrict the farmland nearby passing the fungus onto their offspring; thus, they would need to be applied repeatedly to each new generation of frogs. Consequently, this method would be both complex and costly. (Enhanced sentence structure)

Lastly, while the passage posits that protecting frog habitats from using pesticides. However, excessive water use could help preserve their populations, the lecture opposes that the means isn't practical either economically contends that global warming is the primary cause of declining frog populations. As such, simply protecting water resources alone would not be sufficient in addressing this issue.(Improved transition) The ongoing habitat changes caused by global warming pose a more significant threat than human activities such as water use or fairly. Because the farmers are competing against each other with the production development near frog habitats.

In light of their crops. Reducing the use of pesticide in particular farmlands will lower their yield and induce them to have a huge disadvantage in this competition, which is totally unfair. ¶ In addition, the passage these points out that we humans can use medication and treatments to eliminate the deadly fungus for frogs. However, the lecture refutes that it's unlikely to be approachable, because this medication needs us to cure the frogs individually, which makes made in the lecture, it inaccessible to large scales. Moreover, it can't prevent the fungus from spreading to the frogs' offspring, so it means we have to do it repeated, which is definitely undoable. ¶ Lastly, the passage posits that we can protect frogs' water habitats from being exccessively used, but the lecture argues that the main reason for declination in frogs' population is global warming.becomes evident that the proposed solutions in the reading passage may not effectively address the decline in frog populations. (Enhanced sentence structure and clarity)

8.思维导图

  • Introduction

    • Decline in frog populations
    • Reading passage solutions
    • Lecture doubts
  • Pesticide use

    • Reading: Restricting pesticide use near habitats
    • Lecture: Economic impracticality and unfairness for farmers
  • Fungus treatment

    • Reading: Medication and treatments for fungus
    • Lecture: Challenges in large-scale implementation and generational application
  • Water resource protection

    • Reading: Protecting habitats from excessive water use
    • Lecture: Global warming as the primary cause of decline
  • Conclusion

    • Ineffectiveness of proposed solutions in reading passage

9.关键词

WordPhonetic SymbolPart of SpeechEnglish DefinitionSimplified Chinese TranslationSample Sentence
decline/dɪˈklaɪn/nounA gradual decrease in quality, quantity, or value下降The decline in frog populations has raised concerns worldwide.
pesticide/ˈpɛstɪsaɪd/nounA chemical used to kill pests, especially insects杀虫剂Farmers rely on pesticides to minimize crop losses.
fungus/ˈfʌŋɡəs/nounAny group of spore-producing organisms feeding on organic matter.真菌The deadly fungus affecting frogs is a major concern for their survival.
medication/ˌmɛdɪˈkeɪʃən/noun/A substance used for medical treatment, especially a medicine or drug./药物The passage suggests using medication to combat the harmful fungus.
implementation/ɪmˌplɛmənˈteɪʃən/nounThe process of putting a decision or plan into effect实施Large-scale implementation of the fungus treatment is extremely challenging.
habitat/ˈhæbɪtæt/nounThe natural home or environment of an animal, plant, or other organism./栖息地Protecting frog habitats from excessive water use is essential for their survival.
global warming/ˈɡloʊbəl ˈwɔrmɪŋ/noun/A gradual increase in the overall temperature of the earth's atmosphere generally attributed to the greenhouse effect caused by increased levels of carbon dioxide, chlorofluorocarbons, and other pollutants.全球变暖Global warming is the primary cause of declining frog populations.
disadvantage/ˌdɪsədˈvæntɪdʒ/noun/An unfavorable circumstance or condition that reduces the chances of success or effectiveness.劣势Farmers near frog habitats would be at a significant disadvantage if pesticide use was restricted.
generational/ˌdʒɛnəˈreɪʃənl/adjective/Relating to a particular generation, or to the relationships between particular generations.世代的The fungus treatments would need to be applied repeatedly to each new generation of frogs.
ineffectiveness/ˌinəˈfektivnəs/noun/Lack of the ability or power to produce a desired effect or result.无效性The lecture casts doubt on the effectiveness of the proposed solutions in the reading passage.
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The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the declines or extinct of the frogs numbers and some solutions to protect the frogs. Despite that...

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The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the declines or extinct of the frogs numbers and some solutions to protect the frogs. Despite that, the professor casts doubt on every single point the reading makes. In the lecture, he uses three specific points to support his idea. To begin with, the reading passage reckons that chemical pesticides harms the frogs, by spreading from farmland into frogs habitats so farmers should not use the pesticides in the farming.However, the professor argues that will harm the benefits of farmers, which indicates that if farmers stop to use the pesticides to protect their crops, they will.cannot compare with other farmers who uses the pesticides that have more quantities crops and yields. Therefore, the professor cannot give a nod to the term of the first point. What's more, the reading passage claims that fungus causes the decline of the frogs by the frogs skins absorbing the within the fungus water so the researchers treats the individual frogs one by one, whereas the professor argues that is too difficult and uneconomically. He elaborates on this by mentioning that all of the frogs around the world is too much numbers, it is difficult to capture everyone and treats them. Besides, we cannot prevent fungus throughout the habitat and spread into more areas. Apparently, the professor argument disproves its counterpart in the reading. Last but not least, the reading passage conceives that the frogs habitats were threatened by the human activities so we need to protect their key habitats such as lakes and marshes. The professor, on the other hand, debate that the environment of the frogs habitats is not the key factors of the frogs extinction. In order to substantiate with the point, he states that the global warming is the key reason caused the habitats disapear. Thus, the professor demonstrates what asserted in the reading is specious. In conclusion, the professor impressively proves the fundamental argument about the decline of the frogs population is unconvincing.

평가 결과

1.子项得分 任务完成度:3 组织:3 连贯性和衔接:3 语言使用:2

2.预估分数

20. 3.任务完成度

虽然你的文章涵盖了阅读和听力材料中的观点,但在解释这些观点时,你需要更详细地描述它们之间的关系。例如,在讨论农药问题时,可以详细说明农民如何受到不公平待遇。此外,在讨论真菌治疗方案时,可以强调治疗过程中存在的问题以及为什么这些问题使得该方法不切实际。

改进建议:

  • 在描述听力材料中的观点时,请确保更详细地解释它们是如何质疑阅读材料中提出的方法的。

  • 使用更多具体的例子来支持你的论点。

示例:

  1. 在讨论农药问题时,可以这样写:“教授认为,如果限制农民在靠近濒危青蛙种群区域使用农药,那么这些农民将处于严重劣势。他们可能会损失更多作物,并且产量会低于其他使用农药的竞争对手。”

  2. 在讨论真菌治疗方案时,可以这样写:“教授指出,这种治疗方法需要逐个捕捉和治疗青蛙,这在大规模应用中非常困难。此外,这些治疗方法无法阻止青蛙将真菌传给后代,因此需要对每一代青蛙进行反复治疗。因此,实施这些治疗方法将非常复杂且昂贵。”

4.文章结构与组织 你的文章具有基本的结构(引言、正文和结论),但在组织上还有改进的空间。例如,在引言部分,请确保更明确地概述文章的主题和目的。在正文部分,请确保每段落都集中讨论一个特定观点,并提供支持细节。

改进建议:

  • 在引言中更明确地概述文章的主题和目的。

  • 在正文段落中使用更清晰的主题句来引导读者了解每段落的焦点。

示例:

  1. 引言可以这样写:“阅读材料提出了三种解决青蛙种群下降问题的方法,然而听力材料对这些方法提出了质疑。本文将总结听力材料中提到的观点,并解释它们是如何质疑阅读材料中提出的方法的。”

  2. 在正文段落中,可以这样写:“首先,阅读材料认为禁止农民在青蛙栖息地附近使用有害农药可以减少对青蛙的危害。然而,教授提出了一个与此相反的观点。”

5. 语法批改

The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the declines or extinct of the frogs numbers and some solutions to protect the frogs. Despite that, the professor casts doubt on every single point the reading makes. In the lecture, he uses three specific points to support his idea.

To begin with, (Two consecutive spaces)the reading passage reckons that chemical pesticides harms the frogs, by spreading from farmland into frogs habitats so, so(comma between independent clauses) farmers should not use the pesticides in the farming.However However(Missing space between sentences), the professor argues that will harm the benefits of farmers, which indicates that if farmers stop to use the pesticides to protect their crops, they will.cannot Cannot(Lowercase word after word and no space in between) compare with other farmers who usesuse(Agreement of relative pronoun 'who' and verb) the pesticides that have more quantities crops and yields. Therefore, the professor cannot give a nod to the term of the first point.

What's more, the reading passage claims that fungus causes the decline of the frogs by the frogs skins absorbing the within the fungus water so, so(comma between independent clauses) the researchers treats the individual frogs one by one, whereas the professor argues that is too difficult and uneconomically. He elaborates on this by mentioning that all of theall the(all of the (all the)) frogs around the world is too muchmany('much' + countable noun, e.g. 'much (many) children') numbers, it is difficult to capture everyone and treats them. Besides, we cannot prevent fungus throughout the habitat and spread into more areas. Apparently, the professor argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.

Last but not least, the reading passage conceives that the frogs habitats were threatened by the human activities so, so(comma between independent clauses) we need to protect their key habitats such as lakes and marshes. The professor, on the other hand, debate that the environment of the frogs habitats is not the key factors of the frogsfrogs'(Possessive apostrophe error) extinction. In order to substantiate with the point, he states that the global warming is the key reason caused the habitatshabitat's(This rule identifies whether there is a missing apostrophe before an 's'.) disapeardisappear(misspelling). Thus, the professor demonstrates what asserted in the reading is specious.

In conclusion, the professor impressively proves the fundamental argument about the decline of the frogs population is unconvincing.

Section Title: 6.文章修订

The reading passage and the lecture both discuss the decline in frog populations and propose solutions to protect them. However, the professor casts doubt on each point made in the reading, using three specific arguments to support his stance.

Firstly, the reading passage suggests that chemical pesticides harm frogs by spreading from farmland into their habitats, and thus farmers should avoid using them. The professor counters this by arguing that such a restriction would negatively impact farmers' competitiveness. He explains that if farmers cease using pesticides to protect their crops, they will be unable to compete with other farmers who continue to use them and consequently produce higher crop yields. Therefore, the professor disagrees with the first point made in the reading.

Secondly, the reading claims that a fungus contributes to frog population decline as it affects their skin's ability to absorb water. It proposes that researchers treat individual frogs one by one. The professor, however, argues that this approach is both difficult and uneconomical. He elaborates by stating that capturing and treating every frog worldwide is an impractical task due to their vast numbers. Additionally, he points out that we cannot prevent fungus from spreading throughout habitats and into new areas. Evidently, the professor's argument refutes the corresponding point in the reading.

Lastly, the reading posits that human activities threaten frog habitats; therefore, we need to protect key habitats such as lakes and marshes. The professor disputes this claim by asserting that environmental factors are not primarily responsible for frog extinction. To substantiate his point, he states that global warming is actually causing habitat loss and disappearance rather than human activities near these habitats. Thus, he demonstrates that what was asserted in the reading is unfounded.

In conclusion, the professor effectively proves that the fundamental argument regarding frog population decline presented in the reading is unconvincing. (310 words)

Revised essay: The reading passage and the lecture both talk about the declines discuss the decline in frog populations and propose solutions to protect them (Changed "declines or extinct of the frogs numbers and some solutions to protect the frogs. Despite that, extinct" to "decline" for clarity and proper grammar). However, the professor casts doubt on every single each point the reading makes. In the lecture, he uses made in the reading, using three specific points arguments to support his idea. stance.

To begin with, Firstly, the reading passage reckons suggests that chemical pesticides harms the frogs, harm frogs by spreading from farmland into frogs habitats so their habitats, and thus farmers should not use the pesticides in the farming.However, the professor argues that will harm the benefits avoid using them (Changed "harms" to "harm" for subject-verb agreement). The professor counters this by arguing that such a restriction would negatively impact farmers' competitiveness (Changed "benefits of farmers, which indicates farmers" to "farmers' competitiveness" for clarity). He explains that if farmers stop to use the cease using pesticides to protect their crops, they will.cannot compare will be unable to compete with other farmers who uses the pesticides that have more quantities crops and continue to use them and consequently produce higher crop yields. Therefore, the professor cannot give disagrees with the first point made in the reading.

Secondly, the reading claims that a nod to the term of the first point. ¶ What's more, the reading passage claims that fungus causes the contributes to frog population decline of the frogs by the frogs skins absorbing the within the fungus as it affects their skin's ability to absorb water so the (Rephrased sentence for clarity). It proposes that researchers treats the treat individual frogs one by one, whereas the professor one. The professor, however, argues that is too this approach is both difficult and uneconomically. uneconomical (Changed "uneconomically" to "uneconomical"). He elaborates on this by mentioning that all of the frogs around the world is too much numbers, it is difficult to capture everyone and treats them. Besides, by stating that capturing and treating every frog worldwide is an impractical task due to their vast numbers. Additionally, he points out that we cannot prevent fungus from spreading throughout the habitat and spread habitats and into more new areas. Apparently, the professor Evidently, the professor's argument disproves its counterpart refutes the corresponding point in the reading.

Last but not least, the reading passage conceives that the frogs habitats were threatened by the Lastly, the reading posits that human activities so threaten frog habitats; therefore, we need to protect their key habitats such as lakes and marshes. The professor, on the other hand, debate that the professor disputes this claim by asserting that environmental factors are not primarily responsible for frog extinction (Changed "the environment of the frogs habitats is not the key factors of the frogs extinction. In order to of...extinction" for clarity). To substantiate with the his point, he states that the global warming is the key reason caused the habitats disapear. actually causing habitat loss and disappearance rather than human activities near these habitats. Thus, the professor he demonstrates that what was asserted in the reading is specious. unfounded (Changed "specious" to "unfounded" for a more appropriate word choice).

In conclusion, the professor impressively effectively proves that the fundamental argument about the regarding frog population decline of the frogs population is unconvincing.presented in the reading is unconvincing (Changed "impressively" to "effectively" for a more neutral tone).


8. Mindmap

  1. Introduction

    • Decline in frog populations
    • Reading passage and lecture discussion
  2. Chemical Pesticides

    • Reading: Harmful to frogs, farmers should avoid using them
    • Lecture: Negative impact on farmers' competitiveness, disagreement with reading
  3. Fungus Problem

    • Reading: Contributes to decline, treat individual frogs
    • Lecture: Difficult and uneconomical approach, refutes reading's point
  4. Human Activities and Habitat Protection

    • Reading: Threaten habitats, protect key areas like lakes and marshes
    • Lecture: Environmental factors not primarily responsible, global warming as the main cause, disagreement with reading
  5. Conclusion

    • Professor's effective counterarguments

9. Keywords

WordPhonetic SymbolPart of SpeechEnglish DefinitionSimplified Chinese TranslationSample Sentence
declinedɪˈklaɪnnouna gradual decrease in quality or quantity下降The decline in frog populations is a concerning issue.
competitivenesskəmˈpɛtɪtɪvnəsnounthe ability to compete successfully竞争力The professor argued that restricting pesticide use would harm farmers' competitiveness.
fungusˈfʌŋɡəsnounany group of spore-producing organisms真菌A fungus is contributing to the decline in frog populations by affecting their skin's functions.
uneconomical/ˌʌniːkəˈnɒmɪkəl/adjectivenot giving good value or return in relation to cost不经济的The professor believes that treating individual frogs is an uneconomical approach.
habitatˈhæbɪtætnounthe natural environment of an organism栖息地Human activities threaten frog habitats, such as lakes and marshes.
extinction/ɪkˈstɪŋ(k)ʃ(ə)n/nounthe state or process of being or becoming extinct灭绝The professor claims that environmental factors are not primarily responsible for frog extinction.
global warming/ˈɡləʊb(ə)l ˈwɔːmɪŋ/nouna gradual increase in the overall temperature of the earth's atmosphere generally attributed to the greenhouse effect caused by increased levels of carbon dioxide, chlorofluorocarbons, and other pollutants.全球变暖Global warming is causing habitat loss and disappearance rather than human activities near these habitats.
unconvincing/ˌʌnkənˈvɪnsɪŋ/adjectivenot seeming reasonable or probable不令人信服的The professor effectively proves that the fundamental argument presented in the reading is unconvincing.
counterargument/ˈkaʊntərˌɑrɡjumənt/nounan argument made to oppose another argument反驳论点The professor provided strong counterarguments against each point made in the reading passage.
substantiate/səbˈstanʃɪeɪt/verbto provide evidence to support or prove the truth of证实The professor substantiated his point by stating that global warming is causing habitat loss.
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The way to deal with the problems caused by frog decrease is the focus of both the writer and the professor. In the writing, three methods, including ...

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The way to deal with the problems caused by frog decrease is the focus of both the writer and the professor. In the writing, three methods, including limiting pesticides use, applying antifungal medication and protecting frog habitats, have been elaborated. The professor, however, claims that none of the measurement is practical and these methods causes lots of problems. As opposed to the writer's idea that prohibiting harmful pesticides use will decrease the harm to frogs, the professor states that this method is not economical-friendly. She advances the theory by saying that limiting pesticide use will produce less crop and less yield, which make famers less competitive in the market. This disadvantage will be bad for farmers. The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that antifungal treatment will be helpful in preventing infections to frog, by examining the fact that this method is complicated and expensive to reduce the harmful effects to frogs. In details, she points out that this antifungal treatment should be treated individually to frogs and it is difficult to do so on every frog; in addition, because the infection of fungus can be passed to the offsprings, new antifungal treatment need to be carried to the new generations. Therefore, this method is very difficult to handle and it costs lots of money. It is the professor's third argument that global warming is the biggest threat to frog habitats, water or wetland, instead of human activities, which contradicts the view of the writer that restricting human activities on frog habitats will help recover frog. To explore deeper, the professor contends that global warming has deadly harm to frog habitats, leading frog extinction. Therefore, prevent human activities will not make any sense. As apparent divide exists between the writer and the professor on the solutions to frog population declines.

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1.子项得分 任务完成度:4 组织:3 连贯与衔接:3 语言使用:3

2.预估分数

22. 3.任务完成度

这篇文章在任务完成度方面表现不错,基本上涵盖了阅读和听力中的主要观点。但是,文章在对听力中的观点进行解释时,有些地方没有足够详细。建议在描述教授对阅读提案的质疑时,更具体地说明教授的观点和理由。

例1: 原文:“The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that antifungal treatment will be helpful in preventing infections to frog, by examining the fact that this method is complicated and expensive to reduce the harmful effects to frogs.” 改进:“The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that antifungal treatment will be helpful in preventing infections in frogs, by explaining that this method is complicated and expensive due to the need for individual treatment and continuous application for each generation.”

例2: 原文:“It is the professor's third argument that global warming is the biggest threat to frog habitats, water or wetland, instead of human activities…” 改进:“The professor's third argument is that global warming poses a greater threat to frog habitats, such as water and wetlands, than human activities like excessive water use and development…”

4.文章结构与组织 文章的结构方面需要改进。虽然有简介、正文和结论,但是段落之间缺乏明确的过渡。建议使用过渡词和短语来连接不同的观点和段落,使文章更加连贯。

例1: 原文:“As opposed to the writer's idea that prohibiting harmful pesticides use will decrease the harm to frogs, the professor states that this method is not economical-friendly.” 改进:“Contrary to the writer's idea that prohibiting harmful pesticides use will decrease the harm to frogs, the professor argues that this method is not economically viable. To support this claim, she explains that…”

例2: 原文:“Therefore, prevent human activities will not make any sense.” 改进:“Therefore, preventing human activities alone would not be sufficient to address the issue. In conclusion, while the reading passage suggests several methods for addressing frog population decline, the lecture casts doubt on their effectiveness and practicality.”

5. 语法批改

The way to deal with the problems caused by frog decrease is the focus of both the writer and the professor. In the writing, three methods, including limiting pesticides use, applying antifungal medication and protecting frog habitats, have been elaborated. The professor, however, claims that none of the measurement is practical and, and(comma between independent clauses) these methods causes lots of problems.

As opposed to the writer's idea that prohibiting harmful pesticides use will decrease the harm to frogs, the professor states that this method is not economical-friendly. She advances the theory by saying that limiting pesticide use will produce less crop and less yield, which make famersfarmers(misspelling) less competitive in the market. This disadvantage will be bad for farmers.

The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion that antifungal treatment will be helpful in preventing infections to frog, by examining the fact that this method is complicated and expensive to reduce the harmful effects to frogs. In details, she points out that this antifungal treatment should be treated individually to frogs and, and(comma between independent clauses) it is difficult to do so on every frog; in addition, because the infection of fungus can be passed to the offsprings, new antifungal treatment need to be carried to the new generations. Therefore, this method is very difficult to handle and, and(comma between independent clauses) it costs lots of money.

It is the professor's third argument that global warming is the biggest threat to frog habitats, water or wetland, instead of human activities, which contradicts the view of the writer that restricting human activities on frog habitats will help recover frog. To explore deeper, the professor contends that global warming has deadly harm to frog habitats, leading frogto frog(This rule identifies whether the preposition 'to' is missing in a sentence.) extinction. Therefore, prevent human activities will not make any sense.

As apparent divide exists between the writer and the professor on the solutions to frog population declines.

Section Title: 6.文章修订

The decline of frog populations is the central issue discussed by both the author and the lecturer. In the reading passage, three potential solutions are proposed: limiting pesticide use, applying antifungal medication, and protecting frog habitats. However, the lecturer contends that none of these measures are practical and highlights several problems associated with each method.

Contrary to the author's suggestion that restricting harmful pesticide use would reduce harm to frogs, the lecturer argues that this approach is not economically viable. She explains that limiting pesticide use would result in lower crop yields and reduced competitiveness for farmers in the market. This disadvantage would negatively impact farmers.

The lecturer further disputes the reading passage's claim that antifungal treatments could effectively prevent infections in frogs by pointing out that this method is both complex and costly. Specifically, she notes that antifungal treatments must be applied individually to each frog, making large-scale implementation difficult. Additionally, since fungal infections can be passed on to offspring, new generations of frogs would also require treatment. Consequently, this approach is challenging to execute and financially burdensome.

Lastly, the lecturer argues that global warming poses a greater threat to frog habitats than human activities do, contradicting the author's view that restricting human activities around frog habitats would aid in their recovery. The lecturer elaborates on this point by asserting that global warming has caused significant damage to frog habitats and has led to numerous extinctions. Therefore, merely preventing human activities near these habitats would not be an effective solution.

In conclusion, there is a clear disagreement between the author and the lecturer regarding potential solutions for addressing declining frog populations. (275 words)

Section Title: 7.文章修订

The way to deal with the problems caused decline of frog populations is the central issue discussed by frog decrease is the focus of both the writer and the professor. author and the lecturer. In the writing, reading passage, three methods, including potential solutions are proposed: limiting pesticides pesticide use, applying antifungal medication medication, and protecting frog habitats, have been elaborated. The professor, however, claims habitats. However, the lecturer contends that none of the measurement is these measures are practical and these methods causes lots of problems. ¶ As opposed to the writer's idea that prohibiting highlights several problems associated with each method (Changed "measurement" to "measures" for correct terminology).

Contrary to the author's suggestion that restricting harmful pesticides pesticide use will decrease the would reduce harm to frogs, the professor states lecturer argues that this method approach is not economical-friendly. economically viable (Changed "economical-friendly" to "economically viable" for proper phrasing). She advances the theory by saying explains that limiting pesticide use will produce less would result in lower crop and less yield, which make famers less competitive yields and reduced competitiveness for farmers in the market. This disadvantage will be bad for farmers. would negatively impact farmers (Changed "bad for farmers" to "negatively impact farmers" for a more formal tone).

The professor continues to discredit the writing's assertion lecturer further disputes the reading passage's claim that antifungal treatment will be helpful in preventing treatments could effectively prevent infections to frog, in frogs by examining the fact pointing out that this method is complicated and expensive to reduce the harmful effects to frogs. In details, both complex and costly (Changed "complicated and expensive" to "complex and costly" for better word choice). Specifically, she points out that this notes that antifungal treatment should treatments must be treated applied individually to frogs and it is difficult to do so on every frog; in addition, because the infection of fungus each frog, making large-scale implementation difficult. Additionally, since fungal infections can be passed to the offsprings, on to offspring, new antifungal treatment need to be carried to the new generations. Therefore, generations of frogs would also require treatment. Consequently, this method is very difficult to handle and it approach is challenging to execute and financially burdensome (Changed "it costs lots of money. ¶ It is the professor's third argument money" to "financially burdensome" for a more formal tone).

Lastly, the lecturer argues that global warming is the biggest poses a greater threat to frog habitats, water or wetland, instead of human activities, which contradicts the habitats than human activities do, contradicting the author's view of the writer that restricting human activities around frog habitats would aid in their recovery (Changed "help recover frog" to "aid in their recovery"). The lecturer elaborates on frog habitats will help recover frog. To explore deeper, the professor contends this point by asserting that global warming has deadly harm to frog habitats, leading frog extinction. caused significant damage to frog habitats and has led to numerous extinctions. Therefore, prevent merely preventing human activities will near these habitats would not make any sense. ¶ As be an effective solution (Changed "prevent human activities" to "preventing human activities" for grammatical consistency).

In conclusion, there is a clear disagreement between the author and the lecturer regarding potential solutions for addressing declining frog populations (Changed "As apparent divide exists between the writer and the professor on the solutions to frog population declines.exists" to "there is a clear disagreement" for better phrasing).

8. Mind Map


- Essay Structure
    - Introduction
        - Decline of frog populations
        - Author's proposed solutions
        - Lecturer's disagreement
    - Limiting Pesticide Use
        - Author's view: beneficial for frogs
        - Lecturer's view: not economically viable, negative impact on farmers
    - Applying Antifungal Medication
        - Author's view: effective prevention of infections
        - Lecturer's view: complex, costly, difficult to implement on a large scale
    - Protecting Frog Habitats
        - Author's view: restricting human activities aids recovery
        - Lecturer's view: global warming is a greater threat, habitat protection insufficient

- Points of Lecture
    1. Economic viability of limiting pesticide use.
    2. Complexity and cost of antifungal treatments.
    3. Impact of global warming on frog habitats.

9. Keywords

WordPhonetic SymbolPart of SpeechEnglish DefinitionSimplified Chinese TranslationSample Sentence
declinedɪˈklaɪnnounA decrease in number, size, or strength下降The decline in frog populations has raised concerns among environmentalists.
pesticideˈpɛstɪsaɪdnounA chemical used to kill pests that harm plants杀虫剂Limiting pesticide use could potentially benefit frog populations.
antifungalˌæntiˈfʌŋɡəladjectiveUsed to prevent or treat fungal infections抗真菌的Antifungal medication is proposed as a solution to protect frogs from infections.
habitatˈhæbɪtætnounThe natural environment in which an organism lives栖息地Protecting frog habitats is crucial for their survival.
economically viableˌiːkəˈnɒmɪkli vaɪəbəladjectiveCapable of generating profits or being financially sustainable经济上可行的The lecturer argues that limiting pesticide use is not economically viable for farmers.
implementationɪmpləmɛnˈteɪʃənnounThe process of putting a plan or decision into effect实施Large-scale implementation of antifungal treatments for frogs is challenging and costly.
offspringˈɒfsprɪŋnounAn organism's descendants, such as children or young animals后代Fungal infections can be passed on to the offspring of infected frogs.
global warming_ ˈgləʊbəl ˈwɔrmɪŋ_nounA gradual increase in the Earth's temperature due to greenhouse gases全球变暖Global warming poses a significant threat to frog habitats.
extinction_ ɪkˈstɪŋkʃən_nounThe state or process of a species ceasing to exist permanently灭绝Numerous extinctions have occurred due to damage caused by global warming.
disagreement_ ˌdɪsəˈgriːmənt_nounA lack of consensus or harmony between people or ideas分歧There is a clear disagreement between the author and the lecturer regarding potential solutions.

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