TOEFL TPO 44 Speaking Task 1 Sample: Some people believe that primary schools should no longer teach children how to write by hand, and instead should spend time teaching them how to type on a computer. Other people believe that it is still important for schools to teach children to have good handwriting. Which point of view do you agree with? Explain why.

1.Sub Scores

• Delivery: 2

• Topic Development: 2

• Language Use: 2

2.Estimated Scores

• Total Score: 15

3.Delivery The speaker's delivery could use some improvement. The speech lacks fluidity and has occasional pauses. To enhance the delivery, try practicing speaking more clearly and at a consistent pace. Focus on proper pronunciation to avoid spelling errors caused by inaccurate pronunciation.

4.Topic Development The response touches upon the importance of handwriting but lacks coherence and organization. To improve topic development, provide a clear introduction that states your position on the issue. Then, present well-organized arguments with supporting examples or reasons. Additionally, consider addressing potential counterarguments to strengthen your response.

5. Language Use

Original:

I firmly believe that it's still important for schools to teach children to have good handwriting because in the future you have opportunity to write a postcard or mail to your friend or family and in this way you couldn't use a computer and if you have a good handwriting they will appreciate your presence. And secondly, in the future's career there is a lot of opportunity for you to use a computer. There's no need to teach them at that early period. You can...

Revised:

I strongly agree that primary schools should continue teaching children good handwriting skills, as it remains a valuable skill in various aspects of life. Firstly, having neat handwriting is essential when writing personal notes or letters, such as postcards to friends and family. In these situations, using a computer may not be feasible, and legible handwriting can convey a sense of thoughtfulness and care. Secondly, while typing skills are undoubtedly important in today's digital age, children will naturally acquire them later in their academic and professional careers. Therefore, it is not necessary to prioritize typing over handwriting at such an early stage in their education.

I strongly agree (revised "firmly believe" for a more formal tone) that primary schools should continue teaching children good handwriting skills (rephrased for clarity), as it remains a valuable skill in various aspects of life (added context). Firstly, having neat handwriting is essential when writing personal notes or letters (clarified the point), such as postcards to friends and family. In these situations, using a computer may not be feasible (explained the limitation of computers), and legible handwriting can convey a sense of thoughtfulness and care (added the benefit of good handwriting). Secondly, while typing skills are undoubtedly important in today's digital age (acknowledged the importance of typing), children will naturally acquire them later in their academic and professional careers (explained when they will learn typing). Therefore, it is not necessary to prioritize typing over handwriting at such an early stage in their education (concluded with a strong statement).Corrected:

I firmly believe strongly agree (revised "firmly believe" for a more formal tone) that it's still important for primary schools to teach should continue teaching children to have good handwriting because skills (rephrased for clarity), as it remains a valuable skill in various aspects of life (added context). Firstly, having neat handwriting is essential when writing personal notes or letters (clarified the future you have opportunity point), such as postcards to write a postcard or mail to your friend or family friends and in this way you couldn't use family. In these situations, using a computer may not be feasible (explained the limitation of computers), and if you have legible handwriting can convey a sense of thoughtfulness and care (added the benefit of good handwriting handwriting). Secondly, while typing skills are undoubtedly important in today's digital age (acknowledged the importance of typing), children will naturally acquire them later in their academic and professional careers (explained when they will appreciate your presence. And secondly, learn typing). Therefore, it is not necessary to prioritize typing over handwriting at such an early stage in the future's career there is their education (concluded with a lot of opportunity for you to use a computer. There's no need to teach them at that early period. You can...strong statement).

6. Display title: 6.Mind Map

Mind Map:

- Preference/Opinion
  - Importance of good handwriting

- Main Point
  - Future opportunities to use handwriting

- Supporting Examples
  - Writing postcards or letters to friends and family
  - Career opportunities that require good handwriting

- Conclusion
  - Early education should focus on handwriting, as computer skills can be learned later

7. Display title: 7.Key Words

8. Display title: 8.Additional Examples

9. Example: Writing thank-you notes

   • Sub-opinion: Handwritten thank-you notes show gratitude and sincerity.
   • Explanation: A well-written note can make a lasting impression on the recipient.
   • Supporting example: After a job interview, sending a handwritten thank-you note can set you apart from other candidates.

10. Example: Journaling

    • Sub-opinion: Good handwriting makes journaling more enjoyable and easier to read later.
    • Explanation: Clear handwriting allows for better reflection on past thoughts and experiences.
    • Supporting example: Many successful people maintain journals to track their personal growth and achievements.

11. Example: Artistic expression

    • Sub-opinion: Beautiful handwriting can be a form of art and self-expression.
    • Explanation: Calligraphy and other forms of artistic writing require skill and practice.
    • Supporting example: Wedding invitations often feature elegant handwritten calligraphy to set the tone for the event.

12. Example: Legal documents

    • Sub-opinion: Legible handwriting is crucial for accurate record-keeping in legal matters.
    • Explanation: Misinterpretation of handwritten information can lead to serious consequences.
    • Supporting example: Lawyers, judges, and notaries often need to read and write clearly in legal documents.

13. Example: Education

    • Sub-opinion: Good handwriting helps students take clear, organized notes during lectures.
    • Explanation: Neat notes make studying more efficient and effective.
    • Supporting example: Studies have shown that students who take handwritten notes retain information better than those who type them.