TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 1 Sample: When you and your friends or families disagree on some controversial issues, do you want to persuade them or everyone else to disagree?

1.子项得分

• Delivery: 2

• Topic Development: 2

• Language Use: 2

2.预估分数

• 17

3.表达 作为一名托福老师，在发音方面，你需要注意清晰、流利地发音，保持稳定的语速，只有在适当的时候停顿。在这个回答中，你的发音有些不准确，导致了拼写错误。此外，适当的停顿也很重要。请多加练习，提高发音和语速。

4.话题发展 In terms of topic development, your response could be more coherent and well-organized. The question asks about controversial issues and whether you want to persuade others or let them disagree, but your examples focus on personal choices and independence rather than addressing the question directly. To improve, make sure to directly address the question and provide relevant examples that support your point of view. Additionally, try to connect your ideas more clearly and logically to create a more cohesive response.

5. 语言使用

Original:

I agree that we should persuade our friends or families. For one thing, it's good for our independent mind. For example, when I choose the college, if my mother and I have different ideas, and if I can persuade my mother and choose the college according to my own ability, then I can have a great school days in the future. It's good for my, it's good for me. For another thing, I can improve my independent ability. For example, if my parents set a time that I need back to home, and I can persuade them and choose my own time to back to home, it can foster my independent ability, and it's good for my future in society.

Revised:

When my friends or family and I disagree on controversial issues, I believe it is important to try to persuade them. Firstly, doing so encourages independent thinking. For instance, when selecting a college, if my mother and I have differing opinions, persuading her to consider my choice based on my abilities can lead to a more fulfilling college experience for me. Secondly, engaging in such discussions can improve one's independence. For example, if my parents set a curfew for me, persuading them to allow me to choose my own time to return home can foster my sense of responsibility and independence, which will be beneficial for my future in society.

When my friends or family and I disagree on controversial issues, I believe it is important to try to persuade them (revised for clarity). Firstly, doing so encourages independent thinking (revised for natural flow). For instance, when selecting a college (corrected grammar), if my mother and I have differing opinions (revised for clarity), persuading her to consider my choice based on my abilities (revised for natural flow) can lead to a more fulfilling college experience for me (revised for smooth transition). Secondly (revised for smooth transition), engaging in such discussions can improve one's independence (revised for clarity). For example, if my parents set a curfew for me (corrected grammar), persuading them to allow me to choose my own time to return home (revised for natural flow) can foster my sense of responsibility and independence (revised for clarity), which will be beneficial for my future in society (strong conclusion).

Corrected:

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6. Display title: 6.思维导图

- Preference or Opinion
  - Persuading friends and family
  - Good for independent mind
  - Improves independent ability

- Main Point
  - Benefits of persuading others

- Supporting Examples
  - Choosing a college
    - Different ideas with mother
    - Persuading mother leads to better school days
  - Setting curfew time
    - Persuading parents to choose own time
    - Fosters independent ability for future in society

- Conclusion
  - Persuading friends and family is beneficial for personal growth and independence

7. Display title: 7.关键词

8. Display title: 8.补充示例

9. Persuading parents to allow more freedom in choosing hobbies can lead to discovering new talents and interests.

10. Convincing friends to try new experiences together can strengthen friendships and create lasting memories.

11. Persuading family members to adopt a healthier lifestyle can improve overall well-being and happiness.

12. Convincing a friend to join a club or organization can provide them with valuable networking opportunities and personal growth.

13. Persuading a family member to pursue higher education can open doors for better career prospects and financial stability.