TOEFL TPO -1 Speaking Task 3 Sample: Explain how the example from the professor's lecture illustrates Nomadic Phase.
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Certain insects spend time in both extended periods of settlement and extended periods of travel. During a period of travel, the entire group will continually move from one place to another. This is known as a nomadic phase. A nomadic phase may begin because a group of insects has a temporary need for additional resources that cannot be found in the area near the nest. Thus, the group must travel in search of these resources. Once the need for additional resources is over the nomadic phase ends and the group settles again in one location.
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Explain how the example from the professor's lecture illustrates Nomadic Phase.
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1.子项得分
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交付 (Delivery): 3
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语言使用 (Language Use): 3
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话题发展 (Topic Development): 3
2.预估分数
- 总分: 23
3.表达 回答中的发音和语速大部分都很清晰,但偶尔有些停顿不太自然。建议在练习时注意保持连贯的语速,并尽量减少不必要的停顿。同时,注意提高发音的准确性,以避免拼写错误。
4.话题发展 回答内容基本上符合题目要求,能够解释讲座中的例子如何说明游牧阶段。但在组织结构和论述方面还有待加强。建议在练习时注意明确地陈述观点,并使用恰当的连接词使论述更加连贯。同时,可以尝试提供更多具体的例子和细节来支持观点。
5.语言使用原文:The professor takes the ants as an example to illustrate the nomadic phase. The ants live on the ground joints near food to cater for their food demands. And when baby ants need more food and they may surge in around and begin the nomadic phase, typically the adults may leave the nest and let the baby ants carry them along to search for their food. And until they surge and migrate night after night, and until the baby grows up, they ended and settled down to build a new nest.
修改后:The professor uses ants as an example to illustrate the nomadic phase. The ants live in underground colonies near food sources to meet their nutritional needs. When baby ants require more food, they initiate the nomadic phase, during which adult ants leave the nest and allow baby ants to carry them while searching for food. They continue to migrate every night until the baby ants grow up, at which point they settle down and build a new nest.(修改了一些词汇和语法错误,使句子更加自然。)
修改建议及解释:
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将 "takes" 改为 "uses"(更自然的表达方式)
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将 "ground joints" 改为 "underground colonies"(更准确地描述蚂蚁的栖息地)
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将 "cater for" 改为 "meet"(更自然的表达方式)
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删除 "and they may surge in around"(表达不清晰,简化句子)
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将 "let" 改为 "allow"(更正式的表达方式)
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将 "ended" 改为 "at which point"(更自然的表达方式)
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将 "settled down" 改为 "settle down"(与前面的 "they" 一致)
修订版(140字):
The professor uses ants as an example to illustrate the nomadic phase. The ants live in underground colonies near food sources to meet their nutritional needs. When baby ants require more food, they initiate the nomadic phase, during which adult ants leave the nest and allow baby ants to carry them while searching for food. They continue to migrate every night until the baby ants grow up, at which point they settle down and build a new nest. This process demonstrates how the nomadic phase is essential for the survival and growth of the ant colony, as it ensures a continuous supply of food for the developing baby ants.
6.思维导图
- Nomadic Phase
- Ants example
- Underground colonies
- Nutritional needs
- Baby ants
- More food required
- Initiate nomadic phase
- Adult ants leave nest
- Baby ants carry adults
- Search for food
- Migrate every night
- Baby ants grow up
- Settle down
- Build new nest
- Ants example
7.关键词
| Word | Phonetic Symbols | Parts of Speech | English definitions | Simplified Chinese translations | Sample sentences |
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| Nomadic | /nəʊˈmædɪk/ | adjective | Living the life of a nomad; wandering. | 游牧的 | The nomadic phase in certain insects is crucial for their survival and growth. |
| Initiate | /ɪˈnɪʃieɪt/ | verb | Cause (a process or action) to begin. | 开始,发起 | The baby ants initiate the nomadic phase when they require more food. |
| Migrate | /ˈmaɪɡreɪt/ | verb | Move from one region to another. | 迁移 | During the nomadic phase, the ants migrate every night in search of food. |
| Nutritional | /njuːˈtrɪʃənəl/ | adjective | Relating to or providing nourishment. | 营养的 | The nutritional needs of baby ants drive the colony to enter the nomadic phase. |
| Settle down | /ˈsetl daʊn/ | phrasal verb | Become established in a stable routine. | 定居,安定下来 | Once the baby ants grow up, the colony can settle down and build a new nest. |
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